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Posted: 15 years ago
that was very sweet update. the running part was very funny. it reminded of pratigya's marathon race in the serial.waiting for their cafe encounter.plz continue soon.i hope ur mom is alright now.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: shruthiR

Oh no! I hope that she becomes perfectly alright soon😊

yep same ere i wish she becomes alright
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyy Guyz! Thank You Sooo Much For Commenting!!
Next Chapter Coming Up! And I Need Atleast An Hour To Make A LONG Chapter Cz I've Noticed ALL My Chapters ArE sHORT! Loolz
Anyways Next Chapter Coming ASAP!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyy Guyz!!
Phewwww I Managed To Write Something Atleast!!😆 Its Short Again!😡 And It Took Me More Than An Hour!!😲😆 Anyways Here's Chapter 10 Enjoy😳
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Chapter Ten

She was sitting on the staircase and looked too upset. She recalled every moment with that Krishna and his stupidness!

"Grrrr i wish i could crush him like an ant! But to what use, Phir Uthke kahe ga Abhi Hum Zinda Hain!" She was talking to herself.

Just then the bell went and she was relieved, and headed towards Rozie's class.

"Gosh Pratigya!! It was such a boring lesson!" Said Rozie while walking.

"Hmmm, such boring lessons na?" Replied Pratigya.

The rest of the day was normal apart from Pratigya's mood and Rozie didn't seem to notice it.

After College she left with Rozie and while walking, she saw someone who looked familiar. It was a Tall Man, sitting with his two buddies and holding a guitar.

"Oh No!!!!" Shouted Pratigya.

"Oh Yes!" Shouted Rozie.

She looked at Rozie as if she's going to eat her!

And she looked at Pratigya and started laughing like mad!.

Rozie: Hahahahah Yaar!! Look Who's There!

Pratigya: GRRRRRR Shut Up!!! And Lets Go!

Rozie: Nope!! Im Gnna Call Him!

Pratigya! NOOO!! Ek woh hain jisse crush karne ke baad bhi kahega abhi main zinda hoon aur ek yeh jo Chipkalli(Lizard) ki tarah chipak jayega aur crush karoongi toh kahega, abhi hum zinda hain!

Rozie: Huh?! Woh Koun? and what nonsense are you talking?!

Pratigya: Arghhh NO ONE!! Lets go!

"HEYY PRATIGYA!!" Shouted the tall yet handsome man.

"Oh Sugar!" said Pratigya looking at Rozie, who couldn't stop laughing her head off!

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"Ek ladki ko dekha to aisa lagaaaaaaaaaa jaiseee main hoon koi bhoot jaise main hoon koi bhoot jaise lalalalalalaaaaaaaaaaa" Sang Chandu with his phatti hui awaaz, and the words were'nt even used in the actual song!

"Abhe chup kar! Why are you singing with your phatti hui awaaz?! I Hate it! Shut Up!" Shouted Krishna while looking at himself in the mirror.

"Woh ayegi, zaroor ayegi. She doesn't want to be out of the classroom again so she will have to come" Said Krishna.

"Yes bhaiya! She'll come dont worry hum hain na?" Said Tunna.

"Arre tum ho issi ka toh darr hai!" Said Krishna

"Didn't you see how scared she was when she saw the two of you standing near the gate?! Ufff Tumlog Door raho yh!" He continued, leaving both of them confused and somewhat feeling stupid.

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"Runnnnnn!!!" Shouted Pratigya but it was too late, he was standing in front of her.

"Yaar why do you always run for?! Im not some kind of bhoot now am i?! He said.

It was none other than the flirty ARJUN!!! Hailaaa yeh kaha se agaya?!!

Pratigya: Arjun get lost!! Go away! mere peeche kyun lage hue ho?!

Arjun: Eyeee Main tumhaare peeche nahi, tum mere peeche lagi hui ho!

Pratigya: Ohhh really? Jabhi dekho ladkiyon ke peeche rehte ho Mr. Arjun Khanna!

Arjun: Eeyeee Main Ladkiyon ke peeche nahi, ladkiyan mere peeche aati hain!

Pratigya: Huh! As if! Aur ab kya kar rahe ho? mera peecha?! hahahahaha!

Arjun: Woh toh aise hi, i just saw you so i thought of talking to you.

Pratigya: Well Tough! im going home! And you go home too! Idiot!

Rozie: Arre Pratigya! Jab Bhi dekho, you're always saying stuff to...*Arjun*...

Rozie has a crush on Arjun and he knows about it but just doesn't give a damn, he's a flirt you see.

Pratigya: Oyeee! i know you have a crush on him but Puhleeezzzz!! Get a life!! Who would wanna hang around with him?! Apart from you!

Rozie: Huh! Fine! Lets Go!!

Both left willingly and unwillingly from there.

"PALAT!" Shouted Arjun.

Rozie Turned around, and Pratigya made her look to the front.

"Kabhi Toh Palte Gi!" Said Arjun and walked over to his two buddies, Jimmy and Lucky.

