FF* zameen asmaan aik hua*Final chp-22 updated! - Page 2

thnxx for supporting me. i will update chapter 2 tonite. i am working on it ryt now. thnnxxx once again!!! luv all of you guyz!

Hey there!!Nice suspense bhara ff.Plz update soon. 😊

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CHAPTER - 2

Nania came to shyam with a cup of tea. when shyam ji had a sip of tea , naina ji said : kaafi waqt ho gaya hai pratgya abhi tak ghar nae ayi hai. Wo to kah rahi thi ke 2 ghante main ajaye gi , 5 baje gayi thi aur ab 9 baj rahe hain. Shyam ji kept the cup of tea on the table and asked her furiously ap humen ab bata rahi hain? Itni dair se larki ghar se bahar hai aur ap ko koi fiqar hi nae , ulta humein chaye laa ke de rae hain. Beti 4 ghante se bahar hai aur app humen ab bata rahi hain, saying this he hurriedly picked up the phone and called her friend's number where she was about to go....her friend picked up the phone:

Friend: hello

Shyam ji: kya pratigya tumhare ghar hai? ( in an angry manner)

Friend: nae to , wo to yahan ayi hi nae ,to main ne socha ke shaid us ne nae ana hai.

Shyam ji threw away the phone and sat on the sofa in tension. Kya hua? Naina asked. Pratigya us ki dost ke ghar pe nae hai shyam ji replied. Naina : to kahan gayi wo? Shyam: Agar humen pata hota to abhi jaa ke use nae le ate? Naina said: lekin pratigya aisi larki to nae hai kaheen bhi humen bina batae nae jaati phir ajj kahan ? Shyam ji was in a great tension now. He called to police station and asked help from them but they said that its late now , we'll see it tomorrow morning. Shyam knew they are not going to help them it was just an excuse. He was worrying for her daughter and thinking for what to do. He was helpless.....a helpless poor father..what could he do now to save his daughter.

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Pratigya was unconsciously lying on the floor. After few minutes she got up and was really confused with a lot questions in her mind. Kon ho tum log? Humen yahan q le ke aye ho? Hum ne tumhaara kya bigara hai? PAPA , PAPA,PAPA, it was her wordless cry!! She stood up and started knocking on the door hardly with her hand and shouted koi darwaazaa kholo , koi hai? Humen yahan kyoun le ke aye ho? Meanwhile she heard a voice from outside saying: lo bakna shuru kardia laundia ne. sahab ko bol ke iss laundia ko jaldi le jana pare ga. Earth slipped from bottom of her feets when she heard this. She was totally shocked. Not in a state of saying anything.

What happened was:

A well known person in the history of smugglers was involved in it. His business was to smuggle valuable things or may be children and women.

This time it was pratigya. They were taking pratigya to a far away place secretly to smuggle her. It was their business. Where ever they saw a beautiful girl, they kidnapped her and took her to that place.

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It was morning, shyam ji didn't sleep last night, naina as well. They both were sitting tensed on the sofa. Suddenly shyam burst out and said : wo humaari madad zaroor kare ga. Naina ji asked kon?. Shyam ji said aap bus sabar kijiye hum abhi us ke paaas ja rahe hain. He took a rikshaw and reached there. It was his friend arjun , Arjun vijyangar a very famous detective. Shyam went to him and gave him a brief description of his problem. Arjun replied after listening to what all he said : na to tumhaari kisi se koi dushmani hai nahi aj tak tum ne kisi ka bura kia hai, to agar pratigya ka kidnap hua hai to zaroor wo tum se koi money amount mange ge ya phir unhon ne pratigya ko smuggle karne ke liye kidnap kiya hai. Shyam ji was totally shocked. They still started investigating, after a lot investigation they found that they have kidnapped her and are taking her to a faraway place ( x,y,z better not to mention any country name). and that smuggler was also not so foolish. Through some source he came to know what all shyam did. He called his persons who were taking pratigya to that place and said to them to change their route coz pratigya's father now know where are we taking her and he is helped by a well known detective, he adviced them to take him to England coz that smuggler's boss was in England. England though was not a place where they could do this easily but, these smugglers where very well trained and clever.

i updates chapter 2.... and soon will be chapter 3!😉

its quit different from its original story but creative keep it up continue😊

Hey there!!Nice one.Now I am really waiting for chp-3.If I am right will Pratigya by chance meet Krishna in England???