UPDATED my dream world...PART 3- Pg 9 - Page 10

Originally posted by: *Jr.Nancy_drew*

aww..........come on dears........hey Lajwanti what is wrong with you DIDI....why do you like to be called by a fruit name as gulaboooooooooooo says 😛 becoz its a very sweet name😳

now when are you updating.....if I don't find it by tomorrow I'll invade your inbox 😈 C'mon dear.......atleast a paragraph will do 😳 plzzzzzzz update 😳 have patience abhy my bachcha....it takes time to think😳

first of all let me take opportunity to apologize to all my friends and my readers. i know i have been away for many days from I-F. i would try to reply to all messages and come up with new chapter soon. sorry again for making you all wait for long time.

Originally posted by: inaayat

hey dear fantastic fabolous its reaally very romantic can i know your age please please dont lie like rajat i also write romantic scenes like you sometimes 👏

hey dear thanks a lot for your comments. i really liked ur story too. i m really surprised and impressed that i could inspire someone to write a story! this is the biggest flattering i have ever got. now u wanna my age? well i would PM you about it.

Originally posted by: Kai_Hiwatari

oh cheery..now when we will get u see ur 4th installment of ur dream....my suggestion is swayamvar part....please dear....i just love the way u explain each & everything in detail 😳

Cheers
❤️Kai❤️

well ofcourse kai , i love your suggestion. initially i thought that i would write swamyar, but now i m having two minds. may be would add another ground work chapter towards swamyar first 😉 and 4th installment is coming soon ifi m back again!

Originally posted by: akshita321

B kuch nahi hoga..... ❤️ in eternal ,he loves her but

he loves his father more aur use chod kar Princess

AKSHITA ke pass aa jaye ga 😍


4 Sanyo 💔

4 me ❤️


Dont youll think Its right!!!!!!!!!

well not a bad idea, par meri story me to hamesha sanyo thi aur wahi rahegi............ 😛

Originally posted by: shruti_poorva

TRULY AMAZING.......YOU MADE ME WEAK IN MT KNEES............I WISH SHOW MEIN BHI AISA HO!!GREAT WORK 👏

KEEP IT UP!!

dear hoga hoga!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! jaroor hoga!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ab delhi dur nahi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😛

Originally posted by: dramaholic

hey..cherryprincess

you are really creativ 👏 superb! 😉

thank you dear for ur cute comments!!!!!!!!!!! u guys are making me so happy!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😃

Originally posted by: Heerasha

loved it... it was mind blowing....i am glad you are writing something totally different to track being shown in the serial.please continue, waiting for your next update.

well thanks for your lovely comments! btw i m not trying to write something different from the show, it's just a sneak peak to Prithvi and Sanyo's Future love story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i bet these things are gonna happen in the show pretty soon!!!!!!!!!!!! 😛

Originally posted by: Kashimani

Cherry dear, great going! 😉
....See, all bacchas are just having great time....it's your brilliant writting and immediate action after the sad update! thank you di for your lovely comment! u r right, bachhas are happy seeing this action of mine.......... may be many many of them would have started hating me, if i have left story at chapter 2 for a long time! 😆 ham to dar gaye the bhai, isi liye chapter 3 likhana pada! 😆
....this 'Anu di - baccha' bhi wait karegi for your next update! 😛 what a nice name!!!!!!!!!! Anu di- baccha. i like it!!!!!!!!!!!! 😛I am sure, all our sweet mod ji(s) will not close this topic & they are enjoying too! 😳 u r right, may be they are just afraid to comment here!!!!!!!!!!!! 😆
...Kai, keep up with your great comments....it's adding perfect flavors into Cherry's cooking! 😉 sach kahu to jab tak i don't see kai's detailed comments, i never feel like i have written something good......... 😃

