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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update Sheetal👏 Vikrant is getting romantic and naughty😳 Today I feel some sympathy for Sheela. Sarita really loves her despite all her short comings!! And ViSa kissed!😳 Only four more updates to go!! nooo😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
Impressive update...loved it...wish we all had such sweet angels around us.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anjalijiji

Awesome update Sheetal👏 Vikrant is getting romantic and naughty😳 Today I feel some sympathy for Sheela. Sarita really loves her despite all her short comings!! And ViSa kissed!😳 Only four more updates to go!! nooo😭

sarita raised her up so she would obvio love her, and finally someone sympathizes sarita, goodd 😆
yess, only 4 more parts to go 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Elita

Impressive update...loved it...wish we all had such sweet angels around us.

i wishh
and thankss😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful update, dear!👏👏 Loved it!❤️
I like the way you have kept Sarita to character...She is a very generous person. Loved reading her concern for her sister.

And ViSa kissed! It was so sweet. 😳😳

Keep up the great work, Nisha! ⭐️ Feeling sad that the FF will come to an end in the next 4 chapters!😭

P.S. Thank you for the pms dear! You are such a sweetheart!😃
Edited by wupa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Meriam25

hmmm awesome sheetal

A kiss so soon??????????
re u getting inspired by pallavi????😆
Sarita's reactions are v suitable for her pos

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anyways this is so beautiful sheetal
loved the " game-show noise, signaling a wrong answer" ha ha tht was funny

Do continue and ty v much for the PM love reading ur ff always now as things are clear to me he he wel after al i belong to the duffer club

N oh yeah forgot to say : Present Mam :)
plz continue lovely update


@Meriam...
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Edited by wupa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Liashna

🤔 Errm what am i supposed to say?

-Scratching my head- So speechless yaaar! Kya boloun? 😆

Okay, let me start by the shock that you said only FOUR PARTS TO GO? :O Really? From 6 you fell directly to 4?! Awesome! just too awesome! -___-

Anyway, back to the update :)

So Sheela needed Sarita :| Is she in a kind of difficulty? And u're making me like her 😆 Very considerate on her part not to disturb her! The change in emotion, flow in the scene amazingly shown, i mean written! Hehe 👏

Godd has been givin you hard time xD Hahaha. Gawd!! That was one of a kind 😆 Seriously! U're too good with ur dialogues!

Ah so Vikrant confessed about what he was doing, thinking of the girl he was with at the wishing well ^_^ What a cute way he chose, i was blushing like he was saying that to me 😆

Ahhh Raaain! Can u transfer some from ur FF to my place? Please? It's too hot here :p And you made Sarita love rain and me a little more <3 :D
Game show noise for wrong answer 🤣 Can u send this Vikrant to me??? Hamaari khub jamegi XD Lol

'A sun shower and it warms' And it warmed my heart 👏

Whoa there!! Am too lost in the scene am seeing in my mind's eye to be able to comment on that. They kissed! -Thud- <--- That was me falling off my bed! 😆

Beautiful 👏

p.s: I tried controlling my words here, so you can imagine 😆 And my virtual hands are tired of clapping and showing thumbs up to you. And my real one, of typing :p

Update soon, reaally soon ;)
xoxo


LMAO @ the way you have expressed yourself in this post, Liash!🤣😆😆

Priceless!!😆😆

Wait a minute...You said ONLY 4 PARTS LEFT, Nisha?😲😕
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: wupa


LMAO @ the way you have expressed yourself in this post, Liash!🤣😆😆

Priceless!!😆😆

Wait a minute...You said ONLY 4 PARTS LEFT, Nisha?😲😕


yess the story would be done in 4 parts 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Nisha--


yess the story would be done in 4 parts 😛


😭😭

Who will give us a daily dose of our ViSa?😭😭 Hope you have another FF ready before this is done!😉😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: wupa


😭😭

Who will give us a daily dose of our ViSa?😭😭 Hope you have another FF ready before this is done!😉😃


hahaha i would be making vms after that. my vms are on break due to the ff 😆

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