Unfaithful Pratigya Krishna FF Part 8 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Unfaithful Part 5


Krishna goes closer to Pratigya and looks into her eyes deeply.His fingers go
through her face.Suddenly the bitter past comes into
her mind.She gets scared.She moves away from him.
K:What happened?
She is sweating:Nothing.
She lies down. He becomes dull and tries to walk out.
She feels sad.
P:Krishna!
He turns back.
She smiles:Are you leaving me alone?Come near me.

He smiles.He goes and carries her in his arms.

Kriya go to Singapore.They enjoy a lot.
They sing the song 'Chote…'{Ishq vishq} and share romantic moments.
They return home after the trip.
K:Choti ma..mom's younger sister has come.Mom messaged me.I'm longing to see her.I'm going fast.
He runs inside.Krishna is surprised to see Naina there:Choti ma..
Naina smiles:How are you Krishna beta?
K:I'm fine.But I'm sad that you did'nt attend my wedding.
N:What to do?It was an important tour to States.I had committed it earlier.I still hunger to
do new things in medicine. Ok,your mom told me about your wife.Her name…I forgot.Where is your wife?
Pratigya comes in. She and Naina are shocked to see each other.

K:Pratigya..this is my choti ma Dr.Naina.
She is shocked:Choti ma?
She is shattered.
K:This is my wife.Her name is…
N:If I'm right Pratigya Saxena..?
K:Yes.So you could remember her name.How did you like my wife?
N:I can say 'yes' for not making you upset.But since I don't
want to see you heart broken later i have to tell the truth that I did'nt like ur wife.
Pratigya becomes sad.Unexpectedly Krishna laughs:Choti ma is joking.
She gets confused.
N:I'm not joking.I'm serious.How can I like this
cheater?
K:Choti ma?
N:This girl is cheating you.Don't trust her.This girl had
come to my hospital.She was pregnant.She had miscarriage.
Krishna and others are shocked.
N:How can I be happy about you marrying a spoilt girl who became
pregnant before marriage..however modern we have become,I don't agree with this.

Krish stares at Pratigya.She gets tense. He goes near her. P:Krishna..
K:I'm not misunderstanding you.But...i need to ask you...please don't misunderstand me.
He sweats.
K:Is it true?Or choti ma is misunderstanding you?

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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
It was a nice chp.OMG!! What a way for the truth to come out.Poor Pratigya and Krishna!! I hope things become alright.Looking forward to the next chp😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
oh thats the truth...........i hope krish is with pratz.............or else she will be in deep trouble.........
nice chap..........liked it.........👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh No!! 😲 i'm sure it's a misunderstanding! but even if is the truth wonder what will be krish reaction? he won't easily forgive that's for sure!...but miracles do exist ! So i keep my fingers crossed for prat !... you better have a good explanation dear otherwise you can start packing your bags ! Great job Jasmine! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice chapter!! 😊

i really wanna know what happens next now!! 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26

Part 6

Pratigya cries:It's true.
All are shocked.
Krishna:What?I don't believe this.Tell Pratigya
that it's choti ma's misunderstanding.
She cries.Her silence makes Krishna upset.He tries to go away.She holds his hand:Krishna..listen 2 me.I did'nt do anything wrong.
Naina:Then how did you become pregnant?Who is that
person?Tell us now.
He goes crazy.
P:Krishna..please listen to me.
He does'nt listen to her.He goes.

He thinks:How could Pratigya cheat on me?I expected an
innocent sweet girl as my wife.I saw that in her.But…
He cries:Pratigyai!
He heart weeps and sings a painful song:
'Bejaan dil ko
bejaan dil ko
bejaan dil ko
tere ishq ne zinda kiya
phir tere ishq ne hi
is dil ko tabah kiya

tadap tadap ke is dil se aah nikalti rahi
mujko saza di pyar ki, aisa kya gunah kiya
to lut gaye, haan lut gaye
to lut gaye hum teri mohabbat mein…'.{Hum dil de chuke sanam}.
He goes to a bar and drinks a lot.

