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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome...lovely...👏...
krish is too much...he booked a bus for two of them...😆interesting......kahin pure TN ko hi na le chalen poo madam ji...
pls cont...we want full kriya romantic moment...close moment..😳.after all its thier holllimun trip na.😍

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Snigdhakhanam

I just lubalub part 2lallantopcarry onlooking forward for part 3


Thx snigdha...part 3 updated...hope u will like it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Veena.S

Part2 also lovely... So Krish bookin whole Bus 😆 Interestin

thx veena...hmm krish booking whole bus...interesting na..!!! 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thx simmi..
Glad u liked my work..!!!
Part 3 updated...Hope u will like it...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 4


KRIYA IN BUS


Haweli ke baahar pehle se hi white color ki car khadi hui thi...
Krishna aur pratigya car ke pass pahunche...driver ne unse saaman liya aur car ke andar rakhwaya...
Krishna aur pratigya dono car ke andar baith gaye aur driver se bus stand chalne ko kaha...driver ne car start kar di...

Thodi hi der me driver ne car ko bus stand pahuncha diya...chandu bus stand par pehle se hi tha..
Krishna aur pratigya dono car se utre aur chandu ko dekhte hi uske pass pahunch gaye

Krishna-"ae chandua kaha hai hamri BUS...???
Chandu(BUS ki taraf ishara karte hue)-"uu dekho bhaiya...uu rahi tumri bus...ekdum luxury BUS hai...ap dono aaram se sote sote jaoge..."
Krishna-"Acha..!!! Are wah re chandua...tum to bahut badiya intezam kiye ho...tumne to dil khush kar diya!!!
Chandu-" Are bhaiya ap ye ka keh rahe hain!!! Ye to hamra faraz tha..ab aap aur bhabhi sath me ghumne khatir jaye rahe hain...to kahe badiya intezam nahi karte!!!
Pratigya-"Hame sach me bahut khushi hai ki tum hamare krishna ke dost ho...tum hamesha hamari madad karte ho...hum jitna bhi tumhara shukriya ada kare..wo kam hai.."
Chandu-"bhabhi ap ab hamein sharmina kar rahi hain,.ap logo k liye ham jon kucho karte hai apna samajhkar karte hain...isme kucho kehne wali bat nahi hai.."
Krishna-" Acha...chadua ab ham chalte hai thik hai..!!! Peeche se haweli ka dhyan rakhna..kisi ko bhi kono bhi chiz ki jarurat ho ...lakar de dena...wese ye baat tumse kehne ki jarurat nahi he baki ham jante hai to ache se sab sambhal lewo..."
Chandu-" Thik hai bhaiya ap jaiye ham sab dekh lenge...aur wahan pahunch kar hame phone jarur kar dena..."
Krishna-"Thik hai ham kar denge phone..."

Krishna aur chandu ek dusre se gale milte hai...
Chandu apni bike start karke wahan se nikal jata hai..
Krishna aur pratigya bus ke pass pahunch jate hain...car driver dono ka saman lekar aa raha tha...driver ne bus ke andar chadkar saman ko andar rakh diya...driver bus se neeche utar gaya...aur krishna aur pratigya bus ke andar chad gaye...bus ke andar chadte hi krishna aur pratigya ki aanke mano bahar aa gayi ho...aur dono ka muh khula ka khula reh gaya ...
Krishna-"babu...ye sab ka hai!!!! Ham to kabo sapne me bhi nahi soch sakte the ki chandua aisa intezam karega...hum to use bebkoof samajhte the baki uu to matlab itna badiya intezam kiya hai..."
Pratigya-"chandua bhaiya tumhare sache dost hai...wo tumhare sath rehte hai...tumhare sath khate pite hai...tumhare sath rehkar bhala koi bebkoof ho sakta hai...wo sab jante hai ki tumhe kya acha lagta hai aur kya nahi..."
Krishna-"babu...ham to tumhe surprize dena chahte the...yahan to chandua hi hamka surprize de dis..."
Pratigya-"Agar wo tumhe es baare me pehle hi bata dete to tumhare chehre par ham jo khushi dekh rahe hai...wo kaise hame dekhne milti..."
Krishna-"ee baat to hai babu...ham ye sab dekhkar itna khush hai ki ham tumka bata nahi sakte lekin haan tumka apni khushi aaj es bus ke andar mehsoos jarur karayenge..."
Pratigya krishna ki bat ka matlab ache se samajh jati hai...aur wo sharma jati hai

End of part 4

Chandu ne krishna aur pratigya ko kya surprise diya tha...ye batayenge agle part me...
Part 5 is coming soon...
Edited by abhishek_kriyaa - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 5


KRIYA NE MANAYI BUS ME SUHAGRAAT


BUS ke andar ek chhota sa bed dala hua tha...bed ke upar phoolo ki pankhudiyan bikhari hui thi...bed ke neeche phoolon ki pankhudiyon se 'WELCOME' likha hua tha...aur side me hi 2 logo ke liye dining-table rakhi hui thi aur uske upar kuchh candles rakhi hui thi...