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Ekkkk 60 Seconds Of race with Rozie again!!😆
Edited by SadieLuvs_Suku - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Ommmmmggggggggggggggggggggggggg!
Wonderful, amazing, mind blowing chapterr!!
OMGGG! I'm totally gob smacked that was fabolous!:O

Keep it upp..xx

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Posted: 15 years ago
Lovely update hun👏👏
Chandu and his terrible singing😆
cant wait fo next update, keep it up hun👍🏼
Edited by aleena1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
It was a very nice chp⭐️Uff! Now I seriously have to read the next chp to know what's gonna happen in their "date".Looking forward to the next chp and pls update soon😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wohooo! Weekend!!!
Next Chapter Coming ASAP
And Btw Now I Can Reveal That The "Love Story" Will Deffinatly Happen, Wait And Watch I Mean Read Loolz
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey its a wonderful chapter pls update soonnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heyy Guyz!! Its weekend!! Wohooo! I Have KIND OF done a long chapter but im guessing it's gnna be short again😡😆
Anyways here's chapter 11 Plzzz read and comment😳 i love reading the comments rather than writing the fanfic😆
okay enough of my stupidness here's next chapter enjoy!😃
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Chapter Eleven
She reached home and went upstairs, also forgetting to say Hi Adarsh bhaiya who was sitting on the dining table.

Adarsh: Oye! Say Hi to me!

Pratigya: Hi (in a low voice)

Adarsh: What?! did the cat get your tongue?! Speak louder!

Pratigya: WHAT!! SHUT UP BHAIYA! im not in the mood!

She ran to her room and closed the door.

"Whats up with her?" he thought.

She took a shower and changed her clothes. Then she went downstairs and sat on the sofa, which all cramped up as Arushi and Adarsh both were lying on it.

Pratigya: Oi move! Let me sit!

Adarsh: No Sit somewhere else

Arushi: Yeah Di sit somewhere else, we're tired

She left from there peed off and went to the kitchen where her mum was.

Pratigya: Heyy Mom...

Nainaji: Arre beta what's wrong?

Pratigya: Nothing Ma, just tired.

Nainaji: Go sit down and watch TV You'll feel better.

Pratigya: How can i? Aarushi and Adarsh have already booked the sofa for themselves!

Nainaji: Awhhh okay go to your room and stop complaining beta!

Pratigya: Forget it, i'm going out. Will be back in before 6

Nainaji: Kahan?

Pratigya: Cafe...Urmmm im going to Rozie's house Bye Mum!

Nainaji: Bye Beta!

She left the house and headed towards Rozie's house.

**Knock Knock**

Rozie Opened the door.

Rozie: Heyy Pratigya!!

Pratigya: Hi! heyy sunn im going somehwere and i've told mum that im going to your house. if anyone asks say im at your house plzzzzz you can do that na?

Rozie: Parr...why lie for?! going to meet Arjun? She winked..well tried to.

Pratigya: Oi! its nothing like that!! im going to the cafe! nothing else!! I Might see Arjun. She winked, well tried to lol.

Rozie: Hahaha Shut up! Byeee! Tc xxxx

Pratigya: Oh Shut Up!! Im not going forever!!

Both laughed and she quickly left before she gets into any kind of trouble.

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"Okay my donkeys! Get lost from here and dont even bother following me to the cafe, or else she'll run away like she did last time!" Krishna laughed.

"Okay bhaiya Good Luck!" Said Tunna Chandu together and left from there before getting into trouble.

He looked at himself AGAIN in the mirror and sat on his bike.

"Pratigya Main Ah Raha Hoon! Dont Run Away!" He joked and drove his bike. He stopped in front of the cafe and took his helmet off. Then he parked his bike anywhere and went inside. He again sat where he was sitting yesterday and practised his lines all over again.

She nervously opened the cafe door and looked around to see where that stupid Krishna was, the so called Thakur!

"Main Yahaan Hoon!" Shouted Krishna which made her jump slightly.

He was holding a red rose in his hands and eagerly waiting for her to come and sit opposit him.

She walked towards him in slow steps but increased her speed as she noticed everyone was staring at her.

She quickly sat down and adjusted her clothes.

"Beautiful rose for a beautiful lady" He said and gave the rose to her. She was quite hesitant and just didn't want to accept the rose.

"Sorry wrong number" she said, making him all confused.

"Oh whatever, here have it, its for you" He replied.

She nodded her head sideways and said "Sorry i dont accept all this from strangers"

Now this made him angry and he slowly squezeed his hand into a fist and crushed the rose. She noticed that obviously but avoided it, making it look like as if she didn't care.

Silence for few moments.

Krishna was the first one to break it.

Krishna: So, how do you like the cafe?

Pratigya: what kind of question is that? Agar yehi poochna tha toh..toh..im going. She was about to get up when he made her sit down again. (the way he did in the show but like facing opposit lool!)

Krishna: Arre yaar! i was just trying to break the silence! Okay forget this, i wanted to ask...what do you think about me?

Pratigya: Stupid, fool, idiot! (she thought)

Krishna: What? did you say something?

Pratigya : huh? no no no i never said anything!

Krishna: You never answered, what do you think about me?

Pratigya: Well... Tum thore..nahi nahi thore nahi bohot hi irratating ho, You made my life a living hell in just two days!! Always around me! Grrr Simply you're annoying!

Krishna: Tum ghussa hoti ho toh kitni cute lagti ho

Pratigya: Oh Godd!!! Not again!!! Bachaooo!! Help Help Help!! Somebody Help!!!

She was screaming now, which made Him get red in anger, embarrassment and worry!

Edited by SadieLuvs_Suku - 15 years ago

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