UPDATED my dream world...PART 3- Pg 9 - Page 7

Oh finally, Cherry is done with her exams! 😉 ....We were so much waiting for the continuation of the dream -that infact closely happened in Sagar's presentation too! 👏

Again, its nicely written Cherry......but ye kya....sad phase of the story now 😭 ....I wonder if it'll excite the (not-) bacchas in the forum 😉

But, well done!....hope, the next happy phase is coming back very soon!

Originally posted by: Kashimani

Oh finally, Cherry is done with her exams! 😉 ....We were so much waiting for the continuation of the dream -that infact closely happened in Sagar's presentation too! 👏

Again, its nicely written Cherry......but ye kya....sad phase of the story now 😭 ....I wonder if it'll excite the (not-) bacchas in the forum 😉

But, well done!....hope, the next happy phase is coming back very soon!

i know but if i don't show the sad part then my story wouldn't at all look real!!!!!!!!!! so had to keep something like this! but i promise in my story, no one would be sad for a long time! btw u know what? even i was also really happy that sagar heard my voice😛

Yes of course Cherry!
.... reality of life - happy and sad!

hey guys, i thought to surprise you! well here comes another update from me!!!!!!!!!!! but please, don't expect too much as i don't think i can write anything better than my first dream!

RECAP: nandini has told prithvi THE TRUTH. he leaves her crying. for more details please visit Page 8

nandini tells prithvi that "ham kya kare prithvi? hamne bahot koshish ki pitaji ko samajhane par ham kuch bhi nahi kar paye........... kuch bhi nahi.............😭"

though prithvi's heart was yelling to console her and go to her, his body just couldn't move and he starts going away from her with huge pain in his heart..........😭, leaving her crying there.

as soon as prithvi starts going away from her, sanyogita feels as if she is dead........... she again starts saying with lot of difficulty, "Prithvi, ye ladai to ajmer aur kanuaj ke bichme thi na? isme hamari kya galati hai? maine to hamesha sirf tumhe hi puja hai............... sirf tumhari hi fikar ki hai! tum aise mujhe chodake kaise ja sakate haun? tumhi to kaha karte the na ki hamare bich koi nahi aa sakata? are hamari galatiya bhi tumhe kitni achchi lagati thi! to phir ab ye kyun?????????????????? hame aise chodake mat jaoon prithvi.......... mat jaoon....."

hearing her words, prithvi stops there for a while, but doesn't turn around. he is also very sad and has tears in his eyes..............

nandini sees her whole world just crashing in front of her eyes........ suddenly everything is so dark, sad, without any life......... it's difficult for sanyogita to maintain her balance looking at prithvi's rude behavior.................. (yes it's rude for her, as she thought her prithvi would never leave her, to kya hua ki sanyogita hi nandini hai........... she feels as if she has lost everything.............making her an empty soul)

she loses her balance and falls on the ground, but this is the first time prithvi doesn't come to hold her.............. he doesn't even turn around............. this instigates sanyogita further.......... she suddenly gets up with strong determination in her eyes.............. runs hurriedly towards plant cutter (the one with which gardener cuts the big plants and trees) hanging on the near by wall.

hearing the noice, prithvi turns his head around and is shocked to see what was happening over there. sanyo at the time was telling god, agar mujhe prithvi nahi mil sakata to phir is jeevan ka kya matalab? main prithvi ke bina nahi ji sakati. nahi ji sakati........................... bhagwan mere prithvi ko hamesha khush rakhana........... 😭

prithvi runs for his life! his love!!!!!!!!!!!! just when sanyo was about to cut her wrist with that cutter, prithvi stops her hand and says, "nandini tum pagal ho gai ho kya? aur tum ye kya karne jaan rahi thi abhi? aise koi apni jaan deta hai kya?????????? tumhe pata bhi hai ki agar tumhe agar kuch ho jata to main bhi jinda nahi reh sakata.......... tumhe meri kasam !!!!!!!!!! chodo ise........... chodo"

"nahi prithvi, mujhe mar jane do............ aise jeevan ka kya matalab jisme tum na haun!!!!!!!! mujhe jine ka koi haq nahi. maine sirf tumhe dukh hi diya hai! aur kuch bhi nahi!"

now, prithvi realizes what nandini is really for him and that she is life and no matter what, he simply can't live without her............... he says, "nandini, main bhi tumhare bina nahi ji sakata............. mujhe maaf kardo........... main tumpe aise hi gussa ho betha.......... tum sahi keh rahi thi, ye ladai kanauj aur ajmer ke bich me thi hamare bich me nahi........... kabhi nahi.......... ab chalo rona band karo............. hame aaj tak koi alag na to kar paya hai na kar payega.............. main tumhe kabhi chodake nahi jaooga. kabhi nahi.......... "

unable to believe what just happened, sanyogita cutely and softly asks HER prithvi ........ "sach prithvi? tum sach hi kah rahe haun na? ya ye sirf mera sapana hai? tum mujhe chodake to nahi jaooge na?"

