FINAL Fan Fiction 'You are Mine' Finished! - Page 77

Originally posted by: dkmystery

Loved loved loved both the chaps, my gray hairs have disappeared! 😆
how i wish this was the exact relation of Kriya in the show too, how wonderful it was when even Krishna was concerned about Pratigya's respect and vice versa! 👏

Originally posted by: siinnce.09

🤣 Thank thank thank YOU! for your comment! *sighs in relief* so glad that my double update has completely erased the grey hairs! 😆

I think creatives should read some fan fictions and get some ideas!

Originally posted by: dkmystery

😆 hope u start another FF soon yar! n do read Kaash's FF, it's very funny! 😆
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/pratigya/1405122/fan-fic-a-mock-version-of-pratigya-updtd-ch-5

Originally posted by: siinnce.09

Pratigya still tried to get up, 'I'll stand for gods' sake, let me go'. Krishna tightened his hold around her waist, 'either you sit quietly on my lap or I will sit on yours, either way where sharing this seat'.

🤣 🤣 🤣 ffammy , whr you in BP mood while writing this chapter?

Krishna, I dare you to grab that walking stick off from that old woman! Krishna looked at the frail looking woman in sympathy, 'I don't mess around with old weak people! Krishna stated, 'give me a proper dare that has some challenges'. Tunna and Chandu started to laugh, 'the Krishna in which everyone is scared of; is actually frightened of an old woman! Krishna looked at his friends in disgust, 'fine!' he retorted as he walked towards the lady. As he came closer, Krishna felt a sense of hesitation. The woman stared at him in hopelessness, her body slightly shaking due to her advanced age. Krishna felt a tug in his heart, he couldn't do this to her. He looked over his shoulder and noticed Tunna and Chandu laughing from a distance. He broadened his shoulders and murmured a prayer of forgiveness as he snatched the walking stick and ran off. He looked over his shoulder expecting to see the old woman collapsing onto the ground. However his eyes widened as he saw the old woman charging after him with superhuman speed! Tunna and Chandu in this moment was practically rolling on the floor with laughter as the old woman caught up to Krishna, slapping him on the back.

🤣 🤣 🤣 hailaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

loved this chapter ffammy! 😳 So nice! I like the train scene bhery much! 😆 Am on to read next chapter! 😃

Originally posted by: siinnce.09

@ Priti- No worries! I couldn't quote you! 😔 It kept saying that the 'messege cannot be posted'