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Posted: 15 years ago
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chapter-----3

***it had been a week since that incident happened and pratigya's health had remarkably improved after the incident.. nitin's father,doctor mehra had agreed to treat her bt only wen he was in india... for the rest of the time,he advised shyam ji and adarsh to take extreamely gud care of her....

doc mehra had said to them-----aaplog fikar mat kijiye.....hum dawai to denge...lekin uske ilawa aaplogo ko pratigya ki bht acchi tarah se khgayal rakhni padegi....uski har choti choti baat ko bhi aimiyat deni padegi aur kisi na kisiko har waqt uske saath rehna padega... she needs to be treated like a child.....

shyam ji and adarsh were,no doubt extreamely grateful to doc. mehra and nitin.....and adarsh had also invited nitin for dinner to his home one evening....to wich nitin had shyly agreed.. *****

hello bhaiya?---said aarushi in her mobile.....

adarsh---haan kaun aarushi? kya baat hain?

aarushi----bhaiya main apke college ke bahar khadi hun...aap apna practical file ghar par hi bhulgaye the...mummy ne mujhe bhej diya....aap plz bahar aakar le jao....

adarsh checked his bag----o my god...u r ryt....thk hain...hum abhi bahar aate hain...tum wohi ruko....

aarushi put down the mobile and waited impatiently..she was getting for her computer classes....

aarushi----ooff, yeh bhaiya kabtak ayenge...mujhe late ho rahi hain...bhaiya bhi na...itna careless hain.....

AARUSHI!!!------adarsh called out to her.. she turned and saw him and waved to him.... she walked quickly towards him bt on her way suddenly collided with someone and fell down on the ground alongwith the file..... adarsh saw her fall down and ran over to her bt he did nt help her to get up... instead he picked up his file and started dusting it...

aarushi had hurt her knee badly and she was finding it difficult to stand. the stranger with whum she had collided offered her his hand-------am sorry....

aarushi looked up and him as she took his hand and got up. the stranger was none other tthan krishna.. he released her hand and touched adarsh's shoulders whu was busy checking whether his papers were alright or not.

adarsh turned at him as he touched his shoulder. krishna said------tumhari behen ko chot lagi hain...ye sab chodo aur uski taraf dekho... adarsh looked at aarushi.. she was weeping softly.... head held low...

he walked over to her------aarushi,kya hua? tum thk to ho?

she did nt reply.. krishna said agen---uski payer mein chot lagi hain....use kisi doctor ke paas le jao...

adarsh had been taking it for quite long. he snapped----hume acchi tarah se pata hain ki hume kya karna chahiye.....tum hume mat sikhao...pehle to dhakka marte ho aur fir humdardi jatate ho....ye hamari behen hain...hum samhal lenge....tumhe chinta karne ki koi zaroorat nhi hain...

aarushi opened her mouth----bhaiya aap unse kyun istarah baat kar rahe hain? usne hume dhakka nhi diya...hum khud gir gaye.... aur apse pehle usne meri madat ki.....

adarsh-----tum chup raho...tumse humne pucha nhi hain...chalo....tumhe kisi doctor ke paas le chalet hain....

aarushi stopped him----uski koi zaroorat nhi hain.....hum khud aapni dekhbhal kar sakte hain.....

she turned at krishna-------thnks...... he smiled...

she was about to walk away wen he called out to her---------excuse me...agr aap bura na mane to kya hum aapko doctor ke chamber tak chod de..? aapko dekhkar aisa lag raha hain ki aapko taklif ho rahi hain.....

aarushi thought for a while and then glanced at adarsh------sure.....agr aapko zyaada prblm na ho to.... aur bhaiya aap class mein jaiye...apko late ho raha hoga....

adarsh stood there watching aarushi walk away with krishna... he gritted his teeth in anger......

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to aap bhi bhaiya ke saath padte ho?--------asked aarushi to krishna...

krishna---haan hum apke bhaiya ke classmate bhi hain aur competitor bhi....

aarushi giggled----ye to humne nhi pucha tha?

krishna smiled back-------to kya hua...humne bata diya.....taki aap humse thoda dur hi rahe....

aarushi was surprised----kyun?

krishna------aa...kyun ki aapke bhaiya ko ye baat zyaada pasand nhi ayega.....

a strange smile appeared across aarushi's face....she looked at krishna and said-------aur agr maine aapki baat nhi mani to?

krishna cleared his throat...bt didn't reply.. then suddenly he said-------wo raha doctor ka chamber... aap chaliye..woh aapko frst aid de denge....

