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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

Part 4

Recap: Kamini and Naina decides to have get together party at Kamini's house! Sanyo gets Promotion and sujal enters the story! Prithvi and safia going to airport to receive punidir and pratha!
Story Ahead:
in the Vogue office:
Sanyo is sitting in her cabin, with pile of files on the desk! Nupur enters the cabin!
She Shouts Sanyo's name as she enters:
Nupur: SANYO, congo huni! tuje promotion mil gaya BYGOD! (hugging her) im soooooooooooooooooo happy! (she says all this in one breath)
Sanyo: saans to le le! thanks! me toooooooooo so happy! waise, tu kaha thi jab ye annousement huwi? 😡
Nupur: sorry yaar, i was in meeting with some idiot called Mr. Prithvi Malhotra!
sanyo: ok! ad chal mujhe help kar ye sab sort out karne ke liye!
Nupur: haan chal! (they both are sorting the files out and keeping them in the drawer nearby)
suddenly, sanyo looks at her wrist watch!
Sanyo: OMG! aaj mein toh gayi! shit, im late! (proper panicking)
Nupur: (coming near her) kya huwa? tere pasine kyun choot rahe hai?
Sanyo: aur nahin to kya? aaj Vaishali bhabhi, delhi se vapas aane wali thi, aur mujhe unhe lene airport jana tha! shit, im so dead!
(she goes near the desk, picks her purse and cell and runs towards the door)
Sanyo: (while runnig she looks back) nupur plz ye sab sambhal lena!
Nupur: (smiling at her innocence) theek hai tu ja! i'll sort everything out!
sanyo runs towads the parking lot, takes her car out and drives as fast as she could! Vaishali was in delhi, because her mum was not well, so she went to visit her!
After 20 mins, Sanyo finally reaches the airport! She parks her car and come out if it!
here, Prithvi and Safia also reaches airport!
Prithvi: bhabhi, aap jayiye, mein car park karke aata hoon! (Safia goes from there)
Prithvi goes to the parking lot and parks his car! then, suddenly he sees someone coming out the car! She is wearing normal casual Jeans and a kurta, but her beauty lies in her simplicity! her glowing face is more beautiful than that moon! Prithvi mesmerized by her beauty! simple yet Elegant! suddenly,coming out of his thoughts, he sees the lady turning around and smiling at him!
she is Sanyo! She tries telling him something with sign language as she was on the opposite side! Prithvi does not understand and says, " what?"
Sanyo finally shouts ," MOVE OUT OF THE WAY, CAR IS COMING"! Prithvi finally gets it and moves on the side before the car could go over him! he goes near Sanyo to thank her!
Prithvi: thanks a lot!
Sanyo: its ok! but aapka dhyan kaha tha? mein kitni der se bol rahe thi!
Prithvi: woh, lagta hai, mera dil kahin aur hai aur mein kahin aur!
Sanyo: oh! anywayz bye!
Prithvi: 😭 oh, ok, bye! BTW im Prithvi!
Sanyo: bye im Sanyogita!
they both leaves from there! Sanyo goes near the arrivals section and Prithvi follows her! Prithvi goes and stands next ot Safia!
Safia: kaha rahe gaye the? mein kabse intazaar kar rahi hoon?
Prithvi: woh........ bhabhi actually (still staring at sanyo woh is standing a bit far away from Safia) paking ke liye place nahin mil rahi thi!
Safia :(she observes that Prithvi is staring at someone and she turns towards her right to see the person! she is shocked to see a girl there!) kya baat hai? 😆 aaj mere devarji ladki ke liye mujhse jhooth bol rahe hai?
Prithvi: ladki? kaun ladki? (pretends to look up and down)
Safia: now stop blushing! i'll talk u later about this, kyunki Pundir and Pratha are arriving in next 5 minutes!
Prithvi: ok (he says in a embarassement)!
guyz, i have to go for now, lekin lekin, i will update the nxt part in 2hours time!
plz wait!
plz do comment! for this!
love Zoah

wow superb update dear👏👏.........i was really imagining how sanyo must b luking in that simple dress😳😳..........haye haye😆😆prithvi ki toh nikal padi😉.....love at first sight😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

