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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part t 2 part a

Some where at a place

A very happy marriage

Sir there is a problem with the catering as the food is not which had been ordered there is a mistake from the stewarding

What

He quickly called a number

A person of a mainly voice lifted the phone

Ok..no problem I will handle

He quickly called another number and with in a minutes the problem is solved

All are praising the events

Lovely shaadi right yes the food.

Yes the man had done perfect

Yes perfect………………….he is the best

Yes .

Indeed a person in a dark brown shirt looking at the arrangements and looking the mandap…………..

He closed the eyes

An beautiful im age .of him wearing a golden brown sherwani and a a cute smile on his face and turned the direction to find his beautiful bride.

His love of the life

His dream

Arpita…………………

Yes .

From now on arpita yash scindia

He felt proud

The love of the man…………………..the sindoor ,the magalsutra.

Everytime he dream…………………………………..his happiness…………

But fate is not good at him.

Inspite of all these he is alone

As his love left him,

He gave once again the look to the mandap

And walk back to the mansion.

The mansion

His childhood

He is a balanced brother between ……….his ever responsible big brother ………………..and the little naughty small brother

He is a calm boy and he always used tob e silent…………………..

His father is a disciplined person a person of morals………….a person want to control the family.sometimes he used to scold his wife for her mistakes .he has a different aura,authority,his personaa everything

His mother an ideal mother in law who always want a upper hand.

And a soulfull bhabi want to complete the picture of bahu,bhabi and a dutiful wife of his pankaj bhayya………………………………….

She is indeed a lucky one.handling one

And his naughty brother who had fell in love with.a girl who is of modern.

Happiness evident in his face…..

His family is the longest support ………..

He enter the room

To find a two little angels sleeping on the bed

His life .

His love remains

He is proud to be fatherof them

His palak and payal

He tucked the blanket on them

And closed the lights

And came back to the room.

His room……………………………………………..

His privacy

Where his beautiful arpita picture in bride smiling a thim

Assuring him that she is always there………………………………………….

He closed the door………………….

And put his head on the photo and lived in his silence

The khamoshi……………………………..

Sometimes silence is the best place which we can be ourself

He is happy with his life

Whyon the earth all wants to interrupt his privacy, his private moments

With h is soul.arpita

She is soul mate she maybe gonne on through body

But her heart remained.with him

And the nishan,the gift palak and payal with him

Why he need anyone else

Everytime his work of being a wedding planning business

He cherish everymoment with his dead wife arpita

Her memories,her dreams,her smile,her fragnance everything

Then why everyone after him

Why maa doesn'tn understand.this.

He is frustuated.

But still he know

Next morning they will come with another excuse of conversation

Regarding his marriage…………………………………..

Wwhy

Why

Why arpita why

[part b and part c flash back continues

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2 part b

His thoughts interrupted by a sound

No payal it is minee

No it s is mine

He turned on two daughters fighting on something.

He bend down the knees

And stopped the fighting

Then hesaw his bhabhi coming in

And he sorted out the problem

Indeed she is amother

How she takes care of vedant and tanu………………………………

She took them with her

He quickly turned to……………………….his life

Arpita

FB:where are u taking me arpita

Shh yashu have patience na

Yash:patience na………not possible with u gave a naughty smile

He open the eyes to find his garden beautifully decorated with flowers and candles

Happy anniversary

Anniveersy.but arpita today is not our marriage anniversy

Uffo yashu………..guess

Ok.our first outing

Arpita:no

Yash:ok first kiss anniversy

Arpita:blushed and no

Yash:ok our first………………………

Arpita:yash ur so naughty u lost now punishment

Yash:punishment …………………..ok………………given naughty smile

Arpita..uffo today is the most important thing happened inur life

Yash:mmm the only beautiful and important thing happened when uhad said yes to my marriage………………….

Arpita:hug him.ur right that means u knoiw and ur foolingme

Yash:yes arpita……how can I forget the day whe n im the most luckiest person.who got his ,love

Arpita:promise me yash this will cherish to our life forever

Yash:ofcourse sweetheart but one condition

Arpita:what condition

Yash:regarding punishment he closed the distance

Arpita:yash……………….ur so ………..and she hugged him and they closed the eyes ..

He open the eyes ……………………………………..tof ind none

He came out to see his mother an dbhabh I talking animatedly along with pratik in his apron…..doing something to impress his darling.

He smiled at memory thinking tha t he used to do for arpita and comeout with some injury where arpita hell worried and used to say that I cannot even try to cook because I don't know how to make coffee……………….

But I used to tease her saying that it never comes as she is there to make his fresh coffee every morning

On seeing his elder dever in thoughts vidhi understood………………….and she enter the kitchen and come along coffee…….

He took over the cup……..

And his mother looked at him and said beta yeh kuch photos of girls………………………………………………………………………….

He gave a irritated look to his mother………………..where……………..vidhi gave a apoligised look to little dever who is curiously waiting for his answer

Maa………………….mein ne apse kitne baar kaha hay……………………ke……………………muje punar vivah nahii karne hay

Aur mein khush hoo apne bachee ke saath

Par beta.

