Sanyogita being unreasonable & selfish - Page 4

Originally posted by: lashy

imagine if the sagars had changed the dialogues/scenes (not the story) a bit

imagine

KANNAUJ
sanyo is infuriated with prithvi on seeing him trying to kill her father...he sees her there and is shocked and realises who she is...
.. he is too shocked to say anything ... but as he is about to explain everything to her, she just screams at him amidst tears ....in pain ....and threatens him never to raise his hand on her father .. ever .. again.. and takes her father and leaves..

he is very quiet all the way to Ajmer... he reflects on what happened ....he realises how it is the first time she has shunned him and how as a result of that he suddenly feels a sense of emptiness ... he starts questioning himself whether he is actually beginning to fall in love with her.. and realises finally that he does..

AJMER
after reaching ajmer.. .. he doesnt understand how he will be able to face the loss of sanyogita after taking up the throne of delhi.. he discusses the issue with his friends...his friends try making him understand .. .. they advice him that she hates him only because she doesnt knows the truth.. once she does everything would turn out better.....

he agrees with his friends that he needs to tell her the entire truth ...and at the same time explain to her that he has to take delhi as he owes his nana this responsibility.. he also prays to God that he wants to propose to her that he loves her and wants to make her his.. his friends wish him best of luck and ask him to return in time for the coronation...

but just as he is about to leave ajmer on his horseback...(to meet her and explain everything) ... he gets the news that his nana is being attacked in delhi and rushes out to help him..

DELHI

then the whole fight sequence unfolds.. fearing for his nana's state/life he re-assures him once again that he will take over the throne...

however once he gets back to him room.. he is despodent thinking about how he he needs to meet sanyogita and explain everything to her.. however as the coronation is the next day there is no way for him to meet her..

KANNAUJ
sanyogita is stil in a state of shock as she thinks of what happened.. she remember all the times he saved her during the yatra (and after).. and the lovely moments.. she doesnt want prithvi or her father to get hurt and she decides that is only possible if she talks to him.. she decides to give prithvi one last opportunity to explain himself..... she doesnt tell her father and slips out the palace in disguise as a commoner.... telling her friends that she has to go this one final time... to talk to prithvi as this is too important....

DELHI
when she goes to delhi, she sees the elaborate decorations for the delhi coronation ceremony and then suddenly realises what is happening ... she goes to the palace with all other commoners ... and she sees prithvi being crowned... ...during the coronation ceremony she stares at prithvi feeling cheated ... prithvi senses something ...

she gets totally disillusioned about how prithvi first tried to kill her father and is now sitting on the throne which her nana had promised her father... she remembers the couple of occassions during the yatra when prithvi used her (to get the ring and the name of the spy) ... she just showers flowers on him along with the rest of the janta ... prithvi spots her amongst the rest of the crowd but is unable to call out to her because of so many other people in the court... they both stare at each other in shock...

she then leaves the palace.. prithvi indicates to pundir in her direction and pundir spots her.. he tries going behind her amidst the crowd and tries explaining how she has seen only half the truth and how she doesnt know what prithvi had to face... he is just about to talk about her father but she turns around angrily.. and threatens him how dare he talk about her father wrongly? she asks pundir to return to his friend and tell him that she doesnt want to see him or speak to him ever again...


now how does this sound..

its basically the same story but here the incidents are such that misunderstandings are caused because of the circumstances surrounding them.. not because of sanyogita or prithvi's character inconsistencies....
😛

shraddha, only if they read your story yaar..

agar aisa dikhaya hota naa, to main abhhi bhi utni hi addict hoti...

I just loved the way everything makes sense here. their charactors and also they do behave like royal ppl.. and it al so fits yaar..

specially her flashbacks abt the ring- really touched me. and made me sad.😭

warnaa, jo dikhaya gaya tha - I was like - who cares - both deserve it!