thye went inside together.. the doctor examined aarushi's wound and bandaged it.. then he gave her some medicine and a pain killer....

after he had finished,they came out of the chamber.....

aarushi------aap coffee piyenge?

krishna------kyun?

aarushi----bas....aise hi....

krishna rubbed his cheek with his palm and said------aab aapko der nhi ho rahi hain kya? aap to keh rahi thi ki aapko computer classes jana hain...

aarushi smiled----aaj to main waise hi main late ho gayi hun...aab jakar kya faida? chaliye na kahin baithkar coffee peete hain......

krishna-----am sry aarushi....hamare class ka time ho gaya hain.....hume jana hoga....bye....and ya..it was nice to meet you....

he shook hands with her,then turned and walked away....

aarushi stared at his direction for sometime and then she muttered to herself-----gosh!!!!! he is so amazing....!!!

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pratigya was sitting on her bed and doing an embroidery work with rohli directing and helping her.. wen aarushi burst into her room... rohli and pratigya were both taken by quite a surprise....

aarushi,at frst gave a big hug to pratigya and rohli and then sat down on the bed beside them..

rohli-----kya baat hain...aaj humpar bht pyaar aa raha hain....koi khas wajah?

aarushi smiled shyly bt did nt reply.. pratigya glanced at her face and said uninterestingly-----firse kisise milkar aa rahi hogi....koi devta...ya fir koi rajkumar.......

aarushi stood up at once and gave pratigya another tight hug..

pratigya shouted----kya kar rahi ho? hamare haath mein needle hain...lag jayegi.....

aarushi released her and pressed her cheeks hard-------di....aap itni sweet kyun hain? aapko hamesha kaise pata chal jata hain hamare bare mein?

rohli------to pratigya thk keh rahi hain...kyun? aaj kis se milkar aarahi ho....?

aarushi started started dramatizing her feelings-----are aapko kya bataye...isbaar nahi koi devta...aur nahi koi prince....isbar to ek hero mila hain hero.....kya dude hain di....tumhe dekhni chahiye thi....thoda nakchada hain.....par koi baat nhi...use to main sidha banakar chodungi....aur aap dono ko pata hain wo kaun hain?

rohli----kaun?

aarushi sat down beside her,excitement breking out of her eyes------bhaiya ka classmate hain...aur sirf classmate hi nhi...ye wohi ladka hain jise bhaiya ek dum pasand nhi karte...aapko yaad hain wo hamesha kehte hain ki woh second aa jate hain ek ladke ki wajase...jo hamesha frst aata hain? ye wohi ladka hain rohli di.....krishna.....

then she related the whole incident to which pratigya and rohli listened with great interest....

after she had finished,pratigya said-----to usne kuch bataya? ki woh tumhe pasand karta hain ya fir kuch bhi?

aarushi---are di...aap samajh nhi rahi hain...ye waisa ladka nhi hain...bht ghamandi hain....uska ghamand todna padega pehle...

pratigy, in an uninterested tone------thk hain...koshish jari rakho....bhagwan kare tum safal ho jao...

rohli laughed out at her way of speaking wich made aarushi a bit angry-------aapko mazaq lag raha hain? thk hain aap dono dekhna kis tarah isbaar bhi woh ladka hamare pyaar mein pagal ho jata hain.....aaj tak aarushi ko jo kuch bhi pasand aaya hain use wo mila hain......

pratigya rolled her eyes.... she knew her sister well enough....

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mummy,aap kyun fikar kyun kar rahi hain...hum to rohli ke ghar hi jayenge...abhi wapas aa jayenge----pratigya tried to explain thngs to her mother.. she was feeling bored at home as rohli did nt come that day coz of fever. she wanted to visit her house wich was a walking distance away frm their house....bt her mother was nt allowing her to go...

pratigya----mummy plzzz......hum thk se chale jayenge.....

naina ji was firm in her decision------nhi pratigya hum tumhe nhi jane de sakte.....tumhare bhaiya aur papa ko aane do..fir wo log tumhe lekar jayenge...tum akeli kahin nhi jaogi...

pratigya----par kyun mummy? hum akele kyun nhi ja sakte? aisi kya wajah hain jiske liye hum rohli ke ghar mein bhi nhi ja sakte?

naina ji----bas keh diya na? aab chup chap apne kamre mein jao.....

pratigya----thk hain to fir aaj hum dawai bhi nhi lenge aur khana bhi nhi khayenge....

naina ji grew impatient----pratigya kyun zid kar rahi ho?

pratigya snapped----zid hum nhi aap kar rahi hain......hume ek bar jane dijiye na...hume istarah accha nhi lagta ghar mein baithe rehna....

naina ji put down her work and sighed----thk hain...jao....par ek ghante mein aa jana......

pratigya smiled and ran towards her room to get ready.....she felt terribly excited to go out on her own after really a long time...

