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Posted: 15 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Midnight_Shade
Awesome possum!!!!!!! Definitely looking forward to the next one you're planning on working on!!! G'luck with that. :)

Thanks, Midnight.

Appreciate it! Would love to see your comments if I come up with some other one shots 😊

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Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: ania_91

If I brought anything that even resembles a smile on your face, then that's the least I could do for such a great writer....
*phew* thank god I didn't bore you with the comments....
Is this your first piece of writing (of course not talking about school work😆, I mean in terms of fan fic...or you know what I mean). If it is then, WOW, I have no words, now I've found two people to edit my crappy essays and papers!
If not, then I would love to read your previous works!
Me happy, both ways!
And please do write a fan fic in the future, I would be delighted to read it😃😳
yup, EAGERLY waiting for your one shot on chai...
I loved the ending for the uniqueness, because we always read about happily ever after or a lovey dovey ending or even a sad ending. This ending kinda left the reader wondering about their journey or like just left to the reader's imagination. I am not making sense😕...😕

Will shut up before I confuse you further....but before leaving, I am officially your fan (seriously I can go into detail...dissecting each paragraph, giving reasons, but would bore you)...so waiting for more from you!

Anchal

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#43

Originally posted by: anchal2

If I brought anything that even resembles a smile on your face, then that's the least I could do for such a great writer....
*phew* thank god I didn't bore you with the comments....
Is this your first piece of writing (of course not talking about school work😆, I mean in terms of fan fic...or you know what I mean). If it is then, WOW, I have no words, now I've found two people to edit my crappy essays and papers!
If not, then I would love to read your previous works!
Me happy, both ways!
And please do write a fan fic in the future, I would be delighted to read it😃😳
yup, EAGERLY waiting for your one shot on chai...
I loved the ending for the uniqueness, because we always read about happily ever after or a lovey dovey ending or even a sad ending. This ending kinda left the reader wondering about their journey or like just left to the reader's imagination. I am not making sense😕...😕 Absolutely not....I understand...actually the end worked in my favour too cuz if I would've given it a lovey-dovey end then the readers would run away after reading the extremely stupid mush scenes.....😆

Will shut up before I confuse you further....but before leaving, I am officially your fan (seriously I can go into detail...dissecting each paragraph, giving reasons, but would bore you)...so waiting for more from you!

Anchal

Though I was gonna log out but saw this before and couldn't help reply...

LOL! Nahh....this isn't the first one ....I have left evidences of some of my other crappy works too on IF 😆 I have written a short story on AR of DMG (but I guess you can always imagine some other couple in their place if you dun like em 😛)

here is the link: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1096676

Disclaimer: I already warn you that the following piece may turn out to be quite dramatic and cliched...cuz I suck at writing love-shove stories.... 😆

And I have another uncontinued fanfic that some sweet readers still want me continue even though I haven't gotten a chance to update in a LOOOOONG while ...that ones on AR and Kripa-Angad of KYPH.

Essays are a pain....ughh...me no likes

Haila! I've a fan too 😲 OMG! Magic! 😆

I'm flattered again.....ohh man, I think I'm blushing......dun over-praise me Anchal, it will go in my head and interrupt the flow of imagination of chai ideas 😆😆😆

Thannksssss againnn! 🤗

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Posted: 15 years ago

#44

I had almost logged out, BUT

OMG, but you wrote on KYPH and AR....
I have so much to say about the two....actually, that's how I got hooked to IF.... reading...FF based on these two.....I really gotta go, but will reply later😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

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hey ania,

DMG, where do I start the crap about this crap of a show that the crappy producers and the crappy channels should have stopped a LONG time ago.🤢 And don't even get me started on that cheat bag, unless you wanna get me banned. SS' gaalis are not enough for this crap'

The only reason that I wanna read your fanfics is because I LOVE reading'.but AR and DMG for me are done. I am so ashamed to even admit that I used to like this show at one point'🤢

Angad-kripa, awww, you've seen KYPH'.not a big fan of iqbal or neha as individuals, but their chemistry was simply😍❤️ no words for it man....never got to see that chemistry again with any other couple, because even in this show, prats/pooja can't match up to Krishna/arhaan. I so wish Arhaan would have been paired opposite a strong actor. (I hope I'm making sense). Yes, one can argue that it will get better as they fall in love, but I still don't think we're gonna see that kind of chemistry.

If pratigya goes haywire like these two, I am soo gonna kill someone, and I will be done with Indian shows. So far, I am loving it and I don't think they'll disappoint me.