Krishna ye sab nazara dekh raha tha...tabhi achanak BUS driver ne BUS start kar di..aur pratigya ka balace bigad gaya...pratigya girne hi wali thi ki krishna ne pratigya ko kaskar pakadkar sambhal liya...dono ek dusre ki aankho me es kadar kho gaye ki unhe kisi bhi chiz ka hosh nahi tha...

Thodi der me hi BuS highway par aa gayi...

Krishna-" babu...ye sab nazara dekhkar na hamka lagta he ki chandu ne poora hotel lakar ee Bus me rakh diya...yahan har ek chiz hamare andar itna josh bhar rahi he ki ka bataye...!!!"

Pratigya-"krishna...ham bhi ye sab dekhkar itne surprised hain ki ham to ye sab soch rahe hain ki chandu bhaiya ne akele ye sab kaise manage kar liya.???

Krishna-"Babu yar tum sochti bahut ho...tumka kucho bhi sochne ki jarurat nahi he...!!"

Pratigya-" Par krishna ham to..."

Krishna pratigya ke hoto par ungli rakhkar uska muh band kar deta hai...

Krishna-" ab kucho nahi bolna..aaj ham bas ee bistar par tumre pyar ke saagar me dubna chahte hai"

Pratigya(krishna ki aankho me aankhe dalte hue)-"Tum kabhi nahi sudhroge..."

Krishna-" Aise kaise sudhar jayen !! Janti ho babu Jab tum hamre saath hoti ho na to hamre andar ek bacheni si hone lagti hai...aisa lagta hai ki jaise ham tumre pass khinche chale ja rahen hai...!!! Babu...tumre saath bhi esa kucho hota he ka...???"

Pratigya-"haan krishna!!! Hamare sath bhi ye hota he...pata hai krishna...jab bhi tumhara dil dhadkata hai to hamara bhi dil dhadkta hai...wo esliye kyunki ham dono ke dil ek dusre se jude hue hai..."

Krishna-"agar hamri dhadkan band ho gayi to..."

Pratigya krishna ke muh par haath rakhkar use chup hone ke liye kehti hai

Pratigya-"krishna...!!! Bhagwan na kare kabhi aisa ho...agar tumhe kuch bhi ho gaya to hum bhi mar jayenge..."

Krishna aur pratigya ek dusre ki bahon me aa jate hai...krishna pratigya ko bed tak le jata hai...

Kuch der me hi raat ka waqt ho gaya tha...
Dono raat bhar pyar me dubkar so chuke the

End of part 5

Precap of part 6
Krishna aur pratigya ne nainital me ki khoob sari masti...aur krishna ne khada kiya ek naya hungama..

Part 6 coming soon...
Edited by abhishek_kriyaa - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 6


KRIYA NE KI NAINITAL ME MASTI


BUS NainiTal pahunch chuki thi aur Thandi hawaon ke saath krishna aur pratigya ka nainital ka safar shuru ho gaya tha...

Krishna-" ye dekho babu !! Ye aa gawa nainital...kitna acha mausam hai yahan...yahan to honneymoon manane ka alag hi maza hai...ka kehti ho???"

Pratigya-"hum jante hai krishna...esliye to hum yahan aye he..ham yahan pehle bhi aa chuke hai...!!"

Krishna-"ka baat kar rahi ho!!! Tum yahan kab aayi???

Pratigya-"collage me ek baar hamara 8 ladkiyon ka group nainital aaya tha bas tabhi aaye the...khub masti ki thi hamne.."

Krishna-"Acha!! Ye baat hai to eska matlab hamri babu sab jagah pehle se ghumi hui he.."

Pratigya-"Nahi krishna!!! Hum nainital ke alawa kahin nahi gaye...wo nainital bhi ham esiliye gaye the kyunki hamari saheliyon ne apni apni kasam de di esiliye jana pada.."

Krishna-"Chalo chhodo un baaton ko...ab tum hamre saath ayi ho...to hamre saath maza karo...aur ek baat baye dete he ki es baar tumka ee nainital ka safar hamesha yad rahega..kabo bhi nahi bhool pawo kahe se ki tum hamre saath ho...ham ee wala honneymoon itna yaadgar banayenge ki janmo janmo tak yad rahega.."

krishna ki baato ko sunkar pratigya ki aankho me khushi ke aansoo aa jate hain...aur wo krishna ko apni bahon me le leti hai...

Pratigya-"krishna ham sirf tumhare saath rehna chahte hai...tumhare saath ka har ek pal hamare liye yaadgar rahega.."

