'With You...' One Shot FanFiction - Page 4

Originally posted by: sups2222

By god u r a fantabulous writer dear...........
A perfect potration of how will KRIYA sort out things.............
This is so awesum blossom.............
Krishna getting angry....manhandling pratigyaa........
Pratigya's anger doubled n her heart filled wid varied emotions n misunderstanding.........
But he took a step forward n apologised n sort ut deifffrences............ n she only needed that.....LOVELYyyyyy.......

Originally posted by: baz786

wow ania that was an awesome start 2 ur ff
U write really well
Very realistic descriptions
Very imaginative
Keep it up
Lookin 4ward 2 continuation 🤗

Originally posted by: Shabz.

any more one shot's on the cards Ania?

Originally posted by: ania_91

Hmmm....one is for sure on the cards....it will centre around the mysterious case of chai and dhoti 😆 as per the popular demand =P

But I may soon enough write a full fanfic maybe.....lets see. 😊

Originally posted by: anchal2

hey ania,

I started reading this one shot a few days ago, but I didn't get time to read the entire thing, so decided that I would write my comment after reading the whole thing. Stupid IF wouldn't even let me use the search feature, so I had to dig it out😡...and it was sooooo slow....because of the maintenance thing ......and here I am...even my simplest explanations turn out to be so long😭😡😒
It's so unique (not my explanation😆, your one shot)....

When I started reading this, I was like, how is she gonna show hatred turning into love in just one-shot....but what a perfect end and it was realistic....now I want this to happen in the show....It would be so perfect if they started with friendship. In fact, it would make things easier and they would understand each other before falling in love, because I don't think even krishna (in the show) realizes what love is...

I can just go on and on, but don't wanna bore you...😳
but I just loved the ending....the second best ending I've ever read...second to my favourite book.....not to say that the rest of it was any less, but I thought the ending was unique, not the typical ending...
I think this is already so long...so will stop before you start yawning. I would love to read more one shots/fan fics by you in the future!!

PS- wanted to comment on your writing style as well, but didn't wanna make it any longer...*shut up already anchal*

Anchal

Thank you sooooooo much for the wonderfully long comment (no, I'm not complaining for the length ... I love long comments! )

Ohh man, I'm floored and flattered with your comment about my ending! second best? 😲 OMG! Thankyou! Honestly, I'm no close to any book writer or their concepts I'm just a teny tiny silly writer who have weird imaginations at times that she decides to pen down... lol.