PS - if you still watch DMG, or are still a fan of that cheat bag then I'm extremely sorry to have said this, but I just couldn't resist. I know I've said this for the other comment on pooja as well, but seriously, I'll edit it, if you are offended. I did not want to hurt anyone, but I am so mad the way the show was ruined🤢

I so hope you're not one of those people who still religiously what the crap. But, don't you just love it when mods are not around!

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Posted: 15 years ago

#46

I didn't want to include the sweet things with that post....
yes, you have a FAN....me!!
seriously, you deserve the praises and comments. As your fan, can I request you to start a fan fic based on kriya but a completely different concept - different from the show!! I would LOVE to read it!!
Thanks to you for writing this beautiful one shot!🤗

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Posted: 15 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: anchal2

hey ania,

DMG, where do I start the crap about this crap of a show that the crappy producers and the crappy channels should have stopped a LONG time ago.🤢 And don't even got me started on that cheap bag, unless you wanna get me banned. SS' gaalis are not enough for this crap'

The only reason that I wanna read your fanfics is because I LOVE reading'.but AR and DMG for me are done. I am so ashamed to even admit that I used to like this show at one point'🤢

Angad-kripa, awww, you've seen KYPH'.not a big fan of iqbal or neha as individuals, but their chemistry was simply😍❤️ no words for it man....never got to see that chemistry again with any other couple, because even in this show, prats/pooja can't match up to Krishna/arhaan. I so wish Arhaan would have been paired opposite a strong actor. (I hope I'm making sense). Yes, one can argue that it will get better as they fall in love, but I still don't think we're gonna see that kind of chemistry.

If pratigya goes haywire like these two, I am soo gonna kill someone, and I will be done with Indian shows. So far, I am loving it and I don't think they'll disappoint me.

PS - if you still watch DMG, or are still a fan of that cheat bag then I'm extremely sorry to have said this, but I just couldn't resist. I know I've said this for the other comment on pooja as well, but seriously, I'll edit it, if you are offended. I did not want to hurt anyone, but I am so mad the way the show was ruined🤢

I so hope you're not one of those people who still religiously what the crap. But, don't you just love it when mods are not around!

Hey Anchal,

OMG!

We share the same feeling for CMG (yup, that's the name some of the ppl have given it....its short for Clowns Mill Gaye 😆) I feel its soo apt of a name for that crapfest of a show!

I never watched it constantly.....I stopped watching after the whole AR breakup-makeup sessions when KaSh were there....but I watched it again when there was KaSu for a little while....but then stopped and now the show is completely haywire! (as if that's anything new... 😆)

Sorry if you like Kasu but I think the real DMG that I became a fan of died a month before Shilpa's exit ....it has already began to be a laughing riot! and that too totally unintentionally 😆

Yes....I watched KYPH on YT actually after I read so many fanfics on it ... Angad-Kripa had amazing chemistry ....like Sujal Kashish (they're the first telly couple I liked if I remember right..)

Oh I'm absolutely not offended and actually agree on your opinion abt P's acting....it doesnt match up to Arhaan..... you know....like its thanda ....lol is that the right word? I've seen ppl using it on IF when they think a pair doesnt have the spark. 😳

Haha....who would watch DMG? The current story is messed with tons of loop holes.... 🤢

and Mr. Cheater returned again....sorry, but I have no liking towards this man becuz of his antics....although I'd edit it once you read it. 😊 Incase we've his fans here..... I'm not even gonna start how much do I despise him.....he ruined "armaan" for me! 🤢

I apologize for the long post..... 😳

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Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

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dear, I am not offended at all!! But, you have no idea how worried I was that you might be one of HIS fans....don't even wanna say the name...will reply later....I am supposed to be staying away from IF, so will reply in the evening....
but ENJOYED reading your post!!
No, I was never a KASU or KAJEN fan. I just liked the story and the other characters in the intial 2 or maximum of 3 months, but didn't even like KASH...I mean I thought shilpa would overact in some scenes!! (sorry if you're a kash fan)

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#49

Originally posted by: anchal2
I didn't want to include the sweet things with that post....
yes, you have a FAN....me!!
seriously, you deserve the praises and comments. As your fan, can I request you to start a fan fic based on kriya but a completely different concept - different from the show!! I would LOVE to read it!!
Thanks to you for writing this beautiful one shot!🤗

Aww.....thanks Anchal! 😳

Actually I was also thinking that if I write a Kriya fanfic, it will have a totally diff concept......then I can work through my imaginations more easily. 😊

Its because of wonderful readers like you that we feel on the top of the world even though the writing is close to nothing.. 😆