OS: Enough is Enough!

Heyy!! just started watching the show - thanks to the steamy/catchy promo's.. These two have amazing chemistry!!

This FF is great :) how i wish something like this happens in the show!! for once no misunderstandings between the lead pair, a fresh slate per say... Very well thought out, and brilliantly expressed!!His frustration at being misunderstood and his exasperation at being unable to clarify his stand to her shines through! The ball is in his court now... Please do continue.. Cant wait to see where this goes...

Originally posted by: sns23

Heyy!! just started watching the show - thanks to the steamy/catchy promo's.. These two have amazing chemistry!!

This FF is great :) how i wish something like this happens in the show!! for once no misunderstandings between the lead pair, a fresh slate per say... Very well thought out, and brilliantly expressed!!His frustration at being misunderstood and his exasperation at being unable to clarify his stand to her shines through! The ball is in his court now... Please do continue.. Cant wait to see where this goes...

Wow, just wow! Another flawless piece! If only, if only, if only...these were the only words running in my head as I read Yash's confession! That was absolutely perfect, the frustration, impatience, and control Yash exhibited in those few moments to get Aarti's attention and clear up all the misunderstandings, man if only we get to see that on the show! I think all of us will probably end up dying with a scene like this!

I find it really, really ironic that the thing that finally broke the verbal dam from Yash's side was Aarti telling him that she can't marry him. He had been waiting for the right opportunity to talk to her, and had been thwarted every time, but when she goes and tells him that she wants to call off the wedding, he knows that he needs to clear her misconception, because in a way he has accepted her as his daughter's mother and despite having no personal attachment to her, he does want to let her go, for the sake of his daughters!

And to add another twist, that whole misunderstanding about Yash's character was the farthest thing from her mind when she came to tell him the truth about her being a divorcee. It's fitting that the one time she is not hesitant to approach him, he clears away the misguided sketch that she had of him in her head throwing her into a complete standstill!

Lastly, I would LOVE another part to this, just to see Yash's reaction and how he convinces her and his parents about the wedding! Your writing is so freaking perfect and realistic that I can see it all happening on the show, so I would love to see how you deal with the fallout of this, especially from Yash's side! But, and I am totally being shameless here, please, please, please, give us the next part of your FF first, I am absolutely dying for an update for that! :)

that was an awesome piece of writing...what a confrontation...loved it

I loved it! Aarti and Yash really need to talk before they get married, they need to clear any misconception the other may have, this is exactly what I wish to see in the upcoming episodes.

guru has gr8 chem with any1

Fabulous ! 👏

Originally posted by: rusha4003

Fabulous ! 👏

This is exactly the kind of scene I imagined if/when Yash decided to speak up and explain things ...

You have a wonderful way with words and I love to read your write-ups. I'm reading your FF too ...

Please do continue this and let us know how they decide to marry after all !

And needless to say, I'm waiting eagerly for the next part of your FF !

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PS: BTW, I'm Usha ... what do I call you ? 😊

Originally posted by: Allbut1

Wow, just wow! Another flawless piece! If only, if only, if only...these were the only words running in my head as I read Yash's confession! That was absolutely perfect, the frustration, impatience, and control Yash exhibited in those few moments to get Aarti's attention and clear up all the misunderstandings, man if only we get to see that on the show! I think all of us will probably end up dying with a scene like this!

I find it really, really ironic that the thing that finally broke the verbal dam from Yash's side was Aarti telling him that she can't marry him. He had been waiting for the right opportunity to talk to her, and had been thwarted every time, but when she goes and tells him that she wants to call off the wedding, he knows that he needs to clear her misconception, because in a way he has accepted her as his daughter's mother and despite having no personal attachment to her, he does want to let her go, for the sake of his daughters!

And to add another twist, that whole misunderstanding about Yash's character was the farthest thing from her mind when she came to tell him the truth about her being a divorcee. It's fitting that the one time she is not hesitant to approach him, he clears away the misguided sketch that she had of him in her head throwing her into a complete standstill!

Lastly, I would LOVE another part to this, just to see Yash's reaction and how he convinces her and his parents about the wedding! Your writing is so freaking perfect and realistic that I can see it all happening on the show, so I would love to see how you deal with the fallout of this, especially from Yash's side! But, and I am totally being shameless here, please, please, please, give us the next part of your FF first, I am absolutely dying for an update for that! :)

Thanks everyone for your lovely comments 😊