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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: surbhisachwani

shumii dii..hi surbhi...😃suchh a emtionall updateeeeeee........yep................i cried readingg it especially the lasstt partttttttt😭 😭 😭 😭 😭......don't cry baby soon i will give you happy moments..........krishnaaaa reallyy andddd lubbs pratigya emenselyyyyyyyyy andd she toooo...i lubb kriya soo muchhhhhhhhh😳 😳 😉 👏 😳

thanks 😃dont seperatee kriyaaaaaa....... NO 😃..............plsss diiii makee kriyaa soon overcome all the problemsssss... sure😊.....cant see them especially krishnaaa is such painnnnn😭 😭 😭...i know...it is painful to see krishna crying...no worry he will be fine soon😃
update soon😛 will try to😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
shumi..........😃 lovely chap.............so touching n sweet........😳 u showed the sensitive side of both krish n pratz...............their love is beyond words......😍 the way they care for eachother ...i so hope p also does that in real show......😆 i loved it ......hats off to u this time for showing such an intense scene n that too with perfect grip on dialogues.......👏👏👏 this is ur best work for me atleast.....⭐️
lub u lots .......🤗
Edited by mushirox - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Shumi diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
im bk!!!!!
hru di?fine na?hw r ur kids?
wats dis?it was actually a blast for me......i only thot that the problem is only pratigya's fear.......but seems ltk things r more comple than expected.......i felt lyk crying after reading the chap😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
such a touching chap.......bt i lubd the way Prats told krishna-i want to live with u...brot tears in my eyes....😭😭😭😭 i was relieved that Krishna didnt get angry with Pratigya n stayed calm.....finally Prats realized the value of their baby...bt wat happened to Krish?y is he behaving as tho he want abortion asap?is it coz he didnt want to force Pratigya in to something she dislyk?
bt the next part was a gr888888 shock for me!!!!!!!wat all complexities!!!!!i knw u wont kill Prats.......hai na di?but hw r they going to overcome it????????
n Krishna seems tooooo much heartbroken....otherwise he wont have drunk.......bt i lykd the way pratigya took care of krishna wen he was out of mind.......
krishna:'pratigya ... mai thum se bahuth pyaar kar tha hun...i love you...muchay chood kay maat jao...mai paagal hoja woon ga...😭.. muchay bhi saat lejao na...😭' he hugged her.
these words brot tears in my eyes agn!!!!!😭😭😭😭😭ssry....u knw i cnt control.......
but these words brot an ominous fear in my mind..........
pratigya:'😭... i am glad that God has given me nine more solid months to live with you...😭...poore naw maheyne hum jeeyen gay... bharpoor jeeyen gay...har pal jeeyengay...😭'she too hugged him.
tell me........evrythingz gonna be alryt na?hoping for the best.......
ur ff is the most unique one di........it made me laugh,blush,sympathize,angry n cry.......jz lyk real lyf....i had always told u that ur ffs r so close to my heart.........n i dont mind saying it agn!!!!!u n ur ffs r close...na na.....in my heart.....
im actually tensed...hw wil KriYa overcome this?does their lub has the power to bbreak n obstacles?i think it has................plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update sooooooooooooooooooooon!!!!!!
ha......maranthutten.........
my frnd told me to say hi to u.....i have not yet told her the story as it is vacation....
n diz for making me cry......(jz joking)
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hope u r fine.....
MUAAAAAAHHHHHHHH to ur kids.....
lub u loads
azi

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mushirox

shumi..........😃 lovely chap.............so touching n sweet........😳 thanks mushi...😃u showed the sensitive side of both krish n pratz......yep...i tried my level best...glad you all liked it😃.........their love is beyond words......😍 obviously...😛the way they care for eachother ... so true...😊i so hope p also does that in real show......😆 ...lol you are expecting impossible things in the show...i loved it ......hats off to u this time for showing such an intense scene n that too with perfect grip on dialogues.......👏👏👏 this is ur best work for me atleast.....⭐️ aw....thank you so much for all your wonderful words...each word means a lot for me...😊lub u lots .....🤗...LUB U 2..🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago
shumi what happened no updates. is everything o.k with u? long time no updates. waiting for your wonderful updates.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: laks76

shumi what happened no updates. is everything o.k with u? long time no updates. waiting for your wonderful updates.

sorry dear...here the climate is freezing cold... i am feeling lazy to work...like to eat and sleep...😃 try to update tomorrow inshallah😃
Edited by shumi. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zash_LubUKriYa

