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Posted: 10 years ago
thank you all for the support on this ff here is the next part


Part 13

Hello I'm Pratigya, I'm here to see my father he was taken in earlier today, I'm his daughter please I need to see him"

"one minute ma'am" the woman at the desk got up and went over to talk to someone, Pratigya saw her talk to some man he shook his head.

"sorry ma'am we have strict permission from your father's wife that you are not allowed anywhere near him.

"huh what.. why.. I please he is my papa, he will want to see me.." she said her voice almost breaking.

"ma'am I'm sorry there is nothing we can do for you, unless she grants permission"

"can you at least tell me how he is doing what is his condition?"

"sorry it's confidential we are not allowed to give those details out" Pratigya felt like her world was crushing what sort of game is life playing with her. She sat down on the chair she had been sitting there the whole night, in hope that someone she knew, would give her some information. She sat on the chair thinking about how this happened, how her father came to this state, what exactly happened.. but her mind kept coming up with a blank. It was 7am. Her phone rang it was Krishna. She attended it "Pratigya I need you to work early say get here for 8am and finish at 11pm? me and Preeti have got to attend a dinner.. sorry I know its short notice"

"I'll do it!"

"you will?.. ok great thanks" he was surprised by her quick response. She cut the call, and was about to leave, when she saw kaki come she got up from the seat

"any news?" with hope in her eye she hoped it was good, kaki shook her head.

"uhh I wish I can see him him, I haven't seen him once, I have been here the whole night and not once I got a chance to see how he is doing" she tried to hold her tears back but they flowed.

"This Kaushailya why is she being so difficult" she wiped Pratigya's tear, and held her hands in hers

"don't cry beta, I will see what I can do ok?" Pratigya nodded.

"I have to work so I have to leave now, can you call me if you can even convince her to let me see him just once its enough." She sniffled.

"I will try my level best and if it happens I will call your cell immediately"

"thanks" Pratigya took her bag and left for work. She didn't even have a chance to change or even eat breakfast she was worried sick about her, father, and now she didn't know what to do about it. She parked up and rang the door bell to Krishna's mansion. Sight for sore eyes non other than Preeti opened the door.

"you're here earlier" Pratigya walked in not saying anything, I must tell Krishna give to give you a raise on your punctuality " mocked Preeti.. "Siya is upstairs and Krishna told me your staying till late, don't worry you will get double salary. She turned around to see she was indeed talking to herself, Pratigya was gone. "that was rude" Preeti shook her head. Pratigya didn't eat any food most the day, every chance she got she checked her phone to see if she got a message but there was nothing. It was approaching 7pm. Krishna came and saw her, she was in a bottle green sari, holding Siya to her chest patting her to sleep. For a fleeting moment his mind compared Preeti and Pratigya and their maternal instincts. In his mind Pratigya emerged the winner. stop staring at them' Preeti came into the hall. "let's go"

"ok you both have fun" he came close to Pratigya and sat next to her and kissed Siya's head, Pratigya didn't even flinch it was like she was in another world. "take care" he said giving her shoulder a squeeze, her mind was on her papa she didn't think about anything else not even him. Krishna was confused.. "and Pratigya a quick note dadi said Siya some nights comes out of her crib so just keep an eye on that" she nodded as a response.

"come on sweetheart we will be late" said Preeti.

"We will be off now" he said to her, Pratigya looked in his direction but he didn't get the reaction he usually did she seemed miles away. what did you expect you spoke to her so rudely yesterday' Later that night Pratigya put Siya to sleep upstairs, and sat downstairs, still no call, finally a call, it's a private number.

"hello..Ayush? hi.. yeah how are you, yah, you ok?..yes I'm still working for him.. (tut) I need the money.. I know.. yes.. maybe but not this week I'm busy.. ok will call you later.. ya..bye" she cut the call, she had so much on her plate, ex-boyfriends were something her mind did not need right now. They said 10pm and still no one is home and I really need to try at the hospital again . She sat down on the sofa holding her phone. Shortly the door opened. "I'm exhausted pour me a large one" said Preeti as she walked through the door. "oh my god Krishna!" Preeti pointed to the staircase, "Siya" he shouted and raced up the stairs and grabbed her..

"shh it's ok beta, I'm here na its ok" he calmed down a crying Siya. "where the hell is Pratigya!".

