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Posted: 14 years ago
Dii. .Wen r u updating?Jz woke up n chekd ur update. .Bt its nt der. .Jaldi update karo na. .!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zash_LubUKriYa

Dii. .Wen r u updating?Jz woke up n chekd ur update. .Bt its nt der. .Jaldi update karo na. .!

yaar it is dinner time for us. i may update after 3 to 4 hours😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zash_LubUKriYa

Dii. .
Im curently online thru my mob.oh! .Read it 2day mrng itslf. .um hum😛Thot that i may cmnt 2day evng. .Bt cudnt. .So i think,i'l b 1ly able to comnt 2mrw,4 both ur chaps,dis 1 n d 1 u r gna update 2day nyt. .no worry no hurry take ur time😃
Bt i must say dis chap was electrifying!!As tho hit by 1000 W curnt. . Hehe.hehe thanks 😃 .Wl ctch u soon. .sure😃
Lub u loads lub u 2😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shumi.

<font color="#ff00ff">yaar it is dinner time for us. i may update after 3 to 4 hours😃</font>

aw!That means,i wil 1ly b able to read it 2day evng. .Nw im gng 2 clg. .Byee dii. .Tc. .See u in d evng
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zash_LubUKriYa

aw!That means,i wil 1ly b able to read it 2day evng. yep😃.Nw im gng 2 clg. have a good day dear👍🏼 .Byee dii. .Tc. .See u in d evng...sure...i am going to up date now 😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

PART-23

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pratigya:'kya?...😃'she stopped wiping him.

krishna:😛 slowly raised his hand up to her neck ....stopped with hesitation...pulled back his hand without reaching her and he tried to calm down the storm raging inside him.he tried hard to put off his burning desire to reach her.he hold the arms of the chair and tried to raise, he could not... he was unable!... he was disabled!...he was paralyzed!...he stuck back to the chair.pratigya looked deep in to his eyes.she understood his desperate desire and his disability.she put the towel down and took his face in both the hands.the water from her hair dripped on his thigh which made him more sensational .the up and down movement of his manly chest showed how fast his heart beat was.she leaned towards him and reach his wet lips with hers. for a moment there was a exchange of deep love and passion than sex.krishna closed his eyes and caught that beautiful moment in his mind.he don't want to miss a nano second of it.
continuation:-

when he opened his eyes it was filled with tears.he took her both the hands from his face and moved his face side way, away from her which left rubbing pratigya's cheek with his stubble cheek.
krishna:'baitto...😭'he tried to calm down and made her sit beside him. she kneel down beside his wheel chair.he wiped her wet cheeks with both the hands.tears continued rolling down on his cheeks towards his neck.

pratigya:'...aap jalti se teek ho ja yen gay...Cry'tears spilled from her eyes too.she tried to console him. she felt as if her heart is exploding seeing him physically disabled...handicapped!

krishna:'aisa kyun kar thi ho?...kyun?...Cry'his voice chocked with emotions.
pratigya:😕😭...she was kneeling beside him, raising her face and looking at him with tears.

krishna:'you never let me feel my disability...you don't want me to feel inferior because of that...Cry'
pratigya:😭

krishna:'you always want me to get what i wish.not only today,from the day we met accidentally.even that day as you said,you could have fought with me.but you did not because you want me to have what i wish.you don't want to let me down...some times you go below your dignity to satisfy me...to cheer me😭... 'he cried with broken words.he cried and cried.

pratigya:Cry

krishna:'you did not care about your life, rather you cared about me and my desire...why pratigya...say why..Cry?'he wiped her running tears on her cheek.

krishna:'i always degraded you.hamesha tumai duk thi ya...Cry'

krishna:'par tum...?you respected my feelings...Cry'
pratigya:😭

krishna:'i slapped you for no reason....😭'he looked in to his right palm and tightly clenched his fist.