Shumi diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

hi azi chellam!😃
im bk!!!!! me too back with my next update beta😆
hru di?fine na?hw r ur kids? alhamdulliah fine😃
wats dis?it was actually a blast for me......i only thot that the problem is only pratigya's fear.......but seems ltk things r more comple than expected.......i felt lyk crying after reading the chap😭😭😭😭😭😭😭...no worry chellam she will be fine...krishna hai na to take care of her😃
such a touching chap...thanks 😃....bt i lubd the way Prats told krishna-i want to live with u...brot tears in my eyes....😭😭😭😭 yep...poor girl me too felt sorry for her i was relieved that Krishna didnt get angry with Pratigya n stayed calm...he never gets angry with pratigya...he loves her that much...😛..finally Prats realized the value of their baby...after all she is a ' going to be mother ' bt wat happened to Krish?y is he behaving as tho he want abortion asap?is it coz he didnt want to force Pratigya in to something she dislyk? not only that he don't want pratigya to live 10 months with death fear...
bt the next part was a gr888888 shock for me!!!!!!!wat all complexities!!!!!i knw u wont kill Prats.......hai na di? yep...no worry...😃but hw r they going to overcome it????????...krish hai na o save her
n Krishna seems tooooo much heartbroken....otherwise he wont have drunk....yep...he was heart broken!...bt i lykd the way pratigya took care of krishna wen he was out of mind......thanks😃.
krishna:'pratigya ... mai thum se bahuth pyaar kar tha hun...i love you...muchay chood kay maat jao...mai paagal hoja woon ga...😭.. muchay bhi saat lejao na...😭' he hugged her.
these words brot tears in my eyes agn!!!!!😭😭😭😭😭ssry....u knw i cnt control.......
but these words brot an ominous fear in my mind..........no worry azi kutty...you are so sensetional...
pratigya:'😭... i am glad that God has given me nine more solid months to live with you...😭...poore naw maheyne hum jeeyen gay... bharpoor jeeyen gay...har pal jeeyengay...😭'she too hugged him.
tell me........evrythingz gonna be alryt na? yep every thing will befine soon...always my FFs will have happy ending...😃hoping for the best.....sure😃..
ur ff is the most unique one di....THANKS azi😃....it made me laugh,blush,sympathize,angry n cry.......jz lyk real lyf....i had always told u that ur ffs r so close to my heart.........n i dont mind saying it agn!!!!!u n ur ffs r close...na na.....in my heart.....thanks again for all your wonderful comments. 😃
im actually tensed...hw wil KriYa overcome this?does their lub has the power to bbreak n obstacles?i think it has......sure😃..........plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update sooooooooooooooooooooon!!!!!!
to day i will jaanu 😃ha......maranthutten.....lol....
my frnd told me to say hi to u..hi to her from me😃...i have not yet told her the story as it is vacation....
n diz for making me cry......(jz joking) 😆
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hope u r fine.....fine fine fine😃 wish that u 2 r fine😃
MUAAAAAAHHHHHHHH to ur kids.....thank you😃
lub u loads thanks😃
azi

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Posted: 14 years ago
girls! very sorry for the very late update!
PART-61

