Destiny Made Them Together!Part 9: Pg 24 - Page 12

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: letsrockshona

awesome pics...i love the houses they are so beautiful,,,,,nice pics zoah...and thanks rakhi di and niyaati di for helping our precious zoah

thanks for loving this pics huni!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

thank u guyz for ur comments about continuing this ff! really appreciated!

here is the first part! hope u like it!
Part 1
Malhotra Mansion:
(Mr. Malhotra: Surya Prakash (SP)
(Mrs. Malhotra: Kamini)
its the morning time! breakfast is ready! Everyone arrives except Prithvi! he is in his room!
everyone takes their resepective seat on dining table)
K: ye prithvi kaha rahe gaya? (gives him shout) Prithvi hurry up will u? 😡
Pr: aaya maa, lekin meri tie nahin mil rahi hai! aapne dekhi?😭
K: nahin! tu ruk, mein find karke deti hoon! 🥱
she is about leave but Safia stops her way!
S: maa aap nasta kijiya! mein find karti hoon! 😊
K: theek hai beta!
Safia start walking 2wards Prithvi's room upstairs! as she enters she was shocked to see his room sooooooooooo messy and dirty!
Safia: prithvi ye sab kya hai? 😡 aapne room ki halat to dekho?
Pr: bhabhi woh sab chodiye, pehle app meri tir find kijiye!
Safia opens his cupboard, which is full of mess and dirtiness! she opens a drawer and takes the tir out!
S: (handing over the tie) yahi to thi prithvi! 😛
Pr: thanks bhabhi! aap kitni acchi hai na? 😊
S: kya baat hai? aaj toh bread ki jagah mujhe hi butter lagaya ja raha hai? 😆 😆 kya baat hai!
Pr: kya bhabhi aap bhi? kya mein aapki kabhi tareef nahin karta? 😳 😳
S: meine aisa kab kahan, lekin woh tum tabhi karte ho jab tumhe kuch chahiye? 😆
Pr: bhabhi aisi koi baat nahin hai! sacchi mein.
S: theek hai baba! ab chalo naste ke liye sab tumhara wait kar rahe hai! 😊
Prithvi and Safia leaves for breakfast!
in Maya's room:
M:(schreaming at Arya) Arya, ye milk finish karo varna mein tumhe bahut marungi? 😡
Ar: no mom! i dnt like milk! i am nt guna have it!
Arjun enters the room and see tom and jerry race again in his bedroom! 😆
A: kya howa maya? kyun arya ke picche bhag rahi hoon?
M: ye dekhona ise kitna shararati ho gaya hai? milk nahin pi raha hai?
A: (turnnig to Arya) kyun beta? mamma ko aise trouble nahin karte na? come on milk pilo!
Ar: no dad, mujhe ye accha nahin lagta!
A: theek hai, lekin agar tum milk nahin drink karonge to, tum Prithvi Chachu ki tarah strong nahin ban paounge! 😆
Ar: sacchi?
A: mucchi
Ar: theek hai! mein ye milk finish kar deta hoon!
Arya finished his milk while Arjun and Maya goes downstairs for their breakfast!
SP: are beta tum dono late kaise oh gaye?
M: woh papa, Arya mil;k nahin pi raha tha, toh bas usine der ho gayi!
SP: theek hai! now finish ur breakfast!
they all having breakfast!
Sharma Mansion:
(Mr. Sharma: Jai pratap aka JP)
(Mrs. Sharma: Naina)
Everyone on dining table having their breakfast!
N: Sanjam ka ltum sab log office se chutti le lena! 😃
S: kyun maa? kuch hai kya? 😲
N: tumhe yaad nahin?
S: kya maa?
JP:kal rakshabandhan hai!
Saniya hear this and says: yep, kal mujhe phir se gifts milenge! wow! i cnt wait!
everyone laughs at this!
N: maine kal subah pooja rakhi hai!
Sanyo: wow maa! maza aayega!
C: kaise maza? hamari jeb dheeli hone wali hai aur kya? (saying this he laughs along with everyone)
Ka: saal mein ek hi baar toh aata hai ye rakhi ka tyohaar! sanyo and saniya, is baar kuch jyada expensive gifts mangana apne bhai se?
Sanyo and saniya: yes! thanks bhabhi!
sanyo finishes her breakfast and leaves for her work!
Saniya: (stopping her from the back) di wait karona! mujhe plz college drop kardo!
Sanyo: theek hai but hurry up!
Saniya: just 5 mins!
Sanyo: ok!
Everyone else leaves for their work!
hope u like it! plz do reply!

