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Posted: 15 years ago
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Heyy! Thank You Sooooooooooooooo Much For Commenting And I Appreciate Your Comments😃
Here's The Next Chapter Hope You Like It😳

Chapter Two

"I-i'm s-sorr-ry," was all she could say.

"I said, sorry se kaam nahi chale ga" he replied.

She didn't know what to say now. Was he going to slap her or what?. Her mind was filled with many questions but only krishna could answer them.

Pratigya: I didn't know where i was going i'm sorry, she said, Scared what might he do next.

He came towards her, deeply staring at her right in her eyes, she was so scared that she would cry any moment now. He Stepped towards her and she stepped back until she hit something that somewhat felt like the shape of a bike. Yes, it was a bike, of krishna's. Now She was trapped between him and his bike.

Should she go left or right? First she tried to go past him from the left handside, but he stopped her by putting his hand infront of her. Then she tried to go from the right, again he put his hand infront of her.

"Yeh kya left right left khel rahi ho?" he asked.

Pratigya didn't know what to say so she kept quiet.

"Yes, where was i?" he said while remembring what he said to her before she did her left right left thing.

"Ah yes! hmm..sorry se kaam nahi chale ga" he repeated.

Finally she managed to say something.

"Well..kya chaahte hain aap?" she asked

"Tumhe" he replied.

"Ji?" she asked again.

"Oh..Urmm..mujhe tumhaara..mera matlab aapka naam jaana hai" he replied ever so innocently

At first she got shocked, but then she thought, "it's alright if i tell him my name, or else he won't let me go!!"

"Aap ne kuch kaha?" he asked

" Huh? nahi nahi woh main....mera naam Pra...."she said struggling to even say her name as he was staring at her all that time.

"Pra? nahi mujhe aapka nickname nahi chaahiye, aapka full name chaahiye" he said.

"Pratigya Naam Hai Mera, Pratigya Saxena!" she replied and ran from there as fast as she could and did not look back.

"Pratigya" he whispered to himself.

"Abh toh milna parega , phirse" he continued and started smiling to himself.

Meanwhile, someone else was smiling too while looking at krishna. It was tunna and chandu, actually both were there when all of this happend and could not believe what had just happend.

This Time I Was Running Out Of Time So I Had To Post Whatever I Had Written😆😳

Edited by SadieLuvs_Suku - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42

Phew!!!Atlast you updated😃.I am happy that nothing happened and that she managed to run away from there.looking forward to the next chp.Pls update soon and if you can,pls make your next update more longer😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
Oh my days;) This is soooo good! :O
Keep it up! I'm really eagar too read your next chapter!:O

About the chapter: Omg yayyyy! Nothing happend to Pratigya
Awhhhhhh that was soo cute " when krishna starts smiling"
This is abit liike the story whats happening in Pratigya remember
when he did the same.. when he found out her name! But it is different
and goood!

But it is reallly nice! Congrats on your 2nd chapter!:D

P.s Agree with Shruti .. Make your next update, Longer!:P

xx

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Posted: 15 years ago
#44

@Shruthi- Thank You Soooooo Much For Commenting And I Will Try To Make My Updates Longer😃

@Rozie- 😆Jka! Thank You Sooooo Much For Commenting And Yeah I Will Make It Longer. Lolz Awwwhhhh Yeah I Think I Might Start The Next Chapter Now Lol x
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
thanks 🤗
Loved it yaar
waitin for the nxt part 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46

Wow! I loved ever moment of their encounter. 😊 I thought it was so cute they way she was trapped between him and his bike. 😳 I love the way you write; makes me feel like I'm there watching it. 😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
that was sweet update with cute kriya scene .their first meeting was very good. can't wait for read more.plz update soon.and plz make ur update a bit longer if u can.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Guys I Have The Index On The First Page 😳
And I Have Done Chapter 3, Just Going To Either Extend It Or Just Post It😆 I Dont Know Which One To Do.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
post chapter 3 plz then u can write a looooooong chapter 4 😉 xxxx
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mariam...x

post chapter 3 plz then u can write a looooooong chapter 4 😉 xxxx

😆Oki! Chapter 3 Coming Up😉

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