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Posted: 15 years ago
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welcome di!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: sweety4jaan

Hi PRCians! I am over whelmed after getting really good appreciation for my first ff Kahani meri tumhari!

Here is my second try to write ff! hope u all give the same love and appreciation!
Index:
inro: pg 1
character picx: pg 2
here is the outline of the ff:
well from the title, u can guess its about marriage! two unknown souls gets married, but not with their own consent! its decided by their parents! in informal way its an arrange marriage! will the two be able to carry this relationship? will they be able to fulfill their duties and responsibilities towards each other?
here are the character sketches:
The Malhotras:
Prithvi Malhotra: son of Mr and Mrs. Malhotra
Arjun Malhotra: Elder brother of prithvi
Maya Malhotra: wife of Arjun and Prithvi's best buddy in the house
Pratha Malhotra: the only daughter of Mr and Mrs. Malhotra
Pundir Malhotra: eldest son of Malhotra family
Safia Malhotra: wife of pundir!
Arya Malhotra: the jaan of the family! he is Arjun and maya's son!
(Arjun+Maya= Arya)
The Sharmas:
Sanyogita Sharma: daughter of Mr and Mrs. Sharma
Saniya Sharma: sanyogita's younger sister cum friend
Chand Sharma: Sanyogita's elder brother
Kaajal Sharma: wife of chand, and a good friend of sanyo
Sanjam Sharma: the eldest son Mr. and Mrs. Sharma
Vaishali Sharma: wife of Sanjam and friend of sanyo
Veer Singh: prithvi's cousin and a good friend!
the extra info:
prithvi and veer are good friends as well as cousins!
veer lost his parents when he was 10 years old and from then he lives with prithvi!
Kaajal and Maya are best friends!
Pundir married to Safia two years ago! Safia is muslim but married in a hindu family! Prithvi's parents has no objection over it and are very nice to her! even Safia, tries her level best to follow the culture of Pundir's family! she is very good daughter in law!
guyz plz tell me if i should continue or not! plz do comment/critisize
PM lists:
Rakhi di
Megha di
Rumi
Shona di
Maria
Kalyani
Niyaati
Kuldeep
Simran
Sandy
love Zoah

loved ur intro dear👏👏very nice
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweety4jaan

thank u guyz for ur comments about continuing this ff! really appreciated!

here is the first part! hope u like it!
Part 1
Malhotra Mansion:
(Mr. Malhotra: Surya Prakash (SP)
(Mrs. Malhotra: Kamini)
its the morning time! breakfast is ready! Everyone arrives except Prithvi! he is in his room!
everyone takes their resepective seat on dining table)
K: ye prithvi kaha rahe gaya? (gives him shout) Prithvi hurry up will u? 😡
Pr: aaya maa, lekin meri tie nahin mil rahi hai! aapne dekhi?😭
K: nahin! tu ruk, mein find karke deti hoon! 🥱
she is about leave but Safia stops her way!
S: maa aap nasta kijiya! mein find karti hoon! 😊
K: theek hai beta!
Safia start walking 2wards Prithvi's room upstairs! as she enters she was shocked to see his room sooooooooooo messy and dirty!
Safia: prithvi ye sab kya hai? 😡 aapne room ki halat to dekho?
Pr: bhabhi woh sab chodiye, pehle app meri tir find kijiye!
Safia opens his cupboard, which is full of mess and dirtiness! she opens a drawer and takes the tir out!
S: (handing over the tie) yahi to thi prithvi! 😛
Pr: thanks bhabhi! aap kitni acchi hai na? 😊
S: kya baat hai? aaj toh bread ki jagah mujhe hi butter lagaya ja raha hai? 😆 😆 kya baat hai!
Pr: kya bhabhi aap bhi? kya mein aapki kabhi tareef nahin karta? 😳 😳
S: meine aisa kab kahan, lekin woh tum tabhi karte ho jab tumhe kuch chahiye? 😆
Pr: bhabhi aisi koi baat nahin hai! sacchi mein.
S: theek hai baba! ab chalo naste ke liye sab tumhara wait kar rahe hai! 😊
Prithvi and Safia leaves for breakfast!
in Maya's room:
M:(schreaming at Arya) Arya, ye milk finish karo varna mein tumhe bahut marungi? 😡
Ar: no mom! i dnt like milk! i am nt guna have it!
Arjun enters the room and see tom and jerry race again in his bedroom! 😆
A: kya howa maya? kyun arya ke picche bhag rahi hoon?
M: ye dekhona ise kitna shararati ho gaya hai? milk nahin pi raha hai?
A: (turnnig to Arya) kyun beta? mamma ko aise trouble nahin karte na? come on milk pilo!
Ar: no dad, mujhe ye accha nahin lagta!
A: theek hai, lekin agar tum milk nahin drink karonge to, tum Prithvi Chachu ki tarah strong nahin ban paounge! 😆
Ar: sacchi?
A: mucchi
Ar: theek hai! mein ye milk finish kar deta hoon!
Arya finished his milk while Arjun and Maya goes downstairs for their breakfast!
SP: are beta tum dono late kaise oh gaye?
M: woh papa, Arya mil;k nahin pi raha tha, toh bas usine der ho gayi!
SP: theek hai! now finish ur breakfast!
they all having breakfast!
Sharma Mansion:
(Mr. Sharma: Jai pratap aka JP)
(Mrs. Sharma: Naina)
Everyone on dining table having their breakfast!
N: Sanjam ka ltum sab log office se chutti le lena! 😃
S: kyun maa? kuch hai kya? 😲
N: tumhe yaad nahin?
S: kya maa?
JP:kal rakshabandhan hai!
Saniya hear this and says: yep, kal mujhe phir se gifts milenge! wow! i cnt wait!
everyone laughs at this!
N: maine kal subah pooja rakhi hai!
Sanyo: wow maa! maza aayega!
C: kaise maza? hamari jeb dheeli hone wali hai aur kya? (saying this he laughs along with everyone)
Ka: saal mein ek hi baar toh aata hai ye rakhi ka tyohaar! sanyo and saniya, is baar kuch jyada expensive gifts mangana apne bhai se?
Sanyo and saniya: yes! thanks bhabhi!
sanyo finishes her breakfast and leaves for her work!
Saniya: (stopping her from the back) di wait karona! mujhe plz college drop kardo!
Sanyo: theek hai but hurry up!
Saniya: just 5 mins!
Sanyo: ok!
Everyone else leaves for their work!
hope u like it! plz do reply!

nicely started dear👏........hmmm.......prc ki tarah strong banana hain toh milk piyo😆😆😉........nice way to handle small child like this😆😆😆.........will wait 4 the next part dear
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: anasrashid_fan

loved ur intro dear👏👏very nice

thanks kalyani!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: anasrashid_fan

nicely started dear👏........hmmm.......prc ki tarah strong banana hain toh milk piyo😆😆😉........nice way to handle small child like this😆😆😆.........will wait 4 the next part dear

thanks for liking it!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
thanks rumi dear!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47

Sweety,Pls post soon dear.Cannot wait more dear.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
hey guyz!
im updating for u only!
just wait about 3-4 hours, will defo give u long update!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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great i am waiting 4 u ir next part dear 😉😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
Ok dear,Take ur time.I'm waiting for ur ff's next part.

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