FF- Pyar Aur Romance PROMO Pg 40

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ArhainAshish

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Posted: 15 years ago

#51

wowwww aabray not bad hannn;)now m jealous ehehe

continue shoonnn

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aleena1

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Posted: 15 years ago

#52

Hey its an interesting fanfic. keep it up👍🏼

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haala

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Posted: 15 years ago

#53

thanks for this awesome update and ur pm. i just loved it.it seems to be so interesting that they are going to do a project together. can't wait to read what will happen during the project.plz update soon.

Edited by halaa - 15 years ago

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Maarrriiiam...Mariam :-)

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Posted: 15 years ago

#54

awww he was playin the guitar 😃 awesome update thank uuuu xxxx

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nida

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Posted: 15 years ago

#55

Aabray..omg..i seriousllyyy loved it gall..👏
i can imagine..each and every single part..😍
when Krishna takes off his helmet..ufff that was o la la laa..LOL😳😆
😆 and now Krishna and pratigya finally met...im reallii excited about the project..plzz do update soon hun..😃

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Payal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#56

hey...am getting glimpses of MJHT in it... lovely... missing Mayur...terribly... gud that u a getting lil tinges from that stry.... n den KriYa is just superb...waiting for moreeeeeee 😛

Love,
Payal

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Sadie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#57

Awwww Sooooooooo Sweeeeeettt!!

Update Soon x

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Aabray

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Posted: 15 years ago

#58

@manal: thanks dear.......and its alri8😳
thanks monika, arhaina, aleena, halaa, mariam, sadia

@nida: finallly.........thanks KSKS glad u lykd it
@payal: yeah....was inspired by All starone shows😳 and thanks

Im still updating......sory actually was sooo excited on 13th and 14th June for SPA and Tereliye
soo didnt thot abt my FF😛
anyways thanks for liking my FF😊

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aleena1

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Posted: 15 years ago

#59

Amazing fanfic Aaabray, keep it up👍🏼👍🏼, cant wait for the next update😊

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Aabray

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Posted: 15 years ago

#60

thanQ soooo much frndss for liking my FF.....wil try to keep up wid ur expectations😊
pluss check my msg above

Chapter 6

Komal going to library(to meet adarsh). On the way a basketball bits her back.She turns back and Adarsh comes to take the basketball.
Adarsh: "oh im sory......aapko lagi to nahin....."
Komal: "noo im alri8, next time b carefull (warns him), aur waise bhi main tumhe hii dhundh rahii thi."
Adarsh: "mujhe par kyun??.(confused)
Komal: "hiii im komal, komal singh...(she stopped to let him guess)
Adarsh: "komal......(thinkin)oh yeah my project partner......ritee"
Komal: "yuppp, but lemme tell u onething, main bilkul bhi padakoo nahin hoon, aur nahin mujhe padne ka shawk hain, mujhe zyaada kaam maat dena."
Adarsh (uttering to himself) - ye kaha phasa diya mujheee.oh Godddd"
Komal : "kuch kaha tumnee?? "
Adarsh: "nooo nth, and u dnt worry, main akele hii sab samhalungi"
Komal : "arrree arree......tumakele sab samhalke, saara credit khud hi lene chahte ho?, jii nahin, main aisa bilkul bhi nahin hone doongi.....main tumhari help karoongi......"
Adarsh: "acha thik hain..waise project partner help to zaroor karogi tum."
Komal: "accha to abb canteen chalke dher saari gossips karenge.."
Adarsh : "par kyun...?"
Komal: "arre agar baat nahin karenge to ek saath project kaise karenge?"
Adarsh : "so to hain...." (then both of them goes to canteen)

Rolli, Chandu, Tunna, Pooja was there.The four was rlly enjoying.
Tunna was cracking jokes and everyone was laughing at it.
Komal was surprised to see that pooja and rolli alrdy made frndss
and that too "boy" frndss........]
Komal (sitting beside pooja) : "kya hua? tum log itne chaldi dost bana liye?"
Pooja : "arre nahin ye to humare project partners hain, Tunna and Chandu (introduces them)"
Tunna and Chandu and Komal says Hii/Hellos to each other.
Pooja: "waise ye log bohot funny hain komal, tu agar inke saath rahegi na to pagal ho jayegii...."
Komal : "wo to tujhe dekh ke hi samajh gayii.....(she luks at adarsh)
"umm adarsh hum dusre jaage pe beth ke baat karte hain....."
Adarsh : "Library Chalee..?? i think we can talk there nicely.."
Komal(felt happy) : "haa chalo.."

