Tutata Tara ~~ Luv Story

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guys......if anyone remember few dayz before Tannishta aka its me tan has posted a topic on Moon in sagar's life😆

so me and Bhuvana were decussing on Tutata tara which was thought posted by sanniya i guess

so from tht thought of Tutata Tara Bhuvana gave me idea to write a Short Luv Story Between Prithvi-Sanyo with this Tutata Tara😍

So i tried to write it,Posting First Part

Pls forgive for spelling mistakes😉

So here we go😛

"Pata hai tutate hue taare se Jo bhi maango vo mil jata hai"

"Accha!! Kya tum in sab baton par yakin karte ho"

Sanyogita was standing near window in her room and remembering the dayz of Mahashviratri Mahotsav Where She and Prithvi meet first time

That was dayz of Mahashivratri, Prithvi and friends were going there as per culture of Ajmer that every Rajkumar and Uttaradhikari of Ajmer goes to Udaypur for Mahashivratri Mahotsav

Here Sanyogita also preparing to go for this Mahotsav with her friends

Next day at Morning Prithvi and Friends leave from Ajmer for Udaypur and Sanyogita went from Kannauj with her friends

It's Evening Prithvi and Sanyogita both arrived at the place with there friends where they were going to stay which was situated near the Shiv Mandir

Prithvi was telling to is friends that they should call him Pushkar

"Dekho tum sab ye baat yaad rakhana ki main Prithvi nahi Pushkar hoon"said prithvi pointing his finger towards all his friends

"Par kyun prithvi? Agar hum yaha Mahotsav ke liye aaye hai to tum apni pehchaan kyun chupana chahte ho" ask pundir to prithvi

"Bas aise hi mujhe dekhna hai ki log ek aam ladke ke saath kaise pesh aate hai"

"Thik hai prithvi hum iss baat ka khayal rakhenge" said sanjam putting his hand on shoulder of prithvi

Prithvi smiles and all leaves towards their tent

Here in the tent Sanyogita was also telling Chamki and Vaishali to call her as Aarti

"Tum dono ko yaad hai naa humne kannauj se niklate wqat kya kaha tha" said Sanyo pointing towards both chamki and vaishali

"Haan, hume yaad hai ki tum Sanyogita nahi Aarti ho" said vaishali

"Haan ab thik hai" Sanyo smiles and all of them come out of the tent

Sanyogita remember that she was going to get flowers for evenings aarti as poojari jii tell her

"Vaishali tum dono Mandir me jaao hum Phool leke aate hai" said Sanyo to vaishali

"Thik hai lekin jaldi aana" said vaishali

And both vaishali and chamki leaves towards Mandir and Sanyo leaves to get some flowers

Here Prithvi is also coming to Mandir with his friends

In Mandir Vaishali and Chamki are helping poojari jii to preparing Pooja Thaali for Evening's Aarti Prithvi and friends are coming up from stairs in Mandir, Suddenly Prithvi's shoes stuck between the Grass so he stops there and all other goes towards

Prithvi is trying to get out that shoes stuck in to grass,

Here Sanyogita is coming from behind with bucket of flowers

Prithvi however manages to stuck it out and he turns back to got to the Mandir and Dashed to Sanyogita,

Sanyogita was about to fall down Prithvi holds her in his Arms,and

They start staring at each other

Pa Ma Ga Ma Ga Re Ni Ga Re Sa

Sa Ni Dha Ni Dha Pa Ma Ni Dha Pa

Music is going on,

Prithvi and Sanyo still staring at each other

Suddenly thaali of Pooja falls down on flour from chamki's hand

Prithvi and Sanyo stop staring and stand up properly prithvi lives her, Music stops

Prithvi and Sanyo both are embarrassed and looking at each other by glance

Prithvi look down and he realized that all flowers were fall down on flour, he seats down to collect flowers in a bucket, Sanyo is still staring at prithvi, prithvi get up and give her bucket of flowers,

While giving it coincidently there hand touched to each others hand, Sanyo suddenly take back her hand and stop staring at him,

Prithvi turns back to go to Mandir, he was about to go one step ahead,

"Shukriya"

He turns back, Sanyo was saying to him by looking down,

"Isame shukriya ki koi baat nahi, agar koi aur bhi hota tab bhi main yahi karta" said prithvi

Sanyo look at him and smiles slightly and runs from there and goes in Mandir

Prithvi smiles seeing her like this by shooking his head and move ahead in Mandir

"Aarti itni der kaha laga dii, hum kab se tumhara intezaar kar rahe the" said chamki

"a!!! Vo……hum…….phool lane……."

Shez still string at prithvi who was standing on other side in front of her

"Aarti kaha kho gayi"

Vaishali flowing her hand in front of Sanyo's eyes by saying this

Sanyo stops staring at prithvi

"VO…..hum...yeh……."

She stop talking for two minutes, vaishali and chamki look at each other with question mark on there faces

"yeh phool pooja ke liye" trying to ignore her attention towards Prithvi said Sanyo

Prithvi was also putting a glance towards her in between, as he was helping sanjam in lightening of Mandir for the Mahotsav

Arjun points out that he was looking at prithvi and Sanyo from first

Suddenly one light fall down from prithvi's hand, Sanyo look there

Arjun: kyun Pushkar dhyan kaha hai tumhara

"Hmmmmmmmmmm" all said together

By shooking head and trying to hide expressions and blushing Prithvi said

Prithvi: nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai

Pls Do Comment tht will Encourage to write next parts😃

Hope u all Like it

I$hu😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
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luuuuuuuuuuuuuuevd it so romantic haaaaaaaaaan .kkep it up ISHU waitng for ya next part......
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Posted: 17 years ago
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sanyon is lil..... 😉 😉 😉 in ya story... 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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good work 👏 👏 👏
Pushkar and Aarti hmmmmmmmmmm......
Imagine Anas as Pushkar and Pooja as Aarti 🤢
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Finally Ishu !! I shall read it tonight and tell u how I loved it 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: arshitgupta

good work 👏 👏 👏
Pushkar and Aarti hmmmmmmmmmm......
Imagine Anas as Pushkar and Pooja as Aarti 🤢

arey y u bring A n P here.........🤢

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Posted: 17 years ago
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okh y ma warnings levels not goin down.......? 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanniya

okh y ma warnings levels not goin down.......? 😭

how to check warning levels???😕

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: arshitgupta

good work 👏 👏 👏
Pushkar and Aarti hmmmmmmmmmm......
Imagine Anas as Pushkar and Pooja as Aarti 🤢

thx all glad u like it

arshit this is LUV Story😳 not a Zoo amuzment park story🤢

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: arshitgupta

how to check warning levels???😕

well u cant c it now...coz thers no warnig fo ya😊......btw it cums along wid ya username.....

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