pratigya:Cry..she hold his fist and winced

krishna:'tum ne uff thak nahi kiya...Cry'

krishna:'bhagwan ko bhi bardash nahi hua...mere gunahonka saza tabhi ka tabi day thiya😭....par tum!...muchay maaf kiya aur meri sewa ki.mere leyeh tum hi bagwaan ho...tum hi.....Cry'tears spill from his eyes on her hand.
pratigya:'issa maat kaho...Cry'she sobbed and rest her wet head on his thigh.

krishna:'😭pata hai pratigya?... meri amma ne bhi kabhi itni sewa mere leyeh nahi ki.she did not cared about my feelings as you cared...even if she does, it is not a wonder because i am her blood, par tum!...kyun! pratigya....Cry'he cried again.

pratigya:...Cry

krishna:'when i developed feeling towards you i understood that tum bahuth achchi ho...but i never know that tum mari zinda ge ki sabse ghubsoorat pari ho.......'
krishna:'mere jaan ho tum...i love you...Cry'
pratigya:😭😊...she got up from her knee.

pratigya:'😊...shirt pehenlo...'she rubbed her hand on his head through his hair and diverted him from his emotional feelings.

krishna:'i will try😊....' while he was trying pratigya supported him to wear.
krishna:'😊tum bhi jaakar kapde badal lo...'he relived her to go to her room.

15 minutes later pratigya came back to his room with hot streaming tea in a tray.

she kept the tray aside and helped him to lean and sit on the bed.she gave the tea cup to him and sat in front of him with her tea cup.she has changed her dress.wiped her head.but still it was damp with lumps.she kept her hair open.she was looking completely fresh and relaxed which added more beauty to her.
krishna:😉😛...while drinking tea he gave a naughty smile at her.

kasuri:'what is wrong with you?😊...'

krishna:'....you are dangerous 😡...'he said teasingly

pratigya:'what?😲...'she stopped drinking and asked.

pratigya:' here after whenever you come to my room you wear burkaa(abhaya)😆...that one...black dress which muslim girls wear....so that i can be safe ...'he laughed openly without hesitation.

pratigya:'😳...you are unbelievable...😆'

next day evening soon after the school rolli went to singh house which became one of her routine.while rolli was chatting with pratigya she was impatiently awaiting for shakti, but he was held up with his office work.
around 5 pm

rolli:'see you tomorrow pratigya...it is getting late for me i have to go and do paper correction too...😊'she said bye and left krishna's room.

around 6 pm
pratigya brought krishna out of his room to make him sit in the hall for some time.they were surprise to see rolli was still there,sitting with shakti and chatting.

pratigya:'rolli tum abhi yahin ho...?😲😃 i thought you went...😕'

krishna:'shakti bhai! tum kab ayeh...?😕'
shakti:'abhi😛...'

krishna:'abhi mathlab...5 , 10 minutes before?😕'

shakti:😃....gave a weird smile

krishna:'pratigya tum aur rolli math mai masters hai...isn't it...?😃'

krishna:'rolli said bye to us 1 hour before,shakti bhai came 10 minutes before...there is no account for 50 minutes in between isn't it?😆' he criticized them.

shakti:'krishna...abhi math lab..1 hour before.....'he swallowed his saliva.