Part 5

After 5 mins, Pundir and Pratha comes out! pundir is looking dashing in Black tshirt and jeans and Pratha looking gorgeous in Black skinny jeans and Red shot top with black long boots! As soon as Safia and Prithvi sees them, Safia goes to Pundir and gives him a hug and then givs a hug to Pratha as well! Prithvi comes from behind and hugs both of them!
here, vaishali comes out and sees sanyo waiting for her! Sanyo runs to her and gives her tight hug! Vaishali is looking beautiful in white salwaar kameez!
Sanyo: hi bhabhi, kaisi hai aap?
Vaishali: mein theek hoon! aur tu bata? aur meine tujhse kitni baar kaha mujhe bhabhi mat bula! mein teri best friend hoon!
Sanyo: lekin, bhabhi jyada accha lagta hai! hai na?
Vaishali: theek hai! (they both starts walking towards the paking area)
while walking:
Vaishali: ghar pe sab kaise hai?
Sanyo: sab theek hai and sanjam bhaiya bhi theek hai!
Vaishali: (blushing) meine ye to nahin puch tha na?
Sanyo: phir bhi meine bol diya. aapki dil ki tassali ke liye! (in a teasing tone) waise ab aunty ki tabiyat kaisi hai?
Vaishali: ab theek hai!
Sanyo: tere liye and aur sab ke liye ek surprise hai ghar pe!
vaishali: sach? kaisa surprise?
Sanyo: surprise means surprise! aaj raat ko bataungi!
Here outside airport:
they all starts walking towards parking area with their laguage!
Pundir: ghar pe sab kaise hai? aur kaam kaise chal raha hai?
Safia: ye lo, ek kaam karke aaye nahin, aur dusre ke baare mein puch rahe hai?
Pratha: agree bhabhi! bhaiya, aap bhi na! aapko business ke alawa kuch nahin sujta!
Pundir: theek hai theek hai! ad bas!
Pundir, pratha and safia were busy talking, whereas Prithvi was lost in his own world! he was still thinking about Sanyo! he recalls the moment he met sanyo! he comes out his thoughts as he bangs himself to the 7 seater car in front of his face! he was soooooo much lost in sanyo that he did not even see it that there is a big car in front of him! as he banged his face ot the car, he regains conscious and starts walking with rest of them! Safia comes and starts walking next to him and kind of teasing him!
Safia: (to all of them and especially Prithvi) aap sabko nahin lagta ki, hume Prithvi ke liye ek ladki dundhni chahiye! 😆
Pratha: haan bhabhi, mujhe bhi lagta hai!
Pundir: mein aaj hi maa se baat karunga!
Prithvi: guyz, do u mind? mein apni marzi se shaadi karunga and aur abhi bahut der hai usme! ok?
Safia: haan haan, der to hogi hi na? (whispers to Prithvi) abhi to sirf dekha hai, jaan pehchaan karne mein waqt to lagega hi na! lolz!
Prithvi: bahbhi, aap bhi na! 😳
Pundir: kya baatein ho rahi hai devar bhabhi mein?
Prithvi: kuch nahin, bas aise hi!
they all sits in the car and goes to home!
here vaishali and sanyo also sits in the car and goes home!
Malhotra Mansion:
all the four of them enters the house, Kamini comes and is delighted to see Pundir and Pratha home! they both comes to kamini and takes her blessings! then they both hugs her!
Kamin: kaise ha itum dono?
Pratha: hum theek hai maa! aap kaisi hai! i missed sooooooooooooooooooo much!
Kamini: awwwwww, i missed u too huni!
Pundir: maa beti ke pyar mein mujhe to koi puchta hi nahin! 😭 😆
Pratha: kahin se jalne ke smell aa rahi hai! 😆
Pundir: tu ruk, pratha ki bacchi!
pratha runs for her life but pundir manages to catch her somehow! he holds her from her wrist!
Pundir: sorry bol!
Pratha: sorry
Pundir: bol u r the best!
Pratha: oh thanks! im the best!
Pundir: bol im the best!
Pratha: im the best!
suddenly, Safia comes from behind and pinhes pundir;s cheecks! pratha gets rid of pundir's grip and runs to her room! Safia, Prithvi and kamini laughs their heads off at this and Pundir shows fake anger to them and goes to his room! safia goes behind him!
Sharma Mansion:
Sanyo and Vaishali enters the house and Naina welcomes vaishali! Vaishali touches Naina's feet to take blessing and then hugs her! they all comes inside the house and sits in the hall! the yall chats for a long time and then sanyo's phone buzzes! she picks it up and it was Sujal's call!
