fan fic:shayad meri kismat.UPDATD LAST CHPTR..

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hiii frnds.....😊😊dont laugh plzzz...here i am yet with another fan fic.....hope u enjoy it....actually as much as u people love to read fan fics...i love to make them.......so.........ENJOY........😉
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shayad meri kismat..........
main characters
krishna singh-----arhaan behl
pratigya saxena-----pooja gor
aarushi saxena-----avantika hundal
adarsh saxena-----ankit gera
prof shyam ji saxena---shahab khan
naina ji saxena----monica singh
rohli-----sehrish ali
komal singh-----parvati sehgal
thakur sajjan singh----anupam shyam
krishna's mom-----asmita sharma
thakur baldev singh
Pankaj Dheer
baldev singh's wife
Shalini Kapoor
nitin mehra-----giriraj kabra
angad yadav-----kunal karan kapoor
suhani-------avika gor
shakti singh
kesar
pratigya------ pratigya saxena,a 23 yrs old unmarried daughter of prof shyam ji saxena. although all parents want their daughter to get married off as quickly as possible bt to pratigya's parents,to get her married off was next to impossible...as she had been suffering frm schizophrenetic seizures since she was 10 yrs old... this was due to a horrible incident in her life..she had seen her only childhood frnd whu happened to be her soulmate,suhaani,go thorugh the traumatic experience of child rape right before her eyes......and she was nt evn able to move a muscle out of fright.. she had stood there watching.....and then she had fainted.... suhani did nt survive after that and pratigya locked herself like a prisoner in her own home in the following years. she did nt go to scool or any college...she was evn afraid to face people......evry now and then she used to havce seizures and was taken to the hospital.. the doctors had advised her parents to take her to a much advanced hospital for her treatment in mumbai...bt due to absence of sufficient resources,pratigya cud nt be treated properly... time passed away bt neither pratigya's view of life changed nor her actions.. ya she wud nt keep herself locked up now...bt neither wud she accept the life with an open heart... her seizures had reduced... bt did nt go away permanently.... the saxena's had accepted the hard truth that their elder daughter cud nvr be okay...... as she did nt study,or rahter it wud be better to say she cud nt study,pratigya's mom taught her certain handicrafts by wich she cud earn her living wen she wud be all by her own in the world... they didnt dream abt her marriage,as it was impossible...noone wud marry her,of course.... bt naina ji wanted to make her daughter grow up and become independent.. she taught her to make carpets.... embroider sarees..... and she had also hired someone...a girl of pratigya's own age,rohli to teach her these thngs.. rohli was a vry pretty grl whu turned out to be a vry nice frnd of pratigya too,besides being her handicrafts teacher...
the professor and his wife,meanwhile concentrated on their other daughter aarushi and made her educated... she had just passed her school wen her mom and dad started looking for a fit groom.........
will pratigya find someone whu will accept her the way she is and make her his wife? will she be able to get out to the trauma she had been for more than 10 years of her life? its wat we have to see.......
krishna--- krishna singh,a student of the medical college of allahabad,a classmate of adarsh saxena whu was also of the same department. he was adamant,arrogant,rude and apparently a vry ruthless person...bt wen it came to his work,he was the most sincere student of the whole department and evryone was jealous of him. adarsh disliked him and they did nt share a good bond,in fact krishna did nt share a good bond with anybody.. he used to be all alone and work all alone... and in the practical classes he didnt evn have any partner... he nvr asked for help and neither did he help anyone. adarsh always used to come second as krishna didnt evn compromise with his rank,never.
he was the only son of the most ruthless and political family in allahabad,thakur sajjan singh's family... with the head of the family being thakur sajjan singh himself. he had a brother,thakur baldev singh, a totally evil type of person with all the negative qualities one cud evr thnk of......
takur baldev singh had a daughter....a beautiful grl,komal...whum he loved vry well.......evn krishna was also vry fond of his only pretty sister......
sajjan singh wanted to make his son the most respected person in the whole town that is why he sent him to a medical college.....bt krishna had other thngs in mind.. although he came frm sucvh a background,he wanted to become a doctor becoz he wanted to help the poor people without taking money frm them.......
so this are my characters....plzz say if u like it......😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow Kaash!!easy there girl,u don't wanna mix up ur ffs.but I just loved the character sketch of Pratigya and Krishna.but at the same time I feel very sorry for Pratigya and her frnd Suhani.All the best with his ff. 😊
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nice discription dear! so u are planning to glue me with another FF of yours!!
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hey frnds...thnks for liking...bnt i had expected a little more comments.... well anyways...heres my first chapter...hpe u like it😃

