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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: aandhanika

hey even this one is intresting...do continue soon and would you please pm me when your gonna update next..

thanks!

thanks dear, will surely pm u!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Part 6
later on: Prithvi is trying to sleep, but the sleep is no where near him! He is still to the moment he saw sanyogita! Prithvi feels strange and weird about this new feeling within him, but just igonres it saying its just a attraction, nothing else!
Here in the Sharma:
(rewind back to when mayan left to the room)
Everyone on the dining table, except for Sanjam! he is still in the office, working and vaishali in her room as she is tired of the long journey! Sanyo comes with 500 WT big broad smile on her face! her face is as glowing as moon! everyone notices this and are surpirced to see this!
Sanyo: attention everyone, mujhe kuch batana hai!
Kaajal: ab bata bhi do sanyo, hum kab se wait kar rahe hai!
Sanyo: theek hai, intezaar ki ghadiyaan khatam huyi, here comes the surprise! (She hands the promotion letter to her dad!) mujhe promotion mil gaya! (she says in exciting tone)
everyone: wow, awesome, congrats sweets!
Sanyo: thank u!
JP: im really proud of u my dear! u desereved this!
Sanyo: (goes to his chair and hugges him from the back) aww thanks papa!
Naina: beta, ajj phir tumne apne appko prove kiya, well done huni! we are really proud of u!
Sanyo: (getting teary) awwww thanks maa! (goes and hugges her)
Chand: ok my li'l sis, not stop the emotional athayachaar and tell me whenz the party?
Sanyo: sure bro, u will get it soon!
Chand: papa said it right, that u deserved this sis, u have worked soooo hard to achieve this! well done sanyo!
Sanyo: thanks bhaiya! BTW wheres Sanjam bhaiya?
Kajal: woh bhaiya ko koi meeting attend karni thi, isliye woh late aayenge, unka phone aaya tha!
Sanyo: ye bhaiya bhi na, bas kaam kaam aur kaam!
Naina: haan beta, mujhe usse baat karni padegi!
everyone agrees and continue with their dinner!
At 1'0 clock at night:
Vaishali is waiting for Sanjam to arrive so that she can have dinner with him after a week! She is been waiting for him since 11'o clock, but there is no sign of him to arrive! finally she falls a sleep on the dining table, keeping her head on the table!
vaishali always complains that Sanjam does not spend muc htime with her! with the same topic, they even had arguements over it, but still Sanjam gies more importance to business than Vaishali and his family!
after the long wait, Sanajm finally comes at 1:30 am! as he is walking towards his room, he sees Vaishali sitting (rather sleeping) on the table! he goes near her, and finds her sleeping! Sanjam keeps his hands on her shoulder and with a sudden touch Vaishali wakes up with a jerk! She finds Sanjam standing front of him and is surprised to see her there!
Sanjam: (with surprise look) Vaishali, tum delhi se kab aayi?
this question of him, makes Vaishali's heart shatters in million of pieces! She didnt expected this question from him at all! She is shocked that he didnt not even know that she is returning today! She sent him so many messages, left many messges on voice mail as his phone is always busy! She stares at him with hunderd of questions in her eyes! suddenly, she gets up from the chair and leaves from there! she goes on terrace and cries her out!
Here sanjam thinking what is wrong with her, why is she acting so weird! he goes behind her on the terrace! as he reaches the terrace, he finds vaishali standing with her back facing him and sobbing! he goes near her and touches her shoulder to make her face him, but she removes his hands and moves away from there!
Sanjam: (finally getting irritated) what wrong with u? aur mujhe bataya bhi nahin ki tum aaj aane wali thi?
Vaishali: (turns around with red teary eyes) ye tum puch rahe ho ki whats wrong with me? jise ye tak nahin pata ki aaj mein wapas aane wali hoon?
Sanjam: bataya kyun nahin?
Vaishali: bataya nahin? check bloody damn phone, i sent u hundreds of messages, did u even bother repliyng them or even reading them? that was not it, i even left messages for u on voice mail!
Sanjam: damn! (feeling guilty) sorry woh, actually meeting mein tha, to phone check hi nahin kiya! im sorry
Vaishali: meetings, meetins, meetings? do u even know that u have a family, a wife at home? aaj kitni khush thi mein ki tumhe sabse badi khush khabari doongi, lekin yaha aake pata chala ki use to meri parvah hi nahin! (crying harder)
Sanjam: (cupping her face with his hands) im really sorry, i do realise ki that i have my personal life too, but kya karo? kaam hi itna hai? aur kaun si khush khabari ki baat kar rahi ho?
Vaishali: (removing his hands from her face) I dnt think it is so much important to tell u now!
She goes from there, leaving Sanjam, with his guilt and confusion!
next day morning:
Malhotra house: everyone busy with the raksha bandhan preparations! Maya and Safia are decorating the temple with flowers and kamini is preparing for the pooja!
hey guyz, thats is for today!
i know its really short, but u know im really busy with college work!
this was especially dedicated to Maria (maria_awan)! hope u like it huni!
plz do comment!
love Zoah
Edited by Ansh_Arti - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

