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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: SweetRozie123

OMGGGGGGGGG!!
Awhhhhhhhhhh such a cute chapter!
Awhhhhhhhh Krishna hugged Pratigya!
How adorable! Awwhhhhh!!!!

Great Sadie:)
Loved itttttt:D
Keep it going

xx

๐Ÿ˜†Yupp They Hugged! But Its Not A Proper Hug Hehe
Awhhh Thank You Rozie!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: SadieLuvs_Suku

๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† i wanna include they buy something, but then i thought the convo isn;t that long so i left it out.
btw Its Krishna so no one dares to ask him anything!๐Ÿ˜† not even the food lool!
Roflllll He was drooling on her cz she was laughing soo much and ever soo innocently๐Ÿ˜†
You're sooo funnyy Di!!
Next time he'll have a bib with him loolz

๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† That's what I figured, but now I am curious to know what his table manners are like. ๐Ÿ˜‰ lol
๐Ÿคฃ I hope his bib doesn't say, "cookie inspekter". hahahahah
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Posted: 15 years ago
That was such a cute,sweet,funny and kinda frustrating(from Pratigya's POV)chp๐Ÿ˜ณโญ๏ธ.Loved the cute scenes they had in the cafe.I am really looking forward to the next chp to see what he does for or to her in their next "date".Pls update soon๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dramaddict

๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† That's what I figured, but now I am curious to know what his table manners are like. ๐Ÿ˜‰ lol
๐Ÿคฃ I hope his bib doesn't say, "cookie inspekter". hahahahah

๐Ÿคฃ!!!! Di You're Sooooo Funnny!!! He'll Deffinatly Have A Bib๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜† And It'll Say : I Always Drool On Pratigya Ji๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely update hun ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘, Krishna drooling over prat๐Ÿ˜†
Cant believe he emptied the whole cafe, poor prat she must have been so embarrased.
Cant wait for your next update... keep it up๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
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Posted: 15 years ago
that was very sweet and cute update.loved their first date and hug.but poor pratigya .i wonder now what will he do in their next date.thank u for the lovely update.plz continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Krishna's bib

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Posted: 15 years ago
dis was fab
gud wrk keep it up๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Edited by Ameena4Eva - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
SweetRozie123- Thank you sooo much for commenting Rozie! Glad you liked it!
dramaddict- Loooolz!!! Thank You sooo Much for commenting!! Lolz you always make fun of MCC! Rofllll!!! But its always funny!
shruthiR- Hehe yeah it was frustrating from her POV But fun from his POV Loool! Thank You sooo much for commenting!
aleena1- Lolz yeah he was drooling! need a bib now roflll! thank you soo much for commenting!
halaa- awhhhh the hug was something to remember loolz! thank you for commenting!
serialmaniac- ROFLLLLLL!!! Perfect thing for Krishna!! A BIB!! Loooolz!!
Ameena4Eva- awhhhh thank you my nosy sista!
next chapter coming Up!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyy Guyz!!๐Ÿ˜ƒ Phewww!! Finally I Did Write!! Took Me Soooo Longgg!!! Unbelievable!๐Ÿ˜†
Anyways Enough Of My Complaining Here's Chapter 13 Enjoy๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Chapter 13

She walked home and quickly went towards Rozie's house.

*Knock Knock*

"Where were you?!" shouted Rozie.

Pratigya: Dont be that shocked! I told you where I was going.

Rozie: Oh right..

Pratigya: Yeah ohh right! Okay me going now bye!

Rozie: Byee!

She left and walked towards her house.

"Thank god tum agayi!" said Nainaji, while coming out of the kitchen.

Pratigya: Mum im sooo hungryyy!! Give me food! Its food time!

Nainaji: (Laughs) Yeah its food time! Come sit on the dining table and call Arushi and Adarsh too.

Pratigya: Arghhh do I have to do that as well?!

Nainaji: Yes! Now stop making faces and call them

Pratigya: Fine!

She went to the living room and saw both of them still lying on the sofa!

Pratigya: OMG! You're still lying like that?!

Aarushi: Yeah..we have nothing to do

Adarsh: Same

Pratigya: Ok whatever! Mum's calling us! Its Food Time!

Adarsh Aarushi Together: FOOD TIME?!

Before she could say yeah, both quickly got up and ran towards the dining table.

"Stupid fools!" she shouted and ran after them before any of them sits on her FAVOURITE Chair!

Luckily it was saved and she sat down and started eating her food.

*Knock Knock*

"Pratigya beta can you open the door please?" said Nainaji

"Maaa!! Ask Adarsh Bhaiya or Aarushi! Im eating!" shouted Pratigya

"Dont be Stubborn just go na" Replied Nainaji.

She kicked her Favourite chair but quickly said sorry to it and went to open the front door.

She opened the door and saw her dad.

"Dad!" she said and hugged him.

"Arre beta! Im so tired! Let me in!" he said

"Oops sorry!" she said and let him come inside, closing the door of course.

The whole family sat down for their "Food" and then went off to their rooms.

She was sitting near the window and thinking about Krishna.

She remembered how she met him, the way he entered the classroom and how he hugged her! She laughed while thinking about him. Maybe he's not that bad after all. I mean he is irritating no doubt but he's so childish and innocent! The way he hugged me was embarrassing but he's so innocent!

Suddenly she stopped and said "What am I thinking about?! He is Krishna Singh! The Gunda! The hooligan who goes anywhere and does whatever he wants to do! Oh god I have to do something or else it'll go worse".

She stood up and walked back and fro thinking of how to end this topic.

"Yes! Thats It!" she said. "He's the only person who can help me!" she continued and happily laid down on her bed and slowly went to sleep.

Next morning she woke up without Nainaji nagging her and checked the time.

"Yes im on time!" she talked to herself and quickly went to the bathroom to take a quick shower.

She came out of the bathroom and wore her clothes, quickly took her bag which she found at last and rushed downstairs almost running.

"Woah!" said Adarsh, almost falling over

"Sorry Bhaiya!" Said Pratigya and ran to the dining table.

Everyone was surprised to see her, actually smiling for some odd reason.

"What are you lot looking at?" she asked, confused.

Aarushi giggled a bit and then just laughed her head off.

"Why are you laughing for?!" She asked, again confused.

"For your kind information, you're wearing your clothes inside out!" Said Aarushi and again laughed!

"OMGGG!!!" She screamed and ran upstairs before she gets even more embarrassed.

"Pagal" Laughed Nainaji.

5 Minutes later she came out and didn't even bother to eat anything, she had eaten enough of embarrassment already.

"Arre Di! Have something to eat!" said Aarushi but she was in a rush so she left without answering.

She walked and her eyes were looking for someone.

Someone else had their eyes set on her since ages. (Guess karo!)

Suddenly she stopped and stood still for few moments.

On her left she saw...Krishna walking towards her and on the right she saw...Arjun walking towards her!!!

Her eyes opened wide like they would pop out any moment now!

"Omggg!!! What shall I do?!" she said, in a low but worried voice.

Both were coming towards her, smiling as well the fools!

Krishna Ya Arjun? Who should she go to first?

Please tell me what you would like to be changed, anything will do .i want the story to go according to your wishes๐Ÿ˜ณ
Edited by SadieLuvs_Suku - 15 years ago

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