Originally posted by: lashy

actually everyone seems to be blaming sanyo but i kind of blame both of them for being a little bit silly...
sanyogita is always a little borderline silly (even at her most matured) so im not entirely puzzled by her behaviour..
prithvi is like the moorthy of maturity and being reasonable.. but he direspects his friends... and seems unconcerned by his nana's wounds.. and he doesnt even put in extra effort to try explaining stuff to her...
she is screaming her head off and he is standing there quietly...

when she comes to put tilak for him.. he didnt even try explaining anything.. she was just doing silly stuff coming all the way from delhi.. zor se kheenchke ek thappad deta.. tho saare akkal thikaane pe aa jaati 😛

u know what mayura... these people's characters shape up depending on how the makers shape them up for that episode or for that week and i think if the makers had made a few tiny tiny changes to their dialogues and expressions..

1) both of them would have seemed more reasonable/matured

AND

2) their situations would have seemed more understandable too 😊

well said i agree with u

Originally posted by: lashy

imagine if the sagars had changed the dialogues/scenes (not the story) a bit

imagine

KANNAUJ
sanyo is infuriated with prithvi on seeing him trying to kill her father...he sees her there and is shocked and realises who she is...
.. he is too shocked to say anything ... but as he is about to explain everything to her, she just screams at him amidst tears ....in pain ....and threatens him never to raise his hand on her father .. ever .. again.. and takes her father and leaves..

he is very quiet all the way to Ajmer... he reflects on what happened ....he realises how it is the first time she has shunned him and how as a result of that he suddenly feels a sense of emptiness ... he starts questioning himself whether he is actually beginning to fall in love with her.. and realises finally that he does..

AJMER
after reaching ajmer.. .. he doesnt understand how he will be able to face the loss of sanyogita after taking up the throne of delhi.. he discusses the issue with his friends...his friends try making him understand .. .. they advice him that she hates him only because she doesnt knows the truth.. once she does everything would turn out better.....

he agrees with his friends that he needs to tell her the entire truth ...and at the same time explain to her that he has to take delhi as he owes his nana this responsibility.. he also prays to God that he wants to propose to her that he loves her and wants to make her his.. his friends wish him best of luck and ask him to return in time for the coronation...

but just as he is about to leave ajmer on his horseback...(to meet her and explain everything) ... he gets the news that his nana is being attacked in delhi and rushes out to help him..

DELHI

then the whole fight sequence unfolds.. fearing for his nana's state/life he re-assures him once again that he will take over the throne...

however once he gets back to him room.. he is despodent thinking about how he he needs to meet sanyogita and explain everything to her.. however as the coronation is the next day there is no way for him to meet her..

KANNAUJ
sanyogita is stil in a state of shock as she thinks of what happened.. she remember all the times he saved her during the yatra (and after).. and the lovely moments.. she doesnt want prithvi or her father to get hurt and she decides that is only possible if she talks to him.. she decides to give prithvi one last opportunity to explain himself..... she doesnt tell her father and slips out the palace in disguise as a commoner.... telling her friends that she has to go this one final time... to talk to prithvi as this is too important....

DELHI
when she goes to delhi, she sees the elaborate decorations for the delhi coronation ceremony and then suddenly realises what is happening ... she goes to the palace with all other commoners ... and she sees prithvi being crowned... ...during the coronation ceremony she stares at prithvi feeling cheated ... prithvi senses something ...

she gets totally disillusioned about how prithvi first tried to kill her father and is now sitting on the throne which her nana had promised her father... she remembers the couple of occassions during the yatra when prithvi used her (to get the ring and the name of the spy) ... she just showers flowers on him along with the rest of the janta ... prithvi spots her amongst the rest of the crowd but is unable to call out to her because of so many other people in the court... they both stare at each other in shock...

she then leaves the palace.. prithvi indicates to pundir in her direction and pundir spots her.. he tries going behind her amidst the crowd and tries explaining how she has seen only half the truth and how she doesnt know what prithvi had to face... he is just about to talk about her father but she turns around angrily.. and threatens him how dare he talk about her father wrongly? she asks pundir to return to his friend and tell him that she doesnt want to see him or speak to him ever again...


now how does this sound..

its basically the same story but here the incidents are such that misunderstandings are caused because of the circumstances surrounding them.. not because of sanyogita or prithvi's character inconsistencies....
😛

All i can say is Wow, they way you have written it makes so much sense. I think you should be the script director of PRC. 😊 You have mentioned emotions of everyone. I like the part where sanyo goes in disguise to dehli to see if prithvi is really accepting dehli's throne and not believing her father. This is the sanyo we know.