Tutata Tara ~~ Luv Story Part II

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Hey guys I'm Here with Part II of Luv Story of Pri-Sanyo😳

Link for First Part if anyone didn't read it or didn't know the Concept of the Story

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/prithviraj-chauhan/793885/tutata-tara-luv-story

Recap in Short :: Prithvi and Sanyo both goes to udaypoor for Mahashivratri Mahotsav and they meet their for First time,

Now What Happen Next,Check out

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Sanyo smile's at her own starring at moon

"Rajkumari Sanyogita"

Sanyo came in reality from her remembering Things, she turns back

Jaichand was standing behind her

"Pitaji aap………….aap kab aaye" she said looking down

"Tab jab aap Aasmaan ki taraf dekh rahi thi, kya soch rahi thi aap" said jaichand smiling

Sanyo thinks Prithvi for two minutes and remember flashbacks when Prithvi Hold her in his Arms when they saw each other for first time

"Sanyogita kaha kho gayi aap" ask jaichand looking at her

"Vo hum soch……." Jaichand interrupts

"Koi baat nahi" said jaichand smiling very freely

"Hum aapko ye bataane aaye the ke kal hum sab Daulatpoor ja rahe hai" said jaichand

"Daulatpoor kyun" asks Sanyo making question mark on her face

"Vo aapko vahi jaakar pata chalega" by saying this jaichand leaves from there

Sanyo get worried and start thinking that what is going to be there in daulatpoor

Some where away………in Ajmer

Aaaaaaaaah!!! Someone cried with very painful voice

Prithvi Runs towards the voice

"Kya hua" ask Prithvi with very tensed face

All chander,pundir,sanjam & arjun start laughing, Prithvi didn't realized for some time that why all are laughing

Looking Prithvi's tensed face sanjam said,

"Phikar mat karo Prithvi kisiko kuch nahi hua,Hum to majhak kar rahe the"

Prithvi got angry

"Maine tumse kitani baar kaha hai muje aisa majhak bilkul pasand nahi hai,Tum ek baar me samajh nahi sakati" suddenly Prithvi stops sating and Remember Sanyo for a while her smiling face was roaming aroung his eyes he was smiling in his own world

All looking at Prithvi

"Samajh nahi sakti" said pundir giggling slightly

Prithvi looked at pundir

"Lagata hai Prithvi ko kisiki yaad aa rahi" said Arjun in teasing way by giving slight push to Prithvi, Prithvi was thinking something other so as Arjun push him he falls down

Again all laugh together

Prithvi ignore all this conversation and leave from there and goes in his room

It's a night Prithvi seating on his Bed in his room looking at the Bangle which was in his Hand Remembering Sanyo

"Are suno toh" chamki was going behind Sanyo to console her

"Hume kuch nahi sunana" said Sanyo going in straight

"Lekin battao to sahi hua kya hai" said chamki going behind her

"Vo Pushkar apne aap ko samjhata kya hai" said Sanyo

"Par usne aisa kiya kya" ask Vaishali

"Usne usne humaara humaara Kangan Churaaya aur jab humne pucha to saaf inkar kar diya" said Sanyo with very angry voice

It was happen like this,

Here all friends of Prithvi were point out that Prithvi is being attracted towards Sanyo so they made a trick for some fun

When all of them were in Mandir at that time Arjun and Chand decide something Prithvi finds that they were discussing something and he came there seeing that Prithvi is coming towards us Arjun and Chand stop discussing and Started laughing suddenly

Prithvi surprised that sometime before they were discussing something and suddenly start laughing?

"Jara dekho to vo kitani nakchadi hai" said Chand by giggling

"Haan uske baal dekhe hai bilkul Choodail ki tarah lagate hai" said Arjun

And both Chand and Arjun laugh with loud voice

Prithvi was listening all this he came in front

"Kiski bare me baat kar rahe ho tum log" ask Pithvi looking towards both of them

"Are hum vo aar……." Chand stops Arjun

"Kuch nahi Pushkar hum to aise hi baat kar rahe the kuch khas nahi" said Chand looking at Arjun and telling him not to ake Aarti's name

"Nahi koi to baat hai tum abhi kiske bare me baat kar rahe the battao" ask Prithvi with making inspecting face

"Humne kaha naa Pushkar aisi koi baat nahi hai" said Chand tryng to console Prithvi

"Nahi Chander mujhe lagataa hai hume Pushkar ko bataa dena chahiye" said Arjun blinking his eye looking at Chand

Prithvi get angry

"Ab tum dono mujhe battaoge bhi ke kya ho raha hai" said Prithvi with angry face

"Thik hai bataa te hai" while saying this Pundir and Sanjam come there

"Kya ho raha hai yaha" ask Sanjam

"Sanjam beech me mat bolo,Arjun tum bataoge ya nahi" said Prithvi

Sanjam look at Arjun asking him what happen by eyes

"Vo Pushkar chodo naa" said Chand

"Nahi"Prithvi shout loudly" Tum dono mujhe abhi battaoge ke tum kske bare me baat kar rahe the"said Prithvi