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pratigya knew the way to rohli's house quite well,she had often visited her house in rickshaw... and she happily walked towards the right direction...after walking for sometime suddenly she felt that she had probably come in the wrong way. she stopped and looked around her. she thot-------ye mandir to yahan nhi tha......to fir ? yahan to ek bara sa ped tha......woh kahan gaya.....? kahin hum galat raste mein to.........................

she looked carefully around her,she felt that she did nt recognize the place at all....... she became so tensed that she forgot that she was standing on the middle of the road... sweat appeared on her forehead------hum galat raste mein aa gaye hain....yahan se rohli ka ghar...kis taraf....?

she wiped her face with a handkerchief... slowly she began to feel ill... as she was standing on the middle of the road,the vehicls gave out repeated horns to attract her attention and the drivers shouted at her---- e ladki....apna baap ka raasta samajh rakhi ho ka?

pratigya covered her ears....her condition started to deteriorate... the people gathered around her, shouting at her,abusing her...... she felt powerless to speak...let alone to move...she knelt down slowly on the ground... the shouts and chaos around her increased----saali.....kya kar rahi hain...ye koi baithne ki jagah hain kya?

suddenly,her senses came back to her and she felt herself being pulled up on her feet by someone.... she opened her eyes and saw a familiar face in frnt of her...a face wich she had seen vry closely before...somewhere..... she strained her brains bt cud nt remember..... she felt weak..... and clutched the person's collar and rested her head on his chest.......

krishna... put his arm around her waist and held her tightly against himself... then he dragged her away frm the middle of the road.. the situation became normal agen and the crowd broke up.....

krishna released pratigya whose condition seemed to become a little better..... she looked up at him-----------tum kaun ho?

krishna was mesmerized by her extreamely innocent voice wich equally matched with her innocent face... he felt as if a child asked him the question......

krishna----hamara naam krishna hain.....krishna thakur...

pratigya seemed to hear that name too...bt she did nt strain her brains this time..... she lowered her eyes---------pratigya.......hamara naam......

krishna-------tum kya kar rahi thi? aise koi bich raaste mein khada rehte hain kya? tumhare saath kuch bhi ho sakta tha...... ek baat batao....kya tum kisi baat se pareshna ho? usdin bhi tum itni pareshan thi.......

pratigya cut him in between and said-----hume rohli ke ghar jana tha.....raasta nhi mil raha hain....hume abhi ghar jana hain.......

krishna----tum ghar ka raasta dhund paogi?

pratigya remained silent.. she was unsure whether she wud be able to recognize her way home....

krishna-----thk hain tum batao tumhara ghar kahan hain?

pratigya told him the address of her home... krishna looked around and called a rickshaw... then he helped pratigya to get up and he himself got up..... he related the address to the rickshaw man whu started paddling...

on their way,neither did pratigya speak and nor did krishna.... the latter kept on staring at the extreamely preety yet mysterious grl sitting beside him bt cud nt gain the courage to talk to her....

