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Posted: 11 years ago
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Firstly, this isn't exactly my story...
Sort of a copy cat work...adapted one...credit goes to Ramani Chandran,,,


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Part 1

Hearing what her sister just said, Pratigya was shocked n her already big eyes widened more...
How she could she? Coming from such a family, brought up with such values, how could she even think of this...now she has prepared herself to go ahead...!

Arushi,her sister, had always wanted richness..." there are so many nice things di...lot more has ome too than we hav known before...lwhy were we deprived of all that luxury, richness, happiness...all in one go...all of a sudden...I want them...I know we can't have our parents back..but these stuff...I want them...when..how?"

Pratigya used to console her.." baby...don't worry much, we will get there soon, we are educated, both earning...so it's all going to be alright"...further adds.." ndont forget, contentment is in itself a wealth"

" nah di...I am not asking for those expensive designer wear n those trendy fashion jewelleru or those smart gadgets...but at least a few good dresses...good decent pieces of jewellery, a mobile connection which I can use to my fullest n can afford those bills..."


Such convos between the sisters ends with the younger one playing a little prank or a joke..she brings her naughty side to get over the dullness.

Hmm..is she joking now too...just a prank to panic me and have a laugh? Pratigya thought and looked at her sister..but alas! She had a firm face with a forced grin...
No doubt she was asserting her point and not gonna backtrack, but her grin had a tinge of sadness...pratigya did not fail to notice this! But this sadness will stop her fom stooping so low?

"di...me going on this trip with boss is non stoppable...I have decided to go..n I will go..think of the money...don't keep such long faces..n give lengthy advices...just pls di..enuf...pls..."

"money isn't everything Arushi...and this is for that computer course hai na..I will give you...just wait for a year...maximum, I will arrange it for you..wateva I hav..earn...is for you n you know it"


"ohh di...again..I told u am going...n now don't start with our khandaan, sanskaar etc, they aren't gonna help me in anything...and I promise ..this SI the first n last time...I want this money..I will do the course...upon completion, I will be placed well n then I can live the way I want.. So don't upset urself over this"

"once...this just once will spoil ur entire life, jaanu..pls, and...and wat will ur Aman say...react for such a thing? Think...u r putting ur entire life at stake...think,,,think baby!...for heaven sake!"
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" my Aman!"... Arushi smirked.."he has to understand...if he does it's ok..if not..well I don't care much!" again a grin...again with a tinge of sadness...

Pratigya was exhausted...gav a long sigh. Arushi went off to sleep.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2
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The elder one was umable to sleep and was lost in thoughts...their past...the rich n loving parents..their education..chow their mom was both loving n strict...taught them right conduct, behavior and values...how one fatal accident took both of their parents' lives...how they were estranged at the age of. 16 n 15 respectively, lw they were looted off their property...

One good thin happened was their father made a few investments ...whose returns helpd the girls finish off their graduation. Though it did not help them to do wat they wanted..but till at least Pratigya completed her second year of college, the money helped them for their Khaana, Peena Aur padhaai. With little monetary help from a very few friends left, she completed her degree and did not hesitate to take up the first job that came her way. She took care of Arushi's education, not just that...her sister became the existence of her living. With Arushi also getting into a job, they were able to pay off those debts and lead a simple and independent life.

Pratigya planned to do a corporate secretaryship course to boost her qualification levels, it's then when Arushi came up with her computer course idea which she imagined would land her in Jacob that would give her what she wants. Pratigya as always gave up her plans and supported her sister and both started saving the money. But despite a year's savings, they weren't able to save even half of the course fee. Arushi was already runnin gout of patience and was cribbing about it n now has chosen this cheap route to make money.

Pleasure trip with boss..Che...the Thot itself gave her a puking feeling..." boss...my foot"...Praitgya thought,,,."so hat he is rich..successful, stooping so low to take such a young innocent girl for his pleasures ans spoiling her life!"

