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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Ameena4Eva

gud wrk sister!

we both r sister in real life!
im sadie's younger sister just been born now to india forums lol

Hey Ameena,
Welcome to the forum🤗How's your mom?Is she feeling any better?😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: shruthiR

Hey Ameena,

Welcome to the forum🤗How's your mom?Is she feeling any better?😊

thank you🤗!
my mums fine now, she fainted three times !😲
wish she doesn't faint again
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Ameena4Eva

thank you🤗!
my mums fine now, she fainted three times !😲
wish she doesn't faint again

Oh no! I hope that she becomes perfectly alright soon😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Oye!! What?! Ameena?! Where Did You Come From?!😆
Anyways Welcome To the Forum 🤗
Thank You Soooo Much For Reading And Next Chapter Coming Up ASAP!
And My Mum's Fine Now😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyy Guyz!!😃
I Have Written The Next Chapter Hope I Reached Upto Your Expectations😳
Chapter 9 Enjoy!
😆

Chapter Nine

She was gobsmacked. How Could he tell her to get out?! she hasn't even done anything.

"Par Sir.." She couldn't finish.

"Par war kuch nahi, just get out now!" he shouted.

She looked at Krishna, with angry eyes and left the classroom.

Proffessor: Theek Kiya na maine Krishna Saab?

Krishna: Haan! Shabaash, heyy tunna chandu you go stand near the gates.

Chandu tunna: Yess Boss!

Krishna left with Chandu tunna.

"God! iss Krishna ki wajah se im out of the class!" she muttured.

She was walking along the corridoors and didn't remember that Rozie will be waiting for her after the class. "Aab main kya karoon?" she cried while walking.

She didn't know where she was going, all she knew was that she's not in her class and will have to wait atleast 45minutes outside before she can go into her next class. She was upset, so upset she didn't realise she had her eyes closed and was going nowhere!

Just then she bumped into a hard chest and was about to fall back, but before she could fall back someone held her by the waist and prevented her from falling. She opened her burning eyes and felt like shutting them again. It was none other that our MCC Krishna! Lolz

"Arre Yaar! jab bhi dekho giirti rehti ho! Sambhalo apne aap ko, warna har waqt mujhe hi aana parega tumhe sambhalne ke liye" He said and winked at her, which made her look away.

"Let me go" She pleaded while looking away from his intense glaze.

He noticed something in her her eyes, it was a tear. He slowly but steadily let her go, making the moment last forever.

"Khush?" He asked, making an angry but cute face.

Without furthur delay, she ran past him but oh no! He ran after her! More like walked while she ran as fast as she could.

"Arre baagh ke where are you going?!" he said while laughing and ran after her as she was becoming too fast.

She ran and ran and ran until she reached the college gate, but look who was there to welcome her?

"Arre aap baagh ke kahan ja rahin hain?" Said Chandu. "Bhaiya toh wahan hain, aapke peeche" Said Tunna. Yess It was Jai and veeru.

She ran again, but this time to her left hand side, where there is a lane to get into the backyard. (God knows what i just said). She ran and again she saw Krishna. She was about to run back when he caught her hand and said "BAS!"

"I've had enough of you running around! now listen to me carefully!" He continued.

"I Want to go! Let me go!" she pleaded, with teary eyes, Finally those tears were out.

He wasn't willing to let go, and held her hand more tightly.

Pratigya: You're Hurting me!

Krishna: I'm Hurting You?! Kal jo tumne kya woh kya tha?! I Waited for you like more than an hour! Aur tum nahi ayi!

Pratigya: I was going to tell you that i can't come! But no, you never listened to me! Its not my fault you had to wait! Tumhe kisne kaha mera wait karne ke liye?

Eye Lock! (Thanks Rozie!)

But an Angry One, from both of them. Suddenly His angry eyes melted into those loving ones that could melt anyone!

Then slowly he freed her hand from his strong grip and stared at her. She however, had those angry eyes and as soon as he freed her hand, she took the opportunity and ran again! Loool!! Pratigya is a champion at running!

He jogged this time and while jogging he said "Aaj phirse 5 baje a jaana warna kal bhi aise class se bahar hogi!" he laughed at his own joke.

She gave him angry glares and ran from there!

"Haayeee aaj toh aana hi parega!" He said and stopped jogging, he had ran enough jogging is nothing compared to it!.

"Grrrr!! Today i'll have to meet him and sort his thick brain out!" She shouted and headed towards the staircase.

I Had a race with Rozie! 30 Seconds of wait and Boof!! My Chapters Updated😆
Edited by SadieLuvs_Suku - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

First! Sadie that awesome!!! :D

Loved their intense stares back and forth.
I really like your descriptions and dialogues; makes me feel like I am watching it. :)
It's funny how she walked right into MCC's arms. I am glad he was happy 😆😆😆 MCC's probably bouncing with happiness hence the 😎....lolz
Please update soon! :)
Edited by dramaddict - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Yayyyy i'm first to read!
Wooohoooo sadie:)
Another amazing chapter!!!!
I wonder what pratigya will do next:D
&& keep it going- fabulous.
Thankss!

P.s. Make your chapter longer😳
I'm sooo eagar too read more.. ii cannot wait😉

Aha😊 you got the exact timings!!!!!
Edited by SweetRozie123 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dramaddict

resebed! now let me go read it 😆

.
you havent read it and your 1st to comment🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago

😊Lovely update hun xx👏

Pratigya a running champion?😆
I hope she teaches him a lesson when they meet next
Cant wait for your next update.......Keep it up👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
That was an awesome chp⭐️.It had a few scary as well as cute moments in it😳.Looking forward to the next chp see how their "date" goes😆😊

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