fan fic-- tum kahaan se aayi ho.(updtd prt 9 pg15) - Page 4

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Posted: 15 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: kaasshh

aur nhi to kya? 😉 kyunki i needed to make the videos too...so i needed to write some similiar scenes...i this ff u will get a video of more or less evry chapter so some scenes will be similiar to the show bt their representation and message will be different....😳



i seee......hmm interesting.......abb bakwass band kar aur jaldi update kar🤣

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Posted: 15 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Aabrayy



i seee......hmm interesting.......abb bakwass band kar aur jaldi update kar🤣

😆😆😆 frse kal.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
that was very interesting and very well written chapter.i am happy that pratigya won the competition.her family is a perfect happy family.i loved the VM the songs and scenes both are awesome.thank u for this wonderful update.waiting for the next chapter.plz continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: halaa

that was very interesting and very well written chapter.i am happy that pratigya won the competition.her family is a perfect happy family.i loved the VM the songs and scenes both are awesome.thank u for this wonderful update.waiting for the next chapter.plz continue soon.

thnx....😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks for the nice,long and wonderful chp⭐️.It was really well written.Towards the end it reminded me exactly of that scene in the serial where Krishna shoots and creates a chaos at Sangam just to hear Pratigya's name.Looking forward to the next chp😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: shruthiR

Thanks for the nice,long and wonderful chp⭐️.It was really well written.Towards the end it reminded me exactly of that scene in the serial where Krishna shoots and creates a chaos at Sangam just to hear Pratigya's name.Looking forward to the next chp😊

u will find some more similiar scenes coz...... i needed to make the story at par with the VMs.....😳 bt the story will be totally different..😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: kaasshh

u will find some more similiar scenes coz...... i needed to make the story at par with the VMs.....😳 bt the story will be totally different..😆

Your VM was very nice as well⭐️
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
wow kaassh such a nice and looooong part 😊 lub it 😊 the vdo is also very 👍🏼😊
continue sooon


