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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: anasrashid_fan

ha sahi kaha aapne di..........jaisa pita waise hi unke bacche😳.......smart n dashing😳😉



Thanks for agreeing kalyani sweetie!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: veersherafan1

Welcome di😳.Yes, di,I liked the lohri very much😳😳.It's too good 👏😳.



Thanks Rakhi dear for the appreciation sweetie!😳😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: meghaparti



Thanks Rakhi dear for the appreciation sweetie!😳😃

Welcome Megha di😳.
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Posted: 16 years ago


Its okk dear!😳😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
Ok Gals below is the Next Part of the Future Track Story Line....😳I hope U All Enjoy reading it ..Sorry gals its a short one next one will be really long....I promise!😃

Recap:

Sanyo starts singing.....
Nidiyaa rani aaye gi...Bachuooo ko sulaaye gaye....
Nidiyaa rani aaye gaye din kiii saari thakaan mitagaye........
meetain meetain sapne de jaye gaye...nidiyaa rani aaye gaye......
Need mein chanda mama aaye gaye...joh maango woh deh jaaye gaye....pariyoon ki saair karwaye gaye....aur sitaroon par nachwaye gaye...

Nidiyaan rani aaye gi...Bachuoo ko sulaye gaye....

As Sanyo finishes the song....she sees kids have dosed off to sleep & along with them PRC 2 sleeps ....Sanyo picks up both the kids turn by turn & lays them in their cot....& then she goes to PRC ...puts a sheet on him ...looks lovingly at him..& kisses him on the forehead & blows away the lamp near the side of his bed....& then she too joins him in the bed on the other side...She puts her head on PRC's chest & PRC too in sleep puts his arms around her... Sanyo then with a sweet smile on her face closes her eyes & goes off to sleep on PRC's chest!😳😃


Next Part:


Its early next morning...everyone in the palace is running around doing preparations for Pundir's wedding while Karnataki holding her ghungaroos in her hand is running to her dance practise hall room where she bumps into Chand just a few steps from her practise room....She is about to fall but Chand holds her in her arms tightly...Both their eyes meet ...get locked & lost in each other......After a while due to the noise around them Karnataki come back to her senses & tries freeing herself from Chand's grip....as she is about to go Chand says.....Tumhare naina.....uss kali raat ki tarah hai jisme mein kab ka doobh gaya hoon...tumhari kushboo tumhara sparsh har pal mujhe sirf yeah ehsaas karata hai ki tum sirf mere liye bani ho......Agar yeh pyaar hai toh haan mein tumse pyaar karta hoon ..bhaut pyaar karta hoon.....Karnataki smiles & blushes hearing Chand's words..She has her back towards him....& after Chand's confession towards her.... forces her to lower her head with shyness....She turns around with lower head & sits on her knees to pick up her Ghungaroo's..Chand with a wicked smile on his face too bends & helps Karnataki pick up her Ghungroo's....but instead of handling over the Ghungroos to her he holds her hand & asks her.....Kya tum bhi mujhse pyaar karti ho....He raises her her chin with the help of his hand....She looks deep into his eyes smiles shy's & runs away from there to practise room......Chand smiles to himself & turns around to find PRC & Sanyo staring at him.....Sanyo looks at PRC & walks towards Chand....Yeh kya ho raha tha devarji......Chand nervous & at loss of words...starts stammering... Bhabhi woh mein....Woh mein...Haan....Karnataki ki madat kara raha tha....aisa kuch nahi hai jaisa aap soch rahi hai....PRC too joins in & tells off Chand toh phir kaisa hai humme bhi toh batao.....Chand a little scared at PRC's looks....ZHe out of neverousness lowers his head & says PRC woh hum toh bas........& he leaves the place...saying mujhe kuch zaroori kaam yaad aa gaya.....Both PRC & Sanyo looks at each other & burst out laughing...Sanyo says to PRC..Tumhe nahi lagta humme humari iss sabse chote devar ji ka vivah bhi Pundir ke saath karwa dena chayeye...Agar aap aisa hi chahti hai Maharani ji toh aisa hi hoga..toh theekh hai aap Chand se baath kariye hum Karnataki se kare gaye....On the other hand Chand reached the place to see Karnataki practising...Karanataki out of joy is dancing to her fullest & remembering what Chand told her..as she keeps turning round & round she looses balance again & again lands up in the person's arms whom she had been dreaming all these days.....Out of fear of hurting herself she closes her eyes...but when she realises that a strong pair of arms were holding her she opens her eyes.....& discovers Chand right infront of her....Chand again says a few lines...Inn komal pairoon ko kast nah dejiye agar inhe zara sa bhi dard pahoocha toh woh dard seedha humare dil ko chu jata hai.....Hearing Chand's words..Karnataki is in tears.....She hugs him tightly........Chand too out of happiness hugs her back....Karnataki then asks Chand in his arms ..Kya aap sach mein humse itna pyaar karte hai Kavi Raj......Chand replies Apni jaan se bhi jyaada......Kya aap bhi humse pyaar karti hai...Karnataki....Karnataki out of shyness digs her face into Chand's chest & agrees saying huhhhhh bahut pyaar karte hai hum aapse..Shayad apni Jaan se bhi jyaada...😳😃

Precap:

PRC Speaks to Chand & Sanyo to Karnataki about getting them married along with Pundir & both agreeing to PRC & Sanyo's decision.....Arjun & Maya return to Delhi after the yatra & have a Funny moment with Veer & Kushboo in Delhi..... Vaishali along with Jaichand Nayantara Roopsundari & Vaishali's mother arrive in Delhi........Mehndi & Haldi Rasam's for Chand Pundir....Karnataki & Vaishali take place in Delhi Mehel....Loads of Romantic & Naughty Moments between PRC Sanyo, Samar Pratha, Chand Karnataki, Pundir & Vaishali......Ghori returns ...Jaichand & all PRC friends accompany him in the Last War before they live happily ever after....😳😃
Gals Pls. donot continue as I have still a lot of story telling left..Well the Next Update will be on coming Sunday 2nd August'09 by 1:30 AM mid-night !😳😃
Edited by meghaparti - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Gals I have put up a short update for this weekend..But its a promise next one would be a long one.....Pls. read & comment!😳😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Wow, wonderful update di👏.What a sweet and cute romantic update😳😊,Chand ka oh poem , wah wah wah👏👏👏.Very well written di.I loved this update😳.Post next part soon di😳😃.

Edited by veersherafan1 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: veersherafan1

Wow, wonderful update di👏.What a sweet and cute romantic update😳😊,Chand ka oh poem , wah wah wah👏👏👏.Very well written di.I loved this update😳.Post next part soon di😳😃.



Thanks Rakhi for liking it buddy....😳😃 Well in my personnel opinion the shayari I wrote on behalf of Chand was really bad.....😳😆

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: meghaparti



Thanks Rakhi for liking it buddy....😳😃 Well in my personnel opinion the shayari I wrote on behalf of Chand was really bad.....😳😆

Welcome di😳.No , di,It's really very very good poem.I loved those poem.Aapne bare khubsoorati se chand ka feeling explain kia do poem se😳😊.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: veersherafan1

Welcome di😳.No , di,It's really very very good poem.I loved those poem.Aapne bare khubsoorati se chand ka feeling explain kia do poem se😳😊.



Oh really u think so...Chalo then I will have to say thanks again on this!😳😆

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