chapter------1

pratigya!!!! pratigya kya hua beta? kya taklif ho rahi hain batao mujhe....-----cried naina ji,trying to calm her daughter whu was having her seizures agen after a long time.....

her body was constantly shaking and nobody cud make her steady....she was sweating like hell....and her mouth was foaming continuously..naina ji started to cry------pratigya kya hua tumhe? kuch to bolo....... aarushi put her arms around her mother to console her...she was evn terrified to see her sister's state although all the family members were well aware of this situation.....

shyam ji came running inside----maine ambulance ko bula liay hain...wo kabhi bhi pahuch sakte hain...tumlog plz fikar mat karo.....sabkuch thk ho jayega... he sat down near pratigya's head and ran his fingers into her hair.....her seizures hadn't stopped....

shyam ji felt terribly weak to see his daughter's condition bt he tried to keep himself strong as all the other members of the family wud break down totally if he showed his weakness.....

suddenly they heard adarsh and rohli's voice frm outside---papa jaldi ayiye.....ambulance aa chukka hain......

shyam ji turned to naina ji-----dekha....humne kaha than a...aab sab thk ho jayega.

within few minutes the attendants came inside with the stretcher and shyam ji and adarsh helped them to get pratigya on it... her body was shaking continuously..... naina ji and aarushi ran after them as they took pratigya outside to get her inside the ambulance..... adarsh and shyam ji got inside after her and before closing the door,he said to his wife in an assuring tone---tum chinta mat karo...hum pratigya ko sahi salamat ghar lekar ayenge......

naina ji-----hume jane dijiye hamari beti ke saath plz....hum yahan nhi reh payenge.....plzzz hume jane dijiye..

shyam ji-----aapko humpar bharosa hain na....aap yahan rehiye aarushi ke saath...hum pratigya ko wapas lekar ayenge......

naina ji seemed to calm down a little as she stepped away. shyam ji closed the door of the ambulance and it drove away....

naina ji folded her hands in sort of a prayer and closed hert eyes-----he bhagwan..hamari beti ko bacha lena....plzzz use thk kar dena...

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in the hospital pratigya was taken into the emergency ward as her traumas had increased and it was becoming more and more impossible to keep her under control.. the doctor applied an injection on her arm which wud make her muscles relax a little so that they wud be able to treat her properly....

shyam ji was about to go inside the ward wen the nurse said to him---aaplog andar nhi aa sakte..aplog bahar wait kijiye plz and plz cooperate...

adarsh stepped forward and said----aap fikar mat kijiye...aap pratigya ka khayal rakhiye..hum bahar hi wait karet hain...

shyam ji tried to wxplain to him---par adarsh..hamari beti...ko agr hamari zaroorat pari to?

adarsh---papa wo log doctors hain...samhalm lenge...aap kyun fikar kar rahe hain...pratigya bilkul thk ho jayegi.... aap...aap yaha baith jaiye plz......

he made him sit down on the bench and knelt down in frnt of him.

adarsh-----papa aapko kya lagta hain...hume hamari behen ki fikar nhi hain? par papa aap waha andar rehkar kya karte....papa hum bht bebas hain kyunki aajtak hum pratigya kuch bhi nhi de paye hain....yahan tak sukoon bhi nhi...in dus saalon mein usne jo kuch bhi jhela hain..uski zimedaar hum hain......sirf hum........agr usdin......hum pratigya ko akele nhi chod dete to aaj ye sab hume kabhi nhi dekhna padta....