very next day it was saturday:
around 9am pratigya woke up from her sleep and found herself lying on the bed.she looked around confusingly and instantly remembered yesterday's drama.immediately she looked for krishna. he was standing in front of the dressing table and fixing his damp hair.
pratigya:'krishnaaa...🥱'she was too lazy to get up.
krishna:'good morning...😊'he gave a killer smile hiding all his depressions and sad feelings. he made up his mind to keep pratigya always smiling with out brooding and worrying about her pregnancy and it complications.
pratigya:'good morning baad mai...😒 first tell me sorry😡...kal aap ne kith na pareshaan karthiya?😒...'she got up and sat on the bed lazily.she too don't want to be sad and waste her life in worrying and crying.she want to spend her left out days happily.
krishna:😒
pratigya:'bolo?...'
krishna:'nahi...😒' he said reluctantly. he kept the comb on the dressing table, came and sat beside her casually.
pratigya:'kyun nahi?...😕'she raised her eyebrow.
krishna:' kyun kya kyun? ...i don't want to...😉' he was stubborn.
pratigya:'argh!...😡'
krishna:'waise mai appno ko sorry nahi bol tha...😃' before she could think what is he doing, he carried her in his arm.
pratigya:' arey!😲...subha subha yeh kya kar rahay ho?😕...'he hold her kurta near his chest for support.
krishna:'bhool gaye kya ?😊...doctor ne thumai uchal guth karne kay leyeh mana kiya hai...😉'he walked casually towards the wash room .
pratigya:' what!....😡😲😒...'
krishna:' 😆 wahi... bed rest karne ko advise kiya hai na?...😊' he let her down in front of the wash basin. he took the aquafresh from the stand and put it on the tooth brush.
krishna: ' eeeeeee....bolo...😃' he hold the tooth brush near her mouth.
pratigya:'😆... i can brush my teeth...😡' she snatched the brush from him showing as if she is still angry with him. when he was helping her jugnu peeped in.
jugnu:' saab😊...aap...wo...jo...bana rahay thay wo bangaya...😛'
krishna:' tho stove band kartho....i am coming...😊'
pratigya:'😲...app kitchen mai bana rahay thay! kya bana rahay thay?😕 ...'she asked while brushing her teeth.
krishna:'😆...breakfast for you...😛'
pratigya:' what!...😲 😲' she swallowed the paste .
krishna:😆...don't eat the paste! 😆...i will bring the breakfast for you...'he disappeared.by the time she finished washing her face he again appeared with clean towel.
pratigya:'no need to butter me...any way you owe me a sorry ...😡 😊 ' she tried to be angry and took the towel from his hand to wipe her face.
krishna:' why should i butter my butterfly? haan? 😉...' he lifted her again and took her towards the bed and place her gently on it.
krishna:' chalo...hot hot breakfast is ready for you...😊'he sat beside her with breakfast tray.
pratigya:' aw....thank you so much....😊'she said looking at the breakfast.
pratigya:'what is this? 😕...you know that i eat cornflakes in my breakfast...' she shrunk her face.
krishna:' ...here after no cornflakes and no bread toast...'
pratigya:' then?...what is that ?'😕...'she was staring at her breakfast.
krishna:'oats chicken porridge...😛'
pratigya:'oats chicken porridge!😲...ewww....i never heard about it...😕'
look at the oats chicken porridge! 😆😉
krishna:'why ewww?....it is yumm...😛.... i made it for you...taste and see...😃...ummmm...it is smelling too good...😛' he took little in a spoon and showed near her mouth.
praigya:'eeww...look at the colour of it!...no seasoning...no garnishing...i don't want to 😒...' she turned her face away from the spoon.
krishna:'seasoning and garnishing mai kya hai?....mathlab suwaad se hai na?...have it...😊'he forced her.
pratigya:' i can not eat this type of food.....😒'she pushed his hand away from her face.
krishna:' mere leyeh...thoda sa😊..'
pratigya:' mere leyeh! 😲 tho aap mere leyeh kya karo gay???😛...'she trapped him.
krishna:' umm...you asked me to say sorry isn't it?...i will give you that ...sorry.....' he leaned forward and gave a quick peck on her cheek holding the bowl in his hand.
pratigya:' aw...soo sweet....😛' her cheek got electrified.unexpected pratigya touched her cheek and enjoyed that feeling.
krishna:' if you eat your breakfast i can offer you some more sweets....😉...'
pratigya:' ughhhh!....now it is too late...😡... your sorry lost its validity...😊'
krishna:😲...what! ' while he was wondering jugnu peeped in again.
jugnu:' bade saab aap ko bula rahay hai...😊' he said sajjan was calling him.
krishna:'😲...kyun?...pratigya finish off your breakfast.i will be back soon...😊' he kept the porridge bowl on the try and went down following jugnu. while getting down he saw sajjan and nanima were in the hall and nainaji was sitting beside them.
krishna:'maa😛....aap!😲...' he got down skipping the steps and rushed towards his mother with excitement.
sajjan:'before you cajole your mother answer us...😡' he stopped krishna.
krishna:'😲...he stood rooted. shocked to see angry sajjan.first time sajjan was talking to him angrily.
sajja:' how come you do this?...pratigya is not only your wife...she is my daughter too😡... you can not take decisions about her on your own...😡'
krishna:😲...dad wo...'he understood that he was talking about pratigya's pregnancy.
naina:'i never expected this from you krishna.... wo tho achcha hua arushi ne hamai batha thi...' she said looking at arushi who was sitting on the other side of the sofa.
krishna:😡...just then he noticed her and gave a quick angry look.
