fan fic:shayad meri kismat.UPDATD LAST CHPTR.. - Page 31

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Posted: 15 years ago
cant wait plzz update soon kay?=]
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Posted: 15 years ago
plz update soon.
i m waiting for ur update.
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hey evryone....sorry for the late update....actually i was out of ideas... 😆😆 well thnks for waiting patiently...heres my next chapter....😳

chapter------29

krishna crept up slowly behind pratigya whu was setting the table for brekfast.... his hands had somethng in them...he wore a white kurta and pratigya also wore a somewat light pink coloured sari... she cntinued with her work...totally unaware of krishna whu stood just behind her.... suddenly,as she felt somethng wrong,she turned and immediately krishna brushed both of his hands on her face and shouted------HAPPY HOLI PRATIGYA.....!!!!

she pushed him away and felt her face....krishna laughed out loudly....her face was all red....

pratigya fumed in anger...she shouted at him-------ye kya kar diya tumne? are...bahar to sab holi hi jayenge,tab tum hume rang laga sakte the? abhi.....hume aab firse nahana hoga.....😭

krishna-------kyun? aise bht acchi dikh rahi ho....sach....

he tried to make her believe bt she was far frm being reassured.....tumne ye thk nhi kiya krishna...tum bht bure ho.....dekho hum pure pagal lag rahe hain...

krishna teased her-------lag rahi ho matlab? pagal kabhi pagal lag sakti hain?

pratigya was abt to say something in return wen amma came out of the kitchen....she also rolled in laughter to see her condition.... pratigya felt too embarrassed and ran upstairs to her room,hiding her face in her anchal.....

amma walked over to krishna,still laughing... krishna grinned too....

amma------ka baba...ee kaisa bhut bana diya tune rani ko?

krishna smiled--------woh kuch nhi...hum chahte the ki use sabse pehle hum rang lagaye.....

amma--------hmmm...waise apne pyaar ke rang mein to tune use rang hi diya hain.....kyun?

krishna tried to change the topic,coz he was alredy blushing-------amma...hum...hum.....chalte hain.....dekhte hain...woh.....

amma-------haan haan...ja ja upar jake dekh....tujhpar bht gussa hogi.....

without waiting for further explanations...he ran upstairs too... amma noticed his hurry and said to herself------pagal!!!!

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pratigya came out of the bathroom,wiping her face with a towel...she jumped in shock to see krishna waiting for her by the door....

pratigya--------dekho...humne abhi abhi muh dhoya hain.....

krishna showed her his empty hands.. she gave out a sigh of relief....and walked over to the bed..... krishna followed her...

krishna--------kya hua?

pratigya--------kya?

krishna---------tum humse baat kyun nhi kar rahi ho?

pratigya---------krishna hume abhi kaam karne do.....hum sab saath mein bahar holi khelenge na?

krishna--------haan to?

pratigya---------to hume ye sab thk karne do....abhi kesar bhabi aa jayegi aur hume khich ke bahar le jayegi...usse pehle hume sare kaam khatam karna hain.....

krishna--------haan...to ismein hamara kya fayda?

pratigya turned at him and made a face... then she continued with her wrk....

krishna cud take it no longer.... he held both her hands frm behind and made her drop the clothes she was holding....

pratigya-------krishna kya kar rahe ho...plzzzzzz.....

he made her turn around and face him,keeping her hands at her back.....he watched her closely,struggling to get away...he pulled her closer....and held her tightly against himself.....

pratigya---------krishna abhi.....kya tum subah subah......are...plzz...chodo.....hume ye sab bilkul accha nhi lagta.....

krishna moved his face closer to her and lowered down his voice-------accha? tumhe ye sab accha nhi lagta?

pratigya twisted her hands to make them free bt his grip was strong....

she looked at him with pleading eyes,sometimes his obsessive nature overpowered his gentleness wich she loved.... krishna stared at her for sometime and then slowly eased his grip on her hands....bt he didn't let her go....he pinned her against the wall..... she smiled at him-------krishna plzzz????? hume sachmein bht kaam hain.....