shyam ji put his hand on his son's shoulder,whu was on the verge of shedding tears. he said-----beta apne aap ko dosh mat do..ismein tumhari koii Galati nhi hain.......tumhe thodi na pata tha ki kya honewala hain....ye sab pratigya ki kismet hain beta...hum aur tum kuch nhi kar sakte....

interrupting their conversation in between the nurse came out of the ward.. adarsh and shyam ji got up and walked towards her eagerly..

shyam ji----hamari beti thk hain na?

the nurse---aap dono patient ke rishtedaar hain?

adarsh'haan kyun?

the nurse---apdono ko doctor saab ne apne chamber mein bulaya hain abhi......

shyam ji grabbed adarsh's hand....it was sweating....

adarsh-----kyun? baat kya hain?

the nurse---ye to mujhe nhi pata...aap dono aiye mere saath..

the nurse walked away with shyam ji and adarsh following him...

the doctor was in his mid thirties and looked somewhat unhappy and disappointed. he told them to sit down...

shyam ji,after taking his seat----doctor saab baat kya hain..apne hume yahan kyu bulaya? hamari beti...pratigya thk to hain na?

the doctor-----aab hum aapko kya batayenge......aaplog to hamari baat hi nhi sunte..... humne aapse kuch din pehle hi kaha tha ki pratigya abhi tak thk nhi hui hain...use behtar ilaj ki zaaroorat hain...use Mumbai le jane ke liye kahan than a humne aapse....aaplog samajhte kyun nhi hain...ye koi mamuli bimari nhi hain..she is schizophrenetic......and she needs a much better treatment.....she needs the psychiartric treatment.....aur hum koi psychiartrist nhi hain.......hum usko aise baar baar nhi bacha payenge... agar aaplog apni beti ki bhalai chahte ho to use jald se jald Mumbai bhej dijiye.......

shyamji exchanged worried glances with adarsh......

adarsh said to the doctor---par yahan koi psychiartrist nhi hain kya? Mumbai hum use kaise bhej sakte hain...wo bhi is halat mein..wo waha na kisiko janti hain na pehchanti hain.....

the doctor thought for a while and then said----fir to ek hi raasta hain.......aap use kisi pagal khane mein bharti kar dijiye.....kyunki uski halat din par din bigadti ja rahi hain.....

the doctor's left the father and son too shocked to speak... they didn't know wat to reply..if a doctor cud be so rude to hve uttered such a thng then whum shud they turn for help......?

adarsh cud nt stop his temper frm rising---aap kehna kta chahte hain? hamari behen pagal hain? paagal hain woh? are aap use jante kitne hain? aura apse bht behtar doctor hain yahan...hum hamari behen ko kahin nhi bhejenge......yehi uski ilaj karwayenge..mere bht sare dost hain psychiartric deparment mein....unse ilaj karwayenge apni behen ka.....

the doctor-----plz Mr.adarsh aap shant ho jaiye aur hamari baat ka galat matlab mat nikaliye...hum koi dushman nhi hain doctor hain...aur patient ka bhalayi chahenge.... dekhiye ye jagah bht chota hain...yahan acche doctors milna bht mushkil hain...fir bhi aap dekhiye koshish karke...agar sach mein aapko koi accha doctor mil jaye to mujhe bht khushi hogi...... lekin eek baat dhyan mein rakhna.... apki behen ke dimag mein jo gehra asar pada hain ek kamzor umar mein....woh daag ya to bht pyaar se ya fir bht zyaada nafrat se hi mit sakti hain.......

adrash and shyam ji came out of the doctor's chamber....head held low... they went towards pratigya's ward and found her,lying on the bed,looking outside the window.....

adarsh carefully stepped towards her and touched her forehead gently.. she turned her face at him and said------bhaiya....mujhe ma ke paas jana hain........

adarsh---haan pratigya hum abhi tumhe lene aye hain...tum ghar chalogi hamare saath.....

pratigya kept quiet for sometime and then slowly the wrds came out of her mouth as if she was having a big difficulty to speak--------bhaiya...woh......suhani......use bhi ghar lekar chaliye na.....woh......woh kahin kho gayi hain....dekhiye na bhaiya....kabse use awaz de rahi hun...woh sun hi nhi rahi hain....plzzz aap use dhundiye na bhaiya..........

adarsh cudnt control his emotions anymore......he walked outside the room,tears rolling down his face......