"Maharani is a sleep on the sofa" Holding Siya securely he raced down the stair Krishna was shocked at this.

"Pratigya! He yelled, Her eyes flew open, she sat up. She saw Krishna holding Siya and Preeti a few steps away from him.

"sleep in your own time, we don't pay you for this!" shouted Preeti. she was lost for word

"sir I ... , she quickly got up from the sofa.

"I don't want to hear it, lucky we got home otherwise who knows what could've happened to her. He was rocking Siya, who was still not settling. "I even reminded you that she is crawling out of her crib, to take extra care"

"oh my god Siya" she covered her mouth shocked at what she just heard. "Siya I'm so sorry beta" she went to take Siya from Krishna but he didn't let her.

"Preeti take her upstairs.. and you, if you weren't up for it why did you say yes?!"

"I... I" he took her phone from her hand..

"Ayush? too busy chatting to your ex to care..

"what no it's not like that"

"Pratigya you have been extremely careless you leave me no choice.." Krishna give me my phone someone could've rang me about papa'

"you will have to find another job"

"ok, can I have my phone?" he did not expect this response at all.

"ok?" did you hear me Pratigya your out of the job?"

"phone?" she held her hand out for it, he gave the phone to her. She took her bag and left the house without a glance back. Her mind was in overdrive what the hell was happening.. she sat down in the car. What Krishna just fired me? It just sank in now. "I could lose papa and not even get a chance to see him for the last time, I will be all alone in this world, with no job, no family no home?" the thoughts were daunting. She drove unsteadily and reached the hospital. "kaki!" she called. "anything?.."

"I'm sorry I tried my best.. she won't budge" Pratigya looked so tired and worn out she sat on the chair, lost of hope, she closed her eyes to take it all in.

"anything about papa any news.." she asked in a small voice.

"beta I did find out but its not good news..he is in a coma, doctor's are not sure of anything. Pratigya face lost all colour. She couldn't believe this was happening when did life take the worst turn.

*

Krishna?"

"what?"

"where is Pratigya?"

"not here..and your going to have to find a new babysitter, she's been dismissed.

"what you did this without informing me?" how are we going to find a babysitter on such short notice.

"I will not pardon Siya's life when its in danger."

"but what about me my social life sure it in danger without that madam around to look after your laadli"

"enough Preeti" the bell rang. "I'll be upstairs" Sargam opens the door.

Gauri came in a rush.

"Gauri?"

"yeah Krishna, have you seen or heard from Pratigya.

"no not since last night, she is out of the job?"

"what why..

"you know what she did she fell asleep on the job, how careless I was shocked as I thought she is so good with Siya but lately I don't know its like she isn't there, the lights are on but no one is home"

"Oh god, I'm so worried about her I just got off a plane and I find out not only her dad is in a coma but she hasn't even been allowed to see him"

"what.. her dad's in coma oh when did this happen?"

"don't know but what I do know is she hasn't slept in 2 days she is worried sick about him, it's so unfair Pratigya is the nicest person I know so full of life, but right now she is going through a tough phase.

"oh god and I made it worst by firing her"

"she did a double shift she needs the money but bechari is worried sick, and her step mum is a nasty piece of work she won't let her anywhere near him, I'm worried sick where is she no one has heard from her.

"Right come with me we will find, her tell me any place she may like or would go to maybe as a child or just to be alone"

"yes let's go" without any words further Krishna went to search for her, Gauri in tow.


precap:

Pratigya walked along a cliff.. "maa why didn't you just take me with you and my sister, I hate my life, there is nothing worth living for, papa too is taken from me, I can't see him so he might as well be gone.. tears streamed down her face. "Anything I do just goes wrong, maybe its me I maybe cursed I ruin everything. Maa I wish I could see you again.


tbc

Edited by Khushi96 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update di bt pratigya is crying and me too 😭 poor she and krishna why he is rude to her and now hope pratigya will nt jump and gauri and krishna reach there on time. 😭 update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update ... n shocking precap... hope K reaches n stops her just in time 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful but a sad update.😭

Poor P I feel so bad for her, she is going through so much😭. Gauri is right P is so sweet she wouldn't hurt anyone. I'm so glad that she has such a good friend in Gauri👏

Can't stand her stepmother how could she not let P see her father. 😡

K will find P just in time I have no doubt about that. I think he may also with his influence get P to see her father.😉

Update soon. 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update😊
update soon dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update. Poor P .Please Update soon dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanks everyone for the comments and encouragement to cont this ff
Here is the next part

Part 2 of 13

Gauri and Krishna were on the road, he drove keeping his eyes peeled of any sighting of her, so far nothing.

