new FF khamoshi updated29/07/2012

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hai
im sri
here new FF of mine on PV
im writing in different way

This is my FF on PV punar vivah

I just loved the emotions of the story,

So here is the new

SOME TITLES OF THE STORY FIRST FIVE HERE

1.INTRODUCTION TO ME(ARTHI)

Part a

Part b

Part c

2.INTRODUCTION TO YASH SCINDIA

3.PAST LIFE

4.OTHER PARTS CONTINUE

Introduction

Part a''''''

Introduction: Arthi'..dubee'''''''''''.

Dear Dairy'''''''''

Arthi dubee:before Arthi ''''''''''.mehta

Status:Divorced.

Present life only one:my son Ansh Dubee

My life include''''''.

Father: Mahesh Dubee

Mother : Shoba Dubee

Love of my life:Prashant Dubee

Late parents: veran Mehta and saroj Mehta

Today im very happy because im going to my birthday gift tomorrow is my birthday

Mama promised me that im going to get a new dress Fairy tale princess dress and papa promised me that we are going to water park.

The door bell..

I ran to it and open to find some new strangers at my house they see me very painfully

Before I could know anything I was taken to hospital where my mama and papa are lied white cloth on their heads

After some days I got to know that my parents are with god'''''''''''''''

And that day I used to be little friendly

I usedto write all the things in a dairy

My new friends are aye ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,she is mother hood of the orphanage where I lived,,,,,,,,,,,,,

And nimmy she is friend of me

Age gone when I enter the college

Everyone used to look at me,I used to wonder where nimmy used to say that im beautiful really'ly'''''''''''.

I can hardly noticed it''''''

I used to be in books'''''

One day I stood front of my class where im getting congratulations as one of my poetry won the best prize'''''''''''..

And I felt happy and I smiled''''''''''''''''''.

That day I saw him

He is senior to me''''''..

He is indeed handsome according to nimmy I never noticed'''''

He came and smiled at me there is something in that smile

I used to feel happy''

He used to praise my poetry my feelings lot.

I used to smilea thim

We are friends ..

And someother things are happening ,

Without knowing

Slowly realized that im starting to like him

Yes one day I recognize the feeling

It is love,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Yes im love with the person

He is prashant dubee,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

That day when he said he loves me,

I felt top of the world

Im theluckiest girl in the life I got everything,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Im over moon.

My dreams are coming true'''''''''''''''''''''..

That day mentally I converted from arrthi mehta to arthi dubee,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Guys this is part a

I will write in new style

Each part will be in parts like a,b,c

This is part a

If u send coments then I can continue'''''''''..

part b ,c link below

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/punar-vivah/2909737/new-ff-khamoshi-updated29-07-2012?pn=2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/punar-vivah/2909737/new-ff-khamoshi-updated29-07-2012?pn=5

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/punar-vivah/2909737/new-ff-khamoshi-updated29-07-2012?pn=6

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/punar-vivah/2909737/new-ff-khamoshi-updated29-07-2012

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/punar-vivah/2909737/new-ff-khamoshi-updated29-07-2012

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LuvStrk-001 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good dear!!!!
Liked the way of writting ur FF!!
Intresting!!!
Plzz do continue!!!!😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi sri darling!!!
Remember me nah?????
I've always luved ur comments on my FF...and to see one of my friends starting an Ff makes me feel super happy..

KHAMOSHI---it wil be a new definition of love...I wish u all the lucj fr dis fF

And BtW do not 4get to PM me!!!!!
PS-Sri,If u want a banner for this FF pls pm me the pics or I'l giv u my ID..

Oho!!

Cuming to the prologue...MUAH!!!
I can feel Aarthi speAking thru her diary..It stirred some emotions in me..like pain...
How much wud a gal hav felt wen her parents passed Away on her b'day?
I feel sorry for her..

Oh god!!Pareshant 😲 wy the hel is he acting like he really loves her???

Ab jaldi cont kar... 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely Intro
Continue Soon
Thanks For The PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loveee the intro!
Continue soonnn!
Thanxx for the pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I really like it so far! Please update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Love the intro
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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LIKE YOUR NEW DEFINATION OF LOVE
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Part b:

Today im very happy………………………………

I got married to my dreams

My life is a start

Nimmy had seen me in my bridal lehenga and said that prashant had hit the jackpot………………and he will faint today

I was on the moon

The new pharse in my life ………………..

A new start

I thanked mom and da d and took their blessings…I had got lovely sasuraal……………………………………

Prashant and me are very happy married couple

Today im very happy

As I got the happiest news

I m going to be mother …………

Another life in me,……………….

I came home.

But somehow I found something change in prashant

We had shifted to new place for prashannt new job good and handsome salary

Indeed the little unborn is lucky

My mom exclaimed yes sobha dubee is not my saas she is my mother

She is indeed

Everytime she supports me and scolds prashant ..for behaving irresponble sometimes

But human makes the mistakes na.

Who ever and what ever he is .he is my life

Slowly my pregnancy taking the new ……………………ride………………………..

On that day……………………………

My health is improving.

And im top of the world…………………next day my checkup.i went to shiv mandir

The same mandir where I used to go.i need blessings from him………………………………………………….

And I returned home……..

Part c:

Not knowing that the strom waiting at my place

It is prashant

He is with bags

I thought of going a business trip again

I remember he is making trips frequently…………………………

Not paying any attention to maa and babuji…………………………………

Not taking care that there isa family for him

But I know prashant may be he is too busy in work…………………….work pressure.

I even avoid that prashant not taking to me.striaghtly

He is yellingon me for small mistakes and maa as usual takingmy side

But today there is different

The words he is saying I don't know I feel im collapsing.

The words

I m sorry arrthi.i love.ridhi I cannot live without her

We need tobe divorce

No prashant .we can live happily

I always love u I neve ryell at u.i will not force u for anything prashant please prashant don't leave me

We a re going to be parents our child prashant u cannot do this for him please prashant

Arrthi I thought I love u but I can't ridhi is perfect.

U can live with maa and buaji and u can also remarriage and live

U can keep the child with u

I never b other u

I want only one thing………………………………………..

Divorce

Please

That day maa slapped him bauji yelled at him

I waited for him……………………..

I used to feel a hatred towards that ridhi…………..

She snatched prashant from me she snatched my unborn child father for me

I feel betrayed want to finish my self but cannot because the life inside me the love of me the sign of me

The life of me.

The reason of arrthi to breathe

The reason of arrthi to live

My son

My ansh

I love u

I only love him

But everytime I used to wait for prashant for every checkup

Even I waited for him even in labor when I close the eyes in pain

The pain.

But little I know this pain is going with me entire my life

Still I don't know why I love him…………………………………..

Did this really love…………………………

She sighed and closed the dairy

To listen a voice

Arrthi its 4 0 clock ansh is waiting at school…………………………………….go fast na.

She ran and picked up the 6 year son wating for her at the school

He is replica of her

She thought and checked for prashant signs.no not even the smile

It is maa s and me………………………………………………

He brought a new life in my life

His naughtiness,his activeness,his stubbornness,he gets what ever he wants

I will make sure that he never misses anything

Because im not only mother but also father to him

Can I fulful both the responsibilities.

Can I be both………….

Yes I can

Her heart told it…………………………………………..

Yes she can do……………………………..

Part 1 ended

Precap:part 2 part a ……….yash scindia introduction

And his story…………………..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful FF dear!!
Plzz do continue!!!!😛

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