Originally posted by: Kai_Hiwatari

Originally posted by: *Jr.Nancy_drew*

ok my dear sweet bachcha!!!!!!!!!! what is wrong with lajwanti is that some of my relatives used to tease me with that name and i always used to get angry hearing that name!!!!!!!!!! 😆 and well i can't tell you why i like Cherry! i don't know! but jab ek flower logo ka naam ho sakata hai to fruit kyun nahi? 😃 i m really really sorry for taking such a long time....................... please forgive me dear!!!!!!!!!!!!! maaf bhi kardo yar!!!!!!!! i promise u won't have to wait so long anymore!!!!!!!!😃

kai, i m not as good as u for commenting in the story.................... but now, as i don't see ur reply, so let me try to take up your role for a change!!!!!!!!!! 😛

Originally posted by: inaayat

hey cherry here im inayat im very impressed reading your romantic scenes and has created one by myself i know im young to you in this talent but still tried my best sorry if you and my forum friends find any mistakes in it heres my story frankly speaking u surprise me!!!!!!!!!!!! i m impresssed that i could inspire you! good that someone is trying to learn for me! but i m not sure if i m a good teacher or m worth to be the one! see teachers don't make students to wait so long!!!!!!!!!!!! m in not bad??????? 😃
one time sanyo says to prithvi thather father use to say jheel ke us paar ek kuaan hai usmein ek bahut hi anmol moti chhupa hai jisse pehenne wale ki kismat chamak jaati hai aur usse pehenne se har koi jagmaga uthta hai woh anmol moti andhere mein bhi roshni deta hai par uski raksha ke liye wahaan rakshas pehra de rahein hain aur kooen ke andar bahut saanp bhi hai kaash hum us moti ko dekh pate aisa bolna thha ki bas prithvi us moti ki talaash mein nikal padhta hai woh unn rakshasoun ka mukabla karta hai un sab ko maar kar saare saanpoun se bach kar sanyo ke liye moti laata hai wow!!!!!!!!!!!! i was like m i reading pari katha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😃 great going!!!!!!!!!!!! pretty unique style i must say!!!!!!!!!!

and how he presents the moti here is the scene
prithvi says sanyo maine tumhaare liye kuchh tohfa laya hoon sanyo jumps in excitement hmare liye tohfa kahaan prithvi bataao na jaldi prithvi says are baba sabar rakho tohfa to main tumhein zaroor doonga par usse pehle tumhein mere paas aana hoga excitement building up! i m also curious what is Prithvi upto???????? 😉
sanyo says are itni si baat lo aagaye hum tumhaare paas sanyo to buddhu ki buddhu hi rahi aakhir!!!!!!!!!!! 😉

prithvi- aur paas
sanyo -achha theek hai
prithvi -aur paas
sanyo-moves near
prithvi - aur paass
sanyo- moves more near
prithvi-in a serious mood aur paas wait a sec!!!!!!!!!!!!!! where have i seen such cute scene???????? yup!!!!!!!!! that SRK-Madhuri-Karishma movie! 😃 what is the name????????? 😕
sanyo-looses her senses and looses balance and falls on prithvi halfly shying in a very serious way
prithvi- holding her
and make her right
prithvi-aur paas
sanyo-comes very near to him feels very shy and closes her eyes and then says kya hum aur paas aajaayein prithvi sanyo! u r really really cute!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😛 seeems even she is liking it!!!!!!!!! how innocent!!!!!!!!!!!! 😛

prithvi-laughing with his mouth tight are nandini main to sirf mazaakh kar raha tha tumne to dil par hi le liya prithvi u could have very well enjoyed it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😆abhi mazaakh karne ka time tha kya??????????

