Life Partner Fanfic Last part - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
#11
that was very interesting. thank u for this update.i am happy that krishna's parents accepted pratigya whole heartedly. both are very shy in their first meeting. plz continue soon and thank u so much for ur pm.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12
Nice part
Will be interesting to see how they interact
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13
Prats doesn't seem to be much interested in the marriage, hmmm..
pls could you have detailed chaps, coz it is interesting to read more in one go 😊
I liked your FF...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14
Awwwwwwwhhhhhhhh!!! Sooo Sweeett!
Update Soon x
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Posted: 15 years ago
#15

great part...well written👏 waiting for the next update😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
#16
Hello Jasmine! Finished reading the two parts and I enjoyed reading BOTH of them... Do continue soon! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 15 years ago
#17
update soon its was nice
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Life partner Part 3

Krishna breaks the ice:I'm not a saint.I'm short tempered.I don't know how to be sweet.I don't smoke.But once in a while i drink.I can't guarantee you a complete smooth life.Sometimes life with me may be tough.
Pratigya:You said you don't know to be sweet.But admitting your faults itself is sweet.
Krishna smiles.
P:But drinking is not good for health.
K:Ok.I will stop it for you.
She raises her eye brows and looks at him.His eyes touch her eyes.She looks down.
K:I don't know what your reply is.Think and tell.I won't get a better girl.All i can say is..after seeing you i am not able to think of anyone else.

Pratigya is touched by his words.Krishna leaves the room.Others re waiting outside the room.
Mohini:You spoke to Pratigya?
K:Yes.

Bhumi and Manthan go to Pratigya.
B:How is Krishna?Too serious?
P:He did'nt say anything good about himself.He talked only about his faults.I liked it.
M:Wow!So you liked him?
Pratigya blushes.

Om rings up Anirudh:Pratigya liked Krishna.
A:Wow!Great!
Anirudh goes to Krishna and others:Pratigya is ready for the marriage.
Ronit:Wow!
Krishna is confused.

Pratigya gets a phone call.
P:Who is speaking?
K:Krishna.
She is surprised:How did you get my number?
K:From Om uncle.What is your reply?
P:Dad had told your dad..
K:Ya.But i want to know it from you.Did nyone force you?
P:No one forced me.It is my reply.
K:Now tell your reply.
She is shy:Yes...i'm...
She can't say anything more.
K:Yes from me also.
They both smile.
Edited by jasminerahul - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#19
good! but pls make it a longer n detailed chap next, I loved ur writing style, fast paced..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20
Its Great! But Please Make It Longer, I Love It! :D
Update Soon x

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