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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 2


prithvi starts his car and starts miving but his thoughts werent! he was still thinking about the same girl! he felt as if she is THE most beautiful girl in this whole world! the innocence on her face was adorable!

here at the signal: that girl is still dancing in the rain and enjoynig herself without caring about anything or anyone!
prithvi starts singing song and camera is on that girl!

itna haseen chehra kitni pyari aankhen (we see glance of her face, and slowly moves to her eyes)
kitni pyari aankhen hai aankhon se chhalakta pyar (we see unique magic in her eyes)
kudrat ne banaya hoga phursat se tujhe mere yaar -

(teri nazar jhuke toh shaam dhalen (camera still at her eyes, she is looking down the earth)
jo uthe nazar toh subaha chalen) - (she is looking up the sky)
tu hase toh kaliyan khil jaaye (she laughs)
tujhe dekh ke hoor bhi sharmaye (she blushes)
teri bikhri bikhri zulfen teri mehaki mehaki saansen ( camera on moves to her black long hair)
teri koyal jaisi boli teri meethi meethi baaten ( she is talking to her friend)
jee chahe mera main yu hi tera karta rahu deedar (prithvi goes in flashback and imagine himself with er)
kudrat ne banaya hoga phursat se tujhe mere yaar (dreaming about both danicng in the rain)
kitna haseen chehra kitni pyari aankhen

(duniya mein haseen aur bhi hain (prithvi says to himself)
hoga na koi tere jaisa haseen) ( prithvi mesmersied by her beauty)
rangeen jawan madhosh badan (he sees her everywhere)
tu husno shabab ka hain gulshan (keep on dreaimng)
tere ang se khusbu barse pariyon si sundar kaya
jo kutch socha tha maine woh sab kutch tujhmein paya
teri ek adaa pe main sadke jaaun sau baar
kudrat ne banaya hoga phursat se tujhe mere yaar - 2
kitna haseen chehra kitni pyari aankhen
kitni pyari aankhen hai aankhon se chhalakta pyar
kudrat ne banaya hoga phursat se tujhe mere yaar - 2


finnaly we see her face! she is sanyogita! (camera stills on her)
(sanyogita is an only daughter on jaichand and naintara singh! her parents lives in kanauj! she came to ajmer for her further studies! she lives with her best friend Vaishali!)

suddenly, she looks at her wathc and starts panicking!

sanyo: OMG! vaishali chalo ab! aaj pehla din hai college! abhi to h ghar bhi jana hai and tayaar bhi hona hai by god! tum bhi na vaishali hamesha der karti ho!
vaishali: accha mein ne der karavayi! baarish mein tum bheeg rahi thi ya mein!
sanyo: uff oh! ab chale varna late ho jayenge!

they both hires an auto and heads off to home!

in college:
prithvi parks his car and starts moving towards the main gate! he is wearing black jeans with white shirt! he is looking damn hot! all the eyes stucks on him as he enters! he is still thinking about his girl! he is lost in his own world and suddenly someone calls him from the back!
he ignores it, but someone calls him again and again! he is getting really irritated! he turns around and see his there was a guy in jeans and blue t shirt! he is arjun! prithvi's friend!

prithvi: are arjun tum? kaisa hai yaar?
arjun: mein toh theek hoon, par mujhe lagta hai ki tu theek nahin hai? teri tabiyat toh theek hai na? kabse aawaz laga raha hoon, dhyan kahan hai tumhara(making angry face)? kisike khyalo mein khoye howe ho? meri honewali bhabhi ke? (teasing him)
prithvi: kya arjun tum bhi. kuch bhi bolte ho! waise tum akele? baki sab kaha hai?
arjun: baki sab canteen hai tumhara wait kar rahe hai.
prithvi: mera wait
arjun: haan woh, tum sab ke liye surpirce hai,
prithvi: surprise? kaisa surprise?
arjun: surprise means surprise. ab chalo.
prithvi: haan chalo!

they both make their ways to canteen!

sanyo's place:
vaishali and sanyo getting ready! sanyo looks a bit nervous as its her first day to college.
sanyo: vaishali ab chale, im really nervous by god. god plz help me(folding her hand and pray)!
vaishali:dnt worry yaar. sab kuch theelk hoga.
sanyo: hopefully!
they both heads off to college!

in canteen:

everyone is waiting for prithvi to arrive. finally he arrives! everyone is eagerly waiting to know the surprise!
camera snaps samar, pundir, chand, veer, dharam and sanjam! (camera then moves to one beutiful young lady in red, who is walking towards their table)
prithvi: (with shocking look) are Maya (arjun's GF) tum yahan canteen mein? woh bhi 8 wonders ke saath!
sanjam adds to it!
sanjam: ha prithvi, lagta hai aaj hamari kismat hum par kuch jyada hi mehrbaan ho rahi hai ( in a flirting tone)
maya: sanjam!!!!!!! tum ruko! ab tumhari kismat bahut buri hone wali hai! (runs after him)
prithvi: sanjam, maya stop it guyz. ab main poin par aao. surprise kya hai?
arjun: (in a funny tone) suspence music plz (suspence music in background)
chand: stop it now (irritated tone) ab bata bhi de.
arjun: theek hai! toh guyz, mein aur maya are getting engage next month!
everyone applause for them and wishes them good wishes!

then prithvi: (teasing maya and arjun) maya tumhari tabiyat toh theek hain na?
maya: haan kyon?
prithvi: tum ARJUN se engagement ki baat kar rahi hoon! r u really sure ki tum iske yaani mere dost arjun ke saath apni puri life spend karna chahti hoon! i mean tumhe aur koi nahin mila?
maya: PRITHVI?????????????


thats it guyz for today!
hope u like!

plz comment/critisize




love Zoah
Edited by sweety4jaan - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32

Wow, wonderful update sweety.U beautifully described the beauti of sanyo and that song .It's tood good.Sach mein prithvi looks too hot in black jeans and white shirt.Wait for next part.

