UPDATED my dream world...PART 3- Pg 9 - Page 8

i just checked out the updated version..u know i cud literally picture the whole scene in my head..u wrote it so splendidly!! 😃

hhhhmmmmmmmm........Lajwanti 😍 you really make me speechless with your warm , heart touching storyline.....it is as if I'm watching the serial itself...you rock DIDI 👏 👏 👏

I have just 1 word to say abt it n thats AWESOME 👏

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww it is superb brilliant excellant marvellous magical fantastic fabulous amazing heart touching emotional sad but romantic extremely romantic really hats off to your breath taking job it moved me totally yaar i think you are great romantic writer are yaar mere ek sawaal ka jawaab zaroor dena kya aisa reall life mein hota hai because i never saw any such thing happening around me agar sach mein hota hai to yeh sab kesaath ho aisa har ladki k 😊 e saath ho its really best

i thinku shud be the new script ritter thn prc will rock the nation!!!! the sry was awesome 2 gud 👏

that was soo good! i just want to re-re-read it lol its so cute!
i didnt know you was such a talented writer man

lakshita is right - you should be the new script writer ...

well done lajja!!

Originally posted by: sonali13

i think the kiss on the forehead is fine! in fact i think it hightlights their innocent love becuz we normally kiss someone on the forehead if we truly care abt them! lyk parents kissing their children on the forehead..and prithvi even kissed pratha on the forehead! so i think its fine!thanks for supporting me sonali! 😃

Originally posted by: *Jr.Nancy_drew*

hhhhmmmmmmmm........Lajwanti 😍 you really make me speechless with your warm , heart touching storyline.....it is as if I'm watching the serial itself...you rock DIDI 👏 👏 👏

wait a minute Abhi!!!!!!!!! u r dead now! where is my danda???????? calling me lajwanti and didi and that too both at same time!!!!!!!!!! wait, wait!!!!!!!!!!!😡 ye achchi strategy hai.......... ma mare bhi aur phir malam bhi wahi lagaye.............. wah wah.......... man gaye aapko 😆

Originally posted by: aditivats

I have just 1 word to say abt it n thats AWESOME 👏

sometimes just one simple word says everything!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thanks for liking it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😃

Originally posted by: farahnaazz

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww it is superb brilliant excellant marvellous magical fantastic fabulous amazing heart touching emotional sad but romantic extremely romantic.where do u get all these words? good vocabulary!!!!!!!!!!!!! most surprising thing is that u r using them for my story! ☺️ really hats off to your breath taking job it moved me totally yaar i think you are great romantic writer.my god all these words for me!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😲 wow!!!!!!!!!!!! thank you my sweet heart☺️ are yaar mere ek sawaal ka jawaab zaroor dena kya aisa reall life mein hota hai because i never saw any such thing happening around me agar sach mein hota hai to yeh sab kesaath ho aisa har ladki k 😊 e saath ho its really best

well u have biggest example of prithvi-sanyo, romeo-juliet, veer-zaara in fron of u........... of course ye sab real life me hota hai! i have seen my best friend's love story........... such a cute one!!!!!!! ☺️i guess u r too small to see all that!!!!! but never mind, u would soon too!!!!!!!!! now, love is a precious thing, if it happens to one they are luckiest. but not necessary to everyone! 😕

Originally posted by: divingdolphin13

i thinku shud be the new script ritter thn prc will rock the nation!!!! the sry was awesome 2 gud 👏

oh my god!!!!!!!!!!!!! thanks for such a cute complement!!!!!!!!!!!! but if i be the script writer, then there would be no war scenes, people would then run away without them! 😕

Originally posted by: Jattinder!

that was soo good! i just want to re-re-read it lol its so cute! oh!!!!!!!!!!!!sweety join my dreamland!!!!! 😍
i didnt know you was such a talented writer man even i didnt know that i could write, before i entered my dreamworld and saw such great response from my dear friends!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😆

lakshita is right - you should be the new script writer ... awww what an complent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thanks a lot dear!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳well done lajja!!

well, cum 2 think of it..........its not SO WRONG! it is acceptable!, ut i prefer d sugar-coated. love-filled comments of prithvi abt sanyo..., to sum kiss!!! 😃

Kai in pink

Originally posted by: CherryPrincess

with tremor in eyes and shaking voice, sanyo finally gets the courage to tell her prithvi, "Prithvi ham hi hai kanuaj ki Ramkumari Sanyogita" now i know y ppl say truth is always bitter😭..my heart beats r slowing😭