sanyo-mazaakh mazaakh kiya tumne hamaare saath agar thodi der hoti to hamaari jaan hi nikal jaati aur paas haan aur paas chhodeinge nahin hum tumhein ok so finally sanyo understands what was going on!!!!!!!!!!! 😆 she starts beating prithvi telling him bigde rahees bigde rahees
now prithvi becomes serious he holds her hand strongly
sanyo-mera haath chhodo prithvi what a cute scene! very well can imagine sanyo trying to cutely get her hand out from his! amazing!
prithvi- nahin
sanyo-mera haath chhoda prithvi -
prithvi- nahin agar chhodoonga to tum mujhe phirse marogi
sanyo- prithvi mujhe dar lagrahaa hai mera haath chhodo
prithvi- he realises that she is shy leaves her hand
sanyo- she starts again mera haath aise pakadliya tumne jaan leloongi main tumhaari bigderahees hum
prithvi-puts his hands on her mouth for stopping her and says chup chup ho jaao nandini
sanyo-stops again grows serious prithvi- ab apni annkhein band karo aur jab tak main na kahoon kholna mat he puts his hands on her eyes turns her and brings out slowly the anmol moti and put it on her neck with his own hands now says open your eyes when sanyo opens her eyes she is overwhelmed with happiness her eyes sparkles seeing the anmol moti she jumps and hugs prithvi in excitement happy end to exciting story!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😛prithvi way to go!!!!!!!!!! good going!!!!!!!!!!!!! and then she gain become serious down her eyes and tears comes to her eyes she slowly moves away prithvi is oh what happened to her he worries and goes near her
prithvi- kya huaa nandini
sanyo -prithvi hamaare to khushi ke maare aansoun hi nikal gaye tumne hamaare liye apni jaan par khel kar yeh anmol moti layeho na tumna hamaare liye itna kyoon kiya
prithvi -kyunki main tumse pyaar karta hoon
sanyo -hum bhi tumhaare liye apni jaan dedeinge sanyo u r really cute!!!!!!!!!!! 😃prithvi -slowly wipes her tears in an affectionate way and says apne aansoon pocho he then smiles and pinch her nose and says waise tumhaari naak ghusse mein aur rote waqt laal ho jaati hai
sanyo-kya tum kabhi nahin sudhroge bigde rahees
prithvi -aur tumbhi jangli billi ye dono hi nahi sudhar sakate kabhi bhi!!!!!!!!!!! 😆

Originally posted by: CherryPrincess

kai, i m not as good as u for commenting in the story.................... but now, as i don't see ur reply, so let me try to take up your role for a change!!!!!!!!!! 😛

