Unfaithful Pratigya Krishna FF Part 8 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Unfaithful Part 3


Pratigya is infront of the mirror.She is trying to
remove her necklace.Krishna comes:Shall I help you?
P:No thanks.I myself will remove it.
He becomes dull.She removes it.
He goes out.
He thinks:How much I dreamt about
my life with Pratigya?Is it shattering?

He becomes upset.He goes back to the bedroom.There Pratigya is
sleeping. He looks at her with sad eyes.Krishna is sleepless and walks out.
She opens her eyes and tells in her mind:I'm
sorry Krishna.I love you,so i can't cheat you.Please forgive me. Poor guy.He loves me very much.But he is
not getting anything from me.


The next day,Kriya go to stay in Pratigya's house.
Avantika is happy.
A:I'm happy that my daughter has come with my son in law to visit me.
Neev comes.
He is surprised to see Kriya.
N:Wow!What a pleasant surprise!
P:Krishna...this is Neev..my best friend.
K:Hi Neev..nice to meet you.
They both shake hands.
Neev puts his arms on Krishna's shoulder.
N:I'm Pratigya's best friend.That means i'm your friend also.
Krishna smiles.
N:We are happy to see you happily married to your dream man Krishna Pratigya.Thankyou for not forgetting us eventhough the honeymoon period is not over.
Everyone laughs.

Night...
Pratigya asks asks Krishna:Krishna,can I sleep with my mom tonight?
K:What?
K:Who is KRishna ie myself for you ?
P:Husband.You tied mangalsuthra around my neck.You put
vermillion on my forehead.
K:Just because of that I became your husband?
Infront of public we are a couple.But actually...
She can't listen anymore.
K:As you wish you go with your mom.
Her eyes get filled up with tears.But she hides it from him.

She goes near Avantika:Mama,tonight I'm going 2 sleep with you.
A:What are you saying?Krishna will be alone.Not only that your honeymoon time is not over.
P:Mama!I really missed you all these days.So i want to be with you.
Avantika smiles.

The next day at a park...Krishna looks at Pratigya.
K:don't you love me?
P:Krishna!
K:Please don't avoid me.
Tears dwells in her eyes.
He sings:Dil ne yeh kaha hai dil se
Mohabbat hogayi hai tumse
Meri jaan mere dilbar,
mera aitbaar karlo
Jitna beqaraar hoon main,
khudko beqaraar karlo
Meri dhadkano ko samjho,
tum bhi mujhse pyaar karlo..{Dhadkan}.
Pratigya also sings:Tum bhi mujse pyar karlo..
K:You don't have to tell me to love you.I love you Pratigya.
Within a second he realses that it was a
dream.Pratigya watches him with pity.Krishna wipes his tears.

Kriya travel in the car during night.A couple of
robbers appear before them.
The robbers point their guns toward them and make them get out of the car.They:Give the ornaments,watch etc.
They give them everything.Then those guys:Who's this superb model Sir…?Girlfriend or…
Krishna becomes angry.Pratigya gets scared.She goes closer to Krishna.
P:Krishna!
When they try to touch her,Krishna shouts at them and beats them.
K:How dare you guys try to misbehave with my wife?If you hurt her,I'll kill you all.
A robber:What's going to happen if your wife is hurt?
K:If something bad is happening to your life,will you be able to live?No!My wife is my life and if she's hurt,how can I live?

Pratigya is is shocked.
One robber:You gave everything including the precious
ornaments.Then why are you hesitsting to give your wife?
Krishna beats him:Will anyone give their wife to others?
The robbers move away silently.Pratigya is upset.
K:Nothing will happen to you when I'm
alive.So don't get scared.
Her mind is full of the words Krishna told the robbers.

Pratigya climbs the steps.Her leg slips and she falls down.
Krishna is shocked to see Pratigya lying down unconcious.She is bleeding.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice chapter!! thanks for the PM 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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It was a very nice chp.I seriously wonder what happened to Pratigya,hope to find out soon.Looking forward to the next chp😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Mindblowing! the dialogues were beautifully written!.... but this suspense is killing me! feel sorry for prat ....something terrible must have happened to her that's why she is in a trauma! Loved krish when he said " My wife is my life... if she is hurt how can i live?" wow he's madly in love... feel like hugging him! hope he always support prat even after learning the truth! it will be the most precious gift to prat! Till you next update... bye⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Edited by shefads - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wowwwwwww!!!!!!!!!welcome back jasmine..........awwwwwww!!!!!!!!!i jz lubddddddd ur new ff...........caught up with ur Pm today n read all 3 chaps in oe go........it ws the best!!!!!!!!!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
but plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz unveil the secret sooooooooon...i cant stand i the suspense anymore!!!!!!!!!!!n i rllllllllly lyk(actually speaking,lub)the Krishna in ur ff.......he is such a sweet heart......prats,dnt avoid him.he needs ur lub.......im sure he will be there for u watever will be ur problem........
jasmine,plzzzzzzzz update soon!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow jasmine.......awesome dialogues............the way krish defended pratz was so good........👏👏 hope this mystery secret reaveals in the next chap..waiting eagerly........😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17