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the wind was becoming rough...probably it wud rain.... the sky was clouded and neither the moon nor a single star cud be seen...it was as if the world had been fully wrapped by a blanket....wich was becoming more and more suffocating......

krishna was standing in the hostel's balcony.. it was nearly midnight bt he was nt feeling sleepy.... he was standing there...staring into the darkest of all dark nights and was totally occupied in thoughts.... none of his thoughts were pleasant....to be precise....all were devastating and painful as the person himself......

************krishna cud nt understand why he felt so lonely...so desolate always.... he had no frnds.....no well-wisher in this world.... he avoided his family as they did nvr look into his interests... he had always been looked upon like another earning member....whu wud be highly educated..and wud glorify their names..... he hated it.... nobody nsiderd him just as a son..... a son whu needed love wen he felt low...whu needed care and attention wen he was hurt.... frm his vry childhood... he had been left to struggle on his own..... by his ruthless father and his uncle...... his mother had nvr disobeyed his father so had nvr come in between them.... krishna had been longing for mother's love.... bt nvr received it.... he was nt allowed to go and make frnds with other boys as he was of the so called UPPER CASTE....... and therefore krishna's childhood was tatally devoid of frnds,playmates and fun....

the only playmate of his childhood was his sister komal whu loved him and was greatly attached to him.... although she was at least 3 yrs younger than him...she had always tried to behave older than her age so that her brother cud consider her as a frnd and nvr feel lonely.. she was so sensible since a vry small age that she nvr made her brother go anywhere alone or do anything all by himself.. she had sometimes evn tried to solve his maths puzzles for him.....

as they grew up,komal turned out to be a dazzling beauty and hence stricyt rules were laid down by her father and uncle wich also drew lines between herself and her freedom... krishna had tried a lot to fight for her independence bt in vain.... komal became a prisoner of the thakur mahal....

it was thne that krishna became frustrated totally and decided to leave the house.. as he knew that he cud nt survive without their help he gave them this excuse that he wanted to live in the hostel as it wud be good for his studies.... thakur sajjan singh did nt stop him as he wanted his son to get all the facilities he needed for scoring good marks and becoming a good doctor... and thus krishna left his house.....

komal had cried a lot on the day of his departure.. he was the only person whu understood her and it was terribly painful for her to see him go.. she had hugged her brother tightly and had said to him----bhaiya agar aap chale jaoge..to yahan hume kaun dekhega...kaun sochega hamare bare mein...? itni fursat kisko hain yahan?

krishna had consoled her and said---are pagal hum kya tujhe chod kar ja rahe hain......aur tujhse kabhi milne nhi ayenge? hum to ye shehar chodkar bhi nhi ja rahe hain.....hum hamesha tujhe fon karte rahenge aur tujhse milne bhi ayenge..... aut tu chinta mat kar...waise bhi is ghar mein to tu bht kam din ki mehman hain..... aur teri shaadi se pehle to hum zaaroor wapas aa jayenge......

with that he had left.....with his thngs to live in the hostel and concentrate fully in his career....*****************

the sky was torn apart by a blinding flash of lighting wich was followed by a roaring peal of thunder... the downpour began almost immediately....... krishna closed his eyes and spread his hands to enjoy the cool yet rough winds.. the smell of the wet ground used to attract him vry much... he took a deep breath and whispered to himself------bhagwan kare ye barish kabhi na ruke.... !!!!

