'With You...' One Shot FanFiction

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Originally posted by: Aaliyah01
Wow Ania you write so beautifully 👏👏

The ending was just perfect

Thank you, Aaliyah partner 😛

I wanted to make the ending sweet and stuff.... no one likes sad ones 😳

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Originally posted by: siinnce.09

😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

😲 Oh My God ! That was FANTASTIC !!!!!!! Your writing style and wordings are soo soo beautiful!

I'm like so inspired.......

*speechless moment*

Woman ! Did you just say horrible attempt on my fan fic page ! Because if this is horrible, then what is good ? Forget the word 'horrible" this was amaaaaaaaaaaazzzzzzzzzziiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiing !

👏

Ahh....these words coming from a wonderful writer like you.....hmm, I'm flattered! 😳

Thank you, Samira author jee 😃 (thats my nick for u from now on)

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Posted: 15 years ago

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ur a very good writer, is there a chance of u continuing it?

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Originally posted by: Naaz86
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U have a lot of potential...I simply loved the beginning, the words to express the pain nd guilt of the characters was simply outstanding...👍🏼

Looking forward to read more of ur writings :)

wow. 😳

that's something good to hear.... I love going into details....but I try not to do it too often cuz then it gets broing... 🥱

I'll try to write a few more if I get time.... =)

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Originally posted by: kaasshh
u were awsumm....plzzzzz cntinue dear....😊

Awww....thanks. 😳

But this was just a one shot....no more chapters to it....but I'll think about writing a full fledged fanfic ..... 😊

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Originally posted by: shonaveer
i am new to the pratigya forum. this is really a fabulous one shot. really loved the way you portrayed the emotions and the understanding in their relationship. simply fabulous and keep giving more shots :) amazing job indeed.

love
shona 😃

hey shona,

welcome to the forum....I'm not new here but I post close to nothing except for in a few topics...hehe...lazy me.

Yes, I wanted to show that Krishna can realize his mistake too and there can be a whole new side to him....

thanks a lot.... 😊

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