"ha baba.......... tumne sahi suna. main tumhe chodake kabhi nahi jaooga.......... chalo ab to has do........ "😃

now, for the first time prithvi initiates, goes really close to her and hugs her tightly........... 🤗they are so close that even air would have to think twice before coming in between them☺️ their faces are just inches apart from each other. their hearts are racing really fast with mixed feelings of excitement, love and happiness........... they look in each others eyes, wondering if it's really happening or they are just day dreaming!!!!!!!!! 😍no one understands anything but just keep looking at each other with passion, love and care. he brings his lips near her face and softly kisses her on the forehead.......☺️ and this time sanyogita doesn't try to run away from him and just blushes and blushes!!!!!!!!!!☺️ she looks down and hides her face on his chest........ and isn't even able to look up.............. just keeps on blushing!!!!!! slowly tries to go away and instantly hides her face with both of her cute hands! ☺️ just keeps looking down with shyness!!!!!!!!!!! oh my goodness!!!!!!!!!! her cheeks are just blooming red and she feels as if she got another birth!!!!!!!!!!! she is on the seventh cloud now and her hearth is justwell, but our dear prithvi is little surprised with what he just did!!!!!!!!!!! he is like 😲

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ok guys, so now are you guys happy????????? see, even i couldn't control keeping them apart for a long time.............. so thought, why not give u guys a treat? Anu di, now bachchas of this forum wouldn't run away looking at the sad story, right? 😃 but i m wondering if mods are going to keep a senser board on my story!!!!!!!!! hey please don't axe my dreamworld! see i wouldn't go way too ahead, promise! would try to keep it in some limits atleast! u see, apparently eveything i mentioned is really happening in the show (ok............. ok............. leaving that forehead kiss scene.............) hey guys please comment and let me know if you like it or not............ sorry if it was boring for any of u! 😕

woaah i never knew we had such a talented writer amongst us!!! after reading the 2nd chapter..i felt so gloomy but u lifted my spirits up in the 3rd one!! the last paragraph left me breathless! prithvi kissing sanyogita on the forehead..i have to see it to believe it!! if it happens, i dunno if ill turn green with jealousy or red with happiness! but dudee ur a fabbbbb writer..cant w8 till the next update!!

Originally posted by: sonali13

woaah i never knew we had such a talented writer amongst us!!!

hey sonali, dear thanks a lot for such cute comments!!!!!!! u just made my day!!!!!!!!!!!🤗 sometimes i wonder if this is being said for me or someone else?????????? i don't know if i had writing talent??????? i felt that i always used to bore people with my long emails and stuff!!!!!! but yes, i always liked and wanted to write! 😃

after reading the 2nd chapter..i felt so gloomy but u lifted my spirits up in the 3rd one!! yup i knew that i would have left many gloomy and sad hearts and just couldn't afford that to leave someone unhappy, so even though i wasn't supposed to wrote another chapter to cheer u guys up after that all sadness!

😃the last paragraph left me breathless! prithvi kissing sanyogita on the forehead..i have to see it to believe it!! if it happens, i dunno if ill turn green with jealousy or red with happiness! but dudee ur a fabbbbb writer..cant w8 till the next update!!

well good question! but wait for a while, this is surely going to be in line in sagar's scripts soon.............. after all they are going to elope together and going to get married so not baseless......... now that question still remains, how would we really feel if that happens????????? may be lets just wait and watch! we would come to know soon!!!!!!!! 😃 and about the next update? dear i can't tell you anything right now......... but i m just wondering what can i possible write if i decide to continue....... right now just dont know what can come next! 😕 would have to give it a thought but would certainly try!!!!!!! 😃

awww it was being said for YOUUU hun 😃 hahaha yepp i really dunno how i wud feel if tht happened..got such mixed emotions! but lyk u said, we'll find out quite soon!! 😃 you shud make ur 4th update on the swayamvar!!! 😃

It was not boring at al......i liked all the parts, specially d last part......well, 😳 the hug was tooooo cute, but, think u shud hv kept them from kissing, the esence of childish and cute love was slightly overshadowedbut on d hole, it was a very cute peice, it had a lotta passion, but abt d forehead-kissing part, i guess its yr story
p.s. dont take me 4 rude

Originally posted by: sonali13

awww it was being said for YOUUU hun 😃 hard to believe but still i would try 😆hahaha yepp i really dunno how i wud feel if tht happened..got such mixed emotions! but lyk u said, we'll find out quite soon!! yup it would believe me!!!!!!!!!!!😃 you shud make ur 4th update on the swayamvar!!! 😃 well indeed awesome idea!!!!!!!!!! btw sonali, i have updated last para a little after u read the first version! 😉

Originally posted by: kritijj

It was not boring at al......i liked all the parts, specially d last part......thanks for the lovely comments 😳well, 😳 the hug was tooooo cute, but, think u shud hv kept them from kissing, the esence of childish and cute love was slightly overshadowed but on d hole, it was a very cute peice, it had a lotta passion, but abt d forehead-kissing part, i guess its yr story

hmmmm now u keep in dilemma............ well, ur point is truly valid, but main bhi kya karu, mujhe ye dono bachche jaise koi angle se lagate hi nahi................. 😛 see, now i have some logic to support my theory!

in real story of prithvi-sanyo, they got married at the really small teenager age.......... so i didn't think it was too far to keep just a cute little scene like that one!!!!!!! i think that is in the limits of children........ and i feel it's still innocent........ they are not even intending and trying to do anything further....... it was just innocent portrayal of love in my belief............. but now u have kept my thinking caps on!!!!!!!!!!! ok now, should i take a poll on this???????????
p.s. dont take me 4 rude not at all, any writer should never feel offended with fair and right criticism.......... and how can i especially when i do certainly think your points are not purely illogical!!!!!!!!!!!!

guys please tell me should i change that last scene in my story? i feel like i should seriously start a poll on this😆

i think the kiss on the forehead is fine! in fact i think it hightlights their innocent love becuz we normally kiss someone on the forehead if we truly care abt them! lyk parents kissing their children on the forehead..and prithvi even kissed pratha on the forehead! so i think its fine!