Life Partner Fanfic Last part - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
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I no that i need 2 ost long chapters.But lack of time does'nt allow me 2 write more.plz 4giv me
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

I no that i need 2 ost long chapters.But lack of time does'nt allow me 2 write more.plz 4giv me


don't say sorry yar! 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

I no that i need 2 ost long chapters.But lack of time does'nt allow me 2 write more.plz 4giv me

Heyy Dont Say Sorry, It Happens With Me...Thats Why I Dont Even Post On My FanFic😆😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
that was very nice update. i like krishna's honesty very much .pratigya is too shy but very sweet also.their first meeting was very interesting. thank u for this lovely update and ur pm. plz continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25

Hi there! Even I like the fast pace of ur FF... It would've been MORE fun to read if it were longer, but dont be sorry if u dont have enough time.😉

Will be waiting for the next update. Thanx!😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26
Nice part
So both have agreed
Look forward to the next part 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27

Life partner Part 4


Krishna:I heard that you are a dancer.
Pratigya:Not really.I love dancing.That's all.
K:I would love to dance.Will you teach me to dance?
Pratigya giggles.
K:Your laughter sounds nice.
P:Thank you.
K:Shall we meet one day?
P:What?
K:We will meet outside.
P:I have to get my parents' permission.
K:Sure.Even i have to get my parents' permission.
"Pratigya!"Bhumi calls her.
Pratigya smiles:Ok...Bhumi is calling me.So bye...
K:Bye..
After putting the phone down Krishna tells himself:Bhumi interrupted our conversation.Stupid girl!

Pratigya goes to the room where all are there.
B:Where were you?
Pratigya is shy:Krishna was on the phone.
They all smile.
P:He said he got my number from dad.
Om:Yes.I gave him the number.
P:He wants to meet me outside.
O:Why not?You go..
She smiles.

Krishna tells Mohini:Mom,i'm planning to meet Pratigya outside.
Mohini:No way.
K:Why?
M:Because you both are not married yet.What will others talk bout you both.It will harm the reputation of our family.
K:But she is my fiancee.
M:Even the engagement is not over.
K:Nonsense!
Krishna goes inside his room.
Pratigya rings him up.
P:I'm Pratigya.
K:Hi Pratigya..happy to hear your voice.
P:I got permission from my parents.
K:But i did'nt get permission from my mom.She is totally against the concept of dating.I'm angry with my mom now.
Pratigya becomes dull.
P:Don't be angry with your mom.She is your mom.We have to obey our elders.
Ronit enters Krishna's room.
Krishna sees him.
K:I will call you lter.
He puts the phone down.
R:You are so narrow minded.Who will ask their parents to give permission for dating?
You go brother.Make your lady love happy.Have fun with Pratigya.
Krishna smiles:Yes.
He calls up Pratigya:Hi Pratigya...i'm Krishna.We will meet.
P:You got permission?
K:No.But we will meet.
She smiles.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
Awwwwhhhhhhh!!! Sooooo Sweeeet!!
Update Soon :D
XxX
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29

all three parts (2,3 &4) are great. keep rocking😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
hey just read ur ff .. gr8t yr 👏😳 plz plz plz continue soooooooon 😊

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