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Posted: 15 years ago
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Here goes the next part...no Pratigya in this part as well, any guess what she's doing ? 😆


Part Two



Chandu and Tunna stood in front of Thakur Sajjan Singh, their heads bowed, listening to his rant quietly. The people around were giving them annoying glances, though not daring to interrupt the man.

The head nurse has once tried to remind him that this was a hospital and there were other patients too. But with the threat of being cut down into pieces, she's given up.



"What the hell were you two doing? Where were you two worthless when that wretched son of mine was roaming the city in the middle of the night, that too without being armed?"



"He said he wanted to be alone." mumbled Chandu only to fuel Sajjan Singh more. "Ohho, he asked you to leave him alone. Then you should've known he's going to do something stupid. Don't you know you should not pay heed to him nowadays? Gone mental that one, for that fairy b***h!"



Sensing the danger, Chandu & Tunna remained quiet. SS kept pacing around the hospital corridor like a mad man muttering things like, 'never seen a man go so much crazy', 'shame on thakur's blood', 'bloody professor's daughter' and many more things, mainly abuse of Pratigya.



It has been almost 8 hours since Chandu and Tunna has found Krishna being beaten up by five or six masked men. The men have hurried away as soon as they've seen them. The duo has never seen anything like this before. Until now none have dared to attack Krishna. They've rushed him to hospital, informed SS about the incident and have been bearing SS's tantrums since then. Meanwhile, the doctor was assuring them that it was nothing serious, but still refused to let them see him.






Right now, as they saw a young doctor approaching SS, they felt pity for the man. SS was making dangerous faces while talking with him.



"I think Bhaia is alright now." Chandu muttered to Tunna.



"Then why is his father threatening the doctor?" Tunna asked back in a whisper.



Chandu shrugged, "Because that's what he do all the time. If something was wrong, the doctor would've experienced physical harm by now. Let's go and see."



Tunna nodded in agreement as they slowly went forward.



...................



Sajjan Singh growled angrily watching the bandaged state of his son. Limping towards the bed, he poked him gently.



"Baba, Baba?"



Krishna opened his eyes slightly, drowsy from medication. "Why am I in this place? I'm going home now, hate the doctors..."



"Didn't realize it while doing your 'Majnugiri' at the middle of the night, bloody idiot?" SS roared. Krishna ignored him, "Where's Pratigya?"




"Gone down the drains! Don't start you Pratigya pratigya chant once again, I'll injure your other arm then."



"Where is she?" Krishna demanded again.


"What were you hoping that your b***hy wife will come running to you now that you are covered with white pieces of clothes all over you? She won't come here. She said she doesn't care two hoots if you die and said she'd be rather happy if it happens."



SS was expecting a temper tantrum from his son but was shocked as Krishna simply shook his head and said "No."



Then he turned his face away from his father and closed his eyes again.



"Black-magicked my poor Baba, that white witch..." grumbled SS as he went out of the room.




.......................




Buniya almost screamed as she watched SS entering the house. "How is my Baba? Why didn't you bring him back? Why didn't you take me there with you.."



SS, in a foul temper, shoved his wife roughly away from him. "Stop the drama and get me some water. Why didn't you take me there..heh! What would've you done there? Cured Baba with your non-stop nonsense lectures?"



"But.."



"Shut up or I'd make a football of you, nonsense!" SS threatened as he took his seat beside his mother who immediately rang out her bell.



"Don't you start also! One more ring and I'll tie a bell around your neck and throw you in the corn field."



His mother looked highly offended, but probably judging his temper didn't pursue him any more and sat quietly. Few seconds later Buniya came with a glass of water and handed it to him. She was sobbing slightly.



"Now what?" SS bellowed.



"Ever since Baba has married that girl, he's having one accident after another. She's so unlucky for him, and the whole family." she sniffed. SS rolled his eyes, "There your son is on hospital, and still all you do is to badmouth your daughter-in-law. Your kitchen time drama is killing me! And what do YOU want?" he asked Shakti who just entered the hall with a sombre expression.




Shakti hesitated a bit and then said, "Bauji, some labours have gone on a strike. They are not working and they are inspiring everyone to become rebels."



.....................






Preview for Next Part -



Krishna smirked, "You know Bauji, I'm missing Pratigya very much."


SS sighed as he looked at his son, "I know what you mean. Ok, I admit defeat. I'll bring you your wife back..."



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Posted: 15 years ago
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1st 2 comment 😆 wonderful update 👏 xxx
Edited by Mariam...x - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice chap 😊
preview 4r the next part seems interesting 😉 😳 cant wait 4r the next chap!!
*excited*
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I just read chp 2.It was a very nice chp⭐️Hate the way SS is giving Pratigya gaalis😡.Looking forward to the next chp😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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soooo beautiful.....😍 waiting for the next part😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Great work! 👏 I liked the second part! I hate the way Buniya keeps badmouthing Pratigya though! 😡
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey againn,
I was right I did recognise your FFs, lol. Anywy this part was great, I didn't except it, but that was the best bit. Also SS showing his true feelings, but didn't like the gaalis, lol.
Fab chapter, keep up the great work!
And thanks ever so much for the pm, muchh appreciated.
Update soon!
Love Aluu😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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aweeee ! i juz love the way u r writing this ff ..... & i m super super super excited for the precape !😊 please............ update soon 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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that was very nice update.i really feel sad for Krishna.thank u for this update. the preview seems to be very interesting .waiting for the next one. plz update soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mariam...x

1st 2 comment 😆 wonderful update 👏 xxx






Thanks
😉



Originally posted by: JoeyZaza

nice chap 😊

preview 4r the next part seems interesting 😉 😳 cant wait 4r the next chap!!
*excited*





Thanks for commenting...:D




Originally posted by: shruthiR

I just read chp 2.It was a very nice chp⭐️Hate the way SS is giving Pratigya gaalis😡.Looking forward to the next chp😊





Thanks....well all the Thakur's are always giving Pratigya Gaalis...don't they?




Originally posted by: kaasshh

soooo beautiful.....😍 waiting for the next part😊





Thankooo...btw, love your siggie...Ranbir...😍



Originally posted by: -sunlight-

Great work! 👏 I liked the second part! I hate the way Buniya keeps badmouthing Pratigya though! 😡





Thanks dear...I can't bear Buniya either...🤢



Originally posted by: luv angel

Hey againn,
I was right I did recognise your FFs, lol. Anywy this part was great, I didn't except it, but that was the best bit. Also SS showing his true feelings, but didn't like the gaalis, lol.
Fab chapter, keep up the great work!
And thanks ever so much for the pm, muchh appreciated.
Update soon!
Love Aluu😊





I have to say that you've got a good memory. I wrote on the KS forum ages ago...😆
Hmm..what's SS without his gaalis....
Don't mention, it was no sweat....
😃




Originally posted by: kriya_fan

aweeee ! i juz love the way u r writing this ff ..... & i m super super super excited for the precape !😊 please............ update soon 😉





Um..Thanks a ton! I'm glad you are enjoying this...😳




Originally posted by: halaa

that was very nice update.i really feel sad for Krishna.thank u for this update. the preview seems to be very interesting .waiting for the next one. plz update soon.





Thanks Dear! Next update very soon....😛



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