wow family kya pyaar tho dekho....so cute...and in prc's house tom and jerry so hilarious aor prc ka ghanda kamra....zoah u r too good..the update was awesome...jus like you ...huni😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

Part 2

story ahead:
sanyo and Saniya leaves for work! as seeing them leaving, a tear rolls down Naina's cheecks! JP looks at her and knew wt she is thinking about! he keeps his hand on her shoulder and give her assurance!
JP: dnt worry Naina, mujhe pata hai meri dono bachiya badi ho gayi hai😭 ! unki shaadi karni hai! par aap fikr mat karo hum un dono ke liye Rajkumar dhundke layenge! 😊
Chand, Sanjam, Kajal and Vaishali are listening to their talks and Sanjam goes to her mum!
Sanjam: ma, plz dnt worry, meri behne karodo mein ek hai, unke liye mein Rajkumar launga! 😊
Chand, kajal and Vaishali: haan ma! (with a smile)
after this conversation, everyone leaves for their respective work!
In car:
Sanyo: Saniya hurry up! im getting late!
Saniya: (runs toawards the car with books and cell phone in her hands) im here di! 😉
Saniya seats in the car and sanyo starts the engine and moves ahead! Sanyo turns the radio on, where there was her al ltime favourite song airing! she puts the volume up and enjoying the song along with Saniya!
Ni ni ni Sa sa sa sa

Re re re Sa sa sa sa

Ni ni ni Sa sa sa sa

Re re re Sa sa sa sa

Har Nazar Ko Dua..a..a..a

Har Nazar Ko Dua

Har Vafa Ko Salaam

Har Nazar Ko Dua

Har Vafa Ko Salaam

Ay Mohabbat Teri Har Ada Ko Salaam
Ay Mohabbat Teri Har Ada Ko Salaam

Har Nazar Ko Dua

Har Vafa Ko Salaam

Ay Mohabbat Teri Har Ada Ko Salaam

Ni ni ni Sa sa sa Re re re Sa sa sa

Ni ni ni Sa sa sa Re re re Sa sa sa
Sa Re Ma Sa Re Ma Pa
Sa Re Ma Sa Re Ma Pa

Re Sa Re Sa Re Sa Ni Pa Ma Pa Ni Pa Ma Pa Re Sa

Har Nayi Rut Ke Labon Par Tarana Tera

Zinda Har Daur Mein Hai Fasana Tera

Har Nayi Rut Ke Labon Par Tarana Tera

Zinda Har Daur Mein Hai Fasana Tera

Har Dhadakte Dilon Mein Thikana Tera

Ye Zameen Aasmaan Ye Zamana Tera

A..a..a..

Har Kadam Par Tere Lakshyata Ko Salaam

Har Kadam Par Tere Lakshyata Ko Salaam
Ay Mohabbat Teri Har Ada Ko Salaam

Ay Mohabbat Teri Har Ada Ko Salaam

Hai Khadam Par Kadam Teri Parchaiya
Tu Jaha Hai Haseen Zyndhegi Hai Wahaa
Hai Khadam Par Kadam Teri Parchaiya
Tu Jaha Hai Haseen Zyndhegi Hai Wahaa
Zykre se teri rangeen Har ek dastaan
Tune Bakshi Hai khamosi O Ko Zubaan
A...a....a
Teri Khamosh Labh Ke Fasaana Ko Salaam
Ay Mohabbat Teri Har Ada Ko Salaam
Ni ni ni Sa sa sa sa