"Thik hai agar tumhe itna hi jaan na hai to sune hum Aarti ke bare me baat kar rahe the" said Arjun in one Breath

"Haan ab hume mat bolna kuch" said Chand

Sanjam and Pundir look at each other

"Kya"Prithvi shouts "Tum us Aarti ke bare me baat kar rahe the, dekho Arjun aise kisi achhi kadki ke bare me aisi baat karana thik nahi" said Prithvi

"Acchi" said all together by laughing

"Tumhe kya pata ki vo achhi hai" ask Sanjam taking round around Pirthvi

"Mujhe kaise pata matlab,Mere matlab ladkiyaan to achhi hi hoti hai naa" said Prithvi by looking down and here and there

"Saari ladkiyaan achi nahi hoti Pushkar" said Pundir giggling slightly

"bas ab mujhe kuch nahi sunna,aur aaj ke baad koi Aarti ke bare me aisi koi baat nahi karega" said Prithvi pointing his finger towards all

"Sirf Aarti ke bare me" ask Arjun and all giggle

"Mera matlab kisi aur ke bare me" said Prithvi making face like embarrassed

"Ohhhhhhhhhhh" said all together

Prithvi smiles and leave from there all laugh together

Sanjam look around and he saw Sanyo standing near them

"Are us Aarti ne to sab sun liya" said Sanjam in lower voice

Pundir look back

"Haan vo to us Zaad ke paas khadi hai"

"Achaa hua ab aaye ga majha" said Chand giving clap on Arjun's hand and both giggle

And they all leave

Here Sanyo was thinking in her mind

"Pushkar sab ke bare me kitana sochata hai,aur humaare bare me bhi" she smiles cutely

"Aarti tum ya soch kar muskura rahi ho" ask chamki coming from behind of Sanyo in tent

"Haa!! Vo hum aisehi kuch nahi tum kab aayi" said Sanyo in little frighten voice

"Are tum dar kyun rahi ho" said chamki

"Nahi hum kaha dar rahe hai hum to aise hi" said sanyo

Arjun and Sanjam were listening all this conversation of Chamki and Sanyo

So Planned to do some Misunderstandings between Prithvi and Sanyo

After some time Sanyo comes out from her tent she was going on lake side

All friends of Prithvi comes from behind her and start following her, In between she felt like someone is following her so she turns back but no one was there all friends hide behind tree, so she move on

She reach on lake and seats there for some time

Sanjam and Pundir come there and seats on tree and throw a stone towards her as it touches her hand and get down into the lake

She cried loudly they showed like Arjun and Chand were passing trough from there and they came near her to listening her voice

"Kya hua tum chillayi kyun?" ask Arjun

"Vo kisine hume piche se kuch maara aur vo pani me jaakar gira" said Sanyo in frighten voice

"Accha main dekhata hu" said Chand he move towards lake

"Sam….Sambhaal ke" said Sanyo in lower voice

Chand goes inside the water

Here Sanjam and Pundir were laughing and watching the fun

"Kuch nahi ek pathhar hai" said chand

"huh!!" Sanyo felt relax

"Aap thik hai naa" ask Arjun to Sanyo

"Pundir……Arjun…..Chander" Prithvi came there searching all of them, He saw Arjun and Chander with Sanyo

"Tum dono yaha kya kar rahe ho" ask Prithvi looking towards Sanyo

"Kuch nahi"said Chand looking at Arjun and Prithvi

"Kuch nahi?" said Prithvi making question mark on his face

"Vo hum inki madat karne aaye the" said Arjun pointing his finger towards Sanyo

"Inki madat,inki kya madat karni" said Prithvi looking at Sanyo

"Vo inko kisi ne peeche se patthar mara to vo dar gayi aur inhe laga ki ki in par….."

"Bas Arjun mujhe samajh me aa gayaa" said Prithvi

"Ab…aap thik hai naa" ask Prithvi to Sanyo

During all this conversation Chand slightly bend down and took up the bangle of Sanyo which was lying on flour when Sanjam and Pundir through the stone and that angle fall down

"haan hum thik hai,Shukriya,Ab hum chalet hai" said Sanyo smiling and leaves from there

Arjun and Chand smiles too,

"Chand Sanjam aur Pundir kaha hai" ask Prithvi

While Sanjam and Pundir came from back side of Arjun

"Are tum sab yaha ho hum tumhe Mandir ke pass dhund rahe the" said Pundir

"Haan vo hum aise hi jaraa ghumne chale aaye"

Chand smiles looking at Sanjam

All leves towards Mandir for evenings aarti

Here in Mandir Chamki and Vaishali were waiting for Sanyo

"Are ye Aarti kaha reh gayi" said Vaishali

"Haan ab tak to use aa jaana chahiye tha" said Chamki looking at staires of Mandir and Sanyo enters

"Lo aa gayi" said Chamki pointing her hand towards Sanyo both Vaishali and Chamki smiles looking at her