Hearing this prithvi is just so shocked that he is unable to move from his place for a while, i.e. gradually killing sanyogita! He is just unable to speak anything........... but he doesn't realize how difficult it was for her to tell him the truth! he doesn't know what is happening to her! in her tremor and biggest fear, she finally searches hard for courage and starts speaking...........Kai too in the same..boat..plain blank😳

"Prithvi ham ye achchi tarah se janate hai ki tumhe kannauj aur maharaj jayachand se nafarat hai! Ham janate hai ki tumhe lagata hai ki pitaji ki wagah se aaj tum apne pita ko kho chuke haun!!!!!!!!!!!!! Aur ye bhi ham janate hai ki ye sach tumhare liye kitna kadava hai!!!!!!!!!!!! yeap worse than grape fruit🤢 Aur isi liye to ham aaj tak ye sach tumhe batane ki himmat nahi kar paye!!!!!!!!!! kuch bhi nahi keh paye!" she tries really hard to maintain balance when her feets are giving her hard time!bravo sanyo..u finally spoke the truth....but wht now❓

Poor prithvi he gets the biggest shock of his life............. he is not able to understand what to do? it was his biggest test now.......... he can't forget his father....... his ideal hero!!!!!!!!!!! ............ aur wo use kaise itne aasani se apana le jiski wagah se aaj uske papa uske sath nahi hai!!!!!!!!!!!! kaise????????? aakhir kaise?????????? ..i understand Prithvi...but that's the truth u will have to face it😳

Looking at prithvi' expressions and his sad face, sanyo tries hard to get words out of her mouth (which is determined to leave her with her sorrow............. ), but she is sure that she will not allow anything to come between her and her prithvi!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and slowly starts speaking in terrified voice! "Hame maaf kardo prithvi!!!!!!!!!!! Hame maaf kardo!!!!!!!!!!!!! hamne to kabhi tumhara bura nahi chaha!!!!!!!!! ham ye tumhe kaphi pahele batana chahate par kabhi bhi himmat hi nahi juta paye!!!!!!!!! ham kya kare??????? sanyo my child have faith😭 Aur hamane to kitni sach bahot koshish ki pitaji ko samajhane ki.......... par ham kuch nahi kar paye!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😭"oh dear it wasn't ur fault😊 she now starts crying like she has the competition with rain!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😭..oh cherry...u made me laugh😆😆

on the other hand, when prithvi is unable to digest what he just heard, it's even more difficult for him to stand the tears of his love! his nandini!!!!!!!!!!!! his heart and brain are now on the big battle!!!!!!!!!!!! wo nahi janata ki wo kare to kya kare????????? kis ki bat sune!!!!!!!!!! apne dil ki ya dimag ki? ....*ahem* it better to listen to both & then make a wise decision..well i say go with dimag....its much safer😳

he now makes a turn and gives the most confusing look at sanyo..i wish i cud see this..confused look😛. his heart is yelling to go to his love and stop her tears even mine...go & guy her lover boy, but his body isn't really willing to support his heart! and he gives one last look at nandini (thinking that main kaise uske paas aakhir ja sakata hun jiski wagah se aaj me apne pitaji ko kho chukah hun. kaise uske paas chala jaoon? kaise? nahi main ye nahi kar sakatahey u broke my heart now....wht's sanyo's mistake in this dude😡. sanyogita ab mere liye koi nahi hai. koi nahi!!!!!! u better watch ..wht u speak😡) and starts going away from her...........NAHIN....💔 🥺with the biggest pain in his eyes and on face................he feels like there is huge weight on his heart now!!!!!!! i am going to collapse i can't just can't take it any more...cherry..where r u dear...i am fainting....😭😭😭

sorry guys i had to stop here to think about the better next chapter! i know after my cute dream, this episode would have hurt many of u! this is sad, but this is life! not that fair, right???????????? and moreover even i don't know if i can write anything better than my cutest dream! 😭 sorry, if i bored any of u guys! i promise dukh ke bad sukh jaldi hi wapis aayega! jaldi hi!!!!!!!!!!! even i can't see my prithvi crying!!!!!!!!!!! 😭..hey cherry chill dear....this was something we all expected ....but u put it so beautifully...so much of emotion & depth😛..great going my dream girl cherry😉..3 cheers for CHERRY👏👏👏

Cheers Cherry

❤️Kai❤️

woww gulaboooooooooooo are you assistant script writer kya? 😛 LAJWANTI when are you updating next dear?(this time no didi) 😉