It's superb update.

Iye sanjam bhi na, aapne wife and family ko time nehi de raha.
Thanks for wonderful update.
Continue soon dear.
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey zoah,

First of all thank you.. you kept your word by pm-ing me when you had updated..

About this part:

You made me laugh a lot after i had read this part "
Sanyo comes with 500 WT big broad smile on her face!"... hahaha this is so damn funny!..

San
jam is so stupid!... it's obvious when a wife says to her hubby things like "tumhe sabse badi khush khabari doongi ".. this can only mean that she's pregnant *hmmm well this is what i think*

I can't wait went prithvi and sanyogita are gonna meet next..

ThanQ for the lovely update... continue soon!

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Posted: 15 years ago
when will narendra jha come? dear Zoah 😳 plz show , i have read this its good 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

Part 6
later on: Prithvi is trying to sleep, but the sleep is no where near him! He is still to the moment he saw sanyogita! Prithvi feels strange and weird about this new feeling within him, but just igonres it saying its just a attraction, nothing else!
Here in the Sharma:
(rewind back to when mayan left to the room)
Everyone on the dining table, except for Sanjam! he is still in the office, working and vaishali in her room as she is tired of the long journey! Sanyo comes with 500 WT big broad smile on her face! her face is as glowing as moon! everyone notices this and are surpirced to see this!
Sanyo: attention everyone, mujhe kuch batana hai!
Kaajal: ab bata bhi do sanyo, hum kab se wait kar rahe hai!
Sanyo: theek hai, intezaar ki ghadiyaan khatam huyi, here comes the surprise! (She hands the promotion letter to her dad!) mujhe promotion mil gaya! (she says in exciting tone)
everyone: wow, awesome, congrats sweets!
Sanyo: thank u!
JP: im really proud of u my dear! u desereved this!
Sanyo: (goes to his chair and hugges him from the back) aww thanks papa!
Naina: beta, ajj phir tumne apne appko prove kiya, well done huni! we are really proud of u!
Sanyo: (getting teary) awwww thanks maa! (goes and hugges her)
Chand: ok my li'l sis, not stop the emotional athayachaar and tell me whenz the party?
Sanyo: sure bro, u will get it soon!
Chand: papa said it right, that u deserved this sis, u have worked soooo hard to achieve this! well done sanyo!
Sanyo: thanks bhaiya! BTW wheres Sanjam bhaiya?
Kajal: woh bhaiya ko koi meeting attend karni thi, isliye woh late aayenge, unka phone aaya tha!
Sanyo: ye bhaiya bhi na, bas kaam kaam aur kaam!
Naina: haan beta, mujhe usse baat karni padegi!
everyone agrees and continue with their dinner!
At 1'0 clock at night:
Vaishali is waiting for Sanjam to arrive so that she can have dinner with him after a week! She is been waiting for him since 11'o clock, but there is no sign of him to arrive! finally she falls a sleep on the dining table, keeping her head on the table!
vaishali always complains that Sanjam does not spend muc htime with her! with the same topic, they even had arguements over it, but still Sanjam gies more importance to business than Vaishali and his family!
after the long wait, Sanajm finally comes at 1:30 am! as he is walking towards his room, he sees Vaishali sitting (rather sleeping) on the table! he goes near her, and finds her sleeping! Sanjam keeps his hands on her shoulder and with a sudden touch Vaishali wakes up with a jerk! She finds Sanjam standing front of him and is surprised to see her there!
Sanjam: (with surprise look) Vaishali, tum delhi se kab aayi?