In Library
Adarsh and Komal takes sits.Both were silent for few seconds.
Komal was nervous as if she is on a date.....and Adarsh was confused how to start the convo as he dont talk to girls usually.
But after sumtime adarsh spoke.
Adarsh: "Soo.....tum kaha see ho?"
Komal :" waise to main Allahabad see hoon lekin last year dadaji ke jaane ke baad hum sab mumbai shift ho gaye, aur tum?"
Adarsh : "well main to janam se yehi hoon....."
Komal : "wow, phir to tum yaha ka baremein sab kuch jante ho.....nahin?"
Adarsh : "yupp,, aur iss college baremain bhi bohot kuch janta hoon..."
Komal : "interesting.....mujhe to laga tha ke tum sirf yee library mein rehte hoon.....aur iske bina tumhe aur kuch pata bhii nahin..."
Adarsh : "naahiin aisa koi baat nahin, wo itne saalon (years) se hoon to automatically sab kuch jangaya..tumhe kuch janna hain?"
Komal : "nahiin wo vai ne bohot kuch bataye humhee........wo hi digest nahin ho raha abhi tak..."
Adarsh : "bhai?"
Komal : "haa.....tumhare class main hain.....Krishna...."
Adarsh: "oh to tum krishna ke behen hoo....." Komal nods.
Komal : "haa aur pata hain, tumhari behen pratigya aur mere bhai krishna dono project partners han....cross link hain na humm charon kee.?"
Adarsh : "soo to hain......pata nahin wo dono manage kar payega ya nahin?"
Komal : "kar payega.......aab hum dono ko hii dekhlo......kabb see baat kar rahe hain.....waqt dhan nahin rahaa......."
Adarsh (luks at his watch) : "ohh......ur ritee......bohot der ho chuki hain....
abb humhe ghar chalna chahiye.....kaal hum project ke topic decide karenge..okhe byeeee" adarsh leaves
Komal: "bye. hmm not bad.....itna boring bhi nahin hain mr.padakoo"

(At Night)
at Saxena's
Pratigya leaning on her bed reading a romantic novel when then her mobile rings.
Pratigya: "ye kiska number hain?" (she answers the phone) "hello?"
(on the other side its krishna)
Krishna: "hii miss.temper....sup?"
Pratigya (recognised) : "krishnaaa?, tumhee mera number kaha se mili?"
Krishna: "oh cmn yaar hum project partners hain, kabhi bhi kisi se mang sakti hoon, baas Sir ko bola kii mujhee pratigya see zaroori baat karne the project ke baremein aur iss liye mujhe uski number chahiye...........bass phir Sir khushi tumhara number mujhe de dii... aur kuch jaanna hain??"
Pratiga: "kiss liya phone kiya?"
Krishna: "baas.. tumhari voice sunne ka bada maan kiya iss liyee..."
Pratigya(irritated) : "accha sunliya aab rakhoo phoneee..." (she was abt to cut the phone....but then
Krishna sed : "arree phir see gussaa......arre main to baas iss liye call ki ke kaal hum project ke topic discuss karenge........alri8?"
Prats: "ye to tum kaal college main bhi bol sakte the...?"
Krish: "haa paar tumhe aaj bol diya...jus aise hi u know..."
Prats: " ho gayee.ab rakhoon?"
Krish(dont want to) : "haa rakhon......umm byee(waiting for her to cut the phone 1st)
Prats: "byeee.....(she cuts.) stupidd......pata nahin wo kaun sa manhoos ghadi thi jab mujhe isse palla parah.........oh God....pata nahin is ke saath project kaise karungi......anywayss is ke baremain soch sochna bandh kar and go to sleep kaal college bhi jana hain......" she then lies and closed her eyes.
Krishna: "aaj tak koi krishna ki phone ase nahin rakhdi....aur ye kaal ke aaye hui ladkii mera phone kat dia........iss ladki ko dekhna padegaa........"

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sorrry its very small chap.......but promise next chap will loong and interesting😳

Edited by Aabrayy - 15 years ago