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow!! Amazing!
Read All The Chapters Now Nd Wow!!! Sooo Good!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Fantastic chp!!It was fabulous.Now looks like Krishna is stuck between both the sisters 😉 Looking forward to the next chp. 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i seem to get so less comments....... dont u like the story? 😕 i kno my other two fan fics are pending...bt yar i want to write more....than to deal with one or two...plzzzz cooperate with me frnds.....😭
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Posted: 15 years ago
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well u don't have to worry much abt the others commenting and stuff coz u have a lot of viewers and ppl LIKE ur chps so u just continue since ur doing a fabulous job 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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chapter----4
the rickshaw stopped in frnt of pratigya's house----lo ji aye gaye.....
krishna got down the rickshaw and paid him.. pratigya followed him...
krishna-----ye tumhara ghar hain?
pratigya nodded....
krishna-----thk hain to fir hum chalte hain...... he walked few steps and then suddenly turned and said------apna khayal rakhna.....
pratigya only looked at him bt did nt reply.....
he was abt to walk away wen suddenly aarushi came out and noticed him-----are aap?
she came running towards him,excitedly------aap yahan? yahan kya kar rahe hain?
krishna-------hum....woh.......matlab.....woh shayad aapki behen hain...hain na?
aarushi looked back and saw pratigya walking towards the frnt door in slow steps....
aarushi---haan woh meri didi hain...kyun?
krishna------woh aapki didi rasta bhul gayi thi......bich raste mein khadi ho gayi thi......bht tamasha ho raha tha....
aarushi was surprised---kahan?
krishna----woh civil lines ke udhar mein
aarushi----civil lines? di civil lines kyu jayegi? woh bhi akele?
krishna---aab ye hume kaise pata hoga...usne humse kahan ki woh kuch....koi rohli ke ghar ja rahi thi....raasta bhul gayi thi.....
aarushi turned back and shouted-----mummy!!!! mummy!!!!
her mother came running out. she saw aarushi standing outside with a stranger....
naina ji----kya baat hain...kyun chilla rahi ho? aur beta ye kaun hain?
krishna felt like uneasy...he muttered------i thnk hume abhi jana chahiye...
aarushi to krishna-----rukiye aap.... she turned to her mother and said------mummy aapne pratigya didi ko ghar ke bahar akele bhej diya? pata hain kitni badi accident ho sakti thi? woh bich raste mein khadi ho gayi thi....bich raaste mein...woh to krishna ne use dekh liya aur ghar tak drop kar diya....warna pata nhi kya ho jata.....apko yaad hain na doctor ne kya kaha tha....didi ko ghar se bahar akele bhejne ke liye mana kiye the na woh?
naina ji came outside and stood in frnt of krishna------beta.....hume samajh mein nhi aa raha hain ki tumhara shukriyada kaise kare......
krishna----nhi....aisi koi baat nhi hain......thk hain abhi hum chalte hain...
aarushi-------are aise kaise? mummy aapko pata hain ye adarsh bhaiya ke classmate hain.....krishna...
naina ji was taken by a pleasant surprise-------tum adarsh ke dost ho?
krishna-------ji....dost nhi......sirf classmate....
naina ji----are tum pehli baar hamre ghar par aye ho...aise thodi na jane denge tumhe...chalo andar aajao..... coffee to pikar jao beta....aarushi krishna ko andar lekar aao.....
naina ji walked towards the house and aarushi came over to krishna,smiling sarcastically....
krishna looked at her------aise kyun has rahi ho?
aarushi----kuch nhi....usdin tumne mere saath coffee peene ke liye mana kar diya tha na...aab dekho...coffee to tumhe peena hi padega....aab kaise mana karoge?
krishna smiled back----andar chale ya fir yehi raste mein baithkar coffee peeyenge?
they walked towards the house,smiling at each other............
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inside the house, aarushi and krishna sat in the drawing room,laughing and gossiping....
no doubt,krishna was enjoying her company....she was cheerful,lovely and frndly... they were having good fun wen naina ji came with a cup of coffee and some sweets in a plate......
after keeping them on the table,she said to aarushi----betya tum college se abhi abhi ayi ho.....jao jakar fresh ho jao....aur pratigya ko dekho...uske dawai ka waqt ho gaya hain......
the question wich had been bugging krishna since some time...he decided to ask it then---------aa... aarushi......ek baat batao...tumhari did ko kya koi prblm hain? hamara matlab hain kisi pareshani mein hain woh?