"when was the last time you spoke with her?"

" two days back, she was going to her papa's house, she wore green sari, that's her papa's favourite sari its her mum's" she smiled.

"that explains it, she was in that same sari when she came over, she didn't sleep all night and on top of that I shouted at her..i'm an idiot"

"well I won't disagree"

"but I found her phone miscall from Ayush"

"Ayush is old news, they broke up long back Pratigya isn't interested in him trust me"

"oh.. so she is interested in anyone right now?"

"wait drive back that way I remembered something"

Pratigya walked along a cliff.. "maa why didn't you just take me with you and my sister, I hate my life, there is nothing worth living for, papa too is taken from me, I can't see him so he might as well be gone.. tears streamed down her face. "Anything I do just goes wrong, maybe its me I maybe cursed I ruin everything. Maa I wish I could see you again.

"there she is?" pointed Gauri

"oh my goodness what is she doing near a cliff side. " Krishna yelled.

"she isn't thinking straight..hurry" Gauri said in a panicky voice. Krishna hit the escalator, taking a turn.

"can she swim?"

"um... said Gauri in uncertain tone.

"my god seriously you call her your best friend and you don't even know a simple thing about her."

"wait..park here.. it's her, she's going to jump hurry please!.." Gauri said in a frantic tone. Krishna jumped out of the car. "wait here" he slammed the door.

"maa I'm coming" she said closing her eyes near the edge.

"Pratigya" Krishna ran "no!" he heard the splash.. and with all his energy he jumped in after her.. he looked around and spotted her fairly fast,luckily she was floating above water. He pulled her out of there and carried her back to shore, he gently placed her on the sand, Pratigya?" he patted her face. "please be ok.." he straightened her on the ground and started cpr.. 1,2 3 ...

"Is she ok?" he ignored Gauri's question as he himself had no answer.. "call an ambulance now! He ordered she nodded.

"come on Pratigya, he held her nose closed and pinched her chin down, breathing air into her as he gave her mouth to mouth.

"come on, come on...please" he kept checking her pulse.

"Gauri go wait at the top and tell them to hurry" she nodded..

"come on.. darling.. please" he could feel his eyes moist, he felt a cold shutter, from the water he was drenched in and the thoughts when she didn't respond.

"please.. please..be ok please" her eyes opened widely followed by a strong cough, the water spilling from her mouth.

"oh god thank god" he lifted her in seating position and rubbed her back

"your ok.. hmm.. it's fine" he pulled her to his chest. One hand on her cheek and the other on her back comforting her. He felt relieve wash over him.

"why.. why" she mumble against his wet clothes, he tilted her back holding her shoulders so he could hear her properly. Why did you save me, I w-wanted to die" she sobbed.. "I don't want to live anymore" she cried..

"no!.. don't say things like that please why do you want to end your life?"

"it's easy for you, you have your dadi, you have people in your life, a life of security me I just have my papa and he might be taken from me.. "i- i.." she struggled to speak "I might lose him too and you.. you didn't care you fired me in a second. Like I would ever.."

"listen?" he said taking her in his arms again.

"no!" she sniffled shifting back.. He felt the water drip from his own wet hair he quickly, ran a hand through it.

"like i- she struggled to with words, "Like - I would ever let anything happen to Siya, I love her, you know how much and still you thought I was ...that hurt more than anything else sir" she wiped her nose. He looked at her vulnerable state and was feeling like the worst person in the world.

"Pratigya I I'm so sorry, I didn't think," she avoided his gaze looking to the side of the ground, hugging her knees.

I, please I'm so sorry.. I will tell you a million times if it makes you feel better.." she looked up.

"you know my papa could be gone and that will be it, I won't have anyone anymore, he looked at her eyes.. he could see so much pain in them. "I don't have anyone anymore.." she looked down, then up again. "no one" she said in small teary tone, she sighed hard, followed by a deep swallow.

"no don't say that.. you have me" he pulled her close against his chest comforting her again.. "you will always have me and that is a promise" he kissed her forehead and she sagged against him her eyes closed. He felt her motionless "Pratigya?.. he moved the wet hair strands out of her face. "Hey" he patted her face gently.