this question of him, makes Vaishali's heart shatters in million of pieces! She didnt expected this question from him at all! She is shocked that he didnt not even know that she is returning today! She sent him so many messages, left many messges on voice mail as his phone is always busy! She stares at him with hunderd of questions in her eyes! suddenly, she gets up from the chair and leaves from there! she goes on terrace and cries her out!
Here sanjam thinking what is wrong with her, why is she acting so weird! he goes behind her on the terrace! as he reaches the terrace, he finds vaishali standing with her back facing him and sobbing! he goes near her and touches her shoulder to make her face him, but she removes his hands and moves away from there!
Sanjam: (finally getting irritated) what wrong with u? aur mujhe bataya bhi nahin ki tum aaj aane wali thi?
Vaishali: (turns around with red teary eyes) ye tum puch rahe ho ki whats wrong with me? jise ye tak nahin pata ki aaj mein wapas aane wali hoon?
Sanjam: bataya kyun nahin?
Vaishali: bataya nahin? check bloody damn phone, i sent u hundreds of messages, did u even bother repliyng them or even reading them? that was not it, i even left messages for u on voice mail!
Sanjam: damn! (feeling guilty) sorry woh, actually meeting mein tha, to phone check hi nahin kiya! im sorry
Vaishali: meetings, meetins, meetings? do u even know that u have a family, a wife at home? aaj kitni khush thi mein ki tumhe sabse badi khush khabari doongi, lekin yaha aake pata chala ki use to meri parvah hi nahin! (crying harder)
Sanjam: (cupping her face with his hands) im really sorry, i do realise ki that i have my personal life too, but kya karo? kaam hi itna hai? aur kaun si khush khabari ki baat kar rahi ho?
Vaishali: (removing his hands from her face) I dnt think it is so much important to tell u now!
She goes from there, leaving Sanjam, with his guilt and confusion!
next day morning:
Malhotra house: everyone busy with the raksha bandhan preparations! Maya and Safia are decorating the temple with flowers and kamini is preparing for the pooja!
hey guyz, thats is for today!
i know its really short, but u know im really busy with college work!
this was especially dedicated to Maria (maria_awan)! hope u like it huni!
plz do comment!
love Zoah

thanks so much huni 4 this part i am always waiting 4 ur updates 😊this part is really prithvi feeling of love .sanyogita promtion and vaishali and sanjam fight or argument everything is great dear👏yeh sanjam kab sayi hoga kab time day ga apnay ghar ko aur wife ko waiting 4 it and prithvi and sanyogita meeting 😉lovely uodated
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: urooj101

when will narendra jha come? dear Zoah 😳 plz show , i have read this its good 😊

thanks dear, well the role is really tough, cuz the roles are all booked!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: maria_awan

thanks so much huni 4 this part i am always waiting 4 ur updates 😊this part is really prithvi feeling of love .sanyogita promtion and vaishali and sanjam fight or argument everything is great dear👏yeh sanjam kab sayi hoga kab time day ga apnay ghar ko aur wife ko waiting 4 it and prithvi and sanyogita meeting 😉lovely uodated

thanks dear, really feel good that someone praises u soooooooooo much!
thanks a ton maria!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

thanks dear, well the role is really tough, cuz the roles are all booked!

oh no not any role ro narendra jha 😭 plz dear Zoah 😳 give him some role 😉😉
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: urooj101

oh no not any role ro narendra jha 😭 plz dear Zoah 😳 give him some role 😉😉

will try!

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