krishna-----nhi.....

pratigya--------plzz plz plz plz plz......

krishna nodded his head sideways......meaning NO.....

pratigya--------krishna aaj tumhe ho kya gaya hain? tum hamari ek bhi baat nhi sun rahe ho?

krishna realised that she was ryt....why was he behaving so possessively with her? he himself had no answer....

pratigya noticed his thoughtfulness and gently touched his face-------kya baat hain krishna? tum kisi baat se pareshan ho?

krishna--------pata nhi....pratigya aaj hume kuch thk nhi lag raha hain.....humra mann kehraha hain ki kuch bht bura honewala hain......isiliye....hum ek pal ke liye bhi tumhe apne aap se dur nhi karna chahte hain.....

pratigya pressed his cheeks lightly--------are baba hum tumse dur kaha ja rahe hain...tumhare saath hi to holi khelenge na bahar?

krishna stared at her for some time and then said-------pratigya ek baat kahu?

pratigya------kya?

krishna--------hamara mann nhi kar raha hain bahar jane ki.....

pratigya looked terribly disappointed--------krishna...par kyun? kal raat bhi to tum bht suna rahe the ki ye hamara sasural mein pehli holi hain......ise hum saaath milkar manayenge.....aur bachpan ki tarah khub masti karenge...kya huya aab?

krishna moved away frm her and said in a frustrated manner------jante hain hum....lekin pata nhi kyun.....hume ek ajeeb si bechaini ho rahi hain......

pratigya walked up to him and made him turn at her....she cupped his face in her hands and said-------krishna....krishna....aisa kuch nhi hain....sirf tumhara waham hain.....

krishna held onto her shoulders tightly...trying to convince her-------ye hamara wahem nhi hain pratigya.....tum nhi janti....jab hamamri shaadi tumri behen aarushi se honewali thi.... he noticed the sudden change in her expression and stopped midway-------accha thk hain.....jane do.....tum sab kaam karke,tayar hoke niche aajao....hum saath mein holi khelenge......thk hain?

pratigya smiled..... krishna placed a quick kiss on her forehead and was abt to walk away wen pratigya stopped him by holding his hand.....

krishna-------kya hua?

she stepped towards him without a word and put her arms around his neck...she lay her head on his shoulder and said------krishna....hum tumse bht pyaar karte hain........

krishna hugged her back and softly kissed her cheek.....she blushed....

he released her and said-------abhi jaldi ajao ,hum niche tumra intejaar kar rahe hain..... he left.....

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colours flew everywhere......evryone was having great fun,throwing colors at each other.....pushing each other,running,attacking,escaping....tricking......and bathing all near and dear ones in extreamely bright colours.....

sajjan singh and amma did nt directly take part in the hooliganism going on...they sat at a distance watching their sons and daughters along with other guests and all the neighbours having fun....

komal and adarsh were also invited along with the other saxenas.... quite forgetting their age shyam ji and naina ji were playing colours too..with their children....

komal threw water balloons at adarsh as he attacked her with a colour gun....

krishna was extreamely naughty in such cases.... he pushed pratigya into a big colour tub....wetting her all over.....pratigya got so pissed off at him that she pulled him into the tub as well.... and as we all know krishna...he started romancing evn in that condition...bt pratigya pushed him away frm her and jumped out of the tub.... she shouted at him--------hum tumhe jitne nhi denge!!!! suna tumne? abhi dekho hum kya karte hain....

she looked around her quickly and noticed a number of colour buckets arranged in a series.... she ran over to them while krishna climbed out of the tub.....

she took up one medium sized bucket and aimed it at krishna whose eyes became wide in shock...

krishna moved his hands frantically-------pratigya plzzz.....tum aisa nhi kar sakti....

