Destiny Made Them Together!Part 9: Pg 24

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: sweety4jaan
hey guyz really sorry! i typed the update but pressed delete button by mistake and all the update got deleted! plz wait until I type it again!

It's ok sweety.No problem.Take ur time😊.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: veersherafan1

It's ok sweety.No problem.Take ur time😊.

thanks di! its nearly done! about 20 mins more!

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

thank u guyz for ur comments about continuing this ff! really appreciated!

here is the first part! hope u like it!

Part 1

Malhotra Mansion:

(Mr. Malhotra: Surya Prakash (SP)

(Mrs. Malhotra: Kamini)

its the morning time! breakfast is ready! Everyone arrives except Prithvi! he is in his room!

everyone takes their resepective seat on dining table)

K: ye prithvi kaha rahe gaya? (gives him shout) Prithvi hurry up will u? 😡

Pr: aaya maa, lekin meri tie nahin mil rahi hai! aapne dekhi?😭

K: nahin! tu ruk, mein find karke deti hoon! 🥱

she is about leave but Safia stops her way!

S: maa aap nasta kijiya! mein find karti hoon! 😊

K: theek hai beta!

Safia start walking 2wards Prithvi's room upstairs! as she enters she was shocked to see his room sooooooooooo messy and dirty!

Safia: prithvi ye sab kya hai? 😡 aapne room ki halat to dekho?

Pr: bhabhi woh sab chodiye, pehle app meri tir find kijiye!

Safia opens his cupboard, which is full of mess and dirtiness! she opens a drawer and takes the tir out!

S: (handing over the tie) yahi to thi prithvi! 😛

Pr: thanks bhabhi! aap kitni acchi hai na? 😊

S: kya baat hai? aaj toh bread ki jagah mujhe hi butter lagaya ja raha hai? 😆 😆 kya baat hai!

Pr: kya bhabhi aap bhi? kya mein aapki kabhi tareef nahin karta? 😳 😳

S: meine aisa kab kahan, lekin woh tum tabhi karte ho jab tumhe kuch chahiye? 😆

Pr: bhabhi aisi koi baat nahin hai! sacchi mein.

S: theek hai baba! ab chalo naste ke liye sab tumhara wait kar rahe hai! 😊

Prithvi and Safia leaves for breakfast!

in Maya's room:

M:(schreaming at Arya) Arya, ye milk finish karo varna mein tumhe bahut marungi? 😡

Ar: no mom! i dnt like milk! i am nt guna have it!

Arjun enters the room and see tom and jerry race again in his bedroom! 😆

A: kya howa maya? kyun arya ke picche bhag rahi hoon?

M: ye dekhona ise kitna shararati ho gaya hai? milk nahin pi raha hai?

A: (turnnig to Arya) kyun beta? mamma ko aise trouble nahin karte na? come on milk pilo!

Ar: no dad, mujhe ye accha nahin lagta!

A: theek hai, lekin agar tum milk nahin drink karonge to, tum Prithvi Chachu ki tarah strong nahin ban paounge! 😆

Ar: sacchi?

A: mucchi

Ar: theek hai! mein ye milk finish kar deta hoon!

Arya finished his milk while Arjun and Maya goes downstairs for their breakfast!

SP: are beta tum dono late kaise oh gaye?

M: woh papa, Arya mil;k nahin pi raha tha, toh bas usine der ho gayi!

SP: theek hai! now finish ur breakfast!

they all having breakfast!

Sharma Mansion:

(Mr. Sharma: Jai pratap aka JP)

(Mrs. Sharma: Naina)

Everyone on dining table having their breakfast!

N: Sanjam ka ltum sab log office se chutti le lena! 😃

S: kyun maa? kuch hai kya? 😲

N: tumhe yaad nahin?

S: kya maa?

JP:kal rakshabandhan hai!

Saniya hear this and says: yep, kal mujhe phir se gifts milenge! wow! i cnt wait!

everyone laughs at this!

N: maine kal subah pooja rakhi hai!

Sanyo: wow maa! maza aayega!

C: kaise maza? hamari jeb dheeli hone wali hai aur kya? (saying this he laughs along with everyone)

Ka: saal mein ek hi baar toh aata hai ye rakhi ka tyohaar! sanyo and saniya, is baar kuch jyada expensive gifts mangana apne bhai se?

Sanyo and saniya: yes! thanks bhabhi!

sanyo finishes her breakfast and leaves for her work!

Saniya: (stopping her from the back) di wait karona! mujhe plz college drop kardo!

Sanyo: theek hai but hurry up!

Saniya: just 5 mins!

Sanyo: ok!

Everyone else leaves for their work!

hope u like it! plz do reply!

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

Wow, wonderful update👏.It's brilliant dear👏.Very well family bonding😊.Very well bonding between safia and prithvi😃😊😳.I loved the part between arjun,maya and their son😆.It's very funny and too cute😆😃😊.Sanyo aur uska bhai ke conversation is too good😃😊😳, sanyo ka bhabi ka uska sath dena😳.

I loved full update.Post next part soon dear😳.

Edited by veersherafan1 - 16 years ago

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#35

Originally posted by: veersherafan1

Wow, wonderful update👏.It's brilliant dear👏.Very well family bonding😊.Very well bonding between safia and prithvi😃😊😳.I loved the part between arjun,maya and their son😆.It's very funny and too cute😆😃😊.Sanyo aur uska bhai ke conversation is too good😃😊😳, sanyo ka bhabi ka uska sath dena😳.

I loved full update.Post next part soon dear😳.

thanks a ton di for liking the update! i was really nervous before posting it!

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 16 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: sweety4jaan
thanks a ton di for liking the update! i was really nervous before posting it!

Welcome sweety.Why r u feeling nervous?It's really very very good dear.Infact, mujhe tumse bahut kuch learn karne ko mil raha hain tumse.

Edited by veersherafan1 - 16 years ago

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#37

Originally posted by: veersherafan1

Welcome sweety.Why r u feeling nervous?It's really very very good dear.Infact, mujhe tumse bahut kuch learn karne ko mil raha hain tumse.

thats really sweet of u!

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 16 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: sweety4jaan
thats really sweet of u!

Thank u dear😳.

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maria

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Posted: 16 years ago

#39

hi zoah this is great 😉 prithvi and his bhabhi bonding , theirlove with each other is just simply great 👏post the next part soon of thsi and otheriff of urs plz 4 me😊plz😊i am waiting honi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: maria_awan
hi zoah this is great 😉 prithvi and his bhabhi bonding , theirlove with each other is just simply great 👏post the next part soon of thsi and otheriff of urs plz 4 me😊plz😊i am waiting honi

thanks for likin it maria! i have already update my other ff today! plz do read and comment!

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