Life Partner Fanfic Last part - Page 4

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Posted: 15 years ago
#31
that was very nice and sweet part.i am excited that they are going to meet outside.can't wait to read more.plz update soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32
all parts mind blowing , superb , cool and well written thanks a lot for pm and sorry for late reply
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
I read the last two chps which you had updated now.I really like the way this ff is turning out to be😊.I kinda like this Krishna in your ff,atleast he's honest😊.Looking forward to the next chp😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34

Life partner Part 5


Pratigya is looking at her wardrobe with confusion.
Bhumi:You have so many beautiful dresses.Why are you confused?
P:First time i'm going for a date.That's why.
Bhumi tkes a jeans and top.
B:Wear this.
Pratigya wears it.
B:Cool.

Pratigya's cell phone rings and she goes to her room to attend the call.
K:Krishna here.
P:Hi Krishna.I will strt now.
K:Ok.Please wear the yellow saree.You looked very pretty in that saree.Sarees suit you very well.
Pratigya is surprised:You remember the colour of my saree?
K:Ya..how can i forget it?It is your saree.
Pratigya smiles.

Prtigya comes out of her room.Bhumi is surprised to see her in the yellow saree.
B:You changed your dress?
P:Krishna wants me to wear this saree.He liked this saree.
Bhumi smiles:A person who is not used to wearing saresses is wearing saree now for the fiance.Great!
Pratigya is shy.

Pratigya goes to hotel Blue star where Krishna is waiting for her.
Krishna receives her with red roses.She is surprised.
K:I don't know whether you like roses or not.
P:I love it.I have a rose garden in my house.
K:I saw it.But i doubted whether it is your's or someone else's.
Pratigya takes the flowers from him.Krishna's eyes are on her.
Pratigya realizes that he is staring t her.She becomes conscious of herself and looks down.
K:Shall we have icecream and cocktail?Do you like it?
P:Sure.I love it.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
Aww,this was such a sweet part⭐️.Looking forward to the next chp😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36

Hello Jasmine! Read Part 4 and 5 just now... Lolzzz, I think ur updates are getting shorter and shorter OR maybe, I'm the one who wants to read more and more of ur FF...😕😆😆😆 Thanx for the update...😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
#37
loved the update it was very cute
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
Sweet part 😊
Look forward to the next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
Liked he update but me too want longer updates 😊
Also I hope this Krishna's thoughts will be modern, broad minded n won't treat women as doormats 😆
Edited by dkmystery - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
sorry guys...i have very less time

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