Krishna-" Babu aaj tumne ee jo baat ki he na usse hamre man ko bahut hi acha lag raha he..ab to nainital ghumne ka aur bhi maja ayega..."

Krishna BUS driver ko kisi hotel par rukne ke liye kehta hai

Krishna-"Babu ham pehle fresh ho jaye tab ache se naintal ghumenge.,.."

Pratigya-"Haan ..ye thik rahega.."

Bus driver ne Hotel 'Monark' par Bus rok di...

Krishna-"Aa jao babu...hotel aaye gawa...ek kaam karte hai abhi saaman yahin rehne dete hain...pehle wahan puch lete he ki kamra khali he ki nahi..."
Pratigya-"Haan krishna ye to bilkul sahi kaha tumne ..pehle pata kar lete hai..."

Dono Bus se neeche utre...dono ko utarte hi thand lagne lagi.

Krishna-"yaar babu yahan to bahut hi thanda hai...itna thand to aaj tak apne allahabad me kabo bhi nahi padi..."

Pratigya-"Haan krishna ...yahan thand esiliye jyada padti hai kyunki ye ek hill station hai.."

Krishna-" ee hill station ka hota hai...??"

Pratigya-" pahadi kshetra jo hote hai...unko hill station kaha jata hai.."

Krishna-" Acha babu...ham samajh gaye...aur ee bhi jan gaye ki agli baar esi kono jagah jayenge...to pehle se hi ham garam kapde lekar chalenge.."

Pratigya-" ham ye baat jante the aur ham esiliye pehle se hi garam kapde saath lekar aaye hain..."

Krishna-"ee to tum sahi ki ho yaar...baki pehle ham hotel ke andar chalte hain...yahan thodi der aise aur khade rahe na to hamri barf (ice) ban jayegi.."

Pratigya(masti karte hue)-"esse pehle hamare thakur sahab barf ban jaye aur log tumhe ice cream samajh kar khane lage...hame lagta he ki hamko hotel me chale jana chahiye"

Krishna-"udaye lo...aur jitna majak udana he udaye lo...baki ek baar hotel me kamra mil jaye do...tab ache se ham tumka batayenge..."

Pratigya-" Acha thakur sahab...ab ham chalein...tumko jo karna hai...baad me karna..."

Krishna aur pratigya hotel ke andar aa jate hai...aur reception par room ke liye puchte he...

Krishna-"yahan kono kamra khali hai..hamka jaldi batao???

Manager-"sir, ap thoda wait kijiye ham abhi apko dekhkar batate hai..."

Krishna-" Acha thik hai..."

Check karne ke baad
Manager-" Haan sir ek room hai ap logo ke liye.."

Krishna-" acha...ee to bahut sahi hai baki ye batao uu kamra kitne me milega..???"

Manager-" Sir wo room apko 5000 me milega..."

Krishna-" 5000!!!! Tum ka yahan logon ko lootne khatir baithe ho..."

Manager-" Sir ye ap kaisi baat kar rahe hai...ham bhala kyun kisi ko lootenge..."

Krishna-"Dekho aisa hai hamka jyada na samjhao...hamka sab malum hai..tumre hotel me ek kamra khali hai..aur tumko pata hai ki hamka kamre ki jarurat hai esiliye tum paise bada liye...kyun sahi kahe na..????

Manager-"Sir ap hame galat samajh rahe hain..."

Krishna(gusse me)-"sala tumko abhi bata dete hai.."

Krishna hotel ke manager ki shirt ka collar pakad leta hai...
Pratigya krishna ki es harkat se hairan reh jati he...
Edited by abhishek_kriyaa - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 7


KRIYA KI MEETHI NOK JHONK


Manager-" Dekhiye sir, ap ye thik nahi kar rahe he bahut galat kar rahe hain!!! Ap hamein chhod dijiye...!!"

Pratigya-"unhe chhod do krishna!! Aur please Chalo yahan se..."

Krishna pratigya ki baat mante hue manager ki shirt ka collar chhod deta hai...
krishna aur pratigya hotel se bahar aa jate hai...aur phir wahin khadi BUS me chad jate hai...
Krishna aur pratigya bed par baithkar baten karne lage

Pratigya-" krishna,Hamne to socha tha ki tum hamare saath pyar bhare pal bitane yahan itni dur aye ho par tum to yahan bhi logo se ladne lag gaye!!!"

Krishna-"babu yaar...ham gussa hona nahi chahte the baki uu manager ne ekdum se itne badhkar paise bataye ki hamka gussa aaye gawa..."

Pratigya-"agar unhone paise badhakar bataye bhi the to kya ho gaya!!! Hum kisi dusre hotel me jakar dekh lete ...aur krishna hame sabse pehle ye batao ki abhi kaun sa mahina chal raha hai..???"