on the phone:
Sanyo: hello sir
Sujal: hello Sanyo, sorry to disturb u today lekin, u have got meeting to attend tomorow with the co owner of Malhotra Empire Mr. Prithvi Malhotra!
Sanyo: theek hai sir! i'll attend it!
Sujal: thanks bye
Sanyo: bye
they both hangs up the phone! sanyo comes to kamini and Vaishali, and Kajal comes from shopping!
as soon as she enters she drops the shopping bags on the floor and goes to vaishali and hugs her!
Kajal: bhabhi, soooooooooo glad to see u back! how r u?
vaishali: im fine! tum batao?
Kajal: bilkul fit and fine!
kajal joins the rest of them and starts chatting like a chatter box! while talking, Vaishali was keep looking at the phone,as she was expecting a call from sanjam, but sanjam didnot had a time to call vaishali!
vaishali: maa, aap sab baitho, mein aapke liye nasta lekar aati hoon!
Kamini: tu beth! abhi ot aayi hai! thoda aaram kar, nasta sanyo bana legi!
Vaishali: no maa! its ok! sanyo meri help kar degi!
Sanyo: ya sure!
they both goes to kitchen and vaishali prepares nasta for all of them but she was not paying attention! sanyo notices this and makes Vaishali sits on the chair!
Sanyo: kya baat hai vaishu? (sanyo calls her vaishu, when she wants to talk to her about vaishali's problem, vaishali feels comfortable talknig to her)
Vaishali: (a tear rolls down her cheecks) woh....... Sanjam ne mujhe ek baar bhi phone nahin kiya? kya unhe nahin pata ki mein aaj aanewali thi?
Sanyo: (hugging her) bhaiya busy hoge, isliye shayad bhul gaye hoge! lekin tu fikar mat kar he will call u!
Vaishali: (wiping her tears) u know, sometimes i feel ki meri koi importance hi nahin hai unki zindagi mein? unhe bas apne kaam ki hi padi hai, meri nahin?
Sanyo: nahin yaar, aisa nahin hai! he does care for u and love u lekin bas kaam ki vajah se tuje time nahin de pate!
vaishali: shayad tu theek keh rahi hai!
then, they both makes nasta and goes to main hall with the tray! they all have nasta!
Malhotra Mansion:
Safia goes behind Pundir in their room! when she gets in the room and looks for pundir and there is no sign of pundir! then suddenly, someone shuts the door from behind and before Safia could react that person holds Safia from her waist and starts kissing her neck! Safia knew who it was!
Safia: pundir, chodo, koi aa jayega! (blushing)
Pundir: isliye toh door bandh kiya! 😆
Pundir turns her to face him!
Safia: i missed u soooooooooooo much!
Pundir: me too! (and kisses her forehead and pulls her in to the hug, safia hugs him back)
(we'll leave them to have some romance lolz)
on Prithvi's room:
Prithvi is lost in his own world (as usual) , when his phone buzzes! he picks it up!
on the phone:
Prithvi: hello
Manager: hello sir, mein aapka manger bol raha hoon!
Prithvi: haan boliye!
manager: sir, kal aapki meeting vogue ki Managing Director ke saath fix ho gayi hai!
Prithvi: theek hai! kitne baje?
Manager: 10'o clock!
Prithvi: thanks for letting me know! bye
Manager: bye sir, have a good day!
Prithvi puts the phone down and Maya enters the room!
Maya: kiska phone tha prithvi?
Prithvi: woh. manager ka, kal ki meeting ke liye!
Maya: ok! waise ek baat bata, aaj airport pe kya huwa?
Prithvi (recalling the incident): kya matlab?
Maya: natak bandh kar aur bata? Safia ne mujhe...
inretepting her in the incomplte sentence!
prithvi: mujhe pata tha ki Safia bhabhi ke pet mein ek baat nahin tikti!
Maya: matlab kuch huwa tha?
Prithvi: woh....... haan! and tells maya the whole incident!
Maya: waah, kya baat hai! kya love story hai yaar?
Prithvi: kya bhabhi aap bhi? plz aap mat shuru ho jana! safia bhabhi already mujhe ched rahi hai aur ab aap bhi! 😭
Maya: theek hai! nahin chedungi bas!
she goes near the door to leave but turns around and says, "waise mujhe safia ne kuch nahin bataya tha, lekin ye to sirf ek trick thi tumse sach sunane ki"!
Maya leaves the room as fast as she could!
so guyz, this was long update!
specially dedicated my Rakhi di and Praty!
plz do comment!
love Zoah