arushi:...sorry...krishna...wo...😔'she felt guilty.
sajjan:' usse kyun ghoor rahay ho?....'
krishna:' dad...i am sorry...i should have discussed with you...'
sajjan:'...but...please don't take any decision when you are emotional...'he approved his sorry.
krishna:
sajjan:'nainaji aap pratigya se mill le jiyeh...usse achcha lagay ga....😊' he took her upstairs leaving krishna and arushi in the hall. few seconds krishna stared at arushi with disappointment and then walked away with out talking to her.
arushi:' krishna...try to understand me...' she went behind him.
krishna:😒😡 without turning back he claimed the steps.
arushi:' pregnancy is not a joke...you alone can not handle her. she need to be cared by ladies and elderly people....that is why i told to aunty...😔' she tried to claim the steps fast to reach him.
arushi:' krishna...don't you believe that i am your well wisher?...' she said in a pleading tone and stopped claiming the steps cuz she could not. simultaneously krishna too stopped claiming , turned back and looked at her.
krishna:'kya thum serif doosron ka khayal rakho gi?...apna na nahi?...😡'
arushi:😕
krishna:' don't you know that you too should not walk fast or claim the steps...😃' he said with concern.
arushi:😃...thanks...' both claimed the steps one by one slowly without any haste.
krishna:'thanks tho muchay bolna chahi yeh...😊 you are very correct.seriously it is very difficult to handle pregnant ladies...for the past half an hour i was telling pratigya to eat her breakfast...par nahi...she don't want to....ufff...' they both entered pratigya's bed room. sajjan and naina were already in that room talking to pratigya.
krishna:' maa...she is yet to have her breakfast...😔' as soon as he entered complained about pratigya.
naina:'omg!😲 it is going to me 10am!...abhi breakfast nahi hua?😲.....'
praigya:'maa...i am also dying with hunger. but he is forcing to eat this...i tried but i can not' she showed the oats porridge.
sajjan:' what is that?😕'
krishna:' dad... i made it...😃...specially for pratigya...😛'
naina:' tu bana ya!!!!😆...kya hai?...' she asked looking at the pale paste.
krishna:' oats chicken porridge! special breakfast for pregnant ladies...😛' he said loudly and proudly.
naina:' kissne kaha?...😆'
krishna:' i googled it...😳..'
arushi:🤣...
krishna:' chup!😡...mai ne YouTube mai thayk kar bana ya hai...😳'
sajjan:🤣 krishna tum bhi na... that is why i told you humse pooch leya karo...' he laughed at his innocence.
krisyhna: 😳
sajjan:'nainaji...app se ek binti hai😊...'
naina:binti?😕...' she looked at him.
sajjan:'i know i am selfish. i have already requested you to allow your son to stay with us....'
naina:😕
sajjan:' aap bura nahi maane tho... for few days or till pratigya's delivery i would like you to stay here with us to help her...i will be great full to you. now she is in need of motherly care...😔...aap saat hogay tho that will be a great strength for her....😊'
nainaji:' iss mai bura maan ne ki koi baat nahi...i am glad to be with my children😊...' she said looking at pratigya and krishna.
krishna:😃
pratigya:😃 thanks...'
naina:' thanks kyun? yeh tho maa ka farz ho tha hai...😊...mai thumai doosra breakfast bana kar lathi hun...'she got up from the bed.
arushi:' krishna...aap ek kaam karo...?😊..'she was standing beside him.
krishna:' mai?...😕'
arushi: yeh breakfast aap khalo...😃'she took the oats porridge bowl and gave it to him.
pratigya:😆...she chuckled
krishna:😲...no no...mai pregnant thodi hun?... ho saka tho thum khalo...😛'
arushi:' mai! 😲...' she looked at pratigya.
pratigya:' maa...i like to have breakfast with arushi...😊'
krishna:' tho mera breakfast ka kya...? ...my stomach is grumbling too...'
naina:' teek hai...😆 thum theeno ko yahin nashta laga thay thi hun...😊' she went down.
all three had a fun filled breakfast, first time together!
Edited by shumi. - 14 years ago
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Shumi diiiiiii
i have commented long b4..........but my behooda net.....😭
neways let me comment agn.....
i would say it was soooo sweeeeeeeeet rather than superb!!!!it was rlllly a cute chap.....be it the interaction between KriYa or be the convo of SS n naina.....
i always adore the way krishna carry prats all the time........n trying to pacify her.......😳
n i rllllllly lubd the way he asked her.......eeeeee karo......thats wat my mom used to tell me wen i was child.....coz i was a lil ziddi.......jz lyk Pratigya....😉😆...n i lubd the cute fight of Kriya......😳
awwwww!!!!!Krishna made breakfast for Pratigya.............!!!!!how caring he is.......!!!!!!!!😳
at first i was shocked by SS's reaction.......i thot he will be extremely naaraz with Krishna.........but u proved me that im wrong.......queen of twists.!!!!!!😃
it was gud that arushi told naina about pratigya....otherwise wat will be her condition with the porridge.??????😆😆😆
n it was nice of naina to stay there with pratigya untill her delivery.......hope everything goes well with her delivery too........
diiiiii
for this sweet n cute update......
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
plzzzzzzzzzz update soooooooon..........im dying to read the next part......
hope u r fine.....
MUAHHHHHHH to ur kids.......
lub u loads.....(from me n my frnds)
azi
Edited by zash_LubUKriYa - 14 years ago

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