aarushi was abt to answer his question wen naina ji said to her----tumne suna nhi humne kya kaha? jao jakar pratigya ko dawai de do....
aarushi looked pretty irrirtated and disappointed as she walked inside.....
krishna realised that he shud nt have asked the question... he apologized to naina ji------ am sry aunty...i thnk hume ye puchna nhi chahiye tha......lekin woh jis tarah se raaste ke bich khadi ho gayi thi.....na to use cars ki horns sunai de rahi thi aur nahi drivers ki galiyan....woh to...road par baith gayi thi.....
naina ji's eyes became wide in shock------kya?
krishna----haan......humne khud apni aankhon se dekha...tabhi to hum use khichkar side pe le aaye.....
naina ji lowered her face and big droplets of tears rolled down her cheeks... although she was quick enough to wipe them away bt they had alredy caught krishna's eyes....
naina ji-----tum khao na....?
krishna lifted up the coffee mug frm the plate and took a sip frm it.. he did nt say anythng more abt the incident bt naina ji spoke this time---------beta....hamari badi beti pratigya...woh......normal nhi hain......
krishna put down the coffee mug and stared at her...
naina ji cntinued-------woh.....tumlog to doctor ho.....tumlogo ko to pta hi hoga.....woh schizophrenic hain......
krishna's eyes grew wide---schizophrenic?kaise?
naina ji------ woh.....bachpan se aisi hain.....ek bht bura hadsa hua tha uske saath.....uski saheli ke saath...usne woh khud apni aankhon se dekhi thi....tabse woh aisi ho gayi hain......doctors kehte hain ki shock ki wajase...us hadse se uske dimag par bht gehra asar pada tha....
krishna----aplogo ne uska ilaj nhi karwaya?
naina ji said quickly-----haan.....karwaya han...bht doctoro se uska ilaj karwaya hain......aur uski halat kafi sudhar bhi gayi hain....lekin abhi bhi usko dohre padte hain.......kabhi kabhi........ jaise wo akeli raste mein chal nhi pati....ghum firkar wohi chali jati hain jahan usne woh hadsa hote hue dekhi thi.......
krishna----aab uski treatment kaun kar raha hain...
naina's face brightened up at his question... she said excitedly-----woh doc mehra hain na? tum logo ke college mein hi padta hain wo ladka...nitin...uske pitaji....woh kar rahe hain uski ilaj.....
krishna----doc mehra? lekin woh to saal mein sirf do baar hi india aate hain....jahatak humne suna hain.....
naina ji-----haan...sahi hain...lekin hum aur kya karenge.....usne humse waada kiya hain ki jab bhi woh india ayenge pratigya ki ilaj karenge.....aur jab wo yaha nhi rahenge to nitin uski dawai wagera dekhega......
krishna's face twisted in irritation------aunty.....aise kuch nhi hota...ye koi baat hui kya? ek schizophrenetic patient ki bht zyaada acchi tarah se ilaj karni padti hain......ye koi khel nhi hain.....jab ayenge tab ilaj karenge? are? agr bich mein emergency pad gayi to? aise patients ke saath kabhi bhi kuch bhi ho sakta hain...... nhi aunty aap meri baat maniye....pratigya ko behtar ilaj ki zaaroorat hain jo use yahan nhi mil sakti...aap log use bahar le jaiye...mumbai ya delhi...waha aplogo ko acche se acche doctors mil jayenge.....
naina ji burst into tears at once.....she started sobbing..holding the tray tightly between her fingers....
krishna----are aunty.....aap roiye mat...hum aapko hurt nhi karna chahte the...am sry.....
naina ji tried to cntrol her emotions and stpped weeping... then she said to him------hum jante hain beta......aur beta hum bhi wohi chahte the....lekin.....lekin hamari halat aisi nhi hain ki hum pratigya ko bahar le jakar uski ilaj karwaye.......tum to dekh hi sakte ho....... adarsh ki padai....aarushi ki shaadi....ye sab bhi to hume hi karna hoga........ pratigya to hamari eklauti nhi hain....hume sabke bare mein sochna padega.........
krishna knew that she was ryt...their cndition didnt seem so well that they cud give her the proper treatment she needed... he sighed.......
naina ji wiped her tears away-----khair chodo tum.....tum batao....padai to thk tarah se chal rahi hain na tumlogo ki? abhi kuch din pehle college mein to hungama ho gaya tha...union walo ke bich danga shuru ho gaya tha...wo sab sulajh gaya hain na?
krishna smiled casually-------are aunty.....ye sab to hota hi rehta hain.......
he got up-------thk hain......aab hum chalte hain......coffee ke liye shukriya...... he bent down and touched her feet... she put her hand on his head-----jeete raho......