Re re re Sa sa sa sa

Ni ni ni Sa sa sa sa

Re re re Sa sa sa sa

Har Nazar Ko Dua..a..a..a

Har Nazar Ko Dua

Har Vafa Ko Salaam

Har Nazar Ko Dua

Har Vafa Ko Salaam

Ay Mohabbat Teri Har Ada Ko Salaam
Ay Mohabbat Teri Har Ada Ko Salaam

Har Nazar Ko Dua

Har Vafa Ko Salaam

Ay Mohabbat Teri Har Ada Ko Salaam

Sanyo is into the song, when She was distractes by Saniya!
Saniya: di Stop (while saying she turned the volume down of the radio, which really annoyed Sanyo)
Sanyo (with annoying look) kya huwa? volume kyun down kiya?😡
Saniya: sorry di! woh actually meine abhi Veer ko dekha 😳, uski car kharab ho gayi thi shayad!
Sanyo: Veer? ye veer kaun hai?
Saniya: woh......... mera............ Classmeta hai and a good friend! 😳
Sanyo: (teasing Saniya) Sirf Dost? 😆
Sanyiya: YES DI! SIRF DOST! now will u plz reverse the car? 🤢
Sanyo: ok chill!
sanyo reverse the car and sees Veer is standing outside his car with irritating look on his face!
Sanyo and Saniya comes out of the car and moves towards him! as soon as veer Veer sees Saniya, he waves at her! saniya waves back to him with blush on her face!
Saniya: veer, kya huwa? car kharab ho gayi?
veer: haan woh! engine work nahin kar raha hai! 😭
Saniya: its ok! u can come with us and call ur driver to come and collece the car! 😃
Veer: thanks but i hope u wont mind (turnig to Sanyo)
Sanyo: oh not at all! plz come! i'll drop u both! 😊
the trio gets in the car and start moving! while travelling Saniya introdues Sanyo and Veer!
Malhotra Mansion:
all having breakfast and making plan for rakshabandhan! suddenly, SP remembers that today Pratha and Pundir are returning back from london after a month! SP turns to Prithvi!
SP: prithvi, aaj yaad hai na Pratha aur Pundir ko lene jana hai?
hearing Pundir's name mentioned, Safia blushes! Prithvi looks and winks at her!
Prithvi: yed dad! mujhe yaad hai! (looking at Safia) dad, can i take Safia bhabhi with me too plz?
SP: ya beta sure!
Prithvi: thanks dad!
then Kamini tells everyone about tomorow's pooja and small get together! everyone gets exicted and cheers for it!
everyone leaves for their work ,while Maya is talking to Arjun!
maya: arjun can u plz do me a favour? 😊
Arjun: ya sure!
Maya: kya tum aaj Arya ko scholl drop kar sakte ho? mujhe maa ke saath shopping jana hai!
Arjun: theek hai!
Maya: thanks
Arjun: (with his mischevious look) thanks aise nahin bolte jaan?
Maya: (blushing) toh kaise bolte hai?
Arjun: (kisses her on her cheeck) aise bolte hai!
Maya (kisses him on forehead) ok bye!
Arjun: tum Arya ko bahar bhejo, mein tab tak car nikalta hoon!
Maya: theek hai! bye
Arjun: bye gives her goodbye kiss on her forehead)
Arjun leaves and Maya goes to take Arya!
Afer Arya is gone, Maya goes to Kamini's room where Safia ans kamini waiting for Maya to arrive!
maya: maa, aapne bulaya?
Kamini: haan beta! come in!
Maya comes and sits with safia!
Kamini: well, i was thinking that since we having small get togeher, so we will call close friends and family! i thought of why ont give a them little gift as good will gesture!
Maya: ye to bahut accha idea hai maa! everyone will love it! 😃
Safia: yes maa! Maya bhabhi is right!
Kamini: theek hai! toh safia beta, tum guest list tiyaar karo aur mein aur Maya shopping chalte hai!
Safia: jee ma!
Kamini and Maya leaves for shopping and Safia is making guess lists!
the phone rings and their servant (bhola) picks it up!
Bhola: hello! Malhotra mansion!
Voice: hello, bhola ,mein pundir bol raha hoon!
Bhola: pundir bhaiya, kaise hai aap?
Pundir: mein theek hoon! waha sab kaise hai?
bhola: sab theek hai! ek minute mein abhi Safia bhabhi ko bulata hoon! (then he goes to safia's room and informs her about pundir's call)
she is all happy and excited and goes the the main hall!
on the phone:
Safia: hello Pundir, kaise hai aap?
Pundir: im fine! tum kaisi ho?
Safia: mein bhi theek hoon! (suddenly remembers that he should be in plane right now, how come he is ringing me)
Safia: pundir, aap, abhi kaha hai? 😕
Punidr: woh mein abhi dubai mein hoon! woh actually the plane has a stopover here! thats y i thought of ringing u! 😊
Safia: theek hai! howz pratha?
Pundir: woh theek hai! kuch shopping kar rahi hai!
Safia: ok!
then they talk for about half an hour! finally they both puts the phone down! Safia has a big broad smile on her face, as pundir is coming back after a month! she just can wait till she sees him!
here in the college:
sanyo drops saniya and veer at the college and goes to her work! suddenly she remembers that she has forgotten her presentation file at home only! she cursed herself for forgetting things these days! she drives back to home cursing herself on the way!
Sanyo (to herself): Miss Sanyogita Sharma, tumhe ajj kal kuch bhi yaad kyun nahin rehata? tu ek number ki ullu ki paddhi hai! u stupid , moron, idiot! (lolz)
here in the shopping mall:
Maya is buying gifts for everyone and kamini shoppnig for home!
finally they finish shopping and goes to the till!
they comes out the mall!
Kamini: bahut cheap mein mil gaya na sab kuch?
Maya: haan ma! aaj sale tha na isliye!
Kamini: haan! hume yahan aate rehna chahiye ghar ki shopping ke liye!
Maya: jee ma! ma kya hum kuch der ke liye mere friend ke ghar ja salta hai? mein use kitne dino se nahin mili plzzzzzzzzzz?
Kamini: sure beta!
Maya: thanks maa! chale!
they both gets in the car and drives off to Sharma mansion!
they both reached the place and comes out fo the car! Maya knock the door!
forunately, Kajal opened the door and shocked to see Maya front of her eyes after so many years!
Kajal hugged her and maya hugged her back! kajal turns to Kamini, and touched her feet to take blessings!
Kajal welcomes both of them! they all take sits! Kamini thought that she has come here before, but could not remember when! then, Naina comes out of the kitchen!
Naina: kajal, kaun hai beta? (suddenly looks at Kamini)
Kamini: tum Naina hona?
Naina: aur tum Kamini right? (they both recognised each other)
they both were in college together! after colleg, Kamini's father moved to Mumbai and naina lived it Ajmer! after few years naina got married wit JP and she moved to mumbai as well!
they were delighted to see each other after 15 years, as they didnot attend Kaajal's wedding, except maya!
Maya and Kaajal and Kamini and Naina talked and talked for so long!
suddenly the door bell rings, yes its sanyo!
the servant opens the door, and sanyo enters the house in hurry!
Naina: kaun hai?
Sanyo: maa, its me! mein office kuch file bhul gayi thi, use lene aayi hoon! (then she looks at maya and Kamini)
Naina introdues both with Sanyo! Sanyo goes and touches Kamini's feet to take blessings! she then goes to her room and takes the files and leaves from there!
Sanyo: bye maa! and sorry aunty and bhabhi, woh actually im already late for office! hope u understand!
Kamini: nahin beta! its ok! bye
Sanyo: bye!
so guyz, this is it! i really hope u liked it!
Plz do give me ur views/sugeestions!
love Zoah