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Edited by kaasshh - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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absolutely nice.
liked krishna in the new avatar
can't wait to read the next chapter!!
kriya meet!!
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Wow Kaash!!!trust me,tht was a fantabulous chp.I really feel so sorry for both Krishna and Pratigya.I really loved it.Pls keep up the good work and update soon 😃
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Omg You Are Soooooo Imaginative Yaar!!
Your Doing Soo Many FFs Lolz! Busy Ladki =)
I Havent Read The First Chapter Yet As I Have NO Tiime But I Will Asap =)
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thank u so much shruti,sadie.....and others.....😊 ya am nt that much busy😆...bt i love writing.....fan fics....😃
chapter-----2
adarsh was waiting outside the classroom with a file in his hand....he seemed really impatient as he had been waiting for almost an hour. ultimately he started pacing up and down the corridor out of growing impatience... he muttered to himself----uff...ye class kab dissolve hoga? aur kitni der wait karenge hum.... suddenly he heard a voice frm behind------are adarsh!!! tum yahan ?
he turned around to see a smiling face of a vry simple looking guy....whose face and features depicted his sincerity and dedication...
adarsh----are nitin....kya bataye...tumhare liye hi wait kar rahe the...tumhara class khatam ho gaya hain kya?
nitin sighed---haan...at last....aab kya bataye tumhe..ye psychology ke classes bhi na...pura headache hota hain yar...... 1 ghante ke class ko ye log 2 ghante tak extend karte hain bina kisi waje ki.... aur dimag kharab kar deta hain....wo to bas papa ki wajase hum is field mein aa gaye hain....warna hume to hamesha se hi anatomy mein interest raha hain....
nitin put his hands around adarsh's shoulder,whu happened to be a vry good frnd of his and said---aab tum batao...tum yahan humse milne aye ho? kyun koi kam tha?
adarsh's smile disappeared frm his lips at once..... he did nt reply.... nitin seemed to understood wat the matter was....
he said----o.....pratigya? use firse dohre pade hain...hain na?
adarsh nodded.....
nitin patted gently on his shoulder and said----chalo kahin baithkar baat karte hain...coffee pioge? chalo canteen mein chalte hain....
the two frnds walked towards the canteen....
in the canteen adarsh handed him pratigya's medical file and said-----tum ye dekhlo......shyad tumhe samajh ne mein asani hogi.....
nitin looked through the medical documents carefully,analysing each and every reports and medications.... then he closed the file and put it down.
adarsh------kya hua? kuch samjhe?
nitin ran his fingrs through his hair.. he seemed a bit thoughtful... he replied after few moments--------hm.....hume jo samajhna tha hum usidin pratigya ko dekhkar hi samajh gaye the...in reports mein wohi likha hain...bas hume ye sab kuch papa ko dikhana hoga..... kyunki hamari samajhne se to kuch hoga nhi...ilaj papa karenge aur unko hi ye sab kuch dekhna aur samajhna padega....unhone to pratigya ko bhi nhi dekha hain ajtak.....
adarsh placed his palm on nitin's hand wich laid on the table,his voice was choked with tears----nitin...hum jante hain ki tumhare papa bht busy hain......bht bade psychiartrist hain...par plzz kya tum unhe mana sakte ho pratigya ka ilaj karne ke liye...sare doctors humse yehi kehrahe hain ki pratigya ko mumbai le jao..uska acche se ilaj karwayo...lekin tum to hamari halat jante ho na...hum kaise afford kar payenge ye sab...? plzz tum doc mehra ko samjhao na plz nitin....hum zindagi bhar tumhara ehsan manenge......
nitin pressed his hands assuringly as he said---dekho adarsh ehsaan manne ki baat nhi hain...aur paison ki to bilkul bhi chinta mat karo...bas sirf ek hi prblm hain.....papa to saal mein ek baar ya do baar hi india ate hain aur wo bhi bht kam samay ke liye.......to fir wo pratigya ka ilaj kaise karenge?
adarsh was almost in tears--------nhi nitin...hum kuch nhi jante...tum unse baat to karke dekho ekbar...humse aur bardasht nhi ho raha hain...pratigya ki ye hala5t humse aur dekha nhi ja raha hain....plz tum kuch bhi karo....par doc. mehra ko manalo....nitin hum hath jodkar bhik mangte hain tumse....