krishna was abt to retreat wen all of a sudden....pratigya came running outside..........and stopped after seeing him.......
she came over to him in slow careful,steps and said-------tum?........krishna.......? krishna ho na?
krishna smiled.......
she looked at her mother and said-----mummy....ye krishna hain......MERA DOST.........
she turned at him agen only to meet his surprised eyes.....
pratigya-----kyun? thk kaha na humne? dost ho na tum mere?
krishna replied in such a manner as if he was in a dream---------haan....tumhara dost..........
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dekha rohli di....humne apse kaha tha na...ki is ladke ko main apna deewana banakar rahungi......?---------said aarushi in the happiest tone.....
pratigya looked up frm her wrk for once and then cntinued sewing....
rohli-------baat kay hain batao ge bhi aab?
aarushi breathed in deeply and said-----usne mujhe fon kiya tha....aur kehraha tha ki mujhse milna chahta hain.....koi....ZAROORI baat kehni hain.... aab aap hi bataiye...ladko ki zaaroori baat kya ho sakti hain?
she winked at rohli.......
rohli----of ho...isiliye tum itni khush ho? are koi aur baat bhi to ho sakti hain.......
aarushi---haan wo bhi ho sakti hain par ek baat sochiye.....wo mujhse khud milne ki baat kar raha hain...matlab kuch to hua hain use bhi....kyun di? aapko kya lagta hain?
the last question was thrown over to pratigya for her opinion... she put down her wrk and looked up at her sister...smiling brightly.. then she said----aarushi..... pehle tum ye pata karo ki baat kya hain fir ulta sidha sochogi.....
rohli tried to add a little more fuel to the fire--------waise...krishna to pratigya ko bhi apna dost manta hain...uski bar bar hero ki tarah help karta hain...to ye bhi to ho sakta hain ki..........................
aarushi did nt evn let her cmplete the sentence--------accha ye batao main kya pehnu?
rohli----kuch mat pehno.....bhit acchi lagogi....
she burst out in laughter and clapped hands with pratigya whu was also giggling at her joke.....
aarushi became red in anger----haso...aur haso...mujhpar to aap dono ko hamesha hi hasi aati hain.......
pratigya realised that the joke had gone too far... she put her arms around her sister and kissed her on her red cheeks... then she said-------are baba gussa kyun karti ho? waise bhi is duniya mein aisa koi nhi hain jo hamari aarushi ko nazarandaaz kare.........
arushi turned and hugged her back....
rohli-----are tum dono mujhe kaise bhul gayi?
pratigya----lo...tum bhi aa jao.......
she spread out her hands at her whu came over to them hurriedly and threw her arms around both of them........
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kya yar kya soch raha hain?-----said vinay(vinay rajput) to krishna whu was sitting by the table....head in his hands.....
vinay was krishna's room-mate,the only frnd of his. krishna got up and rubbed his eyes------kuch nhi.....e hume abhi chal na hoga....kuch kam hain....
vinay-----iswaqt? kahan ja raha hain?
krishna----kisi se milna....
a strange smile spread across vinay's face-----oho....kisse mikne ja rahe ho janab?
krishna smiled back at him----aur kisse? teri bhabi se.....bewakuf.....
vinay------aise kaise jane dunga....pehle mitai khila....
krishna----aree bhai pehle shaadi to hone de...baad mein mithai khilaunga......aab chod hume..aarushi wait kar rahi hogi......
vinay-----oho....aarushi? naam to kamal ki hain.....dikhne mein bhi mast hogi? kyun?
krishna out his hands around vinay's neck and said-----abe saale...uski behen ke ilaj ke baare mein usse baat karni hain...samjha? tabse hum feke ja rahe hain aur ye chat ta ja raha hain....... pagal.......
vinay----kya yaar.....good news ka band baja diya.......
krishna hugged him and said---good news bhi milegi...ek na ek din to zaroor milegi good news.....
he smiled at bhis own comment.......as if he was making a fun of himself,then he said-------abhi to hum use ye samjha bhi nhi payenge ki woh hamare liye kya hain................
Edited by kaasshh - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Kash, this is an amazing fanfic! really enjoying it!
I loved Krish's last dialogue.....awww...hez in luv already! :P
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Amazing chp although I didn't expect tht Krishna will come to know abt Pratigya's condition so soon.I thought tht u'd drag it a bit but still it's best tht he came to know abt it now itself.So does he still like her??????well looking forward to the next chp 😊
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chapter----5

