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Posted: 15 years ago
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No problem Sadie,take your time and all the best for your exams👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
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oh its ok no problem.and best of luck for ur exams.i will wait for ur update.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: SadieLuvs_Suku

Guys I Forgot To Tell You That I Have 3 Exams Coming Up! All In June Eeekkk! And I HAVE NOT REVISED A Bit!😲

Now I Have Stopped Myself From Going On Msn, Facebook, Youtube Etc. Untill My Exams Are Over. So My Next Update Will Be After The Exams Sorry! I Will Write A LONG Chapter But I Have To Revise At The Moment.Hope You Understand😔

its perfectly okay dearie...😳 we will wait patiently😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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gud luk with ur exams...hope they go really well 👍🏼 xxx
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Heyy Guyz! Ive Been On IF Since Ages And Thought I Might Just Post The Next Chapter And Also Since 3 Days I've Taken Few Minutes To Write A Bit And Then Save😆 Okay So Next Chapter Coming Up In Few Minutes As I Need To Do 2 Things, One End The Chapter With A BANG😆 And Stick My Title Up🤣 Oh And Copy And Paste The Whole Chapter , That Makes Three Things Then😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: SadieLuvs_Suku

Heyy Guyz! Ive Been On IF Since Ages And Thought I Might Just Post The Next Chapter And Also Since 3 Days I've Taken Few Minutes To Write A Bit And Then Save😆 Okay So Next Chapter Coming Up In Few Minutes As I Need To Do 2 Things, One End The Chapter With A BANG😆 And Stick My Title Up🤣 Oh And Copy And Paste The Whole Chapter , That Makes Three Things Then😆

Awesome!!! I want to see what MCC does today 😉😆
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Originally posted by: dramaddict

Awesome!!! I want to see what MCC does today 😉😆

😆 Its Gnna Be😳 Cz Im Not Sure😆
Okay Im Posting Now
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Heyy This Is Chapter Five Enjoy😃😳
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Chapter Five

Both stopped and turned around to see who it was.

Pratigya: Arushiiiii!!! Helppp Me! Bhaiya's Going To Kill Me!

Adarsh: Nahi ! Main Tumhaari Pooja Karoon Ga!

Arushi: Stop It! Both Of You!

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"Wah Bhaiya" Said Chandu.

"Haan Wow Bhaiya! Do You Like That Girl?" Asked Tunna.

"Pratigya Naam Hai Uska Samjhe?" Replied Krishna, Somewhat Giving Angry Glares At Jai And Veeru. (Sounds familiar lolz)

"And anyways, tum logon ko bata kar kya karoon, chalo hatto, mujhe kaam hai" He continued.

He pushed past tunna chandu and stood in front of the large mirror, supported by a tree!

Krishna: kaisa lag raha hoon main?

No Answer

Krishna: Behre ho gaye ho ka? maine kaha how am i looking?

Tunna : You're looking beautiful Bhaiya! Aap bohot sundar lag rahe hain :D

Chandu was shocked, same time about to laugh.

Chandu: Abhe you idiot! look Bhaiya's gnna give you a tight slap now watch!

Krishna , had mixed expressions on his face, walked towards tunna and grabbed him by his collar and said,

"Beautiful?!, Sundar?! ek baat bata, tujhe kya main ladki dikhta hoon? yeh shabd ladkiyon ke liye hain...jaaise MERI PRATIGYA ... He let go of tunna's collar

Silence for few moments between the three guys.

"Waise ek baat bolon?" Said tunna, breaking the silence.

"Tu chup hi re samjhe?" said chandu .

"Arre tum pagal loge mujhe ek din pagal kar do gay! Said Krishna and walked to the mirror , more like the tree mirror.

All he could think about was what he'll do when he meets her. How will he talk to her? How will he say his feelings to her? Oh stop it! Im not that scared ! Just practicing how i'll show myself in front of Pratigya. Ohhh what am i thinking?! i've already talked to her! Was soo confident and will be confident at the cafe. He was really on the nineth cloud, untill tunna and chandu interupted him, again.

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Pratigya: Arushi Yaarr! stop saying stop it and help me!!

Arushi: how can i? i dont even know why you're fighting

Adarsh: FOR YOUR INFORMATION MISS RATZ HAS STOLEN MY IPOD!!!

Pratigya: OYE!! DONT CALL ME THAT! YOU ..ADZ!!

Adarsh: THEN DONT CALL ME ADZ!!

Pratigya: YOU STARTED IT! ADZ ADZ ADZ ADZ ADZ!!

Adarsh: RATZ RATZ RATZ RATZ!!

Arushi : started Laughing

Adarsh Pratigya together : Huh? Why you Laughing for?

Arushi: i have the ipod you dumbos!! but i'm loving your Adz And Ratz Convo!! hahahahaha continue it! you lot should stay in a circus ! you'll make enough money to get another Ipod! She couldn't stop laughing.

Now both were furious at Arushi! And guess what happend next? THEY CHASED ARUSHI!!

Now Arushi was running, behind her was Adarsh and then it was Pratigya Running behind adarsh but in front of Arushi.

Thake hue, paani ke piyaase, were the three siblings, flying all over the place and ended up lying on the sofa, all together.

Nainaji entered the room and saw the messing around. "offooo!!" she shouted, "tum teeno bacho ki tarah behave karte ho!"

Pratigya Adarsh And Arushi together: BACHE HI TOH HAIN!! they started laughing along with Nainaji.

Suddenly Pratigya remembered what happend in college, and stood up. Arushi and adarsh were still sitting, well lying on the sofa and still fighting for the ipod.

So Pratigya quickly left the place and headed towards her room saying she's going to her room to get fresh.

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"Kya Aap ko lagta hai woh aye gi?" Asked Chandu.

"Mera matlab woh shareef ladki hai aur aapse kabhi milli bhi nahi hai toh.." he stopped.

"Mujhe poora yakeen hai ki woh ayegi, agar woh sharef hai toh hum kya beshram hain?! hum bhi bohot izzat walay hain samjhe? Aur raha sawaal milne ka, abhi subha ko toh milli thi ullu kahi ka!" Said Krishna.

(Seriously i am crap at writing in hindi! i'll write in english but just assume its the people in the drama and its the exact language , Krishna's language, you know the lub, bolbo and all that lolz. Oh and some hindi dialogues are familiar to me so i'll include that .)

Tunna: Arre Bhaiya you dont understand what he meant! Chandu agreed with him like "Haan!" but the hand movement one lolz

Krishna: Abhe you chup karo! everytime you bolbo, you always bolbo trash! Loool!

Both went quiet after listening to Their Bhaiya's mindblowing HINGLISH loool!!

Now there was nothing to argue about. Whatever he had said, was bound to happen, It was BOUND To happen.

Okay my next update will be after the exams and i hope this is long enough as i use massive writing when im typing so to me its long but after i post it it'll be really short😆 anyways i hope you liked it😳

Edited by SadieLuvs_Suku - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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First to comment! 🥳
Well done 👏
Aww MCC is conscious about his looks!!!! 😳 😆 How cute is that?! I loved the lines you used, esp. agar woh sharef hai toh hum kya beshram hain?! 🤣!!!!!!
I am eager to see their cafe encounter! Please update soon :]
Edited by dramaddict - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: dramaddict

Reserbed 😆 First to comment yaya! 🥳

😆Looks Like Krishna Has Made You Completely Crazy Di!🤣 Wohoo First To Comment Back!😆

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