he was about to fold his hands wen nitin caught them and said------ye kya kar rahe ho tum? thk hain.....hum papa se aaj hi baat karenge..aur unhe manane ki puri koshish karenge......
he stopped for a while and then said-------adarsh....agr hamare baas mein hota to hum pratigya ka khud ilaj karte...lekin ye koi asan case nhi hain...aur hamara course pura hone mein abhi kuch mahine aur baki hain..manta hu ki humne practise karna shuru kar diya hain par wo bht hi primary stage ka cases hain...aur ye bht complicated aur nazuk case hain......hum khud kisi ki zindagi ke saath thodi na khel sakte hain.....
adarsh looked down and said in a vry low and grief-stricken voice wich ached nitin's heart------agr tumahre papa is case ko lene ke liye man jate hain to thk hain...isse bade khushi ki baat nhi ho sakti hamare liye...par agr wo nhi mane to nitin tumhe hi kuch karna padega.....hamare liye....pratigya ke liye.... kyunki tum hamari akhri umeed ho......
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shyam ji entered pratigya's room quietly.. she was sitting on her bed,her knees clasped against her chest and her head rested on them..... he slowly sat down beside her and touched her shoulder...
shyam ji---pratigya?
she turned hr face towards him...her eyes were expressionless....
shyam ji cleared his throat and said----pratigya tum ready ho jao....tumhare adarsh bhaiya ke college mein jana hain......aaj...yaad hain.....waha........waha......-----his voice trembled a little as he said-----waha tumhari dost suhani bhi hogi...usne tumhe waha bulaya hain...tum chalogi na?
pratigya eyes became wide out of excitement as if she became suddenly alive.. she jumped up and grabbed her father's hands tightly.....her voice sounded almost like a whisper wen she said-------suhani...suhani ne bulaya hain hume? suhani na? haan papa usse milne jayenge..abhi chalo...abhi isiwaqt jayenge...chalo.....
she pulled her father by his hand as she herself jumped down on the floor------chalo chalo....abhi jayenge suhani se milne jayenge chalo.........
shyamji tried to calm her down-------beta haan hum jayenge to zaroor par kya aisi halat mein suhani tumhe pehchan payegi...tum abhi acche se tayar ho jao.......acche kapde pehen lo...fir hum chalte hain......
pratigya nodded her head and giggled... her smile brot tears into her father's eyes. she hugged him and then ran into the bathroom,laughing and jumping out of joy.....
shyam ji dropped down on the bed as she left.. tears flooded his cheeks.. he looked above and exclaimed as if to some God-----he bhagwan.....ye kaise din dikha rahe ho hume...hamari beti ki aisi halat!!!! kyun? kyun kar rahe ho uske saath aisa...plzzz....use thk kar do bhagwan.....plz use paksh do.....
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shyam ji hepled pratigya to get down frm the rickshaw and took her hand... they had reached the medical college... pratigya looked around the strange,unknown place... she seldon used to go out and this was the frst time that she had come so far frm her house.. she felt a bit afraid too... one cud easily make it out frm the sweat wich appeared on her forehead and her wide,eyes.....filled with a starnge kind of expression.....
shyam ji took out his mobile frm his pocket and dialled his son's number.. adarsh picked it up.
shyam ji-----beta hum pahuch gaye hain....tum nitin ko lekar bahara aa jao...hum pratigya ko andar nhi le ja sakte..agr usne waha kuch garbar kar diya to.....tum nitin ke kaho ki hum sidha uske ghar hi jayenge....
adarsh---thk hain papa...aap bas thodi der rukiye hum nitin ko abhi bulakar late hain........
shyam ji put the mobile back in to his pocket and grabbed pratigya's hand tightly. then he said to her----chalo pratigya hum us bench par jakar baith te hain......
pratigya looked at him with astonished eyes and said------suhani yehi ayegi kya? wo to kho gayi hain...kaise ayegi?
shyam ji stroked her hair gently and said---beta tumhare bhaiya aur unka dost lane gaya hain use....wo log use lekar bas abhi ate hi honge.....hum tabtak unka wait kare?
pratigya nodded and followed him like an obedient child.......
it had been hardly a minute after they sat down on the bench wen a terrible sound created a huge chaos in the campus... it was the sound of a gun shot.... shyam ji became petrified as he looked at his daughter... pratigya's face became as pale as a dead and she covered her ears and started shouting on the top of her lungs...... shyam ji was about to make her stop wen all of a sudden few students whu were trying to escape ran into him and he fell down on the ground..