zoah my sweet jaan....mein kya kahu....mein tumhari ff ki deewangi ho gi hu....this is sooo good....more than goood....i jus love all the charaters....they are so fab....mann....am not saying anything... i don't know wat to say.....my praise infront of this is nothing .......am jus speechless
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Posted: 15 years ago
part 4 and 5 were brilliant...u know u can imagine the whole thing happening..the way u hav described and explained everything is fab....please zoah......update the nxt part for this ff .....please.... and both the parts were awesome and well written...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

Imp Note:

hey guyz, i will not be able to come I-f for a month as my ramazan fasts are starting from saturday, so will be able to update u guyz after ramazan with the longest update!

hope can u understand and bear with me!

love Zoah



No probs zoah will wait dear!😳😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey even this one is intresting...do continue soon and would you please pm me when your gonna update next..

thanks!

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: letsrockshona

😃

wow family kya pyaar tho dekho....so cute...and in prc's house tom and jerry so hilarious aor prc ka ghanda kamra....zoah u r too good..the update was awesome...jus like you ...huni😳

thanks shona di!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: letsrockshona

zoah my sweet jaan....mein kya kahu....mein tumhari ff ki deewangi ho gi hu....this is sooo good....more than goood....i jus love all the charaters....they are so fab....mann....am not saying anything... i don't know wat to say.....my praise infront of this is nothing .......am jus speechless

thankssssssssssssssssssss a ton di! really in nothing compare to all of u out there! u r just mind blowing!
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks once again!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: letsrockshona

part 4 and 5 were brilliant...u know u can imagine the whole thing happening..the way u hav described and explained everything is fab....please zoah......update the nxt part for this ff .....please.... and both the parts were awesome and well written...

thanks shona di! will try to update this ff soon!

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