Edited by truthseeker123 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
Haaayeeeee I Love This One!!
The Scene Where "Someone" Drags Her Reminded Me Of The Actual Scene In Pratigya Lolz Anyways Update Soon Kaash :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
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part-----2
adarsh arranged for the puja as thngs had calmed down a bit then... the pandit completed all arrangements and told pratigya to sit in the frnt while the yagya was done.... pratigya completed the puja with her own hands as that was only wat dadi had wished for... although she tried to concentrate in the pujas,she cuednt help thnking of that guy,whu saved her life and whuse face she wasnt able to see.. she didnt know why her mind floated away to that instant wen he was dragging her frm within the crowd..... he had such an air of mystery around him that pratigya felt he wasnt any normal guy..... he was SOMETHNG ELSE.......
after the pujas,adarsh hired a boat to take then to the heart of the SANGAM....in water as dadi wished to pray to the ganga maiya....before leaving the place..... aarushi as usual was pretty excited and kept on babbling away..... she cntinuously teased and poked her brother adarsh whu replied to almost each and evrythng she said....
aarushi-----bhaiya jab aapki shaadi ho jayegi na? aap apne biwi ko yehi par le ana aur aise hi kisi boat mein titanic pose karke khde ho jana....maza ayega...
adarsh------kyun? tum hamara photo khichogi kya?
aarushi-------are hum kyun ayenge tum dono ke saath yahan? hume thodi na kabab mein haddi banna hain.....
pratigya giggled at her childishness.... aarushi turned to her------haas kyun rahi ho aap? humne hasnewali baat kya keh diya? aap bhi na did....har baat par aapko hasi aati hain.... then suddenly doing a mimickry of their dadi,she said exactly like her------besharam ladki...sharam bech khayi ho tumne.....
this made pratigya roll down in laughter... dadi turned around at them and casted an angry glance at aarushi.... she made that innocent face at once...... pratigya laughed more.... in fact she cudnt stop...
pratigya----ooohh aarushi bas karo aab....
so much engrossed in their sweetest times with each other,they failed to notice that two pairs of eyes cntinuously watched them,their each and evry move was carefully observed and analysed.....
it was the same guy,whu had saved pratigya.... he was on the same boat,this time with a companion and both of them had their faces covered with a strange-luking shawl.... god knows wat was their motive... bt it cud be clearly said that watevr it was,it wasnt good at all.....
as the boat touched the shore, pratigya and her family slowly got down and headed towards home as their work here was finished...... while walking towards the rickshaws,pratigya,dint know why,felt a somewhat eerie feeling,as if somethng was nt ryt....somethng was terribly wrong.... she evn assumed that someone was following them.. she turned back bt cudnt see anythng or anyone.... sighing,she decided to wipe away all fears frm her mind....
wen the tow rickshaws had completely disappeared frm their sights,the two men,whu had been following pratigya and her family,threw away the shawls and revealed their faces...
they were young guys,probably within the age grup of 20-25,nt more... the guy whu had saved pratigya had sharp features and shrewd eyes...which told a lot... his companion,was fairer and with hazel-coloured eyes..... he was the frst one to speak-------imran bhai...kya yehi woh....
the former one,whuse name was imran waheed replied------haan mansoor,yehi woh parivaar hain....jo hume hamari manzil tak le jayegi......
both of them pushed their way through the crowd and reached the placed where their bikes were kept.... another guy was waiting for them there... he was somewat chubby bt had the same careful expression in his eyes like that of his companions wich distinguished them frm evryone else.....
they mounted their respective bikes and within few moments sped away.....
they went quite far,reaching almost the margins of the town....to a somewhat neglected area...,an incomplete consturuction site... wich was neglected becoz of a squabble between the workers and the owner thus stopping the work in the middle..... imran and his companions were residing their temporarily bt they knew that they had to leave the place as soon as they cud and take shelter somewhere else.... there were just 23 days left....for that BIG DAY.....the day of their mission,for wwich they were there.....
they were in total,six guys.... imran(arhaan behl),mansoor(jaydeep suri),aazim(kunal karan kapoor),rashid(vinay rajput),aamir(kunal madiadwala) and naim (dinesh soi)......
they had travelled all the way frm different places like gujarat,kashmeer,assam and the south with one big aim.....------DESTRUCTION......
yes,they were terrorists.... or in other words,robots in the human form.... wich were designed to destroy...themselves as well the world around them......
after 23 days,KUMBHMELA,or the most sacred festival of the hindus was going to start and these people had come here to create havoc and destruction in it...... to teach the non-muslim people the importance of islam and show them the consequences of not following it......
little did they knew abt the real objectives of islam(non-violence), they learned only wat they were taught and brainwashed to believe.... lil did they know that they were actually committing a dreadful sin for wich Allah wud nvr forgive them....NVR.........According to the Qur'an, God does not love fasad, violence. What is meant here by fasad is clearly expressed in verse 205 of the second Surah. Basically, fasad is that action which results in disruption of the social system, causing huge losses in terms of lives and property......
they greeted each other as they came together.....
imarn,the quietest of all went and sat down a lil distance away frm the others....totally engrossed in somethng.....
mansoor called out to him-------kya imran bhai...us khubsurat bala ke bare mein soch rahe ho?
he was light-mooded and chatty.... didnt quite realise himself wat he was saying.....
imran got up and walked over to him....without a single word,he slapped him hard on his face,giving him the shock of his life.....
aazim-----bhai ye......
imran(in a hissing voice)------agli baar se thappad nhi....sidha sine mein goli chala denge....