"Gauri!" he shouted. The ambulance people came down and told them to place her on the stretcher. "Is she ok?" after some examination, they nodded Krishna and Gauri exchanged a look of relief. The ambulance left and Krishna gave Gauri a lift to the hospital. They both wait for some update. A doctor comes out, Krishna springs out of his seat. "is she ok?"

"she has a pulse but its weak" don't worry we have stabilized her she will wake up very soon, we have put her on a drip. "tell me when did she last eat some food?" Krishna thought hard but honestly he didn't know what to say. "I can't say as I don't know"

"ok well she is out of danger"

"that's great" he replies, his phone rings.. "excuse me" he replies attending the call. "hello ,yes sir.. today but we said tomorrow.. yes ok.. fine I'm coming" he said cutting the call.

" I have to go but let me know when she is awake?" Gauri nodded. Krishna left from there. Krishna went on to attend an important meeting, then came home.

*

"Finally your home did you look into another babysitter.. "I tell you Krishna I can't do this every day" she said carrying Siya to him. "I don't know what makes you human if you are even?" he said taking Siya from her.

"excuse me?"

"its all about me me me, think about someone else for a change like Pratigya"

"she quit not our problem"

"poor girl tried to end her life today!" he yelled.

"what? Why because she quit and now is making us feel bad how weak, are we supposed to feel sorry for her?"

"Enough! I've had it up to here, I'm going for some fresh air" he said handed Siya back to her.

"what but.. what am I suppose do I have plans.." Krishna just slammed the door ignoring her.

*

Krishna came near her ward, she was sitting up, he could see Gauri talking mostly.

"how is the patient." He said walking in seeing her in her hospital gown . Pratigya sees him, Gauri gets up. "I should get going I will be back tomorrow,ok take care" Pratigya nodded. Krishna came into the room holding flowers. They both looked at each other, not exchanging any words. He was lost for words he was feeling guilty he drove her to take her own life. She saw him look helpless, she didn't blame him for what happened. "are those for me?" she said breaking the silence. He looked at the bouquet in his hands. "yes, they are" he walked forward "its to brighten up the place" her lips broke into a slight smile.

"there lovely, you can place them there" he went over and did just that, then turned back. "How are you feeling?" she coughed. "ok I think"

"I'm sorry" they said in unison.

"No Pratigya, I'm sorry" he said sitting next to her on the edge of the bed.

"I should not have fired you like that, I feel so bad for doing so.." he says looking down.

"no sir don't" she placed her hand on his. "it wasn't your fault please stop blaming yourself" but he couldn't help it, the mental image of her sobbing her heart out to him this morning was torture, she removed her hand "I was at a low place, very low that-"

"about your dad I heard Gauri filled me in"

"hmm.." she went quiet, knotting her fingers. "Listen to me" she looked up. "I know you feel like you don't matter and that it doesn't make a difference whether you're here or not".. He gently held her face. "but it does Pratigya"

"really?" he nodded trying to convince her.

"you make a difference, you have touched lives" she looked down just listening to his voice she knew what he was doing and it was sweet. "I know you have touched Siya's, life and dadi's" she smiled.. "ahem and mine" she looked up from her lashes.

"yours"

"of course, you have a lovely aura that makes everyone fall in love with you"

"Visiting hours are over" said a ward lady. He removed his hands.

"ok, give us a minute please" she nodded and left the room. Krishna turned back to her.

" ok I will go now, and don't worry you're not fired, come back when you're ready to work and don't worry in your absence you will still get paid full wages. That was a relief to hear, "thank you" she replied.

"my pleasure" he smiled getting up, "I will see you tomorrow bright and early" he said squeezing her hand and she nodded holding on to it and then released it quickly . He turned once more "Sleep well" he said in a soft tone.

"I can't sleep without Mr Minto" she replied.. "but I will try"

"Gauri didn't bring him?" she shook her head "she forgot" she looked down. she is one forgetful person' thought Krishna

"I'm sure she will tomorrow" Pratigya nodded and Krishna left her room. He was driving home and then decided to take a u turn. "Krishna you're here at this time?" she said yawning.

"yeah I know its late sorry, I just want to grab something from Pratigya's room..