krishna was lying on his bed,hands at the back of his head....he was thnking....
he had met aarushi and in between their small talks,he had tried to convince her in sending pratigya out of town to have a better and more responsible treatment..... bt aarushi was so childish and so immature that she didnt seem to realise the seriousness of his wrds... she thot that he was just trying to be formal and all....... at last krishna gave up and returned....of course after dropping aarushi home...... bt he cud nt meet pratigya...she was asleep........
krishna let out a deep breath-----aarushi....aarushi...tum nhi samajh rahi ho....pratigya thk nhi hain.......tumlogo ko shayad lag raha hain ki woh thk hain lekin nhi.....uske mann ki halat abhi bhi waisa hi hain....ye sannata tufan ke pehlewali sannata hain........
he closed his eyes and tried to sleep. as he was really tired.....he dozed off almost immediately.......
************** are tumhe to chot lagi hain?-------said the little boy to the little grl whu was crying her eyes out..... her frnd,another small princess like grl was trying to console her... the former had hurt her knee badly while running... and her tears were unstoppable....
the boy had come to the mela with his sister to buy her some bangles.. there he had noticed these two small ladies playing and running and giggling away... he wanted to play with them too...bt he remembered his father's orders.... he had forbidden him to talk to anyone outside the house...nt evn to children of his own age..... therefore he had just stood there...watching them sadly......
these two grls were so much engrossed in their game that they did nt notice anyone.....they were trying to catch each other and running away frm each other wen suddenly the elder among the two knocked against a cart and fell down...... her frnd ran towards her and sat down in the mud before her......
the boy,whu had been watching them for long ran over to help them.... the cut was really bad.....and it needed some medication.....
the sister crept up to them too. she stood behind her brother and said softly-----bhaiya isko hamare ghar le chaliye na.......isko bht chot lagi hain.....ghar mein amma hain na...woh acche se patti kar denge.....
the boy thought for a while and then said to the other grl,the frnd-------tum ise lekar hamare ghar chalo na......yehi paas mein hain....
both the grls glanced at each other's faces and then one whu had got hurt said------nhi.....hum thk hain...aur hume ghar bhi jana hoga........
her frnd said to her--------jab bol raha hain to chalo na.......tum aise kaise ghar ja paogi? bht khun nikal raha hain........
the boy-----haan chalo na.....
at last the grl agreed to go with them... both the boy and her frnd helped her to get up...... then they walked slowly towards the big car standing on the side of the road.....
the boy asked the younger grl------tumhara naam kya hain?
she was an extreamely pretty grl with rosy lips and cheeks and her long straight hair nearly reaching her waist.....
the grl------ghar mein hume sab rani bulate hain..........lekin hamara ek bara sa aur accha naam bhi hain.........PRATIGYA SAXENA.........
the boy----bapre!!!! ye accha naam hain? haan par bada to zaroor hain..... mujhe to pehla wala naam hi zyaada accha laga.........rani........
he laughed........ pratigya did nt seem to enjoy his joke...after all he was making fun of her name...........
pratigya----tumhara naam kya hain?
the boy thought for a while and then smiled mischieviously wen he said-----waise to ghar mein sab hume baba bulate hain lekin hamara bhi ek bara sa aur accha sa naam hain.....KRISHNA THAKUR.............
pratigya giggled at his way of immitating her wrds******************
as the sounds of their innocent laughter and giggles started to fade away,krishna opened his eyes..... bright sunlight illuminated his room...... it had become morning..... he sat up on his bed and took a deep breath........... it had been quite a long time since he had last dreamt..... bt he knew quite well that it was nt a dream....... IT WAS ONE OF HIS MOST PRECIOUS CHILDHOOD MEMORIES..........
krishna smiled to himself-----rani......yehi naam tha na tumhara? tumhara chota sa pyaara sa naam......... he smiled agen......
vinay entered the room and saw krishna sitting on his bed,smiling to himself...
vinay---ee dekho...abe pagla gaye ho ka bey? akele akele muskura rahe ho? ka hua? kisi haseena ne sapne kuch kiya to nhi?
krishna got down frm the bed and stretched his hands.......
vinay----ka hua? bhuk wuk bhi lagta hain ya sapne mein hi khana kha lete ho?
krishna----are yaar......tu bhi bat ka batangar bana raha hain...chal niche chal...khana khate hain.....
vinay----e maharaj aaj assignments deni hain...bhul to nhi gaye ho?
krishna----nhi yaar...sab tayar hain....aur isbar bhi krishna ka assignment sabse behtar hi hoga......
he put his arms around vinay's shoulder and both of them walked out.....blabbering with each other..........................
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adarsh was pretty upset.... agen krishna had beaten him in the assignments.... this time adarsh had wrked quite a lot behind it,straining his pocket money and his brains out....just to beat krishna....bt unluckily he was agen a loser.......