She stopped on seeing his husband made his way to the room

Yash smiled at his father and left in the car where his two daughter s are….waiting,

He gave a kiss on them on cheek and ahead in the driver seat……

Vidhi joined his little devar…….for giving some time for her sasumaa and sasurji as she know there is going to be serious talk

Another pair of eyes .watching them

She is padmini………..she is widow of scindia family

She lost her husband at younger age and no one care s for her

But here they are hell burnt for their son second marriage

She made a face and………………………………left from there

Gayatri listened to his husband manly

How many times I told that each and everything discussed will have time…………………………

And when u learnt…………………………………..

Don't worry I will talk to him when times comes………………………..

He left from there

Part c

Yash scindia……

Reached office

He has a different aura when he reached the office

He is a man at the work

A person of principles never comprise in tha t

He will take care of each and every thing when comes to work

Because he is building a dream……….

Where………………..he will always live to expectations of the client

He will take car e of every minute things

That is the reason they are name d after the business……………………………………………..

He give some instructions to his assistants regarding the coming marriage.

And stromed to his room.

The only place where work deviates him………from his love memories

He busy himself in work to give peace to his heart overhealm for her as he know s that his family hell burnt to invade his space

But there are right to the certain extent

He closed his eyes when he remembered the incident

Where he tried to comb the hair and failed miserably and………………………………………

Palak accused him that it cannot be done right

Where vidhi bhabi came in rescue and took palak to comb her hair

And she done good

Another day he failed miserable to do some art work for payal.

Palak is just like arpita ………..talking

Where payal took the nature from him less talk. never complains she only…..remains silent

He tooks the silent and away from her room

When he come back to find payal is holding the picture of.him and arpita close up.

The kids miss es her

Ofcourse even…………………….he misses a lot

Did he thinking selfish

How can he cannot see the kids missing their mother

They had right to .be with their mother

Then how can a girl marry a person like him.who cannot give anything to her only can give the burden of his kids ……………….

How a girl unmarried comes with lot of expectations from a husband and family takes the point that she need to fulfill only a mother duties to his children…………………………………………………………………..

Is there any girl can take this……………………………he closed his eyes……………………………………………………

To find answers and looked at arpita photo

But least didn't know

That in future days he is going to get answers for his questions

He once again lost in memories of his life

Arpita………………………………………………………………………………….

The scene shifted form arrthi holding ansh and patting him in sleep

And yash put his head on arpita photo……………………………………………

Precap:yash and arthi meet…………….

It is something different

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Loved this Part!!
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Next part

A motherly love

Sobha looked at the mother and son

She had tears in her eyes''''''.

Indeed she want a daughter like her.but god gave her a son'''''''''

She felt happy.but the son which she trusted had became someone whom she cannot relate'''''''''''''

She felt betrayed first time when prashant told her that he is In love and she isa orphan

Her heart is filled with sorrowness and a soft corner.touched her heart.

She even had a b reif talk with her husband and invited her daughter in law with open hands

But when she saw her first time she felt she is not only her daughter in law as she already filled her dream to be daughter

Yes indeeds he is right

She is everything'''..she took care of her and stubborn husband who always refused to have his medicines on time

And she take care of everything

So she always take the right side'''''''''''''''.scolding prashant for irresponsb le indeed she used to feel'''''''''''that she may be the reason'''.being the only son she used to pamper him and does everything for him to make happy'''''''''''.infact she used toget scoldings from her husband''''''''.but still loves his son''''''''''.

But the happiness filled as she came to know that she enter th e new phrase she is soon getting dadi'''''''''

Her happiness glow''

But the fateful day

When prashant declared his love for another woman''..she felt her whole world shattered.

She looked at the helpless daughter ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,tears inn the eyes

On that day she broke all the ties with his son and determined tha t they had only one dauther that is arrthi'''''''''''''''..

But everytime of arrthi check up the eyes''searching for him

Why'''''..the love of her for that unworthy person who left her''''''''..alone in this world'''''''''''.

She got very angry

But lifet runed '''..

She felt surprised to find the girl who always talk much and her laughter used to fill the emptiness in the life.remained silent

She know deep inside the silence there is a a pain'''''''''

She got angry when all her relatives refused to believe prashant o fault and accusing her

She fought with them and broke all the ties and shifted to this place

Thegirl in silence turned to be best daughter..she tookcare of her,her husband along with the naughty grand son.who always filled happiness in their lives

Their ansh'''''''''..

All the mischief catches everyone attention.

When she got the blow in her life as on eof the worthless creature brought marriage proposal for arthi in her friend s marriage

Thinking that arthi is unmarried woman and start insulting her after learning that she is divorced.

Her venom words causing arrthi to shed tears .infront of everyone

Her anger reached the peak

She felt if a man can live his life with someother woman with out regret or worry'''why can't the society give a chance to woman to start a new life

Why can't arthi can live a new life

Why can't ansh can had a new father

Why can't they be always like this

Today she or her husband can take care what about their future

She is the girl of moral respects kind hearted well mannered who possessed all the qualities for a girl to be married''''''''''''''''''.

Why can't she live anew life with new people''''''''''''''.who love her and give her respect for that she deserved'''''''''''

She will sure find that

With anger bursted in her eyes

She spoke confidently and said

I will search a groom for my daughter I will do punar vivah for my daughter in law with the most eligible and best person in the world'''''''''''''..

She b reathed heavily and came out with her daughter and grand son''''''''''''''''''''.

And finally on seeing them on bed.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

She turned to the side of her room as she need to have a serious talk to her husband'''''''''''''''''''''''.

Edited by srilu_123 - 13 years ago

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