while falling,accidentally he left pratigya's hand whu ran away almost instantly, her hands covering her ears... within few seconds,she disappeared out of his sight... shyam ji started looking for her like mad.....bt she ws nowhere to be found... evryone was running in all possible directions in the campus and shyam ji fell down more tan once.... his glasses were broken and his clothes were torn,still he cntinued searching for her daughter,calling her name repeatedly....
he was knocked on the ground once more by a motorbike this time and the rider came over to help him....
the rider---aap udhar kahan ja rahe hain...sab campus ke bahar bhag rahe hain...aap bhi chaliye..udhar abhi mat jaiye.....union walon ke bich danga shuru ho gaya hain....
shyam ji folded his hands and cried------beta...hamari beti.....kho gayi hain.........woh bht bimar hain.........hum uske bina kaise.........
the rider,whu was none other than krishna said quickly------aap fikar mat kijiye...kuch hi der mein police pahuch ta hi hoga....tab sabkuch shant ho jayega...abhi aap is mahol mein apni beti ko kahan dhundenge....? aap chaliye hamare saath......
shyam ji was nt ready to go with him----hum jabtak hamari beti ko nhi dhund lete hum nhi jayenge......chahe kuch bhi ho jaye....
krishna left his hand and mounted on his bike. then without a single word he rode his bike in the opposite direction...that is towards the campus..
meanwhile adarsh caught sight of his father,standing like a non-living object amidst the running people..... he ran towards him and said---papa aap yahan kya kare rahe hain? apko pata bhi hain kya ho raha hain yahan? sab paglo ki tarah bhag rahe hain...danga fail chuka hain....aapko goliyon ki awaz sunai nhi de rahe hain kya?aur pratigya.....papa pratigya kahan hain?
shyam ji turned his face towards his son,his cheeks were flooded with tears.. he puthis arms around his son and broke out into a deep sob.... evrythng became clear to adarsh whuse sense organs stopped working at once....
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pratigya kept running covering her ears.....she hated this noise..she hated them.......they kill people....she hated to see the blood...she closed her eyes and cntinued to run...... she didnt know where her feet were taking her.....she just ran..... ultimately her head knocked against somethng and she fell down on the hard ground...... it was then that she opened her eyes...
at frst she cud nt see anythng,evrythng was black.... then slowly her eyes got adjusted and she noticed that she was inside the college building....
she looked around her... evrythng was scattered and messed up,probably by those people whum she hated.... she found it difficult to walk as the floor was covered with broken wooden pieces of benches,tables,glasses... she tripped on a chair and fell face down...her nose started bleeding...
pratigya was struggling to get up wen suddenly she heard voices... not of one..bt of more than one person..and they were angry voices... she cud make out clearly wat they were saying---------jala do sabkuch.....kuch bhi bachna nhi chahiye.....jala do... fir dekhte hain hamara demands kaise nhi mante ye log....
pratigya's legs froze with fear as she realised that the voices were nearing.... she closed her eyes,she felt as if she cud hear frm far--------
************ bhag ja pratigya....tu bhag....... ye gande log hain....bhag ja pratigyaaaaaa************
she gasped and stuggled to get up once more... this time she succeeded.. then she looked around her...she tried to make out in wich direction she shud run.. to avoid coming in frnt of the nearing voices... as she was about to run towards the stairs,suddenly a strong hand grabbed her waist and pulled her in the opposite direction.. before she cud realise anythng,she felt her back being slammed against the wall and that hand left her waist and covered her mouth....
pratigya's eyes fell on an unknown male face, with tight square shaped jaws, lips full and engrossing....and the eyes wich were glued on her terror-stricken face were desperate,yet beautiful and deep......