in reply she only grinned and held up the bucket..... unable to think of anything else,he stooped down instantly as she swayed the bucket full of colours at him......

pratigya closed her eyes for some moments,not wanting to see his miserable condition...bt her heart leaped in joy to thnk that she had at last avenged her attack......

the moment she opened her eyes....at frst she cudnt make out wat she saw....then slowly....her face became pale in fear...her hands started to shake....she dropped the bucket....as her hands reached her awestruck face....

the person whu stood in frnt of her was......not krishna........he was THE SAME DEVIL WHU USED TO GIVE HER NITEMARES...---------thakur baldev singh!!!!!!!

it took her few more minutes to gain her right senses and immediately she turned back and ran inside the mansion and upstairs into her room......

krishna saw her run away....he didn't know wat to do..... he stood like a statue wen his uncle came to him and said-------wah!!! ghar ki bahu ne bht acchi tarah se swagat ki humri...kyun?

krishna held down his head in shame... he had nvr thot that pratigya wud still be under that misconception abt his father's brother....

thakur baldev singh patted his shoulder--------koi baat nhi.....bas....itna hi kafi hain ki usne humpar firse BANDUK NHI TANI....... he laughed out heartily at his own joke....bt krishna dint evn smile.....

sajjan singh noticed his brother and walked towards him....he welcomed him back with outstretched arms------are baldev......aao aao......bht hi khaas din par aye gaye...

baldev singh-----are hum hamesha khas mauko par hi ate hain...bhaisaab.....

krishna slipped away,taking this chance and went inside........he needed to have a talk with pratigya alone.....

he found pratigya inside their room,sitting at the corner of the bed,her back turned to him....

he called to her gently------pratigya?

she turned......krishna was stunned to see her face.....inspite of the colours and all...he cud clearly make out her fear...her anxiousness.... he quickly walked up to her and knelt down in frnt of her...her hands in his..

krishna-------kya hua pratigya? tum wahaan se istarah kyun chali ayi? kya hua?

pratigya tried to get herself to speak bt cudnt...she fumbled and gasped------woh....woh.....firse......

krishna-------kaun? chacha ji?

anger flashed in her eyes as he uttered his name,she started taking heavy breaths.. krishna became scared.... he got up and sat down beside her-------pratigya...baat kya hain....kya tum aab bhi chacha ji par.....

pratigya snapped at him,her voice was harsh and full of rage--------KHUNI HAIN WOH....KHUNI DARINDA...WOH FIRSE AYA HAIN....isbaar hum use nhi chodenge....nhi chodenge...maar dalenge usko.....MAAR DALENGE.....!!!!!! she shouted.....

krishna caught her tightly by her shoulders and pushed away the strangles of hair frm her sweaty face------pratigya? pratigya hosh mein aao..... he shook her hard...... unable to bring her into her normal conditions....he pulled her into his embrace and held her against himself tightly...... pratigya clutched him with all her strength.... and hid her face into his chest.... slowly her breath became normal.....and she stopped panting.... still krishna did nt let go of her.... he was scared of her condition...he didn't want her to have those seizures again.....

he continued to stroke her head...and run his fingers into her hair......he wanted her to calm down totally..... seconds,minutes.....an hour went by.......... slowly...pratigya's eyelids became heavy and she dozed off in his arms.....this always happened to her wen she had lost all her strength..........

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halaa thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
that was awesome update with sweet and romantic kriya scenes. thnx for the update . can't wait for read more
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Posted: 15 years ago
luvd the update...it woz worth the wait 😃 xxxx
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awwwwwwwhhh!! Lovelyyy! Update Soon :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
Phew!!atlast you updated! It was a very nice chp.I wonder how Pratigya is going to react if she comes face to face with that Baldev Singh again.Looking forward to the next chp😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
plz update soon cant wait to find out what happens next
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Posted: 15 years ago
Kaash beta thanks for the update! 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
poor pratigya, when will baldev get his just desserts?

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