when cherry is asking kai for her comments....here we go 😉

Originally posted by: inaayat

hey cherry here im inayat im very impressed reading your romantic scenes and has created one by myself i know im young to you in this talent but still tried my best sorry if you and my forum friends find any mistakes in it heres my story Kool dear....its gud to know ppl r getting inspired from cherry's sweet & romantic dreams😆....well kai is best in commenting rather than imagination....so i'll do wht i am best in😉
one time sanyo says to prithvi thather father use to say jheel ke us paar ek kuaan hai usmein ek bahut hi anmol moti chhupa hai jisse pehenne wale ki kismat chamak jaati hai aur usse pehenne se har koi jagmaga uthta hai woh anmol moti andhere mein bhi roshni deta hai par uski raksha ke liye wahaan rakshas pehra de rahein hain aur kooen ke andar bahut saanp bhi hai kaash hum us moti ko dekh pate aisa bolna thha ki bas prithvi us moti ki talaash mein nikal padhta hai woh unn rakshasoun ka mukabla karta hai un sab ko maar kar saare saanpoun se bach kar sanyo ke liye moti laata hai and how he presents the moti here is the scene ...wow sanyo is so smart....indirectly asking Prithvi to bring her that moti😆....kool dear👍🏼....ur present was just splendid👏👏
prithvi says sanyo maine tumhaare liye kuchh tohfa laya hoon oooo lalaa...gift...😳 sanyo jumps in excitement hmare liye tohfa kahaan prithvi bataao na jaldi ..so impatient like kai😆prithvi says are baba sabar rakho tohfa to main tumhein zaroor doonga par usse pehle tumhein mere paas aana hoga ....hailaa..prithvi so romantic....sanyo ka asar i guess😆
sanyo says are itni si baat lo aagaye hum tumhaare paas ..yo that's the spirit sanyo😉
prithvi- aur paas ..ummmm Prithvi is up to something😳
sanyo -achha theek hai ...great going dear😛
prithvi -aur paas ...man 😳
sanyo-moves near
prithvi - aur paass on my goss... this is the best scene ever...so close😳
sanyo- moves more near ...i wish i was there to see this
prithvi-in a serious mood aur paas ..oh my god....Prithvi...being a naughty boy😆
sanyo-looses her senses and looses balance and falls on prithvi halfly shying in a very serious way ..i am not suprised.... any1 will lose their balance when prc is like aur paas😳
prithvi- holding her ..ouch my heart ❤️
and make her right
prithvi-aur paas ....oh prithvi....my heart can't take it any more dear😳
sanyo-comes very near to him feels very shy and closes her eyes and then says kya hum aur paas aajaayein prithvi aawww so sweet sanyo👏
prithvi-laughing with his mouth tight are nandini main to sirf mazaakh kar raha tha tumne to dil par hi le liya ..hey now don't u spoil all the fun prithvi
sanyo-mazaakh mazaakh kiya tumne hamaare saath agar thodi der hoti to hamaari jaan hi nikal jaati ..yo kai heart too..beating at the speed of light 😆aur paas haan aur paas chhodeinge nahin hum tumhein she starts beating prithvi telling him bigde rahees bigde rahees ..give him 2 from my side too sanyo😊
now prithvi becomes serious he holds her hand strongly ...uuummm..now wht is lover boy up to🤔
sanyo-mera haath chhodo prithvi ....hey cumon yaar sanyo...let him hold yaar😉
prithvi- nahin gud boy
sanyo-mera haath chhoda prithvi - here we go again..sanyo..now u r spoilling the fun
prithvi- nahin agar chhodoonga to tum mujhe phirse marogi ....wht..oh Prc u r so funny...i was thinking some thing else😆
sanyo- prithvi mujhe dar lagrahaa hai mera haath chhodo sanyo 😲..r u out of ur senses..dar that too with PRC😳
prithvi- he realises that she is shy leaves her hand ..hey prc...this was not right..
sanyo- she starts again mera haath aise pakadliya tumne jaan leloongi main tumhaari bigderahees hum ...hey sanyo tell u r jaan to get a life...its bugging kai now
prithvi-puts his hands on her mouth for stopping her and says chup chup ho jaao nandini ..yo gud thinking...she talks way tooo much😆
sanyo-stops again grows serious prithvi- ab apni annkhein band karo aur jab tak main na kahoon kholna mat he puts his hands on her eyes turns her and brings out slowly the anmol moti and put it on her neck with his own hands now says open your eyes when sanyo opens her eyes she is overwhelmed with happiness her eyes sparkles seeing the anmol moti she jumps and hugs prithvi in excitement ....aaawwww wht scene...hug tightly dear...😳
and then she gain become serious down her eyes and tears comes to her eyes she slowly moves away prithvi is oh what happened to her he worries and goes near her ..oh my baby..got emotional🤗
prithvi- kya huaa nandini ...nandini.....well its better than sanyo😉
sanyo -prithvi hamaare to khushi ke maare aansoun hi nikal gaye tumne hamaare liye apni jaan par khel kar yeh anmol moti layeho na tumna hamaare liye itna kyoon kiya ..hey don't u start asking a lame question sanyo!!!
prithvi -kyunki main tumse pyaar karta hoon oh..now i get...it...smart very smart sanyo👏
sanyo -hum bhi tumhaare liye apni jaan dedeinge..yeah...well we all know that very well dear😳
prithvi -slowly wipes her tears in an affectionate way and says apne aansoon pocho he then smiles and pinch her nose and says waise tumhaari naak ghusse mein aur rote waqt laal ho jaati hai ....oh prithvi...u r sooo sweet 😳
sanyo-kya tum kabhi nahin sudhroge bigde rahees and sudhrana ki zaroorath nahi hai😳
prithvi -aur tumbhi jangli billi ...now prithvi must be blushing😉

kool dear.....i just loved ur way of narration.....u had suspense...romance...humor....all the elements to make a great romantic sequence👏👏👏....bravo dear....u & cherry will rock this section for sure👍🏼

Cheers

❤️Kai❤️