Edited by veersherafan1 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweety4jaan

hi all! im attempting writing ff for thr first time in my life! i know im nothing compare to all the others! plz give me ur feedback if i should continue or not!

here is the character intro:
the story is about college life, friends, love, romance!

prithvi: he is in college second year! he is sensible, mature, studious, intelligent, handsome! he loves his books!

sanyo: she is new at college, first year! she is bubbly, talkative, full of liveliness! she is loves SRK! her all tym fav movie is DDLJ! like every other girl even she dreams about her prince charming, who will come on white horse and take her away in world of love and romance! she calls the prince "raj"!

vaishali: she is sanyo's best friend!

arjun: prithvi's friend and funniest perosn in the circle

pundir: prithvi's friend and angry young man! he never get along with girls!

chand: prithvi's friend! he is very cute and sweet person! he is secrectly in love with his mystrey girl (she will enter the story later on)

samar: samar is love with prithvi's younger sister pratha but scared to confess it!

veer: veer is brave and smart boy! he is very simple and clear!

dharam: dharam is veer's best friend! they became friends when dharam saved veer from an accident!

samjam: samjam isa big time flirt! he loves flirting! but he is clear about what he is doing and what he will do in future!

their circle called 8 wonders!

the 8 wonders are the main limelight of the college! every girl wants to be with them!

i have also included payal (pundir's love interest), sia dharam's love interest), shera (veer' love interest), maya (arjun's finance), karanakiti (sorry guyz dnt knw her name chand's interest)

the bad guyz is none other than vikram! he is known as vicky! he is the son of the college principal! he thinks he is tooooooooooooooooooo cool! he loves bullying others!


guyz i know its not good, but plz tell me if i continue or not!
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz


thanks
love Zoah


wow zoah u r too gud
this sounds mimdblowing...such a different ff.....it is fabulous...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
by da way are prithvi and sanyo grown up in here... i mean anas and sheetal ya phir rajat aur mughda
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweety4jaan

hi all! i m updatin my ff! here is the 1st part!
i really hope that u like it:


one handsome boy sleepling peacefully in his bed! he has a priceless smile on his face, as if he has no worries or problems! suddenly some lady opened the door, walks towrads his bed! it was kamlavati!

she is trying hard to wake him up!

kamlavati: utho beta, dekho kitne der ho gayi hai! aaj tumhara pehla din hai college after holidays! u snt want to be late my son!

son: maa, plz 2 mins aur!

kamlavati: nahin, get up now (pretending to be angry and is about to stand up frm the bed and he holds her hand)
it was Prithvi! kamlavati and someshwar's only son! he was pampered a lot by all his family! he knows his responsibily very well! his parents has very high expectations from him!

he says, maa, naraz mat ho! lo mein uth gaya! happy?

kamlavati: yes very! go and get ready! breakfast ke liye sab tera intezaar kar rahe hai! come fast!

prithvi: yes maa! i will be there in 15 mins!

here, on breakfast table: everyone waiting for prithvi to arrive!

kamalavati comes there:

someshwar: uth gaya appka ladla?

kamlavati: haan

someshwar: aapne hi use bahut chut de rakhi hai!

prithvi arrives and takes blessing from all the elders!

suddenly, he realises that the chair next to him is empty! it was pratha's chair!

he asks his mum, "maa, ye pratha kaha gayi?"

kamlavati: woh to college chali gayi! use late nahin hona tha tumhari tarah.

then everyone finishes their breakfast and goes to thier respective places!


Prithvi also leaves for college!
when he comes out, the weather seems very wet! it was raining! the first rain of the season! he is really happy!

he takes his car out and goes to college! on the way at the traffic signal he stops his car!
he sees something amazing! he sees a beautiful girl dancing in the rain! he could not take his eyes off her! it is not that he never saw a girl but he never saw such a beauty with simplicity!
she is wearing pink salwar suit and is with her friend!

prithvi felt like the moment should never come to an end but his illusion broke! the signal gone green! the cars behind him is playing horn very loudly! suddnely he comes back to reality!


precap: 8 wonders in college, sanyo's entry!


thats it guys for today! hope u enjoy! i tried my level best to write this!
sorry guyz for the short update!
plz do leave ur precious comments!

awesome...fabulous and very very lovely
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
hey zoah..too gud jaan...hahh..prithvi sanyogita ko dekhte hi shayar ban gaya ..vaah..
n shona..i think prithvi sanyogita is anas-sheetal..coz rt n mugs collg me..naah...
well.zoah.,.batao na..prc -sanyo kon h
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: letsrockshona

by da way are prithvi and sanyo grown up in here... i mean anas and sheetal ya phir rajat aur mughda



its anas sheetal! rajat mughdha bhi hai as veer shera!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: veersherafan1

Wow, wonderful update sweety.U beautifully described the beauti of sanyo and that song .It's tood good.Sach mein prithvi looks too hot in black jeans and white shirt.Wait for next part.



thank u di! i will post it soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: letsrockshona


wow zoah u r too gud

this sounds mimdblowing...such a different ff.....it is fabulous...



thank u soooooooooooo much di!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: letsrockshona


awesome...fabulous and very very lovely



thanks once again! 😊

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