AarYa FF: From a Place of Silence

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Maham

@Allbut1

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

That was absolutely fantastic! I loved how you set the tone really well, especially from Yash's point of view. So her silence is bothering him, and you highlighted that really nicely by throwing in the comparison on how she deals with the rest of the family! Looking forward to the next part so please update soon :)

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rohini973794

@rohini973794

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

gud plot...continue soon😊

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LuvStrk-001

@LuvStrk-001

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Gud start of FF and plzz do continue!!!

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Alamelu

@Alamelu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

loved it...hope it clears this way ...quick and fast too in the serial...

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anu008

@anu008

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

LOve this ...like the way this story is gng...pls do continue soon

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whatthewhat

@whatthewhat

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Thanks everyone! Parts 3 & 4 coming up!

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Maham

@Allbut1

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

I have to say that I absolutely LOVING Yash's frustration! And Aarti's hesitation and cold behavior towards him makes perfect sense now...she's probably staying away from him because she thinks that he wants absolutely nothing to do with her, and Yash on the other is extremely frustrated by the distance, it's a wonderful conflict! Can't wait to see how he tries to resolve things, eyes screened for part 4 :)

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whatthewhat

@whatthewhat

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Allbut1
I have to say that I absolutely LOVING Yash's frustration! And Aarti's hesitation and cold behavior towards him makes perfect sense now...she's probably staying away from him because she thinks that he wants absolutely nothing to do with her, and Yash on the other is extremely frustrated by the distance, it's a wonderful conflict! Can't wait to see how he tries to resolve things, eyes screened for part 4 :)

you got it 😉 part 4 coming up shortly...