"Itani der kaha laga dii" ask vaishali to Sanyo

"Vo hum" Sanyo was about to say it

"Bhakto" said Poojari jii "Aaj is Mahotsav ka pehela din hai,Ab hum Shivjii ki aarti ka Prarambh karne jaa rahe hai,Bolo Bhagvan Shiv ki"

"Jai" all said together

Aarti finished all gone to there tents Sanyo also went towards her tent in between she realize that her bangle is not their in her hand so she stops in between

"Kya hua tum ruk kyun gayi" ask Vaishali

"Vo humaara Kangan shayad aarti ke wqat Mandir me hi gir gaya, hum dekh ke aate hai" said Sanyo

"Thik hai lekin jaldi aana" said Vaishali and she smiles

Sanyo smiles too

Sanjam listen all this conversation and give this information to Arjun and Chand that she is coming towards Mandir

Chand came there

"Are Aarti tum yaha kya kar rahi ho" ask Chand to Sanyo

"Vo humaara kangan kahi gir gaya,hme lagata hai ke aarti ke wqat Mandir me gir gaya hoga to hum vahi dhundne jaa rahe hai" said Sanyo by smiling

"Achaa" said Chand and he leaves from there by smiling

Sanyo come in Mandir

In Mandir she saw arjun was seating on his knees in front of Prithvi she get surprised

"Dekho Pushkar main tumse haath jodke vinati karta hoon ki tum us kya naam hai uska (thinking for a bit) aarti haan Aarti uska kangan lauta do" said Arjun giggling slightly

Prithvi didn't get anything wat he's talking about,

And Sanyo was listening everything by standing over stairs of Mandir

"Kya!! (Sanyo shouts) tumne humaara kangan churaaya" ask Sanyo coming near Prithvi with question mark and angry face

"Nahi" said Prithvi with confused mind thinking at him own that what's going on

Arjun stands up

"Dekho tum Kya naam hai tumhaara" said Sanyo

"Pushkar" said Arjun quickly

"Haan Pushkar yaa job hi agar tumne humaara Kangan liya hai to hume lauta do" said Sanyo looking at Prithvi

"Maine koi kangan nahi liya hai" Prithvi is still confused

"Are aise kaise nahi liya maine khud tumhe vo Knagn lete hue dekha hai" said Arjun with very seriousness

"Agar tumhaare paas humaara kangan hai to hume lauta do" said Sanyo with attitude

"Dekho Aarti mere paas tumhaara koi kangan nahi hai" said Prithvi

"Phir ye kyun keh raha hai ki humaara kangan tumhaare paas hai" said Sanyo pointing towards Arjun

Arjun look down

Sanjam,pundir and Chand were enjoying all this fun from behind the tree

"Dekho mujhe nahi pata ki ye aisa kyun keh raha, Lekin agar mujhe vo tumhaara kangan milega to main jaroor lauta doonga" said Prithvi

Sanyo looked at Prithvi in very attitude face and urn to leave from there

As far as she turns Prithvi get back to Arjun and he moves two steps towards Arjun and that Kangan falls down which was hanging on Prithvi Kamar Patta (don't know the proper word) which was Placed by all his Friends during evening aarti

That Kangan fall down as it fall down Sanyo turns back again

She looked at Prithvi with very angry face and leaves from there

End of Second Part😉

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Hope u all Like it😃

Pls Do Comment and Give Suggetions if any 😉

I$hu 😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
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loooveelyyy.. Sanyos kangan.. 😳 WOW.. the way u go frm present track to flashback and continue the story is great ISHU.. Once again a great job.. waiting for Part III 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Its awesomee!! keep it upp 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey thx dil glad u like it
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24 views no reply 😡
comment ppl were all gone?? 😕
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi Ishita wow dear u got the talent to tell stories. 👏 just love the flashbacks 😳 . awesome 👏
just a bit confused is this story following the sagars track. I mean did they have any MU when they got seperated. any clues😉 lol well am an impatient person. don't tell if it will spoil all the suspence or ur story line. 😉
great job 👏
pls keep writing. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Very Nice!!!!Waiting eagerly for the next part!!Do post soon!!! 😊
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wow ishu 👏 ..very nice 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Innocent Ishita

24 views no reply 😡
comment ppl were all gone?? 😕

ooooye ishu m here..............dun b saaaaaaad huney .......😃

i luved it ur quite brilliant in writing stories........thnk u can b a writer.......👏

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: castrafa

Hi Ishita wow dear u got the talent to tell stories. 👏 just love the flashbacks 😳 . awesome 👏
just a bit confused is this story following the sagars track. I mean did they have any MU when they got seperated. any clues😉 lol well am an impatient person. don't tell if it will spoil all the suspence or ur story line. 😉
great job 👏
pls keep writing. 😊

no hun itz not following sagar's track itz just imagination😳

Originally posted by: sanniya

ooooye ishu m here..............dun b saaaaaaad huney .......😃

i luved it ur quite brilliant in writing stories........thnk u can b a writer.......👏

thx sannu for supporting😳

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