She payed to God...to help her save her sister from this horrendous venture. After a long thought process, decided to meet the originator of this plan n seek his help To stop this trip.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hami welcome to the FF world... loving it... Thanx... Hows u and children??? Regards t them...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Babs...I guess you wud hav heard abt RC...kathai ya suututen...
:))))

Kids r fine...sooo much of workkk :(
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting ff di..plz continue..and waiting for krishna 's entry..😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good start di..nice story.look forward to hero's entry!update soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 3
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Next morning, she woke up ..planning n rehearsing what n how she should approach her sister's MD to stop the trip. He should at least be in fifties..so can tell him that she is like her daughter and can't do this...if he is really human..he for sure will concede..otherwise can threaten that she woulD inform his wife about this ghatiya iraada yen filled so called pleasure trip. He would be left with no option then.

Not giving a clue to hefr sister about the step she gonna take, she moved that little house with all the plans running in her mind. But Arushi guessed pretty easily that her di is upto something to foil the plans. She didnot much care about it though. She had made up her mind, she was sure nothing or no one could stop her.

Meeting him during office hours might invite arushi's attention, so Pratigya decided to execute her plans after office hours. Do she took permission of an hour from her Office, reached Arushi's place around 5 pm and waited in a hiding till all the employees moved out. After making herself sure about the staff being out, she rushed into the office. She looked around to find MD's room. Ohh... There she found a door which was adorned with a elegantly decorated plate reading 'Managing Director'. When she was about to reach the door, she was stopped by a man who looked like an attendant.

"excuse me, madam. Anything I could do for you. But if you are here to meet anyone, am sorry, everyone has left already"
"Haan..nah..no..actually..am here to meet your boss"
"ohh sorry madam, Krishna sir doesn't meet anyone at this hour. But by any chance, do you have any appointment fixed? "
" no..but I wanna meet him now..."
"nothing can be done now madam ..you can meet him tomorrow 11 am..that's when he usually see visitors"
" ohh pls..understand..I need meet him now and it can't be delayed."

Saying this Pratigya was about to rush to the doors, just then the door of that MD room opened and " what's the noise here, Vinayak?"..asked a great manly voice.
Pratigya turned around only to get shocked to see a tall, dark, handsome young man in his late twenties. For a sec, she felt she lost all her hope...what wit that father- daughter talks...then?

Vinayak" sir, this madam is insisting on meeting you despite my reiterating that she cannot do so now"
"ohh.."Krishna ran a glance over her..a smile ran into his face automatically.

"is the world gonna end by 11 am tomorrow?"Krishna asked Pratigya..."hmm?"

"no, but tmrw morning I wouldn't bebable to come" said Pratigya trying hard to bring an expressionless voice n make an expressionless face.
Teasingly Krishna" what if I say that I won't meet u now?"
"
Pratigya looked upto him ...her mind was racing..she queued up all that she wanna say and God this man shouldn't leave without meeting her now...
Collecting all her thoughts, she looked into his eyes.."then you might really regret it later"..said she...what else..is it really easy to spoil a young lady's life and stay peacefully thereafter? She thought.

"hmm hmm" now Krishna had a wide smile...handing a key to the helper, he said" take out my car, run the Ac n stay there..I will be there in 5 minutes"..he moved away.

Krishna gestured Pratigya to come in. After seating himself his chair, he asked her to sit in one of the chairs for visitors.

" so lemme also knowabout the impending danger that gonna loom over me at morning 11 o'clock tmrw."

Pratigya didnot know how and where to start n thus sat in silence. Losing his patience beyond a point, he said " listen, to tell who you are, why have you come etc, the time I give is 5 minutes. Don't think I can sit forever like this..allowing my car battery to drain"

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End of part 3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i enjoy reading your stuff... last year, i remember ... you are very good!!
please continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this is awesome 😛
i can't wait to read the next part .. great concept.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful FF👏

Looking forward to reading the next chapters

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