FF* zameen asmaan aik hua*Final chp-22 updated!

Hello guys this is my first fan fiction. So I am not so good at writing ffs but I am trying to write one. Its quite different from what you have read till now. I hope you would like it if it is good. Plzz I need you support and help coz this is my first ff . if you like it plzzzz do comment!

Characters:

Krishna: Arhaan behl

Krishna's family:

Raj varma : krishna's father

Seeta varma: Krishna's mother

Komal varma: Krishna's younger sister

Amman varma: krishna's elder brother.

Pratigya: pooja gor

Pratigya's family

Shyam saxena : pratigya's father

Naina saxena : pratigya's mother

Arushi saxena : pratigya's younger sister

Pratigya saxena: pratigya was a well educated, beautiful and a girl with all good qualities of 23 yrs. She was loved by her parents but not over the limit. Her parents loved both of their daughters equally. shyam saxena owned a small shop of perfumes. He was not very rich, actually he was poor. His salary could bring the meal to his house for not more that 6 days. Many times he was forced to lend money from ther neighbors. As pratigya had completed her studies her parents decided to marry her and she was engaged to a good natured boy but not well educated perhaps less educated than pratigya but pratigya agreed to marry him coz he was good at nature. But unfortunately that boy died in a very huge bus accident and lost his life and left pratigya's family again in worry for their daughter's marriage.

Krishna varma: a very well educated, independent, good looking and handsome man of 25 yrs. His father was very rich perhaps the fifth richest person of India. They had very good business in India as well as in 2 other countries namely England and Russia. Krishna was very independent person and was handling his father's business in England. Amman varma use to handle business in Russia and his father himself in India. Krishna use to live in England.

i'll update the chapter 1 after some comments!

Originally posted by: nasco

nice one yaar!!
loved the description.
would love too see krishna in this new avatar!!
please do continue soon!!

Cant Wait For This One! :D Looking Forward To This

CHAPTER 1

She came running out of her room shouting, mummy! mummy! Naina cam out running from the kitchen and saw arushi shouting loud. She asked: kya hua beta? Arushi said mummy room main cockroach hai! HAHAHAHAHA Arushi heard a laughing voice from behind, she said: didi ap hus rahi hain yahan humaari jaaan nikli jaaaa rahi hai. Pratigya : husse nae to aur kya Karen ? aik cockroach se dur gayi? Sharam ani chahiye. Arushi: mummy dekhiye na pratigya didi kaise hus rae hain hum pe. Naina came in to the room and finally tried and killed the cockroach now arushi was fine. It was evening and as per routine, arushi was having a nap. Its was nearly 5, Pratigya came into the room talking to her mother in the kitchen in a loud voice. She sad : mummy 5 baj rahe hain humen apni friend ke ghar jana hai, hum tayyaar ho rahe hain. Naina replied: acha beta jaldi tyaar ho jayo kaafi der ho gayi hai tumhaari dost kya soche gi tumhaare bare main . pratigya was paking her bag to leave for her friend's house. Naina came and stood behind pratigya and said beta khayal se jana aur andhera hone se pehle ghar waapis aa jana, haan mummy hum andhera hone se pehle aa jayen ge balke hum 2 ghante main hi waapis ajayen ge pratigya replied and saying this left the house. she stood in front of her house for quit long time but no rikshaw came so she went on the main road to find a rikshaw and there she saw a rikshaw coming. She waved her hand for a rikshaw, the rikshaw stopped in front of her she sat in it saying " harujan street"and the rikshaw drove away. While she was on her way , suddenly the rikshaw stopped. Bhaiya kya hua pratigya asked? The rikshaw driver without any answer left the rikshaw and ran away. Now pratgiya was only their in the rikshaw. She saw a man coming from a white van towards her. The man came upto her , pratigya was very scared to make any move. The man kept a cloth on pratigya's mouth on which a medicine was poured to make her unconscious. He dragged pratigya to the van, pushed her inside and drove away.

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So this is ch 1 hope you like it. If yes plzz do tell me or click the like button.