Nikhila weeps before Pratigya:How could you cheat on us?My poor
son...what did he do to you?He just loved you blindly.That was his only fault.
Naina:Tell where your lover is?Are you still having contact
with him?
She stares at Naina.
Naina:I'm talking about your dead baby's dad.
P:Believe me.I don't know anything about him.
Naina:Where does he stay?
P:I don't know.I don't know who he is.
Naina:What nonsense?
P:Please listen to me.
Nikhila:Tell what you want to say.
Pratigya reveals her secret to them.
Naina:Nice story.What do you think of us?We are fools to believe your unbelievable story?
P:Please believe me.This is what happened.
She falls at Nikhila's feet:Mummiji..please believe me.Do you think I'm that sort of a girl?
Nikhila thinks about the moments they have spent with Pratigya.
She thinks:Pratigya was always a cultured well behaved lady here.I'm confused.
Ni:You go to your room.
Pratigya goes with tears.
Ni:I think Pratigya is innocent.Her
words…Her tears are not fake.
Naina:Even I feel so.

Nikhila,Mehen,Naina and Pratigya wait for Krishna.He
comes at late nite.He is drunk.All are shocked to see him in that state.
Pratigya weeps:Krishna!
He goes to his room.She goes near him:Why did you drink so much?
He goes unconscious:Why did you do this to me?Go..
She cries.
She phones Neev.
N:How are you ?
She cries.
Neev is shocked:What happened?
She tells him everything.
He becomes upset:Don't worry.Everything will be alright.

The next morning Krishna opens his eyes.He sees Pratigya.His face becomes red.
P:Krishna!
He loses his control and slaps her:You cheater!
She is shocked to see his violent behaviour.
He holds her hand tightly:Tell me who that guy is...tell me..
Her tears fall down:Krishna!
K:Is he Neev?
She is shocked.
K:You both pretend to be best friends before others.But actually...chee...so dirty.If you guys love each other that much why did you marry me?Do you still love him?
P:How could you think like that about Neev?He is innocent.He is too good.
He shoved her.
K:Get lost.
Her tears roll down her cheeks:Krishna!
K:I said get lost.
She runs away crying.
He is going crazy.He looks at the mirror.He imagines seeing a smiling Krishna there.
K:Seeing my destruction you are smiling?
Imaginary Krish:Why should i pity you?You deserve this.You don't deserve a faithful nice wife.You are punished by God.Are you innocent?You also cheated Pratigya.You are also unfaithful like her.You hid your secret from her.You have destroyed a poor girl's life.Don't you remember it?You behave like Ram as if you are a gentleman.
He goes crazy:Why did you remind me of my past?I had forgotten it.I'm a changed man after seeing Pratigya..after i fell in love..after i realized what true love is..i never had any bad intention.I never cheated her.I was always a faithful husband.
Imaginary krishna:The same thing with Pratigya also.She hid the truth from you.But she was a faithful wife.
He screams:No..she was not a faithful wife.I'm sure that she has affair with Neev now also.
He throws the bottle at the mirror.

Pratigya is sitting in her room with tears.krishna enters the room.
P:krishna!Please listen to me once.
K:No need of that.Because i got my true love.Sneha....
A pretty girl comes inside.She is shocked.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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It was a nice chp.I wish Krishna would listen to what she has to say.Looking forward to the next chp😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice chap........n really krishna's reaction shocked me..........😔 n i hope he doesn't take too long to listen to pratz........😊 waiting for the next chap......😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice chapter! but disappointed with krishna and hate him for being violent 😡.. he could at least listen to prat before judging her!... agreed she made a mistake but krish also had hidden secrets!It would be a nice twist if krish was the man who made prat pregnant!😉 Sorry, can't think straight with this suspense! 😆 And who is this sneha? Uff.... amazing story!....i am eagerly waiting for the next part ! keep it up!⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️👏👏👏