he banged angrilly on the wall of his room-----damn it...isbar bhi us krishna ne hume hara diya....kitna kuch kiya tha is assignment ke liye.......sirf us krishna ko ekbar apni jagah dikhane ke liye....kuch bhi nhi hua.....lagta hain us thakur sajjan singh paisa dekar is assignment ko kharid liya tha......warna aisa kaise ho sakta hain ki har bar wohi jeet jata hain?
-----agr dusro ko nicha dikhane ki koshish karoge to beta khud hi niche gir jaoge-----.... adarsh turned around...shyam ji was standing at his doorway....
he turned away frm him..... shyam ji entered the room and put his hand on his son's shoulder------eta kya tum padai isiliye kar rahe ho? dusro ko nicha dikhane ke liye? huh? isiliye medical kar rahe ho? tumhe padai krishna ko nicha dikhane ke liye nhi nalki apne aap ko sabid karne ke liye karna hain......beta....cmpetition acchi baat hain....lekin cmpetition koi jung nhi hain beta......aur nahi tum kisiko harakar ek behtar doctor ban jaoge.....tumhe apne aapko ek behtar doctor sabid karna hoga........apne balbute par..........samjhe?
adarsh tried to let out his grievances-------par papa aap nhi jante.....woh krishna thakur......thakur sajjan singh ka eklauta bete hone ka pura faida le raha hain...uska baap paise dekar sare college ko kharidkar baitha hain......warna sare exams,sare assignments mein woh hamesha kaise frst ata hain? aap hi bataiye...kya hum mein se koi is kabil hi nhi hain? woh thakur sajjan singh.......
suddenly they heard a crashing sound outside the room... both of them went outside and froze..... pratigya lay on the ground,unconscious........
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nitin said to adarsh----dekho.....koi ghabrane wali baat nhi hain....shayad use uski atit ki koi baat yaad aa gayi thi...aur aaplog to jante hi hain......uski atit mein kya hua tha........ humne use acchi tarah se dekh liya hain...abhi woh bilkul thk hain......
adarsh came outside to see him off...... he seemed to be thnking somethng deeply... nitin touched his shoulder-----kya soch rahe ho?
adarsh----nhi.....hum soch rahe the ki shayad pratigya ne hamari aur papa ki baatein sun li thi....lekin usse uski atit ka kya sambandh hain?
nitin----tumlog kis bare mein baat kar rahe the?
adarsh-----assignments ke bare mein....
nitin----tab pratigya kaha thi?
adarsh----apne kamre mein.....shyad woh yaha se guzar rahi thi aur hamari baatein sun li....lekin humne aisa kya kaha tha?
nitin patted him on his shoulder------chodo na.....aab wo thk hain....tum chinta mat karo....pratigya ke paas jao......aur haan adarsh...ek baat ka khayal rakhna....
adarsh----kya?
nitin--------dekho.....pratigya jitna uski aaj mein rahe utna hi uske liye accha hain...agr woh apne atit ke bare mein kuch kehti hain ya fir kuch puchti hain to use kisi bhi tarah taal dena......ok?
adarsh----ok...hum khayal rakhenge.....
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pratigya stood by the window,looking outside at the bright full moon in the sky...she loved the full moon..... it always brot smile on her face to gaze at the eternal beauty of the full moon and it also used to brighten some long lost memories of her past..............
**************** krishna,ye chand aaj kuch zyaada bara lag raha hain,hain na?
krishna laughed out at her wrds-----he he rani....tum pagal ho kya? chand aise achanak bara kaise ho sakta hain?
pratigya stood up in her tiny legs,hands on her waist.. she said angrilly----kyun? agr tum bare ho sakte ho,hum bare ho sakte hain...to ye chand kyun nhi bara ho sakta?
krishna rubbed his chin with his fingers...
pratigya smiled proudly------hmm...aab bolo...kya bolna chahte ho?
krishna got up too,hands on his waist-----kaun kehta hain ki tum bari ho sakti ho? tum to hamesha hi humse choti rahogi.....
pratigya looked at him and realised that he was ryt,she was shorter than him....she became vry annoyed and in her desparate need to become taller than him..she stood up on her toes and giggled------dekho...hum tumse bade ho gaye hain.....
krishna stood up on his toes too and said-----aab kya bologi?
pratigya gave up and sat down agen,silently..... krishna sat down beside her and said-------waise tum thk keh rahi thi....aaj ka chand kuch zyaada hi bara dikh raha hain....
hearing his wrds pratigya's face lit up just like the full moon in the sky......***********************
pratigya beta-------naina ji called her frm behind.. pratigya turned around...
naina ji-----beta tumhara dawai ka waqt ho gaya hain...........
pratigya quickly wiped the tears wich was coming out of her eye and smiled-----haan mummy......
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: shruthiR

Amazing chp although I didn't expect tht Krishna will come to know abt Pratigya's condition so soon.I thought tht u'd drag it a bit but still it's best tht he came to know abt it now itself.So does he still like her??????well looking forward to the next chp 😊

read the last chp....u will be shocked......😉

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