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Posted: 15 years ago
Lovely update hun 👏
Wondering what he's gonna do next, cant wait for the next chapter keep it up👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sadie:)

WOW! Wonderful chapter, awwhhhh!!
That was soo cute when Krishna had a rose for Pratigya
Yayy that was longer than before!
Can't wait, for your next update:D
Keep it up!

xx


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Posted: 15 years ago

aww love how MCC is trying to break the ice and impress her with the rose and cute lines. I am jus glad he didn't say, "Hey baby." 😆😆 I hope pratigya mellows down a bit and at least tries to have a conversation with him cuz maybe that'll settle him down a bit. lol

Nicely done! :) update soon!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
that was very interesting update.i hope krishna will do anything wrong in anger.waiting for the next chapter.thanks for the wonderful update.plz continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
It was a very nice chp⭐️.Awww...........Pratigya doesn't know how to handle the situation.I wonder what's gonna happen next since Krishna was angry and embarassed towards the end.Looking forward to the next chp😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyy Guyz!
Thank You Soo Much For Commenting!
I Have Done The Next Chapter..But Im Thinking Of Extending It A Bit As My Every Chapter Is Short!!
So Next Chapter Coming Up In 30 Mins Time, Needs Extending
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyy! First Of All I Am Actually Being Bugged By Everyone😡 That Ive Been On The Laptop Since Agezzz!!😆
So I Am Posting Posting What I Have Written. This Whole Chapter Is Like One Sided, No Scene Changes😆
So All Kriya Lovers This Is For You!😳
😆

Chapter 12

"What are you doing?!!" Shouted an Angry Krishna.

Suddenly she stopped saying help help and started laughing!

This was making Him so confused, what happend to her now?!

Eventually she stopped laughing and calmed down, and said " Tum kitna darr gaye the! Your face was worth watching!" she started laughing again.

Krishna, however was fuming! Then suddenly turned his fuming face into a smiling, cute adorable smile....haayeee I'll faint!

"Tum haasti ho toh kitni cute lagti ho" he said while drooling on her.

"Oh God not again!!" She said and stopped laughing.

Krishna: I Will always say that because it's true, and if you don't like it then tough! Get used to it!

Pratigya: Urmmm...Whhaaattt D..idd You Say?

Krishna: I said that I will always say that because it's true.

Pratigya: No the bit after that.

Krishna: Huh? The bit after that? Urmm you say whhaaattt diddd I say

Pratigya: Nooo the Bit before That!

Krishna: You're confusing me!! What bit?!!

Pratigya: Arghhhh!! Why did you say get used to it?!

Krishna: Ohhhh!!! Then say that Inni! Obviously we're going to be together so you have to get used to it!

Pratigya: What together?! What do you mean?

Krishna: Do I have to tell you that as well? (He winked)

Pratigya: Look the thing is I don't know you and you don't know me. Still you're hell bent on talking to me and even talking about....what you just hinted!

Krishna: Look I know you and you know me. Still im eager to talk to you and even talk about...what I just hinted! SHAADI!!!

He said it so loud everyone turned around to look at the pale but red face of Poor Pratigya!!

"Oh no! Tumse toh baat bhi karna bekaar hai!" she said, while looking here and there. He had a cheeky smile on his face; he knew he had done something good which was irritating her. (In your dreams Krishna!)

She stood up to leave; she had been embarrassed enough already when he got up and........and........GAVE HER A HUG!! It was such a weird hug and lasted for few moments while she stood there frozen.

"So I'll see you tomorrow, somewhere" he said while hugging her.

She tried to push him off but he was too strong to let go.

"Let me go! Everyone's looking!" She shouted but he didn't budge.

"Pehle tell me you're coming na?" He asked, still hugging her.

"I Cant breathe!!" She said, gasping for breath.

He realised that he was actually holding her way too tightly. Late Sahi Par He Let go of her slowly and let her breathe properly.

"God! You're Unpredictable!!" She said breathing heavily. (Goshh imagine Being Suffocated by Your Lover hahaha!)

He laughed and said "Woh toh main hoon!" and winked at the Angry Pratigya.

She was about to leave when he caught her hand and said "You never answered my question! Tell me or else I'll hug you like I did before!

Worried what he might do next she quickly replied "Okay fine!!! Now let me go!!"

"Yeh hui na baat!" he said and let her go.

She ran from there rather than walking. (Haha see! She's a running champion)

"Palat, Palat, Palat!" he said, while looking at her.

She opened the door and wohooo!! She turned to look at him!

"WOHOOOOOOOOOOO!!" He screamed!!

"Not again!" she thought and left from there.

Now everyone was staring at him, which made him go red in shyness and embarrassment, but who cares! He was happy!

"She loves Me!! He said and sat down again." Tomorrow, will be the best day of your life! Trust me you're gnna be shocked!" he continued and lost himself in her again.

"I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU PRATIGYA!!" He screamed and realized he was still sitting with people looking at him.

"What You Looking At?" He asked, as people were just staring at him.

They all shrugged their shoulders and left the cafe one by one, leaving him alone with his madness towards her.

Edited by SadieLuvs_Suku - 15 years ago
SweetRozie123 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMGGGGGGGGG!!
Awhhhhhhhhhh such a cute chapter!
Awhhhhhhhh Krishna hugged Pratigya!
How adorable! Awwhhhhh!!!!

Great Sadie:)
Loved itttttt:D
Keep it going

xx
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Posted: 15 years ago

hahahahaha.................he was drooling on her. Hope he didn't get the table and her wet! 😆😆😆😆 MCC needs a bib😆😆😆 And the was one BIG hug! 🤗 but they ordered nothing at the cafe😲 LOL

Liked how he started saying i love you like a manic in the middle of the cafe! 😆😆 I am excited to read what happens next! Please update soon. :)
Edited by dramaddict - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dramaddict

hahahahaha.................he was drooling on her. Hope he didn't get the table and her wet! 😆😆😆😆 MCC needs a bib😆😆😆 And the was one BIG hug! 🤗 but they ordered nothing at the cafe😲 LOL

Liked how he started saying i love you like a manic in the middle of the cafe! 😆😆 I am excited to read what happens next! Please update soon. :)

😆😆 i wanna include they buy something, but then i thought the convo isn;t that long so i left it out.
btw Its Krishna so no one dares to ask him anything!😆 not even the food lool!
Roflllll He was drooling on her cz she was laughing soo much and ever soo innocently😆
You're sooo funnyy Di!!
Next time he'll have a bib with him loolz

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