krishna:'ohhhh!!!😆....for 1 hour before...you say abhi...i never knew that...🤣'pratigya and krishna laughed loudly.
shakti:😳...he moved in and rolli moved out without showing their embarrassed face to them.
pratigya:'🤣..rolli...'
krishna:'🤣..shakti bhai!...' kriya could not stop them.
after the dinner it was time to sleep.pratigya was helping krishna to go to bed.she covered him till his chest with the soft quilt.krishna pushed the quilt away.she again covered him with a smile.again he pushed it.
pratigya:😊...she pulled up the quilt with a smile.
krishna:😡...he tried to push it back.
pratigya:'kya baat hai? bahuth gusse mai ho?....'she stopped doing so.
krishna:'haan..bahuth...Angry'
pratigya:'kiss se ?...😕'
krishna:'jaanu se...'
pratigya:'jaanu!😡...who the hell she is?...😡'
krishna:'tum meri jaan ho...hai na?'
pratigya:😳 tho!...'
krishna:'tho!!! huye na jaanu...😃'
pratigya:😃 😃
pratigya:'tho jaanu se gussa kyun?😛' she was confused and worried.
krishna:'you never disclosed about your engagement... 😔 😒'
pratigya:' oh!...i am extremely sorry...'
krishna:Angry he showed his false angry face to her.
pratigya:'i am sorry... i am sorry ....'she hold her ears and showed sorry expression on her face.
krishna:
pratigya:'waise... aap ko kaisa pata mere engagement kay baare mai...umm?😕...do you have any spy...?😡'

krishna:'😆...😉... kun tha wo?😡...'there was jealous in his voice.
pratigya:'nitin.....😃'
krishna:'nitin!....what a wired name....thin...fat....😡'he intentionally degrade him.
pratigya:Angry...you are so mean..he is nitin khurana...😛'
krishna:'eww...purana......'
pratigya:'...krishna that is not fair...😒' the way she supported nitin kindle krishna's anger.
krishna:😡
pratigya:'he is from our place.i have seen him earlier.but i don't recognize him....😊'
krishna:'what is he..?'
pratigya:'i don't know exactly what he is😕...but i came to know he has done his engineering in london....😊'
krishna:...B.E from london! his qualification hurt him.
pratigya:'aap ko pata hai? engagement finger ring doesn't fit me...😃 😆'
krishna:'😃...kyun ki tum mere leyeh bani ho...god has made exclusively for me...Tongue...aur kissi ki finger ring kaise fit hoge?...hohi nahi sakta....impossible...😛'
pratigya:'don't be so happy and confidant...next day he brought a new finger ring and gave it to me....😆'she teased him

krishna: 😔.....shadow of sadness covered his face again.

pratigya:'😆...don't worry....😃...he gave it to me in hand and he did not force me to wear it either.i think he is a decent man....'
krishna:'do you have his photo?...'
pratigya:'no...why should i ?😡 '
krishna:'does he look better than me...?😔...'his was jealous.
pratigya:'much better than you...😉'
krishna:😔...she looked at his unhappy face with a smirk.
pratigya:' tho kya hua?😃...mere leyeh tho you are the most handsome and the best man on the earth...😛😍'
krishna:😃...'

pratigya:'you know what! me too angry with you😡....during my last 10 working days why you did not visit the office...haan?...😡...i was dieing to have your single glance...but you never turned up...'
krishna:'...iss ka jawaab tho muchay ghut ko na hi pata...i myself don't know...?😕'
pratigya:😕
Edited by shumi. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
*edited* OMG. Me first for the fourth consecutive time... Haah!!! Great Update!! what an INTIMATE scene.. So touching. Krishu gettin JEALOUS.. I just hope he Gets well soon & Starts walking again. Lubb YA & Muahh. Im feeling so bored in college.
Edited by KriYa_life - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG.. just officially in love with this ff.. i just need more lriya scenes... lol
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Posted: 14 years ago

Sorry Shumi Ji for this late comment ... as usual was busy but You've made my day with these two mindblowing chapters... Part 22 and 23 was Really smashing! You made me cry too the way you descibed Kriya's emotions... loved Prats for being so caring... her love is so deep and i love it when Krish was praising her she deserves every bit of it.... personally i think if we want GOD to forgive us we should be able to forgive others!...Shumi Ji thank you for this beautiful story will be awaiting eagerly for the next update! From your Avid Fan! ..

I prefer not to comment on Rolli and Shakti bcoz they are such a boring couple!😆 btw loved the children's pics they are too cute ... you can even see Krish's michievious eyes.. hats off to you for choosing this photo👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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