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Unfaithful Part 7

Krishna stands close to Sneha.
K:I'm happy that God gave me my true love.What happened?Are you jealous of seeing me with Sneha?Do you understand now what i feel when i see my unfaithful wife?
P:Krishna...i know you very well.I know that you can't love anyone else.You love only me.You are just pretending to be in love with Sneha to take revenge on me.
For one second Krish and Sneha are silent.They can't react.
Then he opens his mouth:Whatever you think..I don't need you anymore.I'm happy with Sneha.
He goes away grabbing Sneha's hand.Prtigya watches it with tears.

Krish and Sneha are at a park.
K:I'm happy if Pratigya is hurt.
Sneha:Pratigya is hurt to see me with you.But she has full faith in you and your love.So she understood that it's only your drama.She knows that you can love only you.
K:Sneha...you are my good friend.Please help me.
Sn:You are my good friend.That's why i came from states when you needed my help.But..as a true friend i'm advising you to stop this drama.Don't hurt Pratigya.I'm a girl like her.I feel bad when she is hurt.
K:You are hurt?Think about me if you are my true friend.Are you not sad about me?
Sn:I'm sad about you.But..i'm a girl..i can understand other girls.I don't think Prachi is a cheater.I mean i see love for you in her eyes and tears.I'm sure that there is some secret behind her pregnancy.
He thinks about his sweet and worst moments with Prachi.
Pratigya is also thinking the
same.Their heart weep and sing:
'Mujhse Hui Bas Yeh Khata, Maine Tujhe Chaha Sanam
Chup Chup Ke Roothi Rahi, Tune Diye Kaise Yeh Ghum
O Bekhabar Be Raham, Karle Chaahe Jitne Sitam
Na Chaahat Kabhi Hogi Kam, Mujhe In Aasoon Ki Kasam
Maine Kiya Hai Tujhse Sachcha Pyaar..'{Ishq vishq}.
Krishna hears someone's voice:Krishna!
He turns back.It is Neev.
He loses his control:You bloody...i thought you are a decent man.But you..you joined Prtigya to cheat me.
Neev is shocked: what are you saying?
K:You are Pratigyaa's secret boyfriend.Right?You are responsible for herpregnancy.
Neev is shocked: Are you out of your senses?
K:I was not in my senses before.But now i'm...i can understand everything.
He pulls his shirt's collar.
K:Because of you,Pratigya cheated on me.She pretended to
be a Satisavitri.Pretended to be a pure Sita.But
actually she was a..
Neev lost her control:Enough.More than enough.Control your words. I thought you are a nice man.But i never knew tht you are so disgusting that you can stoop so low.
Krishna raises his hand to beat him.Sneha is shocked.
Suddenly he hears a voice:Don't touch Neev.
Krish sees a smart girl.
She:I'm Nandini.Neev's fiancee.
He can't believe it:Neev's fiancee?
N:Yes.I,Neev and Pratigya are childhood friends.I went abroad.But my love for Neev did'nt change.I know Neev & Pratigya very well.I have full faith in their friendship.Only dirty blind people like you can suspect them.If you utter a word against my Neev..i will show my true colour to you.
Ne:Nandini..control yourself.
N:I can't.He is crossing his border.
Neev looks at Krish:Pratigya is a nice girl.She always wanted to tell you the truth.But I and Avantika aunty forced her to hide it from you.That's her only fault.Because of that you got a nice wife like her.Otherwise you would not have gotten such a nice girl as your wife.
K:A girl who went behind other boys and became pregnant is
a nice girl?Mayb for you,but not for me.Such a girl is a
loose type.
N:Pratigya is not that sort of a girl.You don't know the
truth.That's why...if you hear the truth..if you have heart..if you have loved her once..you will regret hurting her.Just hear what happened to her.

Edited by jasminerahul - 14 years ago

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