"oh" she shuffled her feet, "usually no boys are allowed in this house but my parents are not back till tues so its ok come"

"thanks" he rushed in and grabbed the stuffed toy.

"Mr Minto I forgot she can't sleep without him"

"thanks" he said taking the toy and leaving. Gauri shut the door. He parked up outside the hospital. "Sir visiting hours are over"

"I just need a..

"Krishna Raizada its you na?"

"yes it is,

"sure go through" thank god someone allowed me' even though Krishna was a vip type of person, he only used it if necessary he never had the habit of flashing his cash around and being arrogant about being a millionaire He raced to her ward, then slowly peered his head in the room, it was dark, but night light was on as she has darkness phobia. He took Mr Minto out of the bag, and placed him next to her, she was asleep on her side, her face peaceful, angelic like glow, he found his thumb begin to caress her cheek. She stirred a little, and he removed his hand quickly, he didn't want to wake her, she found Mr Minto and cuddled up to him. Krishna smiled at the sight and left from there.

*

Krishna came through the front door.

Poor Pratigya, papu take me to see her, I really hope she is feeling better"

"yes dadi I will take you but right now I think she needs to rest" dadi nodded in agreement.

"We will go tomorrow and I will take this little princess" he said picking up Siya "for a nice visit", Siya cooed.

"Great idea papu I'm sure Pratigya will be happy to see her"

"yeah and I also want to erase my mistake" he said with deep thought.

"I wish I had been here, I'm sure Preeti didn't hesitate to fire her too" He wish that were true but the truth was he was too hasty and he knew it.

"Preeti just wants to get a replacement but I told Pratigya we will keep her on" He said giving Siya to dadi.

"I'm happy papu, Pratigya is a lovely girl and Siya is very taken to her. He nodded.

"he is" he smiled.

The next morning Pratigya wake up.. "Mr Minto?" she said taking the teddy. "who dropped him off.. obviously its Gauri" she got up and went into the washroom, shortly she came out.. Gauri was sitting on the chair, with a smile Pratigya grabbed her teddy, "Gauri Mr Minto" she said with a smile. "thank you" Gauri laughed to herself

"what's funny?" she asked not getting her humour.

"not my credit, your saying thanks to the wrong person" Pratigya looked confused..

"ok.. who then?"

"Ayush"

"Ayush?" she said in disbelief, then she looked ahead. There he was with Hemant Maya and Sonali at the door way. Gauri went to the door and greeted all of them.

" What is this yaar, said Sonali hugging her.. Pratigya saw all friends one by one, as they came to her bedside.

"babes.. you scared us all... said Ayush and he hugged her. . she looked at Gauri why did she call Ayush too!' she cut the hug really short as she called Maya forward.. They all asked her how she is feeling.. then Pratigya's breakfast came she didn't want to eat in front of everyone... she held Mr Minto close.

"thanks I guess" she said to Ayush.

"what for?" he said in confusion.. standing at the far end of the room against the wall.

"you know for..

"Pratigya, no.." said Gauri, trying to hint to her, all eyes were on Gauri. "guys, I think we should go get some coffee and come back.. what say?"

"yeah great idea" said Hemant they all said bye to Pratigya.. once they were out of sight Pratigya took her breakfast tray forward, Gauri came back in the room.

"do you need any help.. Pratigya shook her head, she was quite independent an could feed herself.

"oh Gauri who bought Mr Minto?"

"hmm? Oh yeah. Krishna, he came by yesterday late night and picked him up from my house"

"sir did.. seriously?"

"yeah, how sweet right?"

"yeah I guess" she replied with a little smile to herself he said he would visit first thing in the morning.. where is he then?'


Precap:

Krishna comes by the ward, and hears laughter, he peers his head and sees Pratigya surrounded by her friends including Ayush, he is hesitant to enter.

Edited by Khushi96 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update khushi..thank god pratigya us all right bt why aayush is back ...and hope krishna didnt take it wrong.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful Update👏

It was sad that P tried to take her life, but loved that K was the one that saved her. It was so sweet that he went and got Mr. Minto so she had a good night sleep.

Looks like their feelings for each other are getting stronger.

Hope K comes in the room and the her friends don't prevent him especially Ayush.

Update soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update👏
Waiting, who's gonna confess their feeling first.
Hoping that u'll give some dhamaka epi for new yr

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