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Posted: 13 years ago
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I had given up writing FF's and had vowed not to write but this show had something that I always wanted to see on TV and hence I break my resolve and begin to write again...

It had been 6 months since Yash and Aarti had got married. Paridhi and Prateek were excited and were celebrating their 6 months anniversary. They were wanting to throw a dinner party and had invited all their friends for a terrace party. However, by the evening, Paridhi was looking glum. It was stormy and there were slight traces of rain. Her idea of the terrace party had gone for a six, thanks to the weather. She tried shifting the party downstairs but had met with a firm NO. After all they did have to smuggle the alcohol in for the party and there was going to be music and the DJ's and the works! Paridhi was sulking and Prateek was its wits end in trying to manofy his wife. Suddenly, an idea hit him - Rain Dance! Lets have a rain party at the terrace. weather ka bhi anand le lenge aur party bhi ho jayega. Suddenly paridhi's joys knew no bounds. She became her excited and jubilant self.

The windows planes were opening and closing thanks to the storm outside. It was pretty unlike the weather that people in Bhopal were used to seeing. The windows now were banging against each other. It now begins to pour and we see someone running towards the windows and trying to close them. A pair of hands come over and helped her close the windows. Time stands still and their hearts skip a beat. This was just one of the numerous instances when they came close to each other, when they were aware of their other presence and when they both were affected. Aarti looked at each as he lowered his head to her while helping her close the windows. Their hands met while they were putting the latch on the windows and they both felt something. Aarti, withdrew her hands and yash feeling her discomfort withdrew and stepped aside. she looked at him once and left.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice start! Love the parallels you have drawn between the AarYa and Prateek/Paridi relationship! Can't wait to see where you take this from here :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow!!
That's gr88!
Loveee the scenes of two couples!
Continue soonn!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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this sounds really interesting... please continue soon... 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow its really interesting..
loved d contrast between d two couples..
do cont.soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely ff loved it...
Please pm me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome start! Keep going! I'm eager to read the next part:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely start!!!!😛
Plzz do continue!!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good Start! I can't wait for more. Please continue.

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