Krishna-"Babu yaar abhi to may ka mahina chal raha hai..."

Pratigya-"Yahi to wo samay hota he jab log baahar se yahan aate hai..esiliye ye hotel wale paise badha dete hai jisse inko jyada profit ho sake.."

Krishna-"Acha!! Ab sari baat hamre samajh me aa gayi kahe uu sasura ek kamra ke 5000 bataya...!!! Babu yar phir to yahan sab hotel walo ne paise badha liye honge..."

Pratigya(masti karte hue)-" Bilkul!!! Aur krishna agar tumhe sasta kamra lena hai na to kabhi january ke mahine me ana..aur dekhna jo ye aj 5000 bata rahe he na wo 500 rupaye me bhi dene ko tyaar ho jayenge..."

Krishna-" Acha!!! Ab majak udawo tum hamra...tumka ka lagta he ki ham tumre liye ek mehanga kamra nahi le sakte...???

Pratigya-"Haan...tum nahi le sakte hamare liye..."

Krishna-"Acha aisi baat hai to phir ek baat jan lio tumo bhi ki ham thakur sajjan singh ke bitwa hai ...aur ham na kono mehangi chiz lene se peeche nahi hat sakte..."

Pratigya-"Acha thakur sahab ..ham to apse dar gaye...hamse galti ho gayi ki ham aapse uljhe ..hame maaf kar do ,..."

Pratigya ki baat sunkar krishna ke chehre par hasi aa gayi...aur krishna ki hasi ko dekhkar pratigya apni hasi ko rok nahi saki aur phir dono ek dusre ki baton par hasne lage..

Pratigya-"Krishna tum haste hue kitne pyare lagte ho...ye hasi apne se kabhi dur mat karna...yun hi hamesha haste rehna..."

Krishna-"Babu Hamri khushi to tum ho ...tum hamre saath ho to phir hamre chehre par hamesha khushi rahegi.."

Pratigya-"To phir hamse ek vaada karo ki tum kabhi kisi par bhi gussa nahi karoge..."

Krishna-"babu ye to bahut hi mushkil hai par koshish karenge ki ham kono par hath na uthaye..."

Pratigya-"Thik hai par agar phir se tumne kisi par gussa kiya to ham tumse kabhi bhi baat nahi karenge..."

Krishna-" Babu yar tum hame samjhaye rahi ho...ham to ache se samajh jayenge...baki dusra jo kono bhi hamse uljhega use kaun samjhayega.??? Uu ka to hame hi samjhana padega na..."

Ye baat sunkar Pratigya ke chehre par phir se hasi aa gayi...

Pratigya(haste hue) Haan wo to hai!!!! Par pyar se...laat ghunso ne nahi!!!!

Krishna-"ee to uu aadmi par nirbhar(depend) karta he na babu ki uu kis se samjhega!!!!

Pratigya-" Matlab tum hamara vada todoge!!!!"

Krishna-"Chhodo na Babu tumo bhi kya vaada leke baith gayi...thodi hamre saath pyar bhari baten karo..."

Pratigya-"Tumhari jankari ke liye bata de ki hame dusra hotel dekhna hai.."

Krishna-"acha yaad dilayi babu...ham to ee sasura romance ke chakkar me bhul hi gaye the.."

Pratigya-"aur romance ke alawa tumhe aur dikhayi kya deta hai..!!!!

Krishna(masti bhare andaz me gana gate hue)-"ham tum ek bus me band ho...
aur driver bahar se lock kar jaye...
krishna ke naino ki bhool bhulaiya me
Pratigya kho jaye..."

Pratigya aur krishna ek dusre ki aankho me kho jate hai...

Krishna-"babu ,hame kahi bhi kono hotel me jane ki jarurat nahi hai hamra hotel yahi isi bus me he...yahan sab he jo hotel me hota hai..."

Pratigya-"Thik he krishna.!!.Ham abhi fresh hokar aate hai...

Pratigya apne kapde lekar Bus me bane Bathroom me chali jati he...
Thodi der me hi pratigya bathroom se baalo ko sukhate hue baahar nikalti hai...
Krishna pratigya ko baal sukhate hue dekh raha tha...,wo use pakadne hi wala tha tab tak pratigya ne use nahane ke liye bol diya ...krishna apna muh latkaye hue apne kapde uthakar nahane chala gaya...
Thodi der me krishna bhi tyar hokar bathroom se bahar nikal aata hai...

Krishna aur pratigya dono nainital ki sadko par ghumne ke liye paidal nikal padte hai...

End of Part 7
Edited by abhishek_kriyaa - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thx...
Glad u liked it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhishek_kriyaa


Thx...
Glad u liked it...

Why not? Its awesome...😃

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