mansoor dint dare to reply......
imran held him by his collar and shook him------woh ek HINDU hain....samjhe? ek HINDU.....uski aimiyat sirf itna hi hain.....ki woh hume hamari manzil tak le jayegi......bas........aur kuch nhi.......
mansoor nodded-----samajh gaye hum......dubara aisi baat nhi kahenge......
imran left his collar and adjusted it....
rashid and aazim crept up behind him-----aab age kya karna hain imran bhai.....?
imran-----pehle head quarters se phone aane do.....
rashid------lekin kal tak hume ye jagah khali karna hain.....isbaar security bht strict hain...suna hain tin char ladke ko utha le gaye hain puch dach karne ke liye......
imran-----tumlog apne sar se pareshani ka ye bojh utar do.....hum akele nhi hain...hamare upar bhi log hain is baare mein sochne ke liye.....
then he suddenly smiled at them-------waise..tumlogo ne aaj kamal kar diya......sachmein.... bht accha kaam kiya.....
aazim smiled back,a shrewd,nasty smile------haan bhai...wo rashid ne hi kaha humse ki mele ke bich goliyan chala do...... ek trailor dikhate hain un logo ko...... ki 23 din ke baad kya honewala hain.......
imran-----haan...aur isi wajese hume ek raasta bhi mil gaya unke ghar tak pahuchne ke liye....
aab jo karna hain allah karenge....... he luked above and closed his eyes......
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pratigya felt restless and terribly disturbed..... she turned over frm one side to another in her bed bt cud nt sleep..... sighing,she got up and drank water frm the table beside..... she touched her neck and shoulders..... and realised that she was sweating like hell......
pratigya----ye ho kya raha hain hume...jabse hum sangam se wapas aye hain...hume itna ajeeb kyun lag raha hain....hume aisa kyun lag raha hain ki kuch bht bura honewala hain....
she got up and walked towards the window,to take in some fresh air.... the moon shone brightly in the sky..... as she looked up at its perfect beauty.... wen suddenly she felt someone's hand on her shoulder... she turned back to see that it was aarushi.....
aarushi-----di aap yahan kya kar rahi hain?
pratigya----aarushi woh....hume neend nhi aa rahi thi to humne socha ki......
aarushi------di hum jante hain aapko kaunsi baat pareshan kar rahi hain....
pratigya looked at her,surprised... she herself cudnt understand wat was troubling her then how cud aarushi know it?
aarushi-----woh aaj sangam mein jo huya uske bare mein soch rahi ho na aap?
pratigya dint reply.....
aarushi-----are didi,ye sab to chalta hi rehta hain....aap pareshan mat hoiye...shukhar hain aapko kuch nhi hua...humlog to bht darr gaye the jab aap gayab ho gayi thi......
pratigya smiled-----oho...meri naani ma....bht bolne lagi ho tum....
aarushi giggled and pulled her hand----chaliye na...so jaiye...yahan khade rehne se aapka rajkumar jaldi nhi aa jayega.......
she dragged pratigya towards the bed......
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imarn,aazim and mansoor were given the task of stalking the saxena family members... they knew that if for once imran cud get inside their house by some reasons,he wud be perfectly safe till the day of their mission.... the saxena family was the most respected and honoured family in the whole town and noone wud evr suspect them.....
pratigya had gone to civil lines for shopping with her mother....and imran followed them there..... he was just told to stalk them and keep a note of their activities and so he did..... as they went inside a saree shop,he decided to stay outside...
after few minutes,his mobile rang..... he picked it up-----helo...
the voice on the other side was serious,and somewhat husky------imran.....
imran-----bataiye......(it was a call frm their headquarters)
the voice-----jald se jald us jagah ko khali kar do....police ko shak ho gaya hain....humne aamir aur naim ko bata diya hain.....woh dono abhi hamare ek shubhchintak ke ghar mein hain....rashid hamare ghar par hain..... baki tum tino....... jald se jald apna thikana dhund lo...tum saxena ke ghar mein kisi bhi tarah entry maro...... aazim aur mansoor ko hum dekh lenge.....
imran-----thk hain.....
he put down his mobile,tensed..... now how wud he be able to do that?
pratigya and naina ji came out of the saree shop with some plastic bags in their hands... they had bought some sarees for their relatives whu wud be arriving at their home in the festive season...after few days......
naina ji called a rickshaw and they got on it... without thnking twice,imran mounted his bike and came in frnt of the rickshw,deliberately hitting it hard on the frnt wheel and throwing himself down on the road... he perforemed the drama so tactfully that it seemed he had lost cntrol over his brakes wich made him hit the rickshaw.......
fortunately,pratigya and her mother did nt suffer much injury...bt pratigya jumped down frm the rickshaw and came running to imran.....
she knelt down beside him and helped him to get up.... his elbow had got scratched and blood was oozing out of the wound... she touched the place carefully and gently.....making a worried face... imran felt a strong desire to push her hand away...bt he cntrolled himself as he knew that he had to give some sacrifices in order to accomplish his mission and this was one of them,to be touched by a HINDU grl.......
pratigya(with deep concern in her voice)-----aap....aap thk to hain na?
imran-----hmm....bas..thodi si chot hain....
pratigya pulled him by his other hand------aap ayiye hamare saath.....
imran-------nhi....iski koi zaroorat nhi hain.....
naina ji came towards them and poked in between-------zaroorat kaise nhi hain beta...hamare ghar yehi paas mein hain...tum chalo hamare saath...... rickshaw!!! she called another rickshaw and got on it... then she said to pratigya------tum inhe lekar ghar aajao..thk hain?
pratigy(to her mother)-----jee mummy...(to imran)-----chaliye....
imran,(making a face)iski koi zaroorat nhi thi...aaplog khamkha hi......
silently muttering to himself,he let himself being pulled along by her........
pratigya helped him to get up on the rickshaw and took her seat beside him......
he edged away frm her to keep the minimum contact ...as it irritated and disgusted him......
smiling to himself he realised that the frst phase of his mission was completed..............
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Edited by kaasshh - 15 years ago

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