ssshhh-----said krishna,putting his finger on his lips. he looked away and pratigya's eyes followed his gaze...
he had pulled her into a classroom and they peeped outside to see that four to six people were ascending the stairs,with thick rods and hockey sticks in their hands... pratigya's body started to shake out of immense fear as her eyes caught sight of the them... she cud nt shout as krishna held her mouth shut....
they started coming towards their hiding place.....searching each and evry room on their way... krishna looked around him.....there was nowhere to hide... the men came closer.... pratigya's heart started beating so fast and so loud that evn krishna cud hear it.... he looked at her face.... he wanted to save her...bt how?
unable to thnk of anythng else he pushed her away and himself went outside,slamming the door behind him....
the men were taken by a surprise.. without a wrd,krishna ran into them and started fighting... they were six,he was one...bt probably it was his cnfidence that became his strength... he was hurt no doubt... bt he did also hurt them.. he snatched a hockey stick frm one of them and started beating them black and blue..... ultimately one of them was compelled to take out a pistol....and he aimed it at krishna and fired... krishna was just in time to move away and the bullet hit the glass window,shattering it into a hundred pieces...
krishna threw a kick at the man and his gun fell down frm his hands... with one hand krishna held his neck and with the other hand he threw the pistol outside the window..... the group had alredy been taking quite a lot of it... they ultimately broke away and hurried downstairs...
as krishna was nt sure whether they had alredy given up or not,he decided to leave the place as soon as possible. he unlocked the door of the classroom and went inside to get pratigya(although he did nt know her name)....
he saw her huddled in a corner....shaking in fear.... he walked towards her and knelt down in frnt of her... then he said----yahan se chalo....hum tumhe bahar chod dete hain.....
pratigya did nt reply and neither did she move.. krishna thot that perhaps she was in a state of shock... he grabbed her hand and pulled her.. she got up,walked a few steps with him...and then suddenly tumbled and was about to fall down wen krishna caught her....... he cud make out well frm her face that she had become unconscious...
without wasting another second,he lifted her up in his arms and walked outside the classroom...
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the police had alredy arrived and had also arrested few of the rebellions.. the chaos had lessened a little and thngs were getting sorted slowly....
adarsh was having a talk with the inspector about pratigya wen suddenly his eyes fell on krishna,coming out of the building,carrying pratigya in his arms...
he left the inspector and ran towards him.... shyam ji had seen it too..he followed his son...
krishna put pratigya down on a bench..... shyam ji almost shouted-----kya hua hain ise? iski ye halat kaise ho gayi......
krishna replied calmly-----kuch nhi....bas thoda ghabra gayi thi....abhi hosh mein aa jayegi....
adarsh knew krishna too well...he was his classmate and sole competitor too. still,as he had saved his sister, he cnsidered it necessary to thank him..
adarsh----thnks krishna.....tumne hamari behen ki jaan bachayi.....
krishna patted him gently on his shoulder and without any other wrd,walked towards his motorbike....
shyam ji got up and asked adarsh---kaun hain ye ladka?
adarsh----papa ye thakur sajjan singh ka beta krishna hain....bht ghamandi aur badtameez hain...kisise dhang se baat tak nhi karta hain..
shyam ji----jo bhi ho...isne pratigya ki jaan bachayi hain.....hamare liye ye koi farishte se kam nhi hain.....
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Edited by kaasshh - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow!!!tht was an amazing chp.I feel so sorry for Pratigya.She's in such a vulnerable state.I really like this ff.Ur doing a gr8 job!!!keep it up kaash 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: shruthiR

wow!!!tht was an amazing chp.I feel so sorry for Pratigya.She's in such a vulnerable state.I really like this ff.Ur doing a gr8 job!!!keep it up kaash 😊

thnk u.....😳

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