wow really nice👏👏👏..........just love the way everyone was teasing prithvi😳😆😆........poor hunk😉........n maya's trick was awesome👏.just wondering us meeting mein kya hoga........prithvi will b lost in sanyo's eyes😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: anasrashid_fan

wow really nice👏👏👏..........just love the way everyone was teasing prithvi😳😆😆........poor hunk😉........n maya's trick was awesome👏.just wondering us meeting mein kya hoga........prithvi will b lost in sanyo's eyes😳

thanks for loving this update kalyani!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

Imp Note:

hey guyz, i will not be able to come I-f for a month as my ramazan fasts are starting from saturday, so will be able to update u guyz after ramazan with the longest update!

hope can u understand and bear with me!

love Zoah

It's ok dear.No problem.Take ur time dear.I'll wait.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

Imp Note:

hey guyz, i will not be able to come I-f for a month as my ramazan fasts are starting from saturday, so will be able to update u guyz after ramazan with the longest update!

hope can u understand and bear with me!

love Zoah

kk zoah..we ll wait jaan..take ur time..😃😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

Part 4

Recap: Kamini and Naina decides to have get together party at Kamini's house! Sanyo gets Promotion and sujal enters the story! Prithvi and safia going to airport to receive punidir and pratha!
Story Ahead:
in the Vogue office:
Sanyo is sitting in her cabin, with pile of files on the desk! Nupur enters the cabin!
She Shouts Sanyo's name as she enters:
Nupur: SANYO, congo huni! tuje promotion mil gaya BYGOD! (hugging her) im soooooooooooooooooo happy! (she says all this in one breath)
Sanyo: saans to le le! thanks! me toooooooooo so happy! waise, tu kaha thi jab ye annousement huwi? 😡
Nupur: sorry yaar, i was in meeting with some idiot called Mr. Prithvi Malhotra!
sanyo: ok! ad chal mujhe help kar ye sab sort out karne ke liye!
Nupur: haan chal! (they both are sorting the files out and keeping them in the drawer nearby)
suddenly, sanyo looks at her wrist watch!
Sanyo: OMG! aaj mein toh gayi! shit, im late! (proper panicking)
Nupur: (coming near her) kya huwa? tere pasine kyun choot rahe hai?
Sanyo: aur nahin to kya? aaj Vaishali bhabhi, delhi se vapas aane wali thi, aur mujhe unhe lene airport jana tha! shit, im so dead!
(she goes near the desk, picks her purse and cell and runs towards the door)
Sanyo: (while runnig she looks back) nupur plz ye sab sambhal lena!
Nupur: (smiling at her innocence) theek hai tu ja! i'll sort everything out!
sanyo runs towads the parking lot, takes her car out and drives as fast as she could! Vaishali was in delhi, because her mum was not well, so she went to visit her!
After 20 mins, Sanyo finally reaches the airport! She parks her car and come out if it!
here, Prithvi and Safia also reaches airport!
Prithvi: bhabhi, aap jayiye, mein car park karke aata hoon! (Safia goes from there)
Prithvi goes to the parking lot and parks his car! then, suddenly he sees someone coming out the car! She is wearing normal casual Jeans and a kurta, but her beauty lies in her simplicity! her glowing face is more beautiful than that moon! Prithvi mesmerized by her beauty! simple yet Elegant! suddenly,coming out of his thoughts, he sees the lady turning around and smiling at him!
she is Sanyo! She tries telling him something with sign language as she was on the opposite side! Prithvi does not understand and says, " what?"
Sanyo finally shouts ," MOVE OUT OF THE WAY, CAR IS COMING"! Prithvi finally gets it and moves on the side before the car could go over him! he goes near Sanyo to thank her!
Prithvi: thanks a lot!
Sanyo: its ok! but aapka dhyan kaha tha? mein kitni der se bol rahe thi!
Prithvi: woh, lagta hai, mera dil kahin aur hai aur mein kahin aur!
Sanyo: oh! anywayz bye!
Prithvi: 😭 oh, ok, bye! BTW im Prithvi!
Sanyo: bye im Sanyogita!
they both leaves from there! Sanyo goes near the arrivals section and Prithvi follows her! Prithvi goes and stands next ot Safia!
Safia: kaha rahe gaye the? mein kabse intazaar kar rahi hoon?
Prithvi: woh........ bhabhi actually (still staring at sanyo woh is standing a bit far away from Safia) paking ke liye place nahin mil rahi thi!
Safia :(she observes that Prithvi is staring at someone and she turns towards her right to see the person! she is shocked to see a girl there!) kya baat hai? 😆 aaj mere devarji ladki ke liye mujhse jhooth bol rahe hai?
Prithvi: ladki? kaun ladki? (pretends to look up and down)
Safia: now stop blushing! i'll talk u later about this, kyunki Pundir and Pratha are arriving in next 5 minutes!
Prithvi: ok (he says in a embarassement)!
guyz, i have to go for now, lekin lekin, i will update the nxt part in 2hours time!
plz wait!
plz do comment! for this!
love Zoah