Unfaithful Part 4


Pratigya is admitted to the hospital.Her leg and hand are fractured.
Krishna:Please be careful while climbing up the steps.
P:Yes.
K:My life was lost when i saw you unconscious.
She thinks:Krishna is forcing me to accept him completely.
He gives her fruit juice:Drink this.Be fresh.
She takes it and looks deeply into his eyes.
P:Thanks a lot for being so caring to me.
He smiles:This is my love for you.A husband's love for his wife.
She smiles.
He goes out.Nikhila is standing out with a smile.
N:I'm surprised to see your change.I can't believe that once you were a slack irresponsible boy.I'm prowd of you my son.You are taking care of your wife very well.
K:Pratigya's love changed me a lot mom.
Nikhila smiles.
Pratigya gets discharged from the hospital.
Krishna helps her to walk.She tries to walk without his help.But in between she loses her balance and is about to fall down.Krishna holds her tightly.She feels secure in his arms.They both get lost in each other's eyes.
After a few weeks she becomes completely alright.

Night...Pratigya enters the room with a smile.Her face
becomes dull seeing Krishna sleeping.

When Pratigya gets up from the bed,she does'nt see Krishna.She looks around.She sees the clock and is shocked:10 o'clock?Oh!
Nikhila comes:Good morning Pratigya.
P:I'm sorry mummiji.I'm late.
N:It's ok.
P:Where is Krishna?
N:He went to the office.I
thought of calling you before he went.But he did'nt want me to do that as he wanted you to have a good sleep.
Pratigya smiles.
N:Today is his birthday.
P:Really?
N:Ya.But we don't celebrate it.
P:But we must celebrate it.It's his first birthday with me.
Nikhila smiles:Krishna is lucky to have a wife like you.
Pratigya smiles.Slowly her smile disappears.
She thinks:The truth is that i don't deserve Krishna.He could have gotten a better wife than me.But now i can't think of losing Krishna at any cost.My mind is out of my control.I can't control myself.I need Krishna.

Pratigya wears a grand violet saree and diamond ornaments.


Pratigyaenters Krishna's office room.He is surprised:Pratigya!
P:Why are you so late today? you are still in the office?You know what's happening at home now?
K:What's happening?Is everything ok?You look tense.
P:Now itself we have to go home.Otherwise it will be a problem.
K:Ya,now itself we will go home.
They reach home.They get inside the house.Krishna is
surprised to see a big party there. He looks at Pratigya with
wonder:This party…
She smiles:Happy birthday Krishna.
He smiles.
P:We thought of giving you a surprise.
K:It is truly a surprise.
Nikhila:How is the decoration?Everything is done by Pratigya.
He smiles:Thankyou Pratigya.It is beautiful.
She smiles.
Krishna cuts the birthday cake.He gives a piece to Nikhila.She puts a
piece into his mouth.He gives a piece to Mehen.He looks at Pratigya.
Pratigya in her mind:Won't you give me a lovely piece ?
He hesitates to do that because of my
behaviour.
N:Krishna,give a piece to Pratigya..
He looks at Pratigya.She smiles.He feels confident seeing her smile and gives her a piece.
Pratigya smiles:Thanks.

Pratigya takes the mike:I would like to sing a song for my husband on this happy
occasion.
Krishna is surprised.
She goes near him and sings looking at him:
'Aye ho meri zindagi me tum bahar banke
Mere dil me yuhi rahena tum pyar pyar banke
Ankho me tum base ho sapne hazar banke
Mere dil me yuhi rahena tum pyar pyar banke..'{Raja Hindustani}.
Krishna smiles.
Nikhila:Play a romantic song.Let Krishna & Pratigya dance together.

The song 'seene mein dil
dil mein dhadkan
dhadkan mein kya hai
teri pyaas hai
har pyaas mein
dard hai sanam
yeh dard tera ehsaas hai..'{Koi aapsa}is played.
Kriya dance together looking deeply into each other's eyes.
K:Thank you for giving me a surprise grand birthday
party.I never had such a nice birthday party in my life.My parents are too simple for that.I don't know how to express the happiness i had when you sang specially for me.Thanks a lot Pratigya.
P:No need of thanks.It's my love for you.
He is excited.
K:You know how long i waited to hear this from you.Tell me again.
She blushes:Not here.Others will hear it.I'm shy.I will tell it in our room.
K:I wish the party gets over fast.So that we can move to our room and have some private moments.
She becomes shy.

After the party Kriya enter their room.
K:Tell..
P:What?
K:Tell what i long to hear from you.Please don't delay..
She blushes:I...i...
His heart is hungering to hear sweet words from her.
P:I love you.
K:I'm so happy now.This is the most wonderful moment in my life.
He takes her in his arms.
P:Krishna!
He puts her down softly.
K:Are you not feeling sleepy?
P:When we are madly in love,we won't be able to
sleep.Right?
He smiles in a naughty manner.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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It was a very sweet chp.It was so nice of Pratigya to organize a grand party for him.Looking forward to the next chp😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wohooooo......finally pratz said ILU to krish........🥳that was a superb chap........👏👏👏 waiting for some romantic kriya moments in the next chap...........😉😳😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely chapter! Very touching scene when krish takes care of prat when she was injured! and it was great when prat organized his birthday party! it was so sweet when she was blushing no wonder she looked gorgeous with that dress...awww.... feels good to see her in love and happy....well .. looks like it will be a romantic night 😉 hope there won't be any disturbance ! Anyway looking forward to the next part!⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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