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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
Heyy Guyz!! Thank You Soooooooo Much For Commenting And I Appreciate All Your Comments😃
Okay Here's Chapter 3. I Tried Making It As Long As Possible But Because Of My HUGE Fonts It Turned Out To Be Quite Short ...Again😡
Okay Enough Of Me 😆
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Chapter Three

"Kya Baat Hai Bhaiya!" Said Chandu.

Krishna was smiling and still looking at her while she was running away. He was not listening to whatever chandu was saying.

"Mann Hi Mann Muskara Rahe Hain Bhaiya" said tunna, jokingly.

Krishna was feeling shy now and kept ignoring whatever they were saying.

"Abh toh milna hi parega" he said, to himself again.

Pratigya was running as fast as she could and finally stopped in front of the college gate, gasping for breath. Finally she stopped breathing heavily and looked around to see if Krishna was there or not. To her relief, he was not there, she sighed and stepped inside the college gates.

She tried to act normal but she just could not. All she was thinking about now was her meeting with Krishna Singh. Again she was so lost in her thoughts that she did not realise where she was going. Suddenly she crashed with someone and went flying back. She nearly fell but managed to get a hold of herself. Now she was fuming with anger, and without looking who she collided with, started venting her anger at the "stranger".

"WOW GREAT! pehle se hi mera mood itna kharaab hai aur aap hain ki" she said .

"I'm sorry" he replied

"Sorry Se Kaam nahi chale ga!!" she said

"Kaha na sorry, Pratigya Ji". He said

Pratigya had calmed down now and took a second look at the stranger.

"Oh No!" she thought. It can't be him! Oh please not him! She continued.

The "stranger" was no more a stranger. It was Krishna!! Oh My Goddd!! how can that be possible?!! She could not believe it was him again.

"Just incase you're thinking what am i doing here, i came here looking for you" he winked.

(Guys Ive got no idea where my fanfic is going!)

She didn't know what to say now.

K: Heyy tumne kya koi bhoot dekh liya?

P: Haan kuch aisa hi samajh lo" she murmured

K: Did you say something?

P: Oh, No Not at all.

K: Cool! okay mujhe aapse baat karni hai, kya aap uss cafe(pointing to the nearest cafe outside the college) haan woh wala. Kya aap uss cafe par aa sakti hain shyam ko pleaseeee. He Finished with such a cutee smile.

Pratigya stood there like a statue for few moments. What was he on about?! And how can she go with him? She doesn't even know him.

P: What?!

K: I Said, kya aap mere saath uss cafe main aa sakti hain shyam ko?

P: Aap yeh sab kyun kar rahe hain? main aap ko jaanti tak nahi

K: Hi my name is Krishna Singh our main aapse milna chahata hoon

She was stunned at his sudden change . I Mean, what does he want?!

Krishna However, felt like he was on the nineth cloud! Finally she will get to know his true feelings and then accept him.

"I Dont know...i think you're mistaken" she said

"What? mistaken for what?" he replied

"Anyways yeah i will meet you outside the cafe at 5pm today" he continued.

"Lekin-"she couldn't finish. Krishna had left without waiting for her reply.

"Abh main kya karon?" she asked herself. She was really confused now, what should she do now?

She was sitting in her class, but could not concentrate properly. All she was thinking about was Krishna and his stupidity. I mean what on earth was he thinking about?

"Na jaan na pehchaan chale aye milne huh!" she whispered.

"What did you say?" whispered rozie.

Rozie is pratigya's best friend. (By the way i choose rozie since my friend rozeena aka rozie(SweetRoziie) tells me that i look like pratigya Rofll!! Let me make a confession i do not look like pratigya aka pooja gor. Since she calls me pratigya's look alike, i'll have her as pratigya's friend lol)

Edited by SadieLuvs_Suku - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
1st 2 read lol....awwwww thank u 😃 liked da update...i wonda wots gna happen at da cafe????? xxxx
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
thank you so much for the lovely chapter sweety......... awee i can't wait to read the next one yaar !😳 cuz your ff is so coooooooollllllllll........... o i juz the way u r writing it , simple still so romantic😉😃 please update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
Awhhhhhhhhhh- Such a cute chapter!:D
Awhh i wonder what's going to happen in the
cafe! OMG! I noticed at the bottom- you added me in your FF!
ROFL! Haha! Thanks! But it's true you look liike Pooja Guar!:D

By the way- I'm sad :( I was not the first too read! && you
never sent me your update! :O:O
Lol hehe!:P

Take care, && can't wait for chapter 4!!
Oh && i'm thinking off doing a FF on KriYa!:P

xx
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
Woah!what a transformation in Krishna's attitude towards Pratigya!!😲Anyway,it was a very nice chp.I am eagerly waiting for the next one since I want to know whether she'll go to the cafe or not.Pls update soon😊
Edited by shruthiR - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
😆 I loved it! I like how krishna keeps popping up like a malfunctioning cukoo clock. 😆😆 and my favourite detail was when he winked at her 😎 haha so cute!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
You Guys Are Soooooooooooooooooooooooooo Niceeee!!!😃
@Mariam-Lolz Yeah The First One To Read And Thank You Soooo Much!
@Kaash- Thanks! But This Is Nothing Compared To Your Fanfics😳
@Kriyafan- Thank You Soooo Much!
@Rozie- Rofllll!!! Jokaa!! Yup I Have You In My Fanfic! Loolz Seriously How Do I Look Like Pooja Gor? She Is Soooooooo Prettty!! I'm Nothing In Front Of Her! Lolz I Am Soooo Sorrry! I Will PM You The Next Chapter Pakka!
@Shruthi-OMG! I Think You've Guessed My Next Move Loool!! But Thank You Soooo Much!
@Dramaddict- 🤣!! Yeah He Came From No Whhere!! I Was First Going To Have Arjun But Then I Noticed He's Not Even In College! So I Changed It To Krishna LOL :D
Next Chapter Coming Up ASAP!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: SadieLuvs_Suku

You Guys Are Soooooooooooooooooooooooooo Niceeee!!!😃

@Mariam-Lolz Yeah The First One To Read And Thank You Soooo Much!
@Kaash- Thanks! But This Is Nothing Compared To Your Fanfics😳
@Kriyafan- Thank You Soooo Much!
@Rozie- Rofllll!!! Jokaa!! Yup I Have You In My Fanfic! Loolz Seriously How Do I Look Like Pooja Gor? She Is Soooooooo Prettty!! I'm Nothing In Front Of Her! Lolz I Am Soooo Sorrry! I Will PM You The Next Chapter Pakka!
@Shruthi-OMG! I Think You've Guessed My Next Move Loool!! But Thank You Soooo Much!
@Dramaddict- 🤣!! Yeah He Came From No Whhere!! I Was First Going To Have Arjun But Then I Noticed He's Not Even In College! So I Changed It To Krishna LOL :D
Next Chapter Coming Up ASAP!

@red:😆YAY!! I am so smart😎😆Just kidding😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: shruthiR

@red:😆YAY!! I am so smart😎😆Just kidding😆

🤣!! Oooopsss No More Clues!😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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that was very interesting update. can't wait to read more. thank u for this lovely update. and plz update soon the next chapter.

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