AarYa FF: From a Place of Silence

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Maham

@Allbut1

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Yay we finally get to see things from Aarti's POV! She has definitely realized what a beautiful and amazing human being Yash is, but she also thinks that he will never embrace her as his wife, so she tries to maintain her distance even though she is falling for him everyday! Waiting for the next part :)

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whatthewhat

@whatthewhat

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Dear friends,

I had decided not to continue with this FF...but I find I cannot stay away from wanting to write about this wonderful couple! 😳So I hope you'll put up with me while I continue to work on this FF. I've made some small revisions and re-posted Parts 1-4.

Part 5 coming up soon.

Thanks!

Mira

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bindu

@bangalores

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

great...u have a way with words...the emotions just flow

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LuvStrk-001

@LuvStrk-001

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Amazing FF dear!!!!😊

Plzz do continue!!😛

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Maham

@Allbut1

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Oh wow that was a short but an extremely hard core chapter, I absolutely loved it! You have portrayed Aarti's thoughts, feeling and insecurities so beautifully that I felt my heart break for the heart as I read it! The part where she says that she doesn't belong in that house and would one day have to leave really shows that she has firmly accepted the fact that her relationship with Yash will never improve, and on the other hand Yash is being driven crazy by her distance! Hopefully he manages to do something that starts changing the situation, and I think pulling down all of Arpita's pictures from the walls might be a good start! Wonderful part and as usual can't wait for the next one!

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DMKJ_VB

@DMKJ_VB

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

all the parts were fabulous.

Poor Aarti, she has no idea that Yash ji is getting attracted to her😆

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arp04srocks

@arp04srocks

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

WOW what an excellent story...i am loving every second of it...and craving more...

i think what i love the most is how realisitc it seems...you know this is exactly what i can imagine for these two, and to tell you the truth a lot of what you have written is what i wanted to write... i just couldnt find the time...and now i dnot have to...plz carry on asap...

Edited by arp04srocks - 13 years ago

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whatthewhat

@whatthewhat

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Allbut1
Oh wow that was a short but an extremely hard core chapter, I absolutely loved it! You have portrayed Aarti's thoughts, feeling and insecurities so beautifully that I felt my heart break for the heart as I read it! The part where she says that she doesn't belong in that house and would one day have to leave really shows that she has firmly accepted the fact that her relationship with Yash will never improve, and on the other hand Yash is being driven crazy by her distance! Hopefully he manages to do something that starts changing the situation, and I think pulling down all of Arpita's pictures from the walls might be a good start! Wonderful part and as usual can't wait for the next one!

omg! you read my mind...I am planning a scene in which Yash pulls down all the photographs!

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whatthewhat

@whatthewhat

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: arp04srocks
WOW what an excellent story...i am loving every second of it...and craving more...

i think what i love the most is how realisitc it seems...you know this is exactly what i can imagine for these two, and to tell you the truth a lot of what you have written is what i wanted to write... i just couldnt find the time...and now i dnot have to...plz carry on asap...

thank you!

my ff shouldn't stop you...i'd love to read yours too!

btw LOVE your signature...that's totally how I feel!!!