wow !!! very very nice update
loved the way u hv described the simplicity of sanyo ,tht she was wearing a jeans & a simple kurta & prithvi mesmerised by her beauty !!!😛😳
so nupur here also saying her pet lin es by GOD !!!!😉
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sita11

wow !!! very very nice update

loved the way u hv described the simplicity of sanyo ,tht she was wearing a jeans & a simple kurta & prithvi mesmerised by her beauty !!!😛😳
so nupur here also saying her pet lin es by GOD !!!!😉

thanks for liking it huni! and yes nupur is saying her pet line BY GOD! lolz!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

Hi PRCians! I am over whelmed after getting really good appreciation for my first ff Kahani meri tumhari!

Here is my second try to write ff! hope u all give the same love and appreciation!
Index:
inro: pg 1
character picx: pg 2
Part 1: Pg 5
Part 2: Pg 8
new entry: Pg 9
Part 3: Pg 9
part 4: Pg 12
part 5: Pg 12
here is the outline of the ff:
well from the title, u can guess its about marriage! two unknown souls gets married, but not with their own consent! its decided by their parents! in informal way its an arrange marriage! will the two be able to carry this relationship? will they be able to fulfill their duties and responsibilities towards each other?
here are the character sketches:
The Malhotras:
Prithvi Malhotra: son of Mr and Mrs. Malhotra
Arjun Malhotra: Elder brother of prithvi
Maya Malhotra: wife of Arjun and Prithvi's best buddy in the house
Pratha Malhotra: the only daughter of Mr and Mrs. Malhotra
Pundir Malhotra: eldest son of Malhotra family
Safia Malhotra: wife of pundir!
Arya Malhotra: the jaan of the family! he is Arjun and maya's son!
(Arjun+Maya= Arya)
The Sharmas:
Sanyogita Sharma: daughter of Mr and Mrs. Sharma
Saniya Sharma: sanyogita's younger sister cum friend
Chand Sharma: Sanyogita's elder brother
Kaajal Sharma: wife of chand, and a good friend of sanyo
Sanjam Sharma: the eldest son Mr. and Mrs. Sharma
Vaishali Sharma: wife of Sanjam and friend of sanyo
Veer Singh: prithvi's cousin and a good friend!
the extra info:
prithvi and veer are good friends as well as cousins!
veer lost his parents when he was 10 years old and from then he lives with prithvi!
Kaajal and Maya are best friends!
Pundir married to Safia two years ago! Safia is muslim but married in a hindu family! Prithvi's parents has no objection over it and are very nice to her! even Safia, tries her level best to follow the culture of Pundir's family! she is very good daughter in law!
guyz plz tell me if i should continue or not! plz do comment/critisize
PM lists:
Rakhi di
Megha di
Rumi
Shona di
Maria
Kalyani
Niyaati
Kuldeep
Simran
Sandy
love Zoah

zoah u know i jus love reading ur ff...coz they are great....and always will be...by da way u can win anyones heart by ur lovely ff's....even...delhi ke maharaj prithviraj chauhan ka
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

character pictures:


Mr. and Mrs. Malhotra:



Mr and Mrs. Sharma




Prithvi



Sanyogita


Saniya

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Veer


Chand:


Kaajal:


Sanjam:

Vaishali:

(the (the one while suit)

Arjun:

Maya:
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pundir:
Safia:


Arya:

Pratha:



Sharma mansion:


Malhotra Mansion:

Mansions10.jpg Mansion image by sexy_kiwi_111

special thanks to Rakhi di and niyaati for the help! thanks guyz!

awesome pics...i love the houses they are so beautiful,,,,,nice pics zoah...and thanks rakhi di and niyaati di for helping our precious zoah
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: letsrockshona

zoah u know i jus love reading ur ff...coz they are great....and always will be...by da way u can win anyones heart by ur lovely ff's....even...delhi ke maharaj prithviraj chauhan ka

thanks soooooooooooooooo much shona di! im just trying my best to write it! its nothing without ur alll supports! thanks for loving this, and i wish i can win delhi maharaj PRC ka dil!

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