ViSa FF: Invisible Love Epilogue Page 24 - Page 11

Originally posted by: --Nisha--

Np about the apologizing part, you must be busy 😳
and even i liked that line, thats why i used it here. it shows how much foolish we become we grow up, and children have sucha wide horizon,
and thankss, and your ffs inspired me to write, so you really cant take lessons from it. the detailing the intimacy between the characters i learned from your ffs only 😉

beautiful sheetal

I am so relieved that I am getting to post my thoughts here!! Its such a refreshing and different take on Visa!!! As it is I can't get enough of them and thank heavens you're there to keep the embers alive. Though a real quite Sarita, a jealous Sheela and an equally amused Vikrant was never what I had in mind...but I love reading it all!!! Thank you sweets!!!!

Originally posted by: Meself

I am so relieved that I am getting to post my thoughts here!! Its such a refreshing and different take on Visa!!! As it is I can't get enough of them and thank heavens you're there to keep the embers alive. Though a real quite Sarita, a jealous Sheela and an equally amused Vikrant was never what I had in mind...but I love reading it all!!! Thank you sweets!!!!

Originally posted by: alekhika20

Beautiful updt,cont soon.
Waiting...

Originally posted by: Meriam25

beautiful sheetal

the story is progressing beautfiully

love the way sarita is finally breaking her shell n hopef vikranth wil stay wit her forever

loved it so v much plzzz continue sooon

srish is an awesome actress to share screen space wit eijaz and to get equally loved n npticed is sucha big thing n she was equally good inside out

n they were equally hot :)

waiting for ur next one

n oh yeah present mam :) ty for the PMs

jNope!! Not at all!! It ain't a farewell post!!! I had to get it off my chest...for my laptop's dead and honestly I don't know how to use these Android phones!!! Technologically a gawar you know!!! 😆

Originally posted by: wupa

Yeah...Busy updating the FFs...I realized that it is emotionally draining writing one and coming up with scenarios for the other..hehe😆😆

Are you kiddin' me? My FFs inspired you? I am honoured you think that of my FFs, so thank you, girl!😳, but I am finding it difficult to grasp that it inspired you.😆 hehe and there is no harm in learning from you or anyone, is there? 😃

ETA--And what kind of intimacy are you talking about?😕😕 emotional or physical?😛😉 hehe

Originally posted by: --Nisha--

hahaha you also giving me attendance 😆

and thanks for liking it. this was the only update i was curious for you people to read it 😃

and it seems that it worked fine 😉

Originally posted by: wupa

What an amazing story, Nisha!😊

Love the way you are weaving the story and its characters together. I felt so sad for Sarita and I am so glad that Vikrant is beside her and hope it stays that way!😊 Yes, I agree with Vikrant...Sarita is beautiful inside out. That is what hooked me to this show...Sarita's character wonderfully portrayed by Srishty!😊

Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of work, my dear!😳

Just love the way the FF is progressing..Do post the update soon!😳 I know that I am being unfair demanding an